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Chorrol.com _ Archived; Tes F'Ruum _ Some sort of poem.

Posted by: Eldar Jun 22 2005, 02:27 AM

Under the dark skies Elestar held his sword against his chest, his thoughts whiting his blade, he saw them all standing there, like the shadow of a star on a demons heart, with their twisted minds and broken souls. The black swords and the red eyes coming toward him, he did not tremble for he was a man with nothing left.

Once he was a mighty warrior, now he is a scarred ghost, seeking revenge against the denizens of hell, they where now within a blades swing but he waited for their souls to be felt, his blade moved like a tortured soul, possessing their bodies and quenching their entrails. When the sun rose he wasn�t a man anymore, but just a memory in a demons mind.

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I wrote it for the fan fiction sub forum because i hadnt seen this one, it just came to my mind, now i am triying to write a story around this character.

Posted by: Troika Jun 24 2005, 04:05 PM

Nice work... looks like you have the beginnings for a nice character their... some kind of demon-hunter not quite of this world...

Looking forward to how this turns out.

Posted by: Intestinal Chaos Aug 3 2005, 02:19 AM

poetry is a nice addition

Posted by: Konradude Aug 3 2005, 09:08 AM

Wasn't this done ages ago?