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Chorrol.com _ Fan Art _ My 30 Min Sketch/drawing Of Rycarin, Somewhat.

Posted by: Ryuku Walker Aug 9 2005, 02:50 PM

http://members.lycos.nl/khiemtran/freelancer/RycarinPortrait.jpg

I suck at doing lighting effects. Gah.

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Cheerio.

Posted by: Megil Tel-Zeke Aug 9 2005, 02:53 PM

It's pretty good for a 30 min, sketch,

his arms are a bit thick and are too short though. Also the armpit it too high up -.- wink.gif

Posted by: Konradude Aug 9 2005, 04:39 PM

His face is a bit too wide, but goodjob.

Posted by: MerGirl Aug 10 2005, 12:26 AM

Looks pretty good for a 30-minute sketch! goodjob.gif

The only thing that bothered me (I'm not an expert; bear with me) would be his shoulders/armpit area. One side looks more... pinched(?) than the other or something. Is he hunching the shoulders up? Also, I think he needs more of a neck.

Besides that, it's pretty good. smile.gif

Posted by: Aki Aug 10 2005, 01:35 AM

I'll echo the others on the arm's issue, they look too short and such. The Right ear also looks a bit wonky, but besides that its pretty good.

Posted by: Soulseeker3.0 Aug 10 2005, 01:36 AM

well its better then what I could do in thirty minutes

Posted by: Dantrag Aug 10 2005, 02:27 AM

It's better than I could do in 5 lifetimes....

Unless your drawing was a stick figure. Then I could totally draw better than you.

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