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Awright mate!!...
An excellent chapter, as ever...
That was so cool...Possibly the discussion on the finer points of the digestive system could have been...Lesser...(Perhaps more fiber?)...But that's just me... ...
But loved the idea of his breaking in to the place...
Nicely done that man!!...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
Another very good part, and it's good to see Sethyas back on form with stealthing it up. Like a bawss.
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Read and re-read because, well, just because....but a little late in commenting. Between my youngest playing baseball on two teams and doing some house painting I've been a bit short on time....
It's nice to see Seth settling into his most comfortable place, it's nice to know that whatever he does, wherever he goes, some things never change. He is the most formidable enemy OR ally depending on which side of the line you should fall.
I sure hope Uncle Seth passed on more than just sword or bow training because I think Athynae may need to be able to think WAY outside the box real soon.
Good stuff BH, thanks. Can't wait for more.
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Short but sweet...Mmmm...Kylie...*Sighs*...
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Nice...Loved the swift passing of time reference...They've definately got the colony together now...Inns and suchlike...
Nicely done that....
Looking forward to more...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
Ahhhh the old Seth....as i used to know him! Sneaking into offices going through documents ahaha...great! Now I think he made the right choice....nevertheless let's just see where it takes him....
Our favorite assassin is settling right in. I am certainly glad he decided to investigate then decide, I do hope that he keeps his ears up as he has always taught Thyna to do.
I enjoy every word, SGM...
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Excellently done!!...
You've lost nothing to rust, I'll tell you that lad!!...
Brilliant stuff..
Looking forward to more, when and if...And all that...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
Good job here Sethyas! You handled the situation in a good way. Now if I were you I would not entirely trust that Apronia woman....But you can handle it...ehhh i am almost sure you can.
Very pleasant surprise to hear more from you BH....Always make me smile....
SGM
Woah, I am loving this story! Solstheim has always been one of my favorite locations in the Elder Scrolls franchise. I look forward to more on this story, you peaked my interest.
So, Falco sends our Morag Tong fellow to deal with the captain. Surprisingly no blood was shed here. Yet, anyway. I see he chose the diplomatic approach.
Look forward to more!
I really enjoyed reading some more from Sethyas. It made me break out the tea I hoard for special occasions. May your winter holidays bring peace and joy!
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Fair dues, pretty brilliant stuff, as ever...
I'm a relative latecomer to the story, so I had no idea of the retconning thing, therefore I will simply say that I loved the whole history thing herein...Indeed... ...
Brilliant stuff...
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Oooh!!...Assassin fight on the cards!!... ...
Having recently started exploring Solstheim in the Dragonborn expansion, I did find myself thinking "Isn't that where Black Hand was on about?". Doesn't look half as good as your description of the place makes it... ...
Brilliant stuff, as always...
I really hope Carnius gets his handed to him in short order...Nicely done with the boo-hiss baddie... ...
Looking forward to more...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
So the plot thickens? A true assassin in the colony...well except from a certain Seth...ehh Dralas of course. Very interesting...yes i do like that twist.
as usual very very well written....
Hmm I need more..yes YES I do!
S.G.M
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Sethyas is back!!
So there's going to be an investigation into the Falmer, then? That'll be interesting, certainly; are you incorporating Skyrim lore about the Falmer into this or is it sticking to the Morrowind line of 'we haven't seen them yet'?
Also, you seemed to have some really odd usage of capitalisation and apostrophes at points within this chapter, stuff like:
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Now then! Brilliant Blackie! Soooo our Seth..Dralas is going into the Falmer-stuff? That is very interesting I'm so looking forward to it.
I love the "lore" parts in your story...gives it body so to say.
Now Seth..take it easy in that bar, don't drink too much
OOoh, blimey...Going off again on some sort of wanderlust again?... ...
Should be fun...Although, his telling the fire-bint and his girlfriend that he's going should also be fun... ...
Looking forward to more, as ever...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
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OOooh, that was pretty excellent!...
Loved the way he exercised restraint in the fight...Well, as if he'd do anything else really, but still, I loved the demonstration of it... ...
I also loved the reminder of northern Solstheim...I really enjoyed that Skyrim DLC...Wonderful place...
And then...Enter Pene!!...
Brilliant stuff, as always...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
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Nice sidestep of the Pene situation... ...
Loved the way that you had the drink continue to affect him...Perhaps a lesson learned here...Although you'd think he'd know better at his age... ...
Loved the way Falco was backing away from him when he was waving the knife...And then the headache because he'd forgotten how to dispel the Night-eye made me laugh... ...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
And I've caught up!
It's still a fantastic story, so I'm absolutely delighted to see it's being continued, I'm just sorry I was away for so long that it's taken me a while to get up to date. One thing that is interesting - when you have such a lot to read - is that you see how styles change over a period of time. Our assassin has slowly started to change from an "all action" character, into a much more measured character. He weighs things up, anticipates and reads people. You always had an interesting lead, but now... he's a damn sight more interesting. And believeable. And sympathetic. And just coool!
More please And I must admit, I'm looking forward to the moment where assassin meets assassin again. The idea of flare spells to disrupt nighteye was inspired...
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Ahhh three new installments! Sometimes life is goood! Oh my I totally agree with Burnie, Sethyas develops continously...
I laughed at his predicament in the Bath tub! Poor guy, I mean doesn't people know it's customary to KNOCK before just barging in like that..
Anyway I'm looking forward for the moment when Seth meets the other assassin..THAT will be quite something
As usual I want to compliment you for your brilliant writing!
Soooo S.G.M!!
...Bless him, all he wanted was a nice quiet bath... ...
So much of that made me laugh... ...Loved it...
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OOooh!!...So excellent!!...
I love the stalhrim stuff!!...It was one of my fave bits of the whole Dragonborn thing...Getting the complete set of armour and the swords 'nd shieldie stuff...
Brilliance as ever, loving the way it's making me want to go back and do a bit more... ...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
"Dammit Falco! I'm an Adventurer, not an Archaeologist!" I replied.
Ooo, sacred ice! Of course they have to open it!!
P.S. Grits just reminded me (Ta Grits)...That line is pure Bones from Star Trek... ...
Wonderful! Sooooo Seth...ehhh Dralas is NOT an archeologist huh? Well well..how about that! And a cliffie at the end..naturally you just had to right?
Brilliant writing, can't wait for more....
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Excellent chapter!!...
Loved the whole thing with the hunter and Thirsk and stuff...
So, as you (He) are (is) Athynae's (the character, not the poster ) Uncle Seth...Presumably this is the Thirk Mead Hall as in the whole Athlain/Athynae BOTM thing?...Or have we previously established that this isn't quite the same universe and is two steps removed from that one?...And I've just forgotten it... ...See, I'm hard of thinking and get a wee bit lost sometimes... ...
Anyways, amazing stuff, loved it!...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
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Fair dues...Right...Think I got it...
*Blinks*...So you couldn't sleep...Then what was it?... ...
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...Ta...Nicely put...
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That was simply brilliance right there that was...
Reinhardt's just amazingly done...I absolutely loved that he was so in tune with everything that he knew he was being watched and made breakfast for them...And then that bit with knowing the other wench was there 'cause of the lack of noise...
I actually know what you mean with that...It's the same in work, if something sounds different, it needs looking at... ...
Loved the shot and then falling out of the tree...She's not having much luck though is she... ...
Looking forward to wherever this goes...Although, obviously Badgetto don't give one really... ... ...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds heartily*...
Wonderful Blackie! I was happy to see two updates today...it's getting more and more thrilling!..Love it my friend.....just love it!
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Honey Bear!
I love the way you illustrated this part. What a great update. I enjoyed every word.
*Applauds*...
So passes the lurker, but not without cost it seems...Sounds like some guilt will be creeping in soon enough...
Brilliant stuff...loved the pictures...
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Ohhh! This was interesting....another woman in Sethyas' life..from the past..now that is sweet...who is she? what was her relation to Seth? OMG Can't wait to know more about that woman..OHHHHHHH The suspense is killing me actually it is!
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Hmm shadows from his past! sad and yet sort of sweet.
My favorite moment was Pene’s look at Seth as they walked to retrieve Coventia’s body. I’ve enjoyed watching her subtle development.
There is much to love about this chapter...
The Skaal were excellently done...Graring was a blast!...
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More fun with Sethyas's magnificent attempts at coffee brewing. Hooray!
That said, good on Falco for appreciating a nice dark roast. I too like my coffee darker than Nocturnal's night. Can't make a good Ristretto if it's cut with milk or cream. Falco's speech through the preparation process is a nice bit of insight into the man's philosophy. I can just imagine Carnius trying to rush the process to extract the coffee as quickly and in as much volume as possible, only to have a ruined product and scalded taste buds to show for it.
Some nits:
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Just read these tho latest updates....and I have decided I need to read them again, tomorrow or rather later today, because I'm not fit for commenting as I want to just now, too tired....
There is one word though that comes to me now just before closing down....and that is AMAZING!
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I loved the quiet undertones in coffee making part. Then Pene speed-eating the beans made me grin.
“What’s yer name?” He asked.
“Uh…Uncle Seth?” I replied.
Aawww…. *sniff*
Ulfgar was a treat. The snowstorm is certainly one of my favorite segments.
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I blinked. "Yes, if that's alright." I asked, deeply afraid I was offending some unknown Nordic code of conduct that might land the two of us into a death match.
High stakes cultural discomfort, hilariously expressed.
Seth and Pene’s dialog continues to delight.
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Fair dues...Thoroughly enjoyed this little catch-up...
So many nice touches to it...Not least that little adventure with Falco and the report... ...Nicely done fast-travel mimic... ...
Brilliant stuff...And if yer still writing to the post, I'm still in absolute awe of it...
Nice one, as ever...
*Applauds heartily*...
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