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Posted by: Black Hand Jul 2 2006, 10:42 PM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 2 2006, 11:08 PM
Ahhh l'amour, how sweet it always appears.
Congrats on reaching the second chapter of a epic in-the-making.
Posted by: DarkHunter Jul 2 2006, 11:13 PM
Heh heh heh a little love? 
Not good for an assassin 
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 3 2006, 12:22 AM
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Posted by: DarkHunter Jul 3 2006, 12:35 AM
Oooh! Having odd dreams now are we? This should be fun...
Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 3 2006, 01:28 AM
I predict some interesting things are going to happen. I can't wait!
Though this new dream of Sethyas has me worried. Hopefully nothing too bad happens...
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 3 2006, 02:44 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 3 2006, 04:24 AM
Let the assassinations begin!
I'm liking the way you're keeping the stealth element to the writs. I know in the game, you could simply hack n' slash the person up and simply use the writ as a safety percaution. I enjoy this way better, my assassinish to me.
Can't wait to see this side mission...
Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 3 2006, 10:26 AM
Ah, he is a clever assassin. 
I'm sure he'll be alright.
Posted by: DarkHunter Jul 3 2006, 12:48 PM
Wait! His drink normally glows like that! Not!
Posted by: Lord Revan Jul 6 2006, 03:03 AM
wow a story with an assasin that has morals..... and a bloody good one too. 
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 6 2006, 04:43 AM
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Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 6 2006, 09:20 AM
Hmm, I just notice. Just why is Caius living right next to all the bad guys in town? (Vorar Helas and this Balyn.)
Nice update again and I bet that every assassin is jealous of that ring.
Posted by: sins_to_dark Jul 6 2006, 05:07 PM
I read the first chapter and now the second one and i really am impressed by this story your a very creative writter and reading this makes me want to play Morrowind again but gave it to my friend since i ave Oblivion looking forward to the next update
Posted by: Lord Revan Jul 6 2006, 07:40 PM
Ah the Ring of Khajiit, my Oblivion character has that, but I got it from Marida (princess of life)
Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 6 2006, 10:07 PM
Solid stuff. As usual.
I wondering if the Dark Brotherhood is going to become a problem? I also can't wait for the next ingenious assassination! Keep em coming!
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 7 2006, 06:30 PM
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Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 7 2006, 09:47 PM
Well, the life of an assassin is hard. As hard as a Daedric wall. It was nice to see that he showed some respect for his target.
Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 8 2006, 04:52 AM
Hey hey hey! Maybe I was just playing dumb. I was just curious if they were going to be brought up in a new way.
Anyways, I enjoyed this post just like all the others. Thoroughly powerful characterization and nice, unique assassinations. Can't wait for the next one!
Posted by: sins_to_dark Jul 8 2006, 05:41 PM
This keeps getting better and better, really enjoying this story keep up the good work
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 9 2006, 07:55 AM
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Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 9 2006, 08:18 AM
Heh, lovely idea. The disguise and the writ. I do think he shouldn't have left the Fur hat behind. It could be usefull again sometime. Then again, the Fighter's guild stores these in the equipment chests, I wonder why?
,,We're the tough fighters from the fighters guild. Why are you laughing? What, I'm wearing a fur hat instead of a helmet? Well uh....just go away."
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 9 2006, 08:24 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 9 2006, 05:26 PM
That is a great line right there. It's good to know that Sethyas has grudges against certain types of class.
Another amusing assassination with the fur helm used to disrespect the corpse. Brilliant work!
Posted by: treydog Jul 9 2006, 10:46 PM
Great updates! I also loved the business with the Colavian "dunce cap"- it is hard to take anyone who wears one of those seriously. Excellent atmosphere and nice development of the character. Never played a Morag Tong character, so this is all new to me. Keep up the good work.
Posted by: minque Jul 12 2006, 09:52 PM
Great updates! I also loved the business with the Colavian "dunce cap"- it is hard to take anyone who wears one of those seriously. Excellent atmosphere and nice development of the character. Never played a Morag Tong character, so this is all new to me. Keep up the good work.
Yes.....I agree with the dachshund! Intriguing and amusing.....keep it coming!
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 20 2006, 07:20 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 20 2006, 09:54 PM
This recent update has been a very enjoyable read with a nice comic ending.
Sethyas is becoming a very dangerous fellow if he knows attacks that contain five different elements of pain, ouch! I'm pretty sure I don't want to get on his bad side.
Can't wait to see what Sethyas does next!
Posted by: Lord Revan Jul 20 2006, 10:50 PM
High Elfs beware Seth has a signature move that would own you all!!!
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 22 2006, 08:07 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 22 2006, 02:39 PM
Mmm mmm mmm delicious update! Very nice descriptions of the assassin technique, there's almost a "Batman Begins" type feeling to it with the fear instigating being used as an advantage.
It's nice to see someone use cunning to defeat their enemies/targets.
I too, hope those Telvanni aren't battlemages, I pity Sethyas if that is so.
Posted by: Lord Revan Jul 23 2006, 05:20 AM
You know MM during a mages guild quest in Oblivion I witnessed two battlemages get owned by an imperial watchman for assault and murder.
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 26 2006, 08:05 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 26 2006, 04:30 PM
Wow, I would've never suspected Sethyas would use a reflect spell to defeat the two Telvanni. Simply put, genius! I also like his conptemplations afterwards. it's good to know that he understands the meaning of an assassin.
Really enjoying this fic so far.
Posted by: Lord Revan Jul 26 2006, 04:47 PM
ok 'make love' where did that come from??? but the rest was fine black hand
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 27 2006, 05:25 AM
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Posted by: Kiln Jul 27 2006, 05:03 PM
I liked the reference with "A Game at Dinner" that you gave during a part of that last bit but the link didn't come out right.
Anyways I think I missed the last update so I'm gonna read it as well. 
Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 27 2006, 05:11 PM
Post machine indeed! Your pace is maddening!
All of them were consistantly strong as well (even the "sappy" one). There has to be posts like that sometimes, it shows that they're still people. I've been really enjoying reading this and can't for the next batch of posts.
Digging the assassinations!
Posted by: Lord Revan Jul 27 2006, 06:21 PM
cunning, you've made a great character out of Sethyas
PS: I wonder when he'll remember his little sister? 
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 27 2006, 07:08 PM
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Posted by: sins_to_dark Jul 29 2006, 05:43 PM
ive been away for a week and im glad to see this story is still as amazing as ever keep up the good work looking forward to the next update Great work
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 30 2006, 12:28 PM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 30 2006, 07:12 PM
A fantastic update with a neat little message, I liked that you explained why the creatures attack the necromancer. I had my ideas on why but I think that explanation was necessary. Good Job!
Oh yes, and this:
Made me think of Family Guy:
*window closes in front of Quagmire*
Quagmire: Hello hospital? Yea it's Quagmire. It's stuck in the window this time...
Hehe, fun stuff!
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 30 2006, 09:41 PM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 30 2006, 11:24 PM
Great work with this update. I was laughing out loud reading the urination part. Quite ingenius if you ask me. Also this growing involvement with the Dark Brotherhood is getting me anxious. I can't wait for the cresendo!
Posted by: Black Hand Jul 31 2006, 06:14 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 31 2006, 05:35 PM
I thought about his question for a second.
“I’d take the battlemage.”
“All right then, Go now.”
Hahahahaha! Great! Sometimes I wish my fic could have less serious parts... but I guess that's why I did that one shot fic. Anyways, solid work here, I now want to know how Sethyas is going to save his sister from the Dark Brotherhood's dark clutches! And hopefully the battlemage doesn't summon up something too difficult to attempt to kill Sethyas with...
Posted by: sins_to_dark Aug 1 2006, 04:07 PM
Brillient updates this story is amazing, keep it up
Posted by: Black Hand Aug 2 2006, 08:30 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Aug 2 2006, 06:24 PM
Expertly done assassination. I feel sorry for the Bemis Gang, facing off against Sethyas is hopeless for them
Can't wait to see it!
Posted by: Black Hand Aug 5 2006, 07:25 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Aug 5 2006, 02:41 PM
Oh heck yes!! Bring it on! It's basically looking like it's going to be Mephala assassins versus Sithis assassins complimented with Daedra, and Daedra Worshippers.... That sounds tough.
I'm still betting on the Tong though
Fantastic update as usual.
Posted by: Black Hand Aug 5 2006, 10:40 PM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Aug 6 2006, 04:29 AM
Indeed it was, though personally I liked the "Fang" dagger you find in one of the Ash Vampire Lairs outside Red Mountain, not Korgorhu. Huge extra lightning damage. It's nice and ironic to be using a Mehrunes Dagon weapon against his own cultists
Posted by: jack cloudy Aug 7 2006, 11:53 AM
You're still going strong. With Sethyas on their side, the Morag Tong have a huge advantage. Unless Setsuna is just as good. I hope that the inevitable showdown can be done without killing.
I hope he makes good use of the dagger.
Posted by: Black Hand Aug 7 2006, 05:10 PM
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Posted by: jack cloudy Aug 7 2006, 09:14 PM
I didn't lose interest. I had half of Europe between me and my trusty computer.
Well, I wasn't quite thinking a good amount of killing but it is handy to have a superdagger when the going gets tough. At least if you're a dagger expert. (And I'm not. )
Posted by: Black Hand Aug 9 2006, 07:10 AM
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Posted by: jack cloudy Aug 9 2006, 10:04 AM
Unless the guy is bluffing, this means only one thing. TROUBLE! 
Be careful, Sethyas.
Posted by: Lord Revan Aug 9 2006, 03:40 PM
Looks like drama is mounting for an exciting climax, Black Hand.
Well done
Posted by: The Metal Mallet Aug 9 2006, 06:39 PM
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! This is getting exciting! I really want to see this showdown between brother and sister.
Will Sethyas be able to change Setsuna's mind? Was the Dark Brotherhood agent lying? Was she lying to the Brotherhood about her hate for her brother?
All the possibilities! It will be excruciating to wait to find out!
Posted by: Black Hand Aug 10 2006, 07:36 AM
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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Aug 10 2006, 05:14 PM
Oh no, oh no! What's happening!? It can't be the real end, can it? It's just the end of the chapter right? Sethyas can't be dead! This is going to bother me until your next update Good closing to the chapter! Another excellent one it was.
Posted by: Lord Revan Aug 11 2006, 05:19 AM
Well MM, only Black Hand can decide but I think Setsuna will have a little chit-chat with her brother
Posted by: minque Aug 20 2006, 04:05 PM
Uhhhhh you´ve been posting updates like a ravishing maniac! Took me quite some time catching this up..but it was worth it! really it was!
Thanks for sharing!
Posted by: McBadgere Jan 27 2012, 08:32 PM
#1...Moody boyband picture™... ...
Will get to it soonness...
Longform post for...
BUMP!!!... ...
Posted by: McBadgere Jan 28 2012, 08:24 PM
#18...Just got the ring from Mephala...Which is nice... ...
Excellent, and so we're into the Morag Tong-yness of things...
Very nicely done there...
*Applauds*...
Nice one... ...
Posted by: McBadgere Feb 2 2012, 07:10 AM
Ooooh, only had time for one chapter today, but what a chapter!!...Excellent...Assassinating the Dunmer on Telvanni soil...Excellently done...Sad...But excellent!!...
Now on page 2 and he's getting to Vivec at the same time as a storm...
Nice one!!... ...
*Applauds*...
Posted by: McBadgere Feb 7 2012, 08:19 AM
Black Hand gets censored!!!...
...Excellent work...
...Nice one!!...*Applauds*...
#28...Something...
Posted by: McBadgere Feb 12 2012, 06:05 AM
#35...A week after the bandit cave...
Oh hell yeah!!...
I had a bit of a...Day yesterday...
And after it all, it's such a pleasure to read this...It really is soo well done...I laugh every time he mentions his mad-on for battlemages... ...
I have an order in which I want to read the stories, but Minque's is definately on the list...If she'd post an update I could add it to the "Ones I read every time" list...(Was that right Athynae? 
*Takes $10 off Athynae*)...*Mumbles something like..."Need to find an excange now"...*... ...
D'you know...I was once going to pimm BH and ask him about Seth's sister...Duh....
Posted by: Athynae Feb 12 2012, 06:09 AM
Are you trying to get me in trouble again McB???
Posted by: McBadgere Feb 12 2012, 06:15 AM
*Adopts Han Solo-esque innocent face and points to self*... ...
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Posted by: minque Feb 12 2012, 05:29 PM
#35...A week after the bandit cave...
Oh hell yeah!!...
I had a bit of a...Day yesterday...
And after it all, it's such a pleasure to read this...It really is soo well done...I laugh every time he mentions his mad-on for battlemages...
...I have an order in which I want to read the stories, but Minque's is definately on the list...If she'd post an update I could add it to the "Ones I read every time" list...(Was that right Athynae?
*Takes $10 off Athynae*)...*Mumbles something like..."Need to find an excange now"...*... ...D'you know...I was once going to pimm BH and ask him about Seth's sister...Duh....
Ehhh Thanks McB! Well minque IS going to uodate...yea yaeh I've said that for Nirn knows how long but....it will come...
Posted by: McBadgere Feb 19 2012, 04:45 AM
#47...Er...Forgotten, but that's where I am anyways... ...
So very excellent stuff...
I'm still stunned that you post this on the fly, it's amazing...And loved the section you described as "Sappy" in there...Brilliantly done that man!!...
Nice one!!... ...
*Applauds heartily*...
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