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Posted by: Black Hand Jun 10 2006, 07:52 AM

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Posted by: jack cloudy Jun 11 2006, 07:51 PM

Ah, a story in good old Morrowind. I like your start and your character.

Posted by: Black Hand Jun 12 2006, 02:29 AM

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Posted by: DarkHunter Jun 12 2006, 11:47 AM

laugh.gif The Blades... it's been too long... *Runs off to play Morrowind*

Posted by: minque Jun 12 2006, 11:51 PM

Good start here.....looks very promising. Donīt we all love the starting sequences of Morrowind?

Posted by: Lord Revan Jun 19 2006, 08:40 PM

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Don't we all love teh starting sequencesof Morrowind?


I do, but I can't stop playing Oblivion laugh.gif

Posted by: jack cloudy Jun 19 2006, 08:45 PM

yeah, I love Caius. He's a classic, without a shirt and a whole lump of skooma in his body. smile.gif

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jun 19 2006, 09:12 PM

Now I wish I didn't lend my friend Morrowind. I had a really nice Nord Warrior going. But he just so happened to like making potions as well. I think it fits.

Posted by: Black Hand Jun 21 2006, 07:44 AM

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Posted by: DarkHunter Jun 21 2006, 11:23 AM

Woot! *goes a little jump* So... Wait since when did Melder .... oh never mind it makes it easier for you tongue.gif

Posted by: Black Hand Jun 25 2006, 02:48 AM

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Posted by: DarkHunter Jun 25 2006, 04:50 AM

Paying with Gems? wow...

I think you should hunt Ordinators .. oh wait... nevermind.

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jun 29 2006, 07:44 AM

It looks like things are moving along quite nicely. Keep up the good stuff!

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Posted by: jack cloudy Jun 29 2006, 10:48 AM

Yeah, I also hate Battlemages. They're so annoying. I hate them with only one exception, my own character. biggrin.gif

Posted by: DarkHunter Jun 29 2006, 05:25 PM

I still hated mages... even my own character.

Posted by: treydog Jun 29 2006, 10:06 PM

I really enjoy the creative touches you have added to make the familiar story new again. Please continue the good work.

Posted by: Black Hand Jun 30 2006, 07:19 AM

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Posted by: jack cloudy Jun 30 2006, 07:42 PM

Great scene all the way to the interogation. Good old Snowy is intimidating at first but if you have prepared yourself, he'll fall like a Scrib. smile.gif

Posted by: Black Hand Jun 30 2006, 07:51 PM

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Posted by: DarkHunter Jun 30 2006, 08:05 PM

Hrmmmm... Tricky Tricky. But shall his luck continue?

Posted by: jack cloudy Jun 30 2006, 08:07 PM

Wow, he actually managed to catch Crito off-guard. Well I must say that a Wakizashi through the neck is more elegant and less dirty than throwing a Dwemer cog in his face like my character did. Heh, this story has a funny sense of humor. I like it. smile.gif

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Posted by: treydog Jul 1 2006, 02:59 AM

I really like the attention to detail with things like the encounter with Snowy- seem to recall he killed a fair few of my early characters til I learned not to walk right up to him...

This installment gives us some nice insights into Sethyas character and way of thinking- very nice.

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 1 2006, 08:29 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 1 2006, 08:36 PM

The quest continues I see.

I like the subtle things you add in, normally I didn't care about the Sleepers, but it's interesting to include them and give them a victimized character to them. I really liked that.

Keep up with the good stuff, ya hear?

Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 1 2006, 08:38 PM

Ah, his worries for his sister are admirable. Now let's hope she's fine. As for now, he'd better get ready for the 'favour'. It will be a bit bonechilling. biggrin.gif

Yeah, I also like the thing with the Sleepers. I always kept my distance but never truly bothered to get involved. I did feel sorry for killing those that attacked me though. They were practically harmless yet still they insisted on fighting me. sad.gif

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 1 2006, 09:11 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 1 2006, 09:32 PM

I really enjoyed the subtle bits of humor in this post with the "stereotypical" witch ingredients, and the battlemages quip. You're a post machine right now. I was like that at first, but I have trouble staying on Word for long periods of time, I get a little antsy writing.

Anyways, I'm eagerly anticipating Sethyas run in with the undead, muhahaha!

Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 1 2006, 09:32 PM

Wha, there are actually Silver arrows in Balmora? Hmm, I guess I should actually go to the shops for a change instead of relying on the good old pillage and plunder.

I liked your dealings with the mage guild. Now deal with the tomb, please. smile.gif

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 1 2006, 10:11 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 1 2006, 10:22 PM

Wow, another post today? This is madness! Especially when each post is consistantly good!

Really liked that fact, that Sethyas thought the Bonewalker was too overwhelming to fight. Good thing this wasn't in Oblivion era, or else he might have something chasing him until he got to the Silt Strider.

For all I know, I can't wait to see what else you write today tongue.gif

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 1 2006, 11:10 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 1 2006, 11:27 PM

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lol, thanks too all, especially Metal Mallet, and Jack Cloudy


Well it's the least I can do when the material is great! I'm a big advocate of the Fan Fiction section for this forum and all the writers have great styles. Just reading all them help me with my writing, at least it well, I do notice some things I need to work on with my current fic. This site has killed countless boring hours at my work, so I'm very greatful for it.

Yet again, your post is filled with humor, and great dialogue. I can't wait to see if Sethyas will join the Mages Guild. I definately miss my Morrowind game right now from reading this. My friend is borrowing it, but I don't think he's playing it! So I'm going to start bugging him!

I wonder when the Morag Tong will get involved as well, I'm really looking forward to that.

Posted by: minque Jul 1 2006, 11:43 PM

Oh dear....I must join the fan-club of this story! ītis great you know! Well depicted charachters and a very good flow.....

I hope Iīll be able to keep up with it but you post so frequent that itīs amazing.....

Anyway itīs a very good story and Iīm looking forward to read more!

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 2 2006, 07:34 AM

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Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 2 2006, 10:00 AM

The Postmachine strikes again! Lots of stuff, detailed and great. Hold on a sec. *starts rummaging around in various chests in my big mushroom.*
Ah, here it is. I hereby present you with the "planty award for prolific composition." I once got it from Mplantinga. It's yours now cause you update like crazy. Enjoy it.

Back to the story, I really like your dealings with the mage guild. And Ajira is sweet, isn't she? I just love Khajiit.

Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 2 2006, 08:45 PM

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I hereby present you with the "planty award for prolific composition."


Yea, Black definately deserves that award. Another good, consistant couple of posts.

I really liked the emotions displayed by Sethyas, particularly in his conversation with Caius. There's a real human quality to it. Or Merish I guess in this case... biggrin.gif

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 2 2006, 09:48 PM

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Posted by: The Metal Mallet Jul 2 2006, 10:00 PM

Dun Dun Dun!!!

It looks like Sethyas is becoming quite popular amongst the secret societies of Morrowind. I'm looking forward to Sethyas' thought process in finding the hidden guild base.

Posted by: jack cloudy Jul 2 2006, 10:20 PM

I know where it is but I'm not revealing the secret. Actually, I just ran in by accident and decided to join up while I was in the neighbourhood. laugh.gif

Lovely update again. I like the whole riddle.

Posted by: Black Hand Jul 2 2006, 10:46 PM

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Posted by: McBadgere Jan 21 2012, 03:13 PM

Reet...That's just brilliant that is...

I'm on post 16...Seth's just been given a book to deliver...

Nice one...It is actually nice to see Seth's beginnings, considering where I started reading, he was at the top of his game and then giving it all up... biggrin.gif ...

Your style's well there, and yes, it's not as polished as it is now, but this is 6 years ago...You were...Er...I only clocked the year on yer profile so 25?...This is brilliant stuff...

Plus, so far there's only been a couple of replies to yer posts...That's some persistance there...Unless it was also being posted somewhere else where more was said... tongue.gif ...But the work that's gone in, for little or no recognition - compared with the love-fest you get now - is really impressive...

Athynae's right, I am going to have to go through this when I can...Brilliant stuff...Now I don't have to buy Morrowind after all... biggrin.gif ...

I award the official Nice One and Applause...

Nice One!!!... biggrin.gif ...

*Applauds heartily*...

PS...D'you think it's too late to mention the typos?... huh.gif ...Yeah, thought so... biggrin.gif ...

Posted by: McBadgere Jan 21 2012, 06:50 PM

Page 2!!... biggrin.gif ...

*Does dance*... tongue.gif ...

Posted by: McBadgere Jan 22 2012, 08:40 PM

#33...Just walked into the Mages Guild...

Excellent!!...

Awwww...Seth is just so young isn't he?... biggrin.gif ...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...

Posted by: Black Hand Jan 23 2012, 12:58 AM

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Posted by: McBadgere Jan 24 2012, 06:57 AM

QUOTE(Black Hand @ Jul 1 2006, 10:10 PM) *

Believe it or not, I work on the posts spontaneously and usually your guy's comments are the first thing I see as I finish the post.


Bloody hellfire... huh.gif ...That's impressive that is...*Applauds*...

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I immensley enjoy each word I write and hope that it inspires other writers,


*Nods*...*Applauds sentiment*...

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...as well as Morrowind Lovers everywhere, don't let the disappointing aspects of Oblivion turn you off to a great game,


Oh fercryingoutlout...*Slaps expansive forehead*... tongue.gif laugh.gif biggrin.gif ...

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and indeed a great series. I have faith that Bethesda will listen to it's faithful and return to the Glory that was Morrowind's spirit and enviroment that we all fell in love with. My personal opinion, not that it truly matters, was that overall Oblivion is good, but, too dumbed down.


Yes, yes...And it was going so well... biggrin.gif ...

This is where I am actually...#38...Back in Balmora...

Very excellent... biggrin.gif

I'm even more impressed now that I know you create as you type it into the forum...*Applauds*...

That's unbelievable that is...*Bows down*...


Posted by: Black Hand Jan 24 2012, 11:13 AM

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Posted by: McBadgere Jan 26 2012, 02:13 PM

laugh.gif ...I know the feeling... biggrin.gif ...

Still, creation on the fly is quite an impressive feat though... wink.gif ...I have to sit and plan and figure out what will happen down the line if this happens...Or this person does that...Y'know?...

*Applauds*...

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Your doing good work, and as much as you think that this is all just business, I also understand looking out for ones own. While your here in Vvardenfell, your family..


Just checking...That's you're isn't it?...Come on, you must remember?... tongue.gif ...

Aaamywho...#43 waking up in the Mages Guild...

Loved it...

Bloody good stuff this... biggrin.gif ...

Nice one!!... biggrin.gif ...

Posted by: McBadgere Jan 27 2012, 08:30 PM

Fairly dues... biggrin.gif ...

End of part one!!... biggrin.gif ...

Nicely done there...

He still seems so young... biggrin.gif ...

Nice one!!!... biggrin.gif ...

Posted by: Black Hand Jan 27 2012, 11:00 PM

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Posted by: McBadgere Jan 27 2012, 11:12 PM

Slightly less amateurish?!!...

Dear Gods man, what the hell are you on?!!...

I've read books by established (and by that I mean published) writers that are far worse than what I've been reading...

YOU HAVE TALENT MAN!!...

It's one thing being modest, but another thing to sell yourself short...

Hell, I'm probably the worst of the writers here and even I will admit to being impressed by some of the stuff I come out with... tongue.gif laugh.gif ... biggrin.gif ...

EDIT...I believe the previous sentence was the sin of foolish pride... tongue.gif ...

Don't worry about re-writing it...And I get the thing with time...Believe me... wacko.gif ...

Posted by: Athynae Jan 28 2012, 04:24 AM

I'll throw two cents in on this one

1. I agree with McB on the writing and for the same reasons (but you already know how I feel)

2. "Hell, I'm probably the worst of the writers here" WHAT??? Don't make me come over there and slap you! Here you are fussing at BH for selling himself short, um seems to me it's a situation of pots and kettles on that one dearie.

I really, really like it all and it is nice to be able to see the maturity of the writing progress with the maturity of the character, only seems right.

And yes, before you ask I am a goober!! biggrin.gif

Posted by: minque Jan 30 2012, 01:10 AM

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I'll throw two cents in on this one

1. I agree with McB on the writing and for the same reasons (but you already know how I feel)

2. "Hell, I'm probably the worst of the writers here" WHAT??? Don't make me come over there and slap you! Here you are fussing at BH for selling himself short, um seems to me it's a situation of pots and kettles on that one dearie.

I really, really like it all and it is nice to be able to see the maturity of the writing progress with the maturity of the character, only seems right.

And yes, before you ask I am a goober!! biggrin.gif


Ok so I need to throw in a couple of words here, I followed Seth from the start and I loved the story from the start and have always done. BH is great with words, with expressions and the addition of the dark, dry humor is one of the reasons I love this story.

But Athynae be nice to yourself! you are a GOOD writer! Stop! Dont argue with me..or else... wink.gif

I am probably the worst writer...taking ages between every update....

Posted by: Athynae Jan 30 2012, 01:37 AM

Ok, the round robin is on I suppose. So, I will concede-we are all good writers ok! FINE!

Now, Minque, you are one of the best here and that is ONE of the reasons we give you a hard time but there are other reasons as well and I don't have to share with the rest of the forum what they are right???

Mother, Uncle Seth has already left me a note that said I need to talk to you, how can I do that if you aren't around? 'Thyna

So now you have two of the reasons...need more?

Posted by: McBadgere Jan 30 2012, 06:15 AM

*Massages wrist from Athynae's slapping of it, then sits back to watch cat-fight and passes popcorn to Black Hand*...

laugh.gif ...


Posted by: Athynae Jan 30 2012, 12:57 PM

Cat fight? blink.gif I think not...remember, she brought me into this world she CAN take me out...just sayin. biggrin.gif And if you haven't read Serene's story that should definitely be your next endeavor, she's tough as nails, even Athynae thinks twice about going head to head with her. And we all know how Athynae's temper is...just ask Athlain.

Posted by: treydog Jan 30 2012, 01:04 PM

Creaky old dachshund hears squabbling amongst people about whether they themselves are good writers or not, goes and rouses his master.

Trey comes in, looks around the place and knocks FOUR silly heads together, grumbling-

"Get back to work! You are all brilliant!"

Posted by: McBadgere Jan 30 2012, 01:53 PM

LMAO!!!...Yes dad...Sorry dad... tongue.gif ...

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Posted by: Athynae Jan 31 2012, 12:38 AM

Yea! What Blackie said, McB started it!

Silly badger, getting everybody in trouble, what were you thinking?

Posted by: McBadgere Jan 31 2012, 06:50 AM

But...I...

*Pouts*...

*Lip trembles*...

Meanie...

Posted by: Athynae Jan 31 2012, 11:26 AM

Well, you did! Sort of, as I try that dig a hole thing with my toe, you can't say things about my friends that aren't nice even if it is about yourself because, as the very young Thyna would say, "I will put up my fistes and beatchoo up!" biggrin.gif

Besides, I didn't get any popcorn.... sad.gif

Posted by: minque Jan 31 2012, 07:45 PM

Gulp" Ok so please hand ME some popcorn, and I promise not to fight...AND .....well at least spread some information around....You who need it know who you are. unsure.gif

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