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Ah, a story in good old Morrowind. I like your start and your character.
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The Blades... it's been too long... *Runs off to play Morrowind*
Good start here.....looks very promising. Donīt we all love the starting sequences of Morrowind?
yeah, I love Caius. He's a classic, without a shirt and a whole lump of skooma in his body.
Now I wish I didn't lend my friend Morrowind. I had a really nice Nord Warrior going. But he just so happened to like making potions as well. I think it fits.
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Woot! *goes a little jump* So... Wait since when did Melder .... oh never mind it makes it easier for you
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Paying with Gems? wow...
I think you should hunt Ordinators .. oh wait... nevermind.
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It looks like things are moving along quite nicely. Keep up the good stuff!
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Yeah, I also hate Battlemages. They're so annoying. I hate them with only one exception, my own character.
I still hated mages... even my own character.
I really enjoy the creative touches you have added to make the familiar story new again. Please continue the good work.
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Great scene all the way to the interogation. Good old Snowy is intimidating at first but if you have prepared yourself, he'll fall like a Scrib.
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Hrmmmm... Tricky Tricky. But shall his luck continue?
Wow, he actually managed to catch Crito off-guard. Well I must say that a Wakizashi through the neck is more elegant and less dirty than throwing a Dwemer cog in his face like my character did. Heh, this story has a funny sense of humor. I like it.
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I really like the attention to detail with things like the encounter with Snowy- seem to recall he killed a fair few of my early characters til I learned not to walk right up to him...
This installment gives us some nice insights into Sethyas character and way of thinking- very nice.
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The quest continues I see.
I like the subtle things you add in, normally I didn't care about the Sleepers, but it's interesting to include them and give them a victimized character to them. I really liked that.
Keep up with the good stuff, ya hear?
Ah, his worries for his sister are admirable. Now let's hope she's fine. As for now, he'd better get ready for the 'favour'. It will be a bit bonechilling. ![]()
Yeah, I also like the thing with the Sleepers. I always kept my distance but never truly bothered to get involved. I did feel sorry for killing those that attacked me though. They were practically harmless yet still they insisted on fighting me.
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I really enjoyed the subtle bits of humor in this post with the "stereotypical" witch ingredients, and the battlemages quip. You're a post machine right now. I was like that at first, but I have trouble staying on Word for long periods of time, I get a little antsy writing.
Anyways, I'm eagerly anticipating Sethyas run in with the undead, muhahaha!
Wha, there are actually Silver arrows in Balmora? Hmm, I guess I should actually go to the shops for a change instead of relying on the good old pillage and plunder.
I liked your dealings with the mage guild. Now deal with the tomb, please.
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Wow, another post today? This is madness! Especially when each post is consistantly good!
Really liked that fact, that Sethyas thought the Bonewalker was too overwhelming to fight. Good thing this wasn't in Oblivion era, or else he might have something chasing him until he got to the Silt Strider.
For all I know, I can't wait to see what else you write today
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Oh dear....I must join the fan-club of this story! ītis great you know! Well depicted charachters and a very good flow.....
I hope Iīll be able to keep up with it but you post so frequent that itīs amazing.....
Anyway itīs a very good story and Iīm looking forward to read more!
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The Postmachine strikes again! Lots of stuff, detailed and great. Hold on a sec. *starts rummaging around in various chests in my big mushroom.*
Ah, here it is. I hereby present you with the "planty award for prolific composition." I once got it from Mplantinga. It's yours now cause you update like crazy. Enjoy it.
Back to the story, I really like your dealings with the mage guild. And Ajira is sweet, isn't she? I just love Khajiit.
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Dun Dun Dun!!!
It looks like Sethyas is becoming quite popular amongst the secret societies of Morrowind. I'm looking forward to Sethyas' thought process in finding the hidden guild base.
I know where it is but I'm not revealing the secret. Actually, I just ran in by accident and decided to join up while I was in the neighbourhood.
Lovely update again. I like the whole riddle.
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Reet...That's just brilliant that is...
I'm on post 16...Seth's just been given a book to deliver...
Nice one...It is actually nice to see Seth's beginnings, considering where I started reading, he was at the top of his game and then giving it all up...
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Your style's well there, and yes, it's not as polished as it is now, but this is 6 years ago...You were...Er...I only clocked the year on yer profile so 25?...This is brilliant stuff...
Plus, so far there's only been a couple of replies to yer posts...That's some persistance there...Unless it was also being posted somewhere else where more was said...
...But the work that's gone in, for little or no recognition - compared with the love-fest you get now - is really impressive...
Athynae's right, I am going to have to go through this when I can...Brilliant stuff...Now I don't have to buy Morrowind after all...
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I award the official Nice One and Applause...
Nice One!!!...
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*Applauds heartily*...
PS...D'you think it's too late to mention the typos?...
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Page 2!!...
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*Does dance*...
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#33...Just walked into the Mages Guild...
Excellent!!...
Awwww...Seth is just so young isn't he?...
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Nice one...
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...I know the feeling...
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Still, creation on the fly is quite an impressive feat though...
...I have to sit and plan and figure out what will happen down the line if this happens...Or this person does that...Y'know?...
*Applauds*...
Fairly dues...
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End of part one!!...
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Nicely done there...
He still seems so young...
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Nice one!!!...
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Slightly less amateurish?!!...
Dear Gods man, what the hell are you on?!!...
I've read books by established (and by that I mean published) writers that are far worse than what I've been reading...
YOU HAVE TALENT MAN!!...
It's one thing being modest, but another thing to sell yourself short...
Hell, I'm probably the worst of the writers here and even I will admit to being impressed by some of the stuff I come out with...
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EDIT...I believe the previous sentence was the sin of foolish pride...
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Don't worry about re-writing it...And I get the thing with time...Believe me...
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I'll throw two cents in on this one
1. I agree with McB on the writing and for the same reasons (but you already know how I feel)
2. "Hell, I'm probably the worst of the writers here" WHAT??? Don't make me come over there and slap you! Here you are fussing at BH for selling himself short, um seems to me it's a situation of pots and kettles on that one dearie.
I really, really like it all and it is nice to be able to see the maturity of the writing progress with the maturity of the character, only seems right.
And yes, before you ask I am a goober!!
Ok, the round robin is on I suppose. So, I will concede-we are all good writers ok! FINE!
Now, Minque, you are one of the best here and that is ONE of the reasons we give you a hard time but there are other reasons as well and I don't have to share with the rest of the forum what they are right???
Mother, Uncle Seth has already left me a note that said I need to talk to you, how can I do that if you aren't around? 'Thyna
So now you have two of the reasons...need more?
*Massages wrist from Athynae's slapping of it, then sits back to watch cat-fight and passes popcorn to Black Hand*...
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Cat fight?
I think not...remember, she brought me into this world she CAN take me out...just sayin.
And if you haven't read Serene's story that should definitely be your next endeavor, she's tough as nails, even Athynae thinks twice about going head to head with her. And we all know how Athynae's temper is...just ask Athlain.
Creaky old dachshund hears squabbling amongst people about whether they themselves are good writers or not, goes and rouses his master.
Trey comes in, looks around the place and knocks FOUR silly heads together, grumbling-
"Get back to work! You are all brilliant!"
LMAO!!!...Yes dad...Sorry dad...
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Yea! What Blackie said, McB started it!
Silly badger, getting everybody in trouble, what were you thinking?
But...I...
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Meanie...
Well, you did! Sort of, as I try that dig a hole thing with my toe, you can't say things about my friends that aren't nice even if it is about yourself because, as the very young Thyna would say, "I will put up my fistes and beatchoo up!"
Besides, I didn't get any popcorn....
Gulp" Ok so please hand ME some popcorn, and I promise not to fight...AND .....well at least spread some information around....You who need it know who you are.
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