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Posted by: Dantrag Aug 12 2005, 04:07 PM

This is a bit of a humorous short story about Red's character. shakur "The Red" Ir Shin. Yes, I have his permission to write about him. Enjoy.

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Facing assassins was nothing compared to this foe. A mage that had the potential to kill a god was as easy as swatting a fly compared to this foe. No matter how many times you get rid of it, it always comes back. It is always around me. When I sleep, it is there. When I eat, it is there. Its unbridled power threatens my very being. It makes me cough and sneeze, just breathing around this beast. For the first time in my life, I am afraid. For the first time in my life, a sword cannot kill my enemy.

-Shakur Ir Shin

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"It is in our house." Shakur said to his wife Heddvild. "The demon has a short time remaining in this world." he said determinedly.

"Yes, I am in here." it called to Shakur, mocking him.

"The bedroom!" he exclaimed, running towards the room.

He took a rag out of his pocket and scanned the room looking for the beast. Where could it be?

"Come out and face me!" Shakur yelled.

If the beast wouldn't fight fair, neither would he. He put the rag back in his pocket and took a deep breath to strengthen his resolve. He had to use the new power he had discovered. In all his years of being an Ansei, he never would have guessed that he could summon something other than a sword - or more useful. He quickly summoned his new weapon and gripped it tightly as he searched under the bed - there it was!

With three swift strokes of his new weapon, the beast was gone, but it would soon return. Shakur didn't know how long he had to live. The demon always chased him, always mocked his efforts to rid himself of it...

He began coughing - just being around the beast seemed to make it hard to breathe. He ran out of the room, away from that foul air.

Heddvild looked down at Shakur's new glowing weapon. "What is that?" she asked, confused.

Shakur held it up proudly. "This, my dear, is my spirit duster."

"So you got the dust in the bedroom?"

"Yes, but we must find a new place to live!" Shakur said, traces of fear apparent in his voice. "I don't want to be killed by it."

"Alright." Heddvild conceded. "But only because of your allergies."

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enjoy.





Posted by: Kell-Reevor Aug 12 2005, 04:11 PM

*Points at Shakur* Ha Ha

Dust sucks, great story. biggrin.gif

Posted by: minque Aug 12 2005, 04:13 PM

Haha...very good Dantrag!! You have talent.....really.....

Have a cake.gif

Posted by: Megil Tel-Zeke Aug 12 2005, 04:58 PM

LMAO

it was great I can just picture it too.

Posted by: BobV Aug 12 2005, 05:04 PM

Lmao biggrin.gif

Posted by: Neck' Thall Aug 12 2005, 05:50 PM

What they said* Points to BobV and Megil...I know what Shakur feels like...im almost alergic to everything...

Posted by: Aki Aug 12 2005, 07:05 PM

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Funny.

Posted by: treydog Aug 12 2005, 08:02 PM

"Bring out the Broom of Mighty Cleaning! Let no foul dust bunny stand against our righteous wrath!"

I can see the new RP now- The Cleaning Crew, led by Shakur.

Brilliant.

Posted by: Kiln Aug 12 2005, 09:22 PM

Very nice Dantrag, is it hard writing about someone else's character?

Posted by: minque Aug 12 2005, 09:24 PM

yeah....I think I´ll let him have a go with Serene....he´s read about her...and she´s been in the rp soooo
It would be fun..... biggrin.gif

Posted by: Konradude Aug 12 2005, 09:26 PM

.....Okaaaay....

Good though. smile.gif

Posted by: Dantrag Aug 13 2005, 01:27 AM

QUOTE(minque @ Aug 12 2005, 04:24 PM)
yeah....I think I´ll let him have a go with Serene....he´s read about her...and she´s been in the rp soooo
It would be fun..... biggrin.gif
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any suggestions on something weird about Serene? I can't think of anything...

I would be glad to do it though. I find it rather fun.

Posted by: Channler Aug 13 2005, 03:44 AM

lol, brilliant Dantrag...

Posted by: BobV Aug 13 2005, 04:05 AM

Dantrag...Could you think of something involving Anthanes maybe? I can think up enough oddities for him.. biggrin.gif

Posted by: Dantrag Aug 13 2005, 04:09 AM

QUOTE(BobV @ Aug 12 2005, 11:05 PM)
Dantrag...Could you think of something involving Anthanes maybe? I can think up enough oddities for him..  biggrin.gif
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Sure. PM me some stuff.

(Dantrag's parody sories, get one free, get another free! what a deal!)

Posted by: Red Aug 13 2005, 08:26 PM

Amazing Danny, The opening paragraph was really good. Also, you did it tastefully and with my permission, well donezorz! goodjob.gif

How about Serene, cracker salting extrodinair? Or Serene, ash yam befriender?

Posted by: Wolfie Aug 13 2005, 08:28 PM

Lol that was great. You now have my permission to do that one about Jonacin the Dad biggrin.gif

Posted by: minque Aug 14 2005, 11:32 AM

And certainl you have my permission to involve Serene the supermommy!!!!

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Posted by: Red Aug 25 2005, 02:33 PM

QUOTE(minque @ Aug 14 2005, 11:32 AM)
And certainl you have my permission to involve Serene the supermommy!!!!

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I still think we should go with Ash Yam befriender. biggrin.gif

Posted by: The Wolf Sep 29 2005, 04:31 PM

Excellent stuff smile.gif

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