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post Nov 6 2007, 01:16 AM
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QUOTE(jack cloudy @ Nov 5 2007, 04:02 PM) *

Lol, I've done it. I've brought in a Roman ex-emperor. Oh, please. Somebody shoot me because this story is going down the plumber.

I also updated my excerpts. I'm going to put one down of each chapter.
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LOL at the Roman emperor. Just so long as you don't bring in Samual Clemens you'll be OK. wink.gif Near as I can tell, things are supposed to get nutty in your nano fic, so all is going to plan. biggrin.gif

I'm afraid to have an excerpt on my page. ohmy.gif My page is here, though (remember: I am there as "lokken", not "blockhead"): http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/214638

10559 words. Progress is grudging. I miss writing Rashelle. sad.gif

edit: Zarrexaij: you've gone quiet. I assume you're quietly writing huge amounts of words while the rest of us waste time talking about writing instead of writing. biggrin.gif

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post Nov 8 2007, 08:39 PM
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Err, who is Samuel Clemens? The guy who wrote as Mark Twain? If so, why shouldn't I add him?

And dang, over 15000 words?! Man, I'm seriously running behind. I've just past 8500. wacko.gif I also added yet another excerpt. Hmm, this story isn't going to remain pg-13 at this rate. I mean seriously, taking a video+audio phone call while under a shower? A phone call from a pervert? Well, he did bash on Emmy for a bit but you've gotta admit, the girl was asking for it. tongue.gif


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post Nov 10 2007, 02:44 AM
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QUOTE(jack cloudy @ Nov 8 2007, 02:39 PM) *

Err, who is Samuel Clemens? The guy who wrote as Mark Twain? If so, why shouldn't I add him?

Yes. He is a major character in The Riverworld novels. As they have a similar premise to your story, it would be just too much similarity if you were to also include him.

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And dang, over 15000 words?! Man, I'm seriously running behind. I've just past 8500. wacko.gif

I didn't write at all yesterday. Dealing witha major hard drive problem: data recovery. Grrr. At least the nano story files were not lost: they were safe on their ext3 partition (the fat32 partition is the one that failed). In addition that problem, I'm getting really tired of this story. I'm just throwing random stuff at our characters to keep the moving and there's no plot or anything emerging. Feh. I'm only pressing on out of a Rashelle-like commitment to finish it.

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I also added yet another excerpt. Hmm, this story isn't going to remain pg-13 at this rate. I mean seriously, taking a video+audio phone call while under a shower? A phone call from a pervert? Well, he did bash on Emmy for a bit but you've gotta admit, the girl was asking for it. tongue.gif

Err? Well, since it's the future, maybe the vid-phone automatically edits the outgoing video in real time to mask out the "naughty parts" so it's safe/convenient to take a call in the shower???? tongue.gif




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post Nov 10 2007, 10:29 AM
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Well, there was the 'automatic camera readjustment' she activated before taking the phone call. So yeah, he really didn't see anything below the chin. Didn't stop his imagination though.

And yet another excerpt. I'm slowly but surely catching up. (Emphasis on the slowly)
I've also decided to throw all logic out of the window and just go absolutely 'hit with a 1000-ton hammer from hammerspace' crazy.

Yes, that's an ant who has his own restaurant. It's funny, but I wanted to write something like that way before Nano. I think this is more insane than Creeper or talking Mudcrab merchant. Ok, the Mudcrab comes close, but Scamps were already known to have some intelligence before Creeper.

I also like paragraph, though it didn't make it into the excerpt. Now this is how you can pump your wordcount, describe someone's outfit. Especially the final sentence is a good pumper even though it doesn't mean anything for the story.

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The rest of my wardrobe selection was easy and done within just ten minutes. First, white undergarments to cover torso and thighs for warmth, then white socks with little blue ribbons at the knees and ankles. Black sandals, decorated with a blue bow on top. Blue dress, with white frills and front. A deep green belt with a really big green bow on my back and finally a pair of light pink silken gloves with frilly edges. I entered my bathroom to check myself in the mirror. The first splash of my left foot changed my mind. I made a mental note to call the plumber as soon as I had time. Geez, another brand new bathroom. Did the world think that I had money growing out of my teeth or something?! I would have to settle with having my plug project an image of myself and check it out that way. It was smaller and slightly hazy, but it did have the advantage of being in full 3-d. I gave myself a good long check-up. I was pleased to note that I was in one word, adorable. Or, in forty-six words. Danged adorable and so frillity cute you wanna give me a hug and puke all at the same time cause it just causes major sensory overload that makes your brains explode and your kidneys shrivel up in horror at the pure awesomeness of my perfect outfit.


Ya know, if I saw someone dressed like that, my kidneys would shrivel up in horror, but not because of awesomeness. This is just creepier than a fully pimped barbie doll.

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post Nov 11 2007, 01:00 AM
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QUOTE(jack cloudy @ Nov 10 2007, 04:29 AM) *

Ya know, if I saw someone dressed like that, my kidneys would shrivel up in horror, but not because of awesomeness. This is just creepier than a fully pimped barbie doll.

"fully pimped" and "barbie doll" in the same sentence is so creepy that it redefines what creepy is. ohmy.gif

It's fun to write nutty/twisted characters. Remember Kjolver in my Bloodmoon fanfic? biggrin.gif

I'm up to 21233 (rather lamely written) words, but only because of sheer imbecilic stubborness, some exposition and a huge goblin (or goblin-like) army attacking the city out of nowhere. Plot stuck? Just send in the goblins. tongue.gif

As to what I do next, I'm putting that thought off until tomorrow!




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post Nov 11 2007, 02:39 AM
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I deleted my 1k-words intro. I was not satisfied with it. Not going to bother with it, either - like I said, if it's not perfect acceptable to my own liking, it might as well be fireplace fuel.

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post Nov 11 2007, 09:53 AM
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Lol, I'm at 10K and I haven't even gotten past the first morning! tongue.gif Emmy takes ages to go to work. Maybe I should send in some ninjas or something of my own. Though I don't think that's such a good idea because of:

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I figured a shower might help just as well though so I stretched to my toes to get at the inconveniently high cabinet for some soap.

“Waah!” Next moment I knew, I was on the floor, surrounded by bits of porcelain and shards of glass. There went the sink and the mirror, again, for the second time this week.


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“Wah!” Again, I went for the floor, this time because the door I’d been leaning against opened inwards.


and

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“I tried to take the soap out of the cabinet, lost my balance, slammed my face against the mirror, shattering it, knocked down the sink and broke the plumbing.”


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“Though be careful with our bathroom, you are awfully clumsy this morning.” He then added, after I’d tripped over the carpet and nearly fallen onto my face.


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I felt like kicking myself for being stupid enough to tuck it into my bathrobe and I tried, which resulted in me spinning around on my left foot three times, then grabbing the showerhead and crashing to the cabinfloor.


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,,It’s heat rejection. I’ve gotten a rewired neural net, switched over to self-exciting wormlines for signal transmission, recomposed bones to now be an artificial crystalline matrix, rebuilt musculature to include high-tension fibers complete with carbon igniters and finally tripled my nanitelevel to maintain all of it. Do you have any idea how hot I run? I would have a bodytemperature high enough to boil water! So running parallel with the neural net I’ve got nano-scale cooling tubes filled with some cooling-fluid produced by the tube’s walls. They go up through my hair which now functions as a big radiator. That’s also why it’s so long. More active surface for the heat transmission. On the whole, the whole thing wasn’t such a big deal. They’re only a few small changes, after all.”


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Five times my annual salary, all just to turn me into some sort of superhuman hybrid. And what for? I couldn’t even walk down the stairs now without pulling off a triple somersault and landing on my behind.


Ok, so she's potentially the ultimate badass and holds the power of ultimate clumsiness. I don't think she could survive against even a single low-level ninja b-movie grunt. Unless she had a badass mecha nearby.


Oh, and my sister had a pregnant barbie doll once, complete with removable belly and little babydoll inside. The baby had umm.....'all anatomical features'. Now that was definitely creepy.


And Mil, you've gotta do what you've gotta do. I agree with you on it though. If it's utter crap, don't keep it, even if it brings the 50K closer.

Oh, and I saw someone on the forum today who had 106K! ohmy.gif Crappity crap, that guy has way too much spare time on his hands!


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post Nov 11 2007, 05:39 PM
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That is a strange barbie ohmy.gif

Jack, I have a hunch that you've been wanting to write an SF story for awhile. I guess you wanted a change from the sword & sorcery fantasy thing. biggrin.gif I've actually read far more SF (with a focus on the hard SF: Niven, Asimov. Egan, etc.) than fantasy so I can understand this.

Anyway, I'm impressed with the level of detail in the description of the nanotech implants your character has.

234 words for today. 1700+ to go.



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post Nov 11 2007, 08:27 PM
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I...I've given up.... kvleft.gif i don't think it was the right timing for me....if I only could throw in Serene..but that wouldn't be right..... sad.gif sad.gif


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post Nov 11 2007, 08:48 PM
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Blockie, you flatter me. It's mostly technobabble if you look at it closely. Though I am rather proud of my cooling function. For as far as I know, no one ever brought forth the issue of heat generation in all the ultra-performance implants. biggrin.gif And yeah, I've been craving for some sci-fi for a while now. In fact, I'm up at 11.756 words right now and have just introduced my first giant mecha! Ok, not giant. It's only about half as tall as a Gundam.

Right now, Emmy is going to take it for a test flight. Don't worry, the AI will prevent crashlandings and mere tripping. biggrin.gif And if you're wondering just what her breakfast was. It was fried cockroach with spiced meat inside. I've heard that bugs are quite tasty actually.

Minque, it's too bad to hear, but I understand. This is indeed a lot harder than it sounded at the start of the month. Oh well, at least you can say you tried, right?


Oh, and who among us is going to post his or her work here at the end of the week? I'm pretty sure that I'm going to do it. Escalation has become a project I want to see through to its end. But I'll also return to Oasis 2 and Corrupted Hearth in December.

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post Nov 11 2007, 10:09 PM
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QUOTE(minque @ Nov 11 2007, 02:27 PM) *

I...I've given up.... kvleft.gif i don't think it was the right timing for me....if I only could throw in Serene..but that wouldn't be right..... sad.gif sad.gif
It's OK. There's always next year. smile.gif Have some cake: cake.gif

Don't delete what you wrote. That could always be re-used and popped into some other future story (in some unexpected way).


jack: your "techno babble" was actually making sense, though hair as a heat radiator ... well, that might work but it would be silly. biggrin.gif I've read some short stories that deal with heat produced by nano-machine implants, so that concept is also reasonable.

What do you mean "end of the week"?

to all: remember, November only has 30 days ... not 31 ... lest you miss the deadline nono.gif


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post Nov 11 2007, 10:54 PM
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Maybe the hair is silly, but I wouldn't want to ruin her skin. Oh wait, I did. She's suffering from constant skin irritation. tongue.gif

Err, I meant end of the month. Oops.


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post Nov 13 2007, 04:32 AM
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Gah: it's been like pulling teeth, like kicking whales up the beach, like nailling jello to a tree, to get the last few days of writing done. Today I said, "no way." Since my word count is ahead, I took today (day 12) off. Ahhh ... relief city. The book says it's OK to do this once in a while, and I am so burnt out. I was about at the point where I was going to have a meteor just smash into my stupid characters and everyone around them and end the stupid story. mad.gif




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post Nov 13 2007, 05:03 AM
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ohmy.gif Wow, you have been pushed to the limit. Although the part about the meteor game had me lol, enjoy you're break, I'll be trying NaNoWriMo next year..... if I don't have a lot of other things to worry about, or Revan. biggrin.gif
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You know, I no longer care. I like the setting I have, but I don't give a damn about the timelimit. Quality doesn't come from pumping out words like a triple-barrelled-triple-gatling. (That's nine barrels) I can make the fifty, if I'm willing to sacrifice my sanity and my story. And I'm not willing to do that.

So I'll just see how far I get, but I'm not going to aim for the fifty k at all. I'm aiming for a non-crap story now.

It took me a while to figure this out, but I now realize I don't respond well to being pressured into my hobbies. I like writing. I once loved Badminton, but since I got pushed into it, I came to hate it and have since then quit it a long time ago. I don't want to lose writing to the same thing.

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post Nov 14 2007, 03:51 AM
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QUOTE(jack cloudy @ Nov 13 2007, 04:02 PM) *

You know, I no longer care. I like the setting I have, but I don't give a damn about the timelimit. Quality doesn't come from pumping out words like a triple-barrelled-triple-gatling. (That's nine barrels) I can make the fifty, if I'm willing to sacrifice my sanity and my story. And I'm not willing to do that.

So I'll just see how far I get, but I'm not going to aim for the fifty k at all. I'm aiming for a non-crap story now.

It took me a while to figure this out, but I now realize I don't respond well to being pressured into my hobbies. I like writing. I once loved Badminton, but since I got pushed into it, I came to hate it and have since then quit it a long time ago. I don't want to lose writing to the same thing.

With the quality of your writing, and the fact that you already have the ability to create original plots, I guess the nano thing isn't important or necessary for you.

As for me ... I've never been able to create a plot. I've read so many things on making plots. I've been told many things about How It Is Done ... but i can't seem to do it. This situation is no longer acceptable to me, so I am using the nano thing to force myself to somehow break though and create an original plot.

Yesterdays break was a good thing. Today's writing was still a battle, but not nearly as bad as the few days before that were. Some of the characters are beginning to finally develop some personality ... though still not as much as Rashelle and her friends. Oh, and don't wrory about Rashelle. I've actually had another Rashelle story in progress since back when I wrote Rashelle At Lokken. Also, when taking a break from the nano story I had an idea (not a full plot, just a ... starting point) for another story! Rashelle is so fun to write. You will eventually be seeing more of her. wink.gif

I've got 26334 words now: passed the halfway point! Woo woo! biggrin.gif Yes, it's crap, but hey, it's original crap ... and there will be editing after November.







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up to 29167 words, and something is beginning to happen. Some of characters are beginning to come alive. They're starting to write their own dialog. They are talking more. Final-freaken-lee!

Errrrr, I am the only chorrol-peep still writing their nano? sad.gif





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Oh how I wish I had the time to participate! I'm just so willing to write but ......It's impossible, Maybe I will find the time to at l;east update Serene... sad.gif


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QUOTE(minque @ Nov 16 2007, 06:46 PM) *

Oh how I wish I had the time to participate! I'm just so willing to write but ......It's impossible, Maybe I will find the time to at l;east update Serene... sad.gif

Hey minque! How go things over there on your project? smile.gif Yes, more Serene please?

Today I took another day off from nano. I just couldn't stand to work on that stupid story any more. Instead of writing tonight, I played MW. Rashelle and Laurenna wandered around Lokken in the snow.



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QUOTE(blockhead @ Nov 15 2007, 01:40 AM) *

up to 29167 words, and something is beginning to happen. Some of characters are beginning to come alive. They're starting to write their own dialog. They are talking more. Final-freaken-lee!
Errrrr, I am the only chorrol-peep still writing their nano? sad.gif


Well done, you're past the awful part. Soon the desire upon waking up to contemplate pulling out nasal hairs with pliers, rather than write, will seem like a distant memory.

Erm... and I'm still going on mine, for the third year in a row. Not the same one obviously. 19,000 words so far and my nasal passages have never been so hair free wink.gif
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