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| Acadian |
 Feb 15 2013, 08:53 PM
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Lol. Hastrel is such a weenie!
Darn, we still don’t know enough about the mysterious Decimus werewolf. And some good development of Vokun. I can see why he dislikes werewolves so much. But his underlying nature of being a jerk peeks through in how he treated his wife and son. So he still rates a punch in the mouth.  This post has been edited by Acadian: Feb 15 2013, 08:54 PM -------------------- |
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| Elisabeth Hollow |
Feb 15 2013, 08:56 PM
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QUOTE(Acadian @ Feb 15 2013, 01:53 PM)  And some good development of Vokun. I can see why he dislikes werewolves so much. But his underlying nature of being a jerk peeks through in how he treated his wife and son. So he still rates a punch in the mouth. He sure does. -------------------- |
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| King Of Beasts |
Feb 20 2013, 01:44 AM
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mALX:
QUOTE(mALX @ Feb 14 2013, 04:15 PM) QUOTE Janus popped up from behind a rock and tried to talk some sense into them "Must an argument become this violent?! Aren't we supposed to be on the same side! Let's just go find-AAAHHH!" The Count ducked behind the rock again when Hastrel shot a fireball at him. QUOTE Jakben scowled at him. "Who are you, and how DARE you come over hear and criticize our miserable band of misfits?" The above two quotes nearly killed me laughing, but the section from Vokun’s point of view was heartbreaking. That is twice you’ve made me feel bad for Vokun, regardless of knowing what he’s done. Awesome Write! * Don't feel bad for Vokun, it's a bad idea!  He had a depressing childhood though, but remember, he's already screwed up in the head to the point where it's not possible to help him, and feeling bad for him will not get you anywhere.  Thanks for reading mALX  QUOTE(Elisabeth Hollow @ Feb 14 2013, 09:22 PM) So Vokun is just insane Wow. Whatever was holding his mind together is officially broken  He'd be thriving in the shivering isles though. I wonder where he'd live  Thanks for reading 'Liz! QUOTE(Acadian @ Feb 15 2013, 11:53 AM) And some good development of Vokun. I can see why he dislikes werewolves so much. But his underlying nature of being a jerk peeks through in how he treated his wife and son. So he still rates a punch in the mouth. Sadly, the fight you witnessed in this chapter between Vokun and his wife wasnt the worst of the fights. You'll find out later on the fights would get quite......violent, and Vokun's son could only stand by and watch  But he definitely deserves to be punched in the mouth still And congrats on your new position Acadian  -------------------- Bruh ☠ï¸
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| King Of Beasts |
Feb 20 2013, 01:45 AM
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#124
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Not much of a writer though
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Feb 20 2013, 08:02 AM
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I really like how you've given everyone distinct personalities in this story! GAAAAH! Cannibals? URK !!!! Awesome Write !!!
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Feb 20 2013, 01:58 PM
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So Westley got separated and captures by cannibals? GO WOLF, WESTLEY!!!!
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Feb 22 2013, 01:20 AM
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‘The horizon was a rich golden-orange with hints of light purple, light blue, and pink. The stars were beginning to invade the sky, and it was starting to get dark.’
KoB, this is a nice description and easy to envision. Well done! Little Hastrel takes apologizing to a whole new level. Captured by cannibals! I’m expecting Westley to wake up sitting in a stewpot of water over a big fire!  -------------------- |
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| King Of Beasts |
Feb 27 2013, 03:28 AM
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mALX: Cannibals are only one of the many nasty "creatures" that war can bring out. Westley and the gang will have to deal with a lot more trouble later on, lol.
Elisabeth Hollow: The cannibals are in for a hell lotta trouble trying to kidnap and eat a werewolf. It won't go well in thier end. And I hope you cheer up soon Acadian: thanks Acadian. I enjoy describing things(sometimes I get to carried away though  )QUOTE Little Hastrel takes apologizing to a whole new level. When it comes to apologies, he's more useless than ever -------------------- Bruh ☠ï¸
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Feb 27 2013, 03:29 AM
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Glad to end this
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Feb 27 2013, 03:50 AM
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WESTLEY, NO!! :'(
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Feb 28 2013, 07:49 AM
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First off, I am so sorry it took so long to get here and read - very hectic week. QUOTE "Are you two sure that Namira even wants us to commit cannibalism?" GAAAAAH! Urk! QUOTE "WHAT AM I, THE HORSE WHISPERER?!" Smooth-Scales hissed SPEW!!! LOVE your humorous dialogue, and it always catches me by surprise when you tuck it into a serious situation - I need to stop sipping drinks when reading your story !! QUOTE "I'm sorry, this isn't important, but you keep saying ta instead of the" Afer frowned "Well excuse me for havin' a funny accent! You don't sound normal yourself!" SPEW!!! ROFL !!! QUOTE He laid on the ground, his shirt and pants soaked in crimson blood, his dark brown eyes wide open, and a look of terror was stricken on his face. I threw my head back and let out a blood-curdling howl, and it echoed loudly in the dead of the night. Oh dear gods Westley, NO !!!!!!! Urk!!! What a cliffhanger, I hope Westley runs away! GAAAAAH! Awesome Write! * -------------------- |
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| Acadian |
Feb 28 2013, 04:59 PM
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I chuckled to learn that the smartest of the little cannibal band had four legs. Never doubt the judgment of a horse when it comes to sensing danger.
‘I put my hand on his shoulder "Don't worry, I haven't forgotten my name. I'm just not sure I can trust you." Westley shows much wisdom here, tempering honesty with prudence. "I'm sorry, this isn't important, but you keep saying ta instead of the" A delightful technique here. When something may cause the reader pause, addressing it right in the story is a great choice! ‘I realized that The Ring Of Hircine had fallen off my finger when the cart flipped.’ Similarly here, you answered an unspoken question just as it might have occurred to the astute reader. Afer is likable, but has just made a suicidal error in judgment. Westley’s reaction is terrifying but justified. A very powerful ending to this episode! -------------------- |
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Apr 2 2013, 06:51 PM
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STOP BEING LAZY AND CONTINUE THIS DAMN STORY!! XD
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Apr 3 2013, 09:23 AM
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Missing your story, Kobby! Hope you can pick it up again when you get over being sick from those damn pills! -------------------- |
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Apr 4 2013, 06:02 AM
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Elisabeth Hollow: Westley acted out of self-defense.Like Acadian said, Westley's actions may have been scary(and maybe even a bit harsh), but he had a good reason. Had Afer not attacked him, things would have Hine very differently.
mALX: sorry you were having a crazy week mALX, I hope everything is a bit better now  QUOTE SPEW!!! LOVE your humorous dialogue, and it always catches me by surprise when you tuck it into a serious situation - I need to stop sipping drinks when reading your story !! Yes, please, I don't want to be responsible for paying your repair bill QUOTE Oh dear gods Westley, NO !!!!!!! Urk!!! What a cliffhanger, I hope Westley runs away! GAAAAAH! Awesome Write! Like I said to Liz, he had a good reason for doing what he did! Afer brought death upon himself! Acadian: QUOTE Afer is likable, but has just made a suicidal error in judgment. Westley’s reaction is terrifying but justified. A very powerful ending to this episode! Thank you you said it far better than I could have, lol.QUOTE I chuckled to learn that the smartest of the little cannibal band had four legs. Never doubt the judgment of a horse when it comes to sensing danger. Yup. And the cannibals made the mistake of dismissing the horse's warnings.... Everyone: sorry it took so long to post this. I went to Africa and got sick. I was also being a bit lazy, -------------------- Bruh ☠ï¸
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| King Of Beasts |
Apr 4 2013, 06:03 AM
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Apr 4 2013, 06:15 AM
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QUOTE "I GO WHERE I PLEASE!" "I DO WHAT I WANT!!" I love their arguments so much XD-------------------- |
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| Acadian |
Apr 4 2013, 04:45 PM
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Yay! Westley lifted that ol’ wagon and freed the horse.
 "Actually Imbel, I'm pretty sure if you looked hard enough, you could find a building or plant that will attempt to eat you-" True, this. “Besides, you'll be less scary if you're dead." Also quite true. Welcome back KoB. Another fun episode, as concern for Westley is rapidly replaced by the neverending bickering of Jakben and Hastrel. I don’t know how long Janus will be willing to continue trying to referee. -------------------- |
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| mALX |
Apr 4 2013, 07:14 PM
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GAAAAH! Westley's going to kill Smooth-Scales? Urk! QUOTE Hastrel shrieked "STAY AWAY FROM ME, YOU BRUTE!" "We're screwed. He's screwed. We're all going to starve and die out here. Maybe we'll get eaten by a bear or something. If I die I hope it's a quick death. I don't want to stand here and get mauled while I slowly and painfully bleed to death." Jakben scowled "You're being a bit negative..." "I actually enjoy making your blood pressure go through the roof, becasue then you have a higher chance of having a heart-attack!" SPEW !!! ROFL !!! This whole section had me in hysterics! You haven't lost your touch, Kobby! Awesome Write, and I am so happy you are back and writing it again! * -------------------- |
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| King Of Beasts |
Apr 29 2013, 12:54 AM
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Elisabeth Hollow:
The arguing has barely begun Acadian: Janus will be tearing his hair out pretty soon, lol. Hastrel and Jakben agreed to stop fighting, but that's not going to happen mALX: BLECH. I've been busy lately, lol. Haven't had much time to sit down and write, lol -------------------- Bruh ☠ï¸
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