AND THROUGH IT ALL, THE RISE AND FALL, THE BODIES IN THE STREETS. AND WHEN YOU'RE GONE WE WANT YOU ALL TO KNOW;

WE'LL CARRY ON!
WE'LL CARRY ON!
AND THOUGH YOU'RE DEAD AND GONE BELIEVE ME,
YOUR MEMORY WILL CARRY ON,
WE'LL CARRY ON,
AND IN MY HEART I CAN'T CONTAIN IT,
THE ANTHEM WON'T EXPLAIN IT!

This post has been edited by King Of Beasts: Mar 29 2013, 10:25 PM

I'm not sure on first line of the next part. It sounds garbled to me. Sorryyyyy.

The world sends you reeling, from decimated dreams,

Your misery and hate will kill is all
So paint it black and take it back

Let's shout out loud and clear
Defiant to the end we hear the call

To carry on!

We'll carry on!

Though we're broken and defeated,

The memory will carry on
We'll carry on
And though we're broken and defeated our memory MAR-CHES

On and on we carry through the fears
Ooh oh ohhhh
Disappointed faces of your peers
Ooh oh ohhhh
Take a look at me cause I could not care at all

Do or die, you'll never make me
Because the world will never take my heart
Go and try, you'll never break me
We want it all, we wanna play this part
I won't explain or say I'm sorry
I'm unashamed, I'm gonna show my scar
Give a cheer for all the broken
Listen here, because it's who we are
I'm just a man, I'm not a hero
Just a boy, who had to sing this song
I'm just a man, I'm not a hero
I! don't! care!

We'll carry on
We'll carry on
And though you're dead and gone believe me
Your memory will carry on

In the middle of a gunfight
In the center of a restaurant
They say,
"Come with your arms raised high!"

But they're never gonna get me
Like a bullet through a flock of doves
To wage
This war against your faith
In me,
Your life
Will never
Be the same
On your mother's eyes say a prayer
Say a prayer, yeah!

We'll carry on
And though you're broken and defeated
Your weary widow marches on

Do or die, you'll never make me
Because the world will never take my heart
Go and try, you'll never break me
We want it all, we wanna play this part (We'll carry on)

Do or die, you'll never make me (We'll carry on)
Because the world will never take my heart (We'll carry on)
Go and try, you'll never break me (We'll carry)
We want it all, we wanna play this part (We'll carry on)

NOOOOOO WE STARTED ON A NEW SONG!!!! XD

Curse you spammy people and your spammy spams!

Too bad

Mama, we all go to hell. Mama, we all go to hell. I'm writing this letter, and wishing you well, mama, we all go to hell.

This post has been edited by King Of Beasts: Mar 29 2013, 10:49 PM

Dear god, three hours from the deadline AND IM STILL WRITING.

I just sent in my entry. WRITE ULENI, WRITE!

My husband just told me I'm going to lose.

I'm genuinely hurt. He wasn't kidding.

That's mean

Watch you win, lol

I KNOW I'm gonna lose

Lose what?

The writing competition going on

EDIT:

I get too riled up when I listen to My Chemical Romance. I just smashed a painting in my house

This post has been edited by King Of Beasts: Mar 29 2013, 10:58 PM

Hey, Liz. Don't worry; way I see it, if you post your entry just in time, then you've already won! Pioneering such awork in such a shortamount ofime shouldn t be ignored and takes such dedication for thecause after all. OKAY THEN GUYS WISH MELUCK!

I can't wrap my head around that. I love your writing. I know- I know... the quot-a-matic ™ commenting machine has grown rusty from disuse and I hardly ever seem to be here.

But--- I am ambivalent about contests anyway, except in circumstances like this, where we all know each other and are supportive.

Anyone who steps up and ENTERS is a "winner" as far as I am concerned. Kinda like the motivational plaque I saw on a desk yesterday while installing a computer.

"You are guaranteed to miss 100% of the shots you don't take."

So- ignore him... until he goes to sleep. And then you can draw on his face with a Sharpie marker.

ETA- WRITE Uleni! WRITE! And best of luck to EVERYONE!

This post has been edited by treydog: Mar 29 2013, 11:01 PM

I just had guests... Finally they left so I could game a little and then come on here

I had no idea you read my stuff. I'm flattered!!

Yep, I tend to agree. The whole reason I never set up another contest after 2008, was the sheer negativity that came out of it. The first one we did, just this forum, was great. It wasn't (and never should be) about winning and losing.That's why I always liked it here, why I've stayed 8 years here - everyone genuinely wants everybody else to do well, like a community support type thingy...

The competition aspect - it's about giving YOURSELF an incentive to write. It's about the FUN of writing something, the FUN of other people you know writing something, and everybody wanting everybody elses story to be great.

And they will be.

End of.

I'm really enjoying this contest