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| Red |
 Jun 9 2005, 01:09 AM
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 Mouth  Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here.  |
Perfection is key,
especially in haiku. Remember this doom. Yay, I made a teaching poem! -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Dantrag |
Jun 9 2005, 01:19 AM
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 Councilor  Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
lol. this thread is cool. I enjoy reaading poems. (Call me a nerd I dont care.)
Too bad it would be difficult to have "Compose music thread" that would be sweet. -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| DoomedOne |
Jun 9 2005, 01:53 AM
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[quote=KhabaLox][quote=DoomedOne]Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing lines of water color paint on a canvas and calling it a water-color art piece.
[/quote] I don't get it. Is it art if you use oils instead of water-colors? Jackson Pollack (and a lot of art critics) seemed to think so. Poetry is as poetry does.[/quote] Yeah you're right you don't get it. Poetry is an artform as well. You asusmed by art I meant only paintings. This is what I meant, I'll make it clear. You can't paint an art-piece by simply sticking the medium to the canvas, if you could anyone could make art. With haiku, the midium maybe a certaina mount of syllables, but that does not make it haiku simply to follow those sylalbles. -------------------- A man once asked the Buddha, "How does one escape the heat of the summer sun?"
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| Red |
Jun 9 2005, 12:31 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Like I said before, there were Bhudist monks who would take years to write a haiku, and would live in solitude to perfect their arts.
For example, Basho spent much of his time alone perfecting his art. Here is one of his poems: On a leafless branch, A crow comes to rest– The Autumn nightfall. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Chumbaniya |
Jun 9 2005, 04:43 PM
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 Finder  Joined: 13-May 05 From: The house of fun! |
Haikus are too short
They contain only three lines I am confused now Vengeful crocodile Waits in deep murky water Then strikes like lightning :shocked: -------------------- Chumbaniya Has Spoken!
"It's a party. It doesn't have to make sense" - Homer "To alcohol - the cause of, and solution to, all of life's problems" - Homer |
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| KhabaLox |
Jun 10 2005, 04:37 PM
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[quote=DoomedOne]Yeah you're right you don't get it. Poetry is an artform as well. You asusmed by art I meant only paintings. This is what I meant, I'll make it clear.
You can't paint an art-piece by simply sticking the medium to the canvas, if you could anyone could make art. With haiku, the midium maybe a certaina mount of syllables, but that does not make it haiku simply to follow those sylalbles.[/quote] I think your view of art and poetry is closeminded. Randomness, lack of premeditation, and absense of meaning all have their place in art. Even haiku. It may not be your daddy's haiku, but it's still a piece of art. -------------------- Dave was the personification of humanity.
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| Chumbaniya |
Jun 11 2005, 02:12 AM
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[quote=KhabaLox]I think your view of art and poetry is closeminded. Randomness, lack of premeditation, and absense of meaning all have their place in art. Even haiku. It may not be your daddy's haiku, but it's still a piece of art.[/quote]
Randomness and lack of premeditation? Alright! Enchanted woodlouse Swims in vat of cheap syrup He is quite content I become enraged By talk of tresspassing bears That steal my best shoes -------------------- Chumbaniya Has Spoken!
"It's a party. It doesn't have to make sense" - Homer "To alcohol - the cause of, and solution to, all of life's problems" - Homer |
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| ShogunSniper |
Jun 11 2005, 02:22 AM
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a dark past shrouded
eyes unclouded by hatred made dark with red tears is that right? -------------------- War is over if you want it.
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| gamer10 |
Jun 11 2005, 02:33 AM
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[quote=ShogunSniper]a dark past shrouded
eyes unclouded by hatred made dark with red tears is that right?[/quote] (hey that matches my character in RP. Except for the third line.) |
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| Chumbaniya |
Jun 11 2005, 12:00 PM
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Finder Joined: 13-May 05 From: The house of fun! |
Here's a haiku some of the admins could use:
Temporary ban Preventing further posting Will be issued now -------------------- Chumbaniya Has Spoken!
"It's a party. It doesn't have to make sense" - Homer "To alcohol - the cause of, and solution to, all of life's problems" - Homer |
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| Sinder Velvin |
Jun 11 2005, 12:17 PM
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Knower  Joined: 9-February 05 From: Over THERE! |
[quote=Chumbaniya]Here's a haiku some of the admins could use:
Temporary ban Preventing further posting Will be issued now[/quote] Muahahahaha. Best not to give me any ideas. |
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| Andric |
Jun 11 2005, 04:21 PM
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 Agent Joined: 30-April 05 From: Middle of nowhere (We call it Carroll) |
Deodorant is
really really smelly and it also smells weird Thats the best I can come up with :paperbag: --------------------  |
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| Konji |
Jun 11 2005, 04:36 PM
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 Mouth Joined: 24-May 05 From: Behind you! |
I like lammas so
they are funny and hairy and they always smile --------------------   |
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| Red |
Jun 11 2005, 04:42 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Hey, I think I too shall make a random Haiku!
A glass eating man, Is burning on my front porch. He is made of cloth. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Konji |
Jun 11 2005, 04:45 PM
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why are they slippy
the ultimate bananas just because they are. -------------------- |
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| Andric |
Jun 11 2005, 11:33 PM
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Agent Joined: 30-April 05 From: Middle of nowhere (We call it Carroll) |
[quote=Konradude]I like lammas so
they are funny and hairy and they always smile[/quote] If you are talking About Head Llama, then you are right about him. He is very weird And not to mention hairy he also smells bad Awsome! 2 haikus about one subject  -------------------- |
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| Saffas Missionary |
Mar 4 2006, 12:51 AM
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This is extremely funny. Anyone here play KoL? well on KoL, there is a chat room called Haiku which you MUST speak ONLY in haiku, on pain of being banned from the chat for up to 31000 days. LMAO.
Kingdom of Loathing It has a haiku chat room One must speak Haiku's --------------------  Yes, this is my Signiture from another forum and I need a name change :P |
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| ThePerson98 |
Mar 4 2006, 05:28 AM
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QUOTE(Dantrag @ Jun 8 2005, 06:19 PM) lol. this thread is cool. I enjoy reaading poems. (Call me a nerd I dont care.) Too bad it would be difficult to have "Compose music thread" that would be sweet.  http://www.finalemusic.com/notepad/ Finale notepad, free. Compose music all you want  -------------------- |
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| Sir Radont |
Mar 4 2006, 08:32 AM
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 Agent Joined: 28-July 05 From: Colorado |
Jerk of a driver!
You'll see, pass you on the right, hello officer. -------------------- |
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| Pieinsky |
Mar 14 2006, 07:33 PM
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Haiku
Maple leaf falls, soft Wind pushes’ leaf drops, thunder Dirt rises, waves fall |
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