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ghastley
post Sep 2 2011, 01:28 AM
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Until I complete the other mods, there's not a lot to add to their stories, so I thought I'd tell the tales associated with Gweden while I work on them.

That mod's anything but linear, as you can do the individual quests for most of the girls in any order. That meant I'd have to come up with a narrative that links them all together and creates a sequence. Rather than take the easy way out and describe it all from the Player-character's viewpoint, I thought I'd try a different approach entirely.

So I'm going to write a story, about a reporter writing a story, about the stories of the girls who work at Gweden. They'll tell them to him one at a time, and there will be a bit of extra narrative added beyond what actually happens when you play through each of the quests they're describing.

The Champion is arbitrarily male as before, and of no specific race. Because of the requirements of the mod for some of the quests, he's also the Madgod, Master of the Fighter's Guild, Listener of the Dark Brotherhood, Arena Champion, and Archmage, although I'll try to play those down as much as possible. All of those things are less important to his employees anyway. He's the boss, and he did something special for each of them, or they wouldn't be there.

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Prologue


"Listen up girls," Tsarrina began. "This one expects you've all heard the news by now. The Oblivion Crisis is over, and the Gates are all closed. Martin Septim is no more, and the Elder Council is running things ."

"Our boss is now the Champion of Cyrodill, and so everything he does is front-page news in the Black Horse Courier. They're sending a reporter down here to do a story about this establishment of his, in the next few days."

"This one doesn't want it to be just another story about the boss. He's getting a bit tired of that himself. This one wants it to be our story. Your story."

"We probably won't make the front page, as it appears they're sending a junior down to do the interviews. But that should work in our favor. He'll be young, and you'll all appreciate that. Especially Juliana. This one wants you to be ready if he's really inexperienced. The rest of you are to make the best impression you can. We can get some really good publicity from this."

"Should we start shopping for new clothes?" asked one of them, hopefully.

"No, you won't be needing those much," Tsarrina chuckled, "but make sure anything you do wear is is the best you have. And by that, this one means the most effective, not the most expensive. Unless it's both. Dark-eyes, get your uniform starched up and crisp. Cybeline, that red velvet number with the plunging neckline that you keep for special occasions. This is a special occasion."

Everyone looked at Prizna. She just laughed, and Tsarrina had to grin, too. "This one does not expect you to start wearing clothes now."

"This one wants you all to be ready to tell him how you came to be here, and what part the boss played in that. It will keep the stories relevant to his assignment, but they'll be about you as much as they are about the Champion."

"We'll make use of the old farmhouse as the interview room. It's nice and cozy in front of the fire there, and we'll put some comfortable chairs either side. We should keep the main rooms in the Lodge open for business. There's no point losing any trade while he's here, after all."

"Will he be staying at the Count's Arms while he's here?", asked Maeva. "I can walk up with him in the mornings if he does."

"No, we'll keep him here at the farm," Tsarrina decided. "He'll use the main bed in the farmhouse, and this one doesn't want him sleeping in it alone! You'll each get a turn to tell him your story. Make sure you also get a turn to show him what you can do."

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Future pieces will have each of the women telling her story of how she came to be at the Gweden Brothel, or the reporter putting the report together. I'll add a postscript article from the Black Horse Courier about Cousin Miranu's miraculous potion at the end, which should take a post or two to cover it. I have most of the stories drafted, as they come straight from the mod itself, but I'm still working on the wrapper narrative, and haven't finalized the sequence of the individual tales yet.

This post has been edited by ghastley: Oct 7 2016, 04:47 PM


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post Dec 30 2016, 04:28 PM
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My take on "The Nightingale" is that it really doesn't matter if Drayven Indoril was himself or Jagar Tharn impersonating him. Barenziah fell for a Drayven Indoril, even if he wasn't the real one. And Tharn would have had to cover his tracks with the real one in some way, maybe altering his memories.

There's also the chance that Barenziah was involved with both, thinking they were one.

Given that potential confusion, and that the Nightingale books are written by someone getting it all third-hand, contradictions are to be expected. I'd suspect the Jagar Tharn connection would have been edited out (by an in-game editor) in those, anyway.

Chrysamere is also an attempt to square the circle. In Daggerfall, it's blue, but described as Adamantium. In Morrowind, it's steel-grey and of indeterminate material. Oblivion doesn't have it at all (until now!) and nor does Skyrim, but that has Stahlrim to match the Daggerfall appearance. The enchantments naturally vary between games, too.



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post Dec 30 2016, 04:43 PM
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QUOTE(ghastley @ Dec 30 2016, 10:28 AM) *

My take on "The Nightingale" is that it really doesn't matter if Drayven Indoril was himself or Jagar Tharn impersonating him. Barenziah fell for a Drayven Indoril, even if he wasn't the real one. And Tharn would have had to cover his tracks with the real one in some way, maybe altering his memories.

There's also the chance that Barenziah was involved with both, thinking they were one.

Given that potential confusion, and that the Nightingale books are written by someone getting it all third-hand, contradictions are to be expected. I'd suspect the Jagar Tharn connection would have been edited out (by an in-game editor) in those, anyway.

Chrysamere is also an attempt to square the circle. In Daggerfall, it's blue, but described as Adamantium. In Morrowind, it's steel-grey and of indeterminate material. Oblivion doesn't have it at all (until now!) and nor does Skyrim, but that has Stahlrim to match the Daggerfall appearance. The enchantments naturally vary between games, too.


Yeah, I think when they kept veering from their own lore that they forgot the devout fans of that lore would remember every intricate detail and wonder what the heck was up with that alteration, laugh.gif





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