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Kiln A Short Story By Kiln The Wanderer Jul 10 2005, 09:29 PM minque Very good! I like it....you have a nice almost... Jul 10 2005, 09:38 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow nice start Kiln. Good to see another view, ple... Jul 10 2005, 09:58 PM Dantrag I like it. Jul 10 2005, 10:17 PM Kiln Upon my appearance at the pub the patrons were sta... Jul 10 2005, 10:50 PM Kiln Sorry for the double post but it felt weird puttin... Jul 10 2005, 10:54 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job.
funny, you know, how all sorts of story... Jul 10 2005, 10:55 PM minque Wooah....So Tiren was one of the unknown guys at E... Jul 10 2005, 10:56 PM Soulseeker3.0 Minque: well those were the two I was refering to,... Jul 10 2005, 11:00 PM Kiln To Minque: Well I wanted to have a reference to yo... Jul 10 2005, 11:03 PM![]() minque
Well as I said Iīm honoured......feel free to re... Jul 10 2005, 11:11 PM gamer10 Here you go
<:) <--- Unless they get a jo... Jul 10 2005, 11:20 PM Soulseeker3.0 alll you got to do is fund his avatar and right-cl... Jul 10 2005, 11:22 PM Kiln The night passed and he woke up to the loud swordp... Jul 10 2005, 11:35 PM minque nice nice nice.......canīt wait for the next updat... Jul 10 2005, 11:43 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job and hope the whole company thing goes wel... Jul 11 2005, 12:01 AM Kiln The boat had gone but the small dock was still som... Jul 11 2005, 02:34 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln! a mystery is at hand Jul 11 2005, 02:46 AM Kiln I really wanted people to feel like Kiln felt some... Jul 11 2005, 02:59 AM minque I think you make us feel what he feels....actually... Jul 11 2005, 03:19 AM Kiln This is a fairly long on but I hope you all like i... Jul 11 2005, 03:58 AM Kiln He sat at the table listening to the two men fight... Jul 11 2005, 09:39 AM minque I like the content really! But I have one impo... Jul 11 2005, 10:20 AM treydog Quite an interesting story- I like the vehicle of ... Jul 11 2005, 01:48 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln.
one peice of advice, it's not ... Jul 11 2005, 02:01 PM Kiln I'm glad the journal thing works out with peop... Jul 11 2005, 08:08 PM![]() minque
Hey! I can help with that! paragraphing ... Jul 11 2005, 08:28 PM Kiln I don't actually have an e-mail address per sa... Jul 11 2005, 08:35 PM minque ok..then i might edit one of your posts.....paragr... Jul 11 2005, 08:38 PM Kiln That's cool with me completely fine. B)
Edit... Jul 11 2005, 08:39 PM minque Soo...I paragraphed all your parts.....looking a b... Jul 11 2005, 09:35 PM Soulseeker3.0 I was going to say when I opered up the topic I th... Jul 11 2005, 09:38 PM Kiln Kiln looked around and his vision was terribly blu... Jul 11 2005, 09:44 PM Soulseeker3.0 well from my little (i think) knowledge, I think y... Jul 11 2005, 09:48 PM Kiln To try and take his mind off of the events that ha... Jul 12 2005, 01:09 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln! Jul 12 2005, 01:45 AM minque Youīre doing just fine! paragraphing and all..... Jul 12 2005, 07:15 AM treydog Still doing a fine job keeping the story moving ah... Jul 12 2005, 01:34 PM Kiln Thanks everyone. :) I wanted everyone to feel con... Jul 12 2005, 06:59 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job, and I think that everyone hate cliff rac... Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM Kell-Reevor Very good for a first fic, you have a knack for de... Jul 12 2005, 09:42 PM Kiln Hunger had descended upon him incredibly quickly a... Jul 13 2005, 12:30 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln
I will trust your judgement, Taki... Jul 13 2005, 03:28 AM Kiln :O I just realized that I failed to mention what r... Jul 13 2005, 07:31 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job, please keep updating Jul 13 2005, 04:00 PM minque Very good story here, interesting approach really.... Jul 13 2005, 10:36 PM Kiln I'm preoccupied at the moment with a few more ... Jul 14 2005, 01:13 AM Soulseeker3.0 ok, thats fine Jul 14 2005, 03:23 AM Kiln I have had more time than I had anticipated becaus... Jul 14 2005, 05:32 AM Soulseeker3.0 nice and the end!?!? what, you just starte... Jul 14 2005, 03:12 PM Kiln Kiln walked to the Silt Strider port but along the... Jul 14 2005, 06:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 creepy. keep up the good work. Jul 14 2005, 08:57 PM Kiln --------------------------------------------------... Jul 15 2005, 01:13 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job and now I will never drink to much Mazte ... Jul 15 2005, 04:14 AM minque Very good! I can well imagine Kilnīs feelings ... Jul 15 2005, 11:15 AM Kiln He sat up and looked around. The two men were sta... Jul 15 2005, 10:39 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job and Kiln leaned the lesson the hard way? ... Jul 15 2005, 11:02 PM![]() Kiln
The lesson is, it's just never a good idea to... Jul 15 2005, 11:26 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol Jul 15 2005, 11:37 PM Kiln After finishing his drink, Kiln left the building ... Jul 16 2005, 12:59 AM Soulseeker3.0 wow keep up the good work Jul 16 2005, 01:02 AM Kiln I guess this isn't going to be such a short st... Jul 16 2005, 06:02 AM![]() Soulseeker3.0
lol Jul 16 2005, 05:45 PM minque YaYYY! Serene is appearing again! How flat... Jul 16 2005, 04:31 PM Megil Tel-Zeke Just read you FF. it was wonderful i couldn't ... Jul 16 2005, 06:29 PM Kiln I was surprised to find that people other than me ... Jul 17 2005, 11:21 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln I like it. Jul 18 2005, 12:24 AM Megil Tel-Zeke Slightly humorous, but at the same time quite sad.... Jul 18 2005, 12:56 AM Kiln Some time had passed with Kiln moaning and moving ... Jul 18 2005, 01:29 AM Soulseeker3.0 wow another interesting character joins the plot Jul 18 2005, 01:37 AM Kiln Well since Kiln is dirt poor and he has no friends... Jul 18 2005, 03:04 AM Soulseeker3.0 treu Jul 18 2005, 03:11 AM Kiln Just got done browsing over the Mystery unleashed ... Jul 18 2005, 04:00 AM Soulseeker3.0 It seems ok kind-of strange though but it is still... Jul 18 2005, 04:13 AM Kiln Yeah, uhhhh you read it before I scrapped the whol... Jul 18 2005, 04:37 AM![]() Soulseeker3.0
Ok Kiln thats better. :) Jul 18 2005, 02:49 PM minque Heey! You pdate faster than I read.....nice wo... Jul 18 2005, 09:57 AM gamer10 Yes, a very nice story.
It earned you a whole :) Jul 18 2005, 04:41 PM Kiln After a nights sleep he woke to morning roll call ... Jul 18 2005, 06:24 PM Soulseeker3.0 not at all this is interesting Jul 18 2005, 06:26 PM Kiln Momentarily Kiln talked to the guard about living ... Jul 18 2005, 08:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 I like it too you get some back round and all that... Jul 18 2005, 08:31 PM Kiln Kiln wondered how a simple blow to the head would... Jul 18 2005, 10:22 PM Soulseeker3.0 'k Jul 18 2005, 10:37 PM minque my my....updates! nice really nice, lots of (n... Jul 18 2005, 10:49 PM Kiln The courtyard was filled with men just talking and... Jul 19 2005, 04:57 AM Kell-Reevor I also like your easy to read writing style. Very... Jul 19 2005, 12:13 PM Soulseeker3.0 very interesting Kiln Jul 19 2005, 02:45 PM Kiln Yup the short story is pretty much out the window.... Jul 19 2005, 05:06 PM Soulseeker3.0 LOL good luck to Kiln Jul 19 2005, 05:32 PM Kiln Warning: This one is long...
---------------------... Jul 19 2005, 08:07 PM minque Ahhh you are good at fight scenes as well as the o... Jul 19 2005, 08:42 PM Soulseeker3.0 good very good, at first I was afrad you would mak... Jul 19 2005, 08:46 PM Kiln I'd like to start this part of the story by th... Jul 19 2005, 10:00 PM Kell-Reevor Good as usual.
Very descriptive fight scene.
Sor... Jul 20 2005, 03:42 PM Fuzzy Knight Good.. good written fighting scenes too, at least ... Jul 20 2005, 04:09 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job don't know how to spell the guy's... Jul 20 2005, 05:13 PM Kiln Kiln sat opening the journal to the last page he h... Jul 21 2005, 01:32 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln Jul 21 2005, 03:07 AM Fuzzy Knight Great Kiln.. Keep it up! ;) Jul 21 2005, 12:23 PM
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