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gamer10 Niran - The Years Before Jul 19 2005, 06:42 PM Kiln Neat...so this is to be the story of your RP guy t... Jul 19 2005, 06:46 PM MerGirl Well, it's a good start. :)
The only thing ... Jul 19 2005, 07:27 PM![]() Fuzzy Knight
Agree with MerGirl, its not to much talking... be... Jul 19 2005, 07:33 PM Konradude It is very good, but it is lacking in detail. Mayb... Jul 19 2005, 07:31 PM gamer10 That prologue was written yesterday, I guess the q... Jul 20 2005, 12:07 AM minque Ahh nice to hear more about Niran....he seems very... Jul 20 2005, 08:49 AM Kell-Reevor Good story. I'm not too concerned with the la... Jul 20 2005, 05:04 PM gamer10 The man stood on the side of the road, that turned... Jul 22 2005, 04:40 AM Kiln Nice picture on the first post, it looks so peacef... Jul 22 2005, 09:12 AM![]() gamer10 "He had been spotted by an Imperial Legion Of... Jul 22 2005, 03:43 PM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 4
Niran kneeled down and took ... Jul 24 2005, 09:09 PM minque Very nice Gamer!!! and a great picture... Jul 24 2005, 10:14 PM gamer10 Thanks, I was nearly half way through chapter 5, t... Jul 24 2005, 10:30 PM MerGirl Very good! :goodjob: Hope to see more of this... Jul 24 2005, 10:47 PM Kiln Very good...I gotta read the next part, I'm dr... Jul 25 2005, 12:03 AM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 5
Niran opened his eyes, and s... Jul 25 2005, 12:30 AM Kiln :lol: Haha! Man, Niran is no good with women ... Jul 25 2005, 12:38 AM gamer10
Really, damn they're supposed to be martians... Jul 25 2005, 12:44 AM![]() Kiln
I'm sure you got what I meant...well maybe no... Jul 25 2005, 12:51 AM gamer10 Actually, that immaturity in the RP is only tempor... Jul 25 2005, 12:59 AM Mazuk Wow awesome job gamer. Seems I have been out to l... Jul 25 2005, 01:37 AM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 6
Niran tore throught the fore... Jul 25 2005, 05:12 AM Kiln Good update, I like how you progress so quickly fr... Jul 25 2005, 05:34 AM gamer10 Here's a good picture of Faili.
http://i17.pho... Jul 25 2005, 05:36 AM![]() Kiln
Thats a nice pic gamer. :)
I just read more of th... Jul 25 2005, 05:39 AM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 7
Niran stood outside, looking... Jul 25 2005, 08:41 PM Dantrag Cool.
Niran is going to be killed. by a theif. i... Jul 25 2005, 09:22 PM gamer10 Or so we think *eyes dart around*
Obviously not, ... Jul 25 2005, 09:23 PM MerGirl Very good that you updated it! :goodjob:
A ... Jul 25 2005, 09:25 PM Dantrag A fellow fan of the almighty band named The Mars V... Jul 25 2005, 09:25 PM gamer10
Yes master Yoda. :P
:D Jul 25 2005, 09:33 PM Kiln Nice, a little vague on details but still good. :) Jul 25 2005, 09:34 PM Dantrag To add to mergirl's post...
there are a lot o... Jul 25 2005, 09:36 PM gamer10 Guess what, I think my next chapter will have 400 ... Jul 25 2005, 09:44 PM![]() Kiln
If you really want to annoy people then you shoul... Jul 26 2005, 12:28 AM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 8
Niran's breathing was so... Jul 26 2005, 06:44 PM Dantrag This is an...erm....interesting relationship.
So... Jul 26 2005, 06:50 PM gamer10 BD
Niran will be Niran. :lol: Jul 26 2005, 06:51 PM Kiln I think she's got multiple personalities.hehe
... Jul 26 2005, 06:56 PM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 9
Niran sulked forwards, walki... Jul 27 2005, 05:56 PM Dantrag What a clumsy dude. :lol:
still good, keep it ... Jul 27 2005, 06:16 PM Channler Nce gamer, keep it up.. lol cause its helluva bett... Jul 27 2005, 07:45 PM MerGirl Very quick update, and good job! :goodjob: I... Jul 27 2005, 08:05 PM Kiln I just caught the update, nice job...violent storm... Jul 27 2005, 08:20 PM gamer10
Look out! A TORNADO IS RIGHT BEHIND YOU... Jul 27 2005, 08:22 PM gamer10 15 Years - Chapter 10
Niran kicked the door in fr... Aug 1 2005, 04:05 PM Kiln Niran is sarcastic even when he thinks he could di... Aug 1 2005, 04:27 PM Dantrag Cool update, though it should have been longer. :... Aug 1 2005, 04:51 PM Mazuk Nice Update Gamer. Keep up the good work. Aug 1 2005, 09:07 PM Dantrag :lol: When I said "it should have been longe... Aug 2 2005, 04:11 AM gamer10
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Well, another update probably won't co... Aug 2 2005, 04:06 PM Kiln Oh you updated...Niran changed...and then went bac... Aug 3 2005, 05:49 AM Fuzzy Knight Oooh.. this is good with another update, very well... Aug 3 2005, 09:51 AM treydog Some good writing here- wonder if we might find ou... Aug 4 2005, 04:09 PM minque Hey....nice update, itīs always nice to learn more... Aug 7 2005, 08:40 AM gamer10 This update came after a longer break than usual. ... Aug 21 2005, 01:53 AM Kiln That chapter was really good, lots of emotion...I ... Aug 21 2005, 02:28 AM Red Nice Gamer. Awesome emotion. Aug 21 2005, 03:02 AM treydog Niran certainly seems to have a great deal of ange... Aug 22 2005, 03:10 PM gamer10 16 Years - Chapter 2
Niran couldn't move, a r... Aug 27 2005, 10:22 PM Kiln Very nice gamer, unfortunately the way you write i... Aug 27 2005, 11:55 PM treydog Nice update- gives some insight into Niran's t... Aug 29 2005, 02:05 PM gamer10 16 Years - Chapter 3
Niran looked up from his boo... Sep 10 2005, 01:52 AM Dantrag Gah! the mushiness!
Still good though. g... Sep 10 2005, 01:57 AM Kiln I loved this part, lots of emotion, and his surrou... Sep 26 2005, 12:14 AM gamer10 Well, after more than a month of break in my writi... Oct 24 2005, 10:26 PM Mazuk Nice update gamer. Keep up the great work. Oct 25 2005, 01:03 AM minque Ahh gamer! Nice update, glad you continue this... Oct 25 2005, 05:44 PM gamer10 16 Years, Chapter 5
A moment later and it surely... Dec 27 2005, 02:32 AM
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