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Malaki
post Feb 22 2006, 04:50 AM
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I feel more comfortable in darkness
Than I ever did in light
Sneakin up on a fool
Never givin em a fair fight
Put that big sword away
And hand me that knife
A thief dont need a claymore
When they gonna end a life
Lookin in your pocket
Wonderin wheres you gold money
When I bumped into you I stole it
And I think its funny
I wear all black
Dont sport shiny plate armor
So you cant see me when I thievin
Never trippin your alarma
And never leave a trace
While Im cleanin out your place
I rock a ninja mask emot-ninja1.gif
So youll never see my face
You think this is your horse Im ridin
It got stolen last week
But since you got no evidence
Your case is lookin pretty weak
I never use a door
Come through your window or your chimney
Get the job done quick
Yeah Im fast like a hemi
Similar to an assassin
I know how to sneak around
You would get caught and brought to prison
Given Bubba the reach around
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Shado Kastur
post Feb 26 2006, 02:21 AM
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Yo!....Indy Ner!!BOOM!BOOM!BEET!(<----grey fox's paradory of tes, reference)
very interesting....thats pretty cool, dude.you should look into joining the JJJJJJJunit (grey fox's reference)....jk biggrin.gif .....i like it.


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1234king
post Feb 26 2006, 05:30 AM
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very kool poem for theives try making one for a mage and warrior that might be a little harder wink.gif


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Wurlon
post Feb 26 2006, 03:26 PM
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Erm half of that doesn't rhyme in any way.. just to let you know..


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1234king
post Feb 27 2006, 01:23 AM
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heres a crappy little poem for archers

i'll shoot you from far away
in the night, in the day
you think you can escape my arrow
its tip will go right through your marrow
and even if, you get near
i'll get you with my pointy spear
you see, there is no hope
when im aiming, on that slope
im called an archer, that is my job
before you know it, your lifes been robbed



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jchamber
post Feb 27 2006, 01:35 AM
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hey number king, I think I acctually like yours better b/c it takes less concentration to read, aka shorter and to the point.

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1234king
post Feb 27 2006, 02:31 AM
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thanx man, thats me short and simple and what do you type to make a birthday cake thing


im new to the whole forum thing


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post Feb 27 2006, 07:17 AM
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well when you go to the "AddREPLY" button and are typing your message, if you hit the button on the left "Show All Emotocons" it shows you all the available little symbol things and what to type to make them
so that is how to fish

for now I give you the fish hit the : before and after the word cake without any spaces and it will make a cake icon when you post it. again that is a colon, not a semi-colon


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Malaki
post Mar 3 2006, 04:41 AM
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Hey wolf boy, is you on some weed?
4 lines to a rhyme, or cant you read?
Besides I dont see you doin nothin but critisize
Next time say somethin worth sayin, keep it wise
Yo I like that archer rap too, its pretty nice
It really had the flow, you can rhyme like obie trice

-Malaki out

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post Mar 3 2006, 02:37 PM
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QUOTE(Malaki @ Mar 3 2006, 03:41 AM)
Hey wolf boy, is you on some weed?
4 lines to a rhyme, or cant you read?
Besides I dont see you doin nothin but critisize

Next time say somethin worth sayin, keep it wise
Yo I like that archer rap too, its pretty nice
It really had the flow, you can rhyme like obie trice

-Malaki out
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Right, congratulations, the post is locked. Its pointless, spammy, and you just critized another member. nono.gif Plus, and I have to say this, I actually feel as if my IQ has dropped after reading this.

If anyone does have poetry they want to put up (like the archer one if you like) there's a poetry thread in general already. Please feel free to put it there. Just do not do what the example I highlighted did.
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