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minque
post Apr 15 2006, 09:31 PM
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QUOTE(Dantrag @ Apr 15 2006, 07:44 AM)
Well, I hope I wasn't gone so long that everyone lost interest. Expect an update sometime this weekend, as I have a long one away from school  biggrin.gif .

I'll write some tonight, and maybe tomorrow before posting.
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Yay!!! An update is coming....this is excellent news, I will keep an eye on this..oh aye I will..


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post Apr 16 2006, 11:35 PM
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I promised, so here it is. I'm a (young) man of my word.

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"I can't believe we got it!" Aldaril shouted as he ran out of the dwemer ruin, clutching an enchanted halberd. He turned around to see that Sel wasn't behind him. "Damn." he spat in frustration as he started to run back in. That boy always seemed to lag behind when it came to leaving any sort of fight.

Aldaril began turning the crank to open the door and Sel ran through, along with a small army of constructs.

"Go!" Sel shouted as he sped past Aldaril, sword in hand.

Aldaril would have sighed if he had any breath left. Instead, he clutched the halberd tightly and followed after his younger counterpart.

The unlikely pair of adventurers ran on, the constructs not far behind.

"Split up!" Aldaril shouted, tossing a frost spell at the dwemer creations behind him.

Sel shook his head. "We just have to turn around and face them!"

Aldaril saw the logic in that; his and Sel's muscles would tire, but the gears inside the constructs would not. The pair turned around, Sel charging, and Aldaril chanting.

Aldaril made a point of freezing the lower parts of the constructs, be those parts legs or spheres, causing them to either fall or remain stationery. The ones that were successfuly frozen easily fell to Sel's rapidly swinging sword, and Aldaril finished a few off with a lighting bolt or two, causing the unfortunate constructs to turn into blackened scrap metal.

Sel ran his sword through the last hunk of metal, breathing heavily. A smile broke out on his face and he began laughing.

"It's not funny, Sel." Aldaril tried to say sternly, but it didn't work.

"Yes it is!" Sel was finally able to blurt out between gusts of laughter. "You dropped that thing five times on your way out!"

Aldaril rubbed the back of his head in embarrassment. "Yes, well, we should get this to Divayth Fyr. He said we could exchange it for information on Chrysamere."

Sel stopped laughing and looked to Aldaril seriously. "Are we stopping in Sadrith Mora on the way?"

Aldaril nodded. "More than likely."

"Can my sister come?"

Aldaril hesitated for a second. "We don't really need the trou-"

"She won't be a problem. We just have to do something when we get there."

Aldaril sighed. "Alright, she can come. Be ready to leave tomorrow."

"Alright, see you then." he said in farewell as he began walking back home. It wasn't much of a home anymore though, with his mother gone, and especially since he and Retin weren't exactly on speaking terms anymore.


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post Apr 16 2006, 11:46 PM
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Ok....you had to didn´t you? Leave me wondering why the h*** they have to go to Sadrith Mora....(That dangerous place!)Ah well I guess that´s the normal behaviour of a good writer to add a cliffie...but it is cruel!!!!

Anyway good writing Danny!! goodjob.gif


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post Apr 17 2006, 01:58 AM
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Ooooh, yay! smile.gif An update and I've been too busy to notice! blink.gif So you glad you did, though! biggrin.gif

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... Ack, totally forgot what place was Sadrith Mora! kvleft.gif Darn you, Oblivion, for making me forget the locations of Morrowind! wacko.gif

Anyway, please continue! I missed wittle silly Dunmer. *pinches Sel's cheeks*
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post Apr 17 2006, 04:24 AM
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Well, it wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, I just had to go somewhere, and found a good stopping point.

I have more, I just don't feel like writing it quite yet.


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post Apr 17 2006, 12:22 PM
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yay, an update. I like it.


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post Apr 17 2006, 02:39 PM
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QUOTE(Dantrag @ Apr 17 2006, 04:24 AM)
Well, it wasn't supposed to be a cliffhanger, I just had to go somewhere, and found a good stopping point.

I have more, I just don't feel like writing it quite yet.
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Hmmm.....ok, but I´m so worried about Vysi....Sadrith Mora is by far no place for a young innocent girl.....Please take care of her.....!


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post Apr 19 2006, 05:17 PM
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Excellent update, Dantrag! I love the personalities you give your characters- it has been a real treat to watch Sel grow. Hope to see more soon.


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post Apr 20 2006, 11:38 PM
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forgot all about this...sorry.

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Sel woke to the smell of fresh baked bread the next morning to find his sister already awake, packed and ready for the trip while he wasn't even out of the bed.

He hurried to get some clothes on and picked up a small piece of the bread Vysi had cooked.

"When are we leaving?" she asked, cutting herself a slice of the fresh, warm bread.

"We're meeting Aldaril in the mages guild in a few minutes." he answered.

"So what's the surprise, Sel?"

Sel wagged his finger. "Oh, no. You'll find out when we get there." he answered. In truth, he had arranged for Councillor Neloth to make something special for her; for them both.

After finishing his bread, Sel strapped on his sword and he and Vysi were out the door and walking towards the main city of Ald'ruhn. Sel opened the door to the Guild for his sister before walking through himself. He found Aldaril impatiently waiting by the door, still holding that halberd.

"Why are you so late? Hurry, hurry!" he exclaimed, almost running towards the guild guide.

"Wolverine hall for all of us." the altmer said hurriedly as he tossed a sack of somewhere around a hundred coins at the woman.

They were instantly transported to Wolverine Hall, where the three mer borrowed a fisherman's boat to row to Divayth's small island. Aldaril was excited about possibly finding Chrysamere, while Sel was waiting for the trip to be over so he could go visit Neloth.


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post Apr 21 2006, 01:07 AM
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Ha! yessss an update...but still we have to wonder what´s gonna happen with Vysi...

Great work as usual Danny!


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post Apr 21 2006, 01:09 AM
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QUOTE(minque @ Apr 20 2006, 08:07 PM)
Ha! yessss an update...but still we have to wonder what´s gonna happen with Vysi...

Great work as usual Danny!
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It wasn't really an update...merely what I didn't have time to include in the last one.


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post Apr 21 2006, 04:28 PM
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Whatever......it took the story a tad forwards anyway! Keep it up!


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post Apr 22 2006, 06:24 PM
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great story Dantrag, please continue making updates.. no matter how short they are, it gives us something to read


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post Apr 22 2006, 10:11 PM
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QUOTE(Soulseeker3.0 @ Apr 22 2006, 06:24 PM)
great story Dantrag, please continue making updates.. no matter how short they are, it gives us something to read
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OMG!!!!! Have you noticed how many stories there are in the fanfic-forum just now??? The problem is it´s too much to read! But don´t let it stop you dear writers....go on just you write and post, it´s awesome!

But then again......another "Sel" is always most welcome!.....Ok Danny when will it be?


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post Apr 25 2006, 01:10 AM
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*Kiln taps his foot*

We need an update here mate, please continue soon. I really want to know what happens next...or else...I mean please?


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post Apr 25 2006, 04:25 AM
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QUOTE(minque @ Apr 22 2006, 03:11 PM)
OMG!!!!! Have you noticed how many stories there are in the fanfic-forum just now??? The problem is it´s too much to read! But don´t let it stop you dear writers....go on just you write and post, it´s awesome!

But then again......another "Sel" is always most welcome!.....Ok Danny when will it be?
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hmm random? biggrin.gif

but yeah I agree with Kiln... or el-please?


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post May 1 2006, 01:08 AM
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Here you are

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Sel, Vysi, and Aldaril arrived at Divayth's tower, and were escorted in by Fyr's strange creations. Sel shuddered a little when they carried on about being wives and daughters. Aldaril seemed somewhat disconnected from it all, the prospect of seeing the Paladin's Blade had him too excited to see anything else but the prize ahead. He clutched the cloth-covered staff as if it were life itself.

The daughter-wife gave each of them a levitation potion, and they flew up the chute and into Divayth's private quarters.

"Did you find the halberd?" Divayth asked Aldaril without a greeting.

Aldaril nodded as he removed the cloth, revealing the ancient dwemer halberd. Divayth took it from Aldaril and inspected it.

"I can't believe you actually found this." Divayth said in awe.

Aldaril tapped his foot impatiently while Sel and Vysi merely looked all around the tower and gaping at the artifacts the old wizard owned.

"What of the information?" Aldaril asked when he realized that his foot-tapping wasn't getting his point across.

"Oh, I know exactly where it is. Chrysamere I mean."

"Well?" Aldaril asked, barely able to hold in his excitement.

"You've heard of the Nerevarine, right?"

"Yes." Aldaril answered, a bit confused as to why the Nerevarine was relevant.

"He has it."

"Wha-? Wait a minute." Aldaril said angrily, pointing an accusing finger at Divayth. "You had me do all of that work to get a halberd in exchange for useless information?"

"I told you that I would tell you where you could find Chrysamere." Divayth replied smugly.

Aldaril clenched his fists, and Sel watched as smoke flitered out from inbetween his fingers, apparently, he cast small fireballs when angry. This couldn't be good....


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post May 1 2006, 10:52 AM
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Yay, update! A nice one. Now Aldaril probably wants to calm down. I've seen Divayth in the CS and he's tough.

Yes, the Nerevarine has it and he's not going to give it up. He loves Chrysamere. (Well, my Nerevarine does.)


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post May 1 2006, 12:35 PM
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Ohohohooo......Now they have a problem......I loved the description of Aldaril casting small firespells out of anger......I can just see him do it! biggrin.gif

Veery good Danny.....gives me sorta urge for more!....Yeah..you heard me..MOOORE!

(Still worried about Vysi.....hmmm no place for a young girl)


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post May 1 2006, 07:13 PM
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Fighting with Divanath? not a good idea... he doesn't have to use spells he has a Deadric, sortsword... or was it a Tanto?


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