Lucien Lachance.. thou marked by Sithis from the moment of his birth, he was born meek, shy and never showed any signs of angst, rebellion or even cruelty. He was always scholarly in his studies quite the outstanding student. Although he never showed any signs of it he was indeed a dark and blackened soul but, no one not even Lucien himself realised it. He greeted everyone kindly in his own silent mannar. It became normal for him to appear and dissappear out of nowhere in his silent study. He could be seen with a book eager to learn in his young years.

By the time he was 10 he was vastly smarter then any of his classmates and he was never rude or anything other then subtle. Most kids of a shy or quiet nature are made fun of.. but, he was never marked or picked on by other students, prehaps it was because it was so hard for them to find him when he didn't want to be found. He loved the more gothic readings of vampires, dragons, potions and necromancy. He never dared to venture actually attempting necromancy himself but, he couldn't resist its charms or the charms of studing death itself. While he never himself appeared to enjoy the idea of killing he never denied that all things must begin and all things must end. So while his fellow students lived in blissfull ignorance he from a young age begun to accept death.

Part of his fascination with death was how certain creatures: zombies, vampires, and undead creatures could escape death. He himself had never desired to live forever until one day. He saw her a fair Noble lady. She was being escorted by armed gaurds to her daily lessons across the town. He went to speak to this fair young lady but, before he could within 10 yards the gaurds saw him running towards her and drew their weapons.

Lucien was quite embarrased but, didn't know how to form words.. the gaurds gave a command for him to speak but, he couldn't do anything more then mutter. The gaurds were by no means the brightest bunch and when they saw luciens demeanor took him for a mage casting some occultist spell.. so with a swing of the short blade cut lucien at his throat.

Lucien awoke later in a bed with the strikingly beautiful young lady next to him apologizing for the brash actions of her gaurds. She explained that she was enrolled in the school of restoration because her parents felt it "proper" a young lady learn such arts in an extraordinarly dangerous world.

As time went on and lucien finally fully recovered he had grown extraordinarly fond of this girl and she of him. Lucien felt a bit silly because it had been some months and he had not yet, asked her name. So finally building up the courage they exchanged names. She was "Countess Lucrecia Lachance" a heir to some fortune in the local village. He was simple "Lucien". Seeing as luciens family was poor they never really needed or had a last name. So he simply went with "lucien" and that was all he needed.

Upon asking of her name he requested the priviliedge of spending more time with her. She obligded with giddy. As they walked until the stunning moonlight he put his arm around her waste and pulled her closer. She pressed her bosom against his and hugged tightly resting her hed on his shoulder.

The following day her father announced she would be wed to Count Vini of the neighboring villiage. Lucien became outraged and knew what he must do. He used his unrivaled silent nature and quiet demeanor to sneak into the Counts house and slip a bit of poison into his wine barrels.

Yes! Finally, a fanfic on the greatest TES character alive(ahem)

Great writing, nice to read what you developed as his history.

The poison spread like wildfire threw the Counts veins. Lucien felt no remorse at all and listened as the entire house when served began screaming. Like a symphony of death to Luciens ears. Suddenly he became afraid to die.. angry that death would claim him when a month ago he had no reason to want to live forever he now feared death greatly. He feared death because it ment he would loose the one thing he wanted most.

For the next few years till the age of 15 Lucien poored into his books more so then ever.. And took walks under the moonlight which seemed cast a spell of strong magicka beyond comprehension on them. They fell so deeply in love it was unrealistic. They would do anything for eachother.. almost.

Lucien realised that if he could become a vampire..a creature of the night.. He and lucrecia could share those moonlit nights forever but, he wasn't that insane.. not yet. He had tried to play it off and pretend it wasn't even an option for so long.. it finally drove him to the edge.. he had studied destructive magic for 5 years and he was more scholarly than anyone else he knew.. so he played naive for as long as possible until the sad truth kicked in.. if he aquired just a small sample of vampiric blood he could easily live for an eturnity.. He downplayed the cost.. pretended it wasn't great.. and convience himself to do it.

He used his knowledge of magic to send a prayer to Sithis.. and Sitihis sent his servent unto Lucien. The vampire gave Lucien the sample of blood he wanted. All lucien had to do was find lucrecia.. and surly his eturnal joy would be fufulled.

He slipped into her quaters with the greatest of ease.. and he awoken her.. Went straight under the full moon to the park surrounded by the waters. He looked at her and kissed her. He said softly "do you love me?" and she replied "I believe you know the answer." He said "then lets transcend our mortality." She remained silent. A gaurd saw their figures in the darkness and began walking to them..

Lucien put his hands in his pockets feeling for the vial of blood it was secure.. so he just had to play silent. The gaurd asked "what are you kids doing out so late at night?" Lucien remarked "Enjoying the moonlight" The gaurd couldn't help but, be suspicious.. "Its a full moon.. its not wise to be out on nights like this." Lucien remarked "I can take care of myself". The gaurd who was trying to be helpful felt insulted.. and replied "Listen here your young.. maybe a little stupid.. but, its a full moon I am out because I have to be on patrol however, you should get home and get to bed before a werewolf or theif gets you".

Lucien was outrage and he clinched his fist around the vial of blood. Lucien looked at the gaurd square in the eyes as the vial burst in his hand and he stabbed himself with the bloody shard.. He said "Listen here you insulent litte maggot.. I will blast you to smitherenes if you don't shut up and leave us alone!" The gaurd became enraged and said "those are big words for such a small man"..

As lucien felt the vial burst his eyes widened and he pulled his hand out of his pocket noticing he had been stabbed with it. the gaurd only saw the blood and withdrew his weapon and yelled "WE HAVE A KILLER ON THE LOOSE".

Lucien simply dissappeared. It took him not even a second.. he found an abandoned cave where for 3 days he fell and rolled on the ground pain stakingly accepting the transformation of vampirism. When it was finally complete he found lucrecia. Right where he left her.. at the same spot in the park "I have been waiting for you" she said. "I knew you would return." He said "I have attained eturnal life and I want to share it.".

Suddenly the same gaurd steped out from the shadows.. "your an abomination" the gaurd remarked. Lucrecia remarked "I'm sorry.. I didn't know I was being followed." Sparing anymore words the gaurd charged at Lucien blade drawn and slashing Lucien grabbed the gaurds rist and snapped it.. and the blade flew threw lucrecias heart. Lucien slow to realise what he did stooped over her kissed her then bit her hoping to save her but, he was too late. Enraged.. he took the corpse of the gaurd and defiled it in as many ways as possible.. he told himself.. "I will live for her".

He took a true hatred for gaurds.. and began wiping out the entire village gaurd. One by one.. one a night.. he would slaughter them. One night he took one hung him by his feat and began torturing him any way he could think of.. nothing could quench the rage of fire in his heart. After many years... he met a Black Hand Speaker...

He's right; Lucien is a very interesting character to write about. I think he is one of the few 'guild-leader' members I actually liked and he was very friendly.

I liked this story, and it is very good, though there were a few spelling errors here and there. Are you going to continue or is this the end of it? Either way, have a I feel so sorry for poor Lucien!

We all have our weak points..

Benjamin franklyn said "Never trust a man who can't speel a word more then too ways".

(intentional errors in this particular post.. unintentional in the story)

I may continue it later in an hour or two.. but, right now.. I'm a bit tired lol.

This aint a spoiler thread mergirl....

Great story! A few sentence structure problems but it is very intruiging!

Thanks for the compliments all. I guess there a few issues here and there. Try to keep in mind that many "great" authors have written books with sentence structure and spelling that would fail in todays current highschool standards but, they get marked "geniuses" for it.

No need to defend yourself, we love it but there are a couple of glitches like in every fanfic.

Well long as ya can read it I guess lol.

Keep in mind I just wrote it as I came up with it.. I didn't write it down.. edit it then paste it.. I just wrote it as it came to mind.

Continued.

The black hand speaker had the same mannerisms as Lucien. He approached lucien from the shadows as a gaurd hung and screamed for mercy from lucien. Lucien said aptly "Step out of the shadows." The speaker was startled to be caught by Lucien. The speaker remarked "I am here to offer you an inventation of a fell sort. For revenge on those whom took what you love most." Lucien remarked "I live for no other reason then remembering her.. I will rise to noblity in her name.. So.. I will be Lucien Lachance."

The speaker smiled "we have seen your works first hand, no need for the usual test we administer to newer members. Simply go to the house where you slew the Count.... It has become our haven."

(may be continued later.. all I have now.. brain dead..)

Nice, smaller...but showing off Lucien's abilities well.