 The Hunter, Story By Thoron the Hunter a.k.a Randy |
| Thoron the Hunter |
 Dec 5 2006, 11:53 PM
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 Retainer Joined: 3-December 06 From: Seyda Neen  |
The Hunter By: Randy
Chapter 1: Introduction My name is Thoron the Hunter. Living in Cyrodiil, venison is plentiful and markets are always open to my business. Being a Bosmer, hunting is one of my practices, as is thieving, but I am a freeform and part-time thief. The Thieves’ Guild has asked me to join, but I turned them down saying I would rather do what I want, than what I’m told. My father, Aragorm, was an Imperial Legion Archer, who was the most agreeable man among the Imperial Legionaires. He had saved many lives and had jailed a plethora of “criminal scum”, as he used to put it. Sadly, he died while breaking up a brawl between two drunks. A messenger came upon my doorstep the following day, bringing me this news as well as his bow, which was his dying will to leave in my possession. This bow, Savior, had been enchanted by an Altmer women named Nirya, with Fire Damage and Fortify Marksmen Skill enchantments. The Bow was majestic. Glowing red, it displayed such beauty. Gold lining upon the silver metal, strung with troll hair from deep within the Forests of the East, and blessed by several monks from Weynon Priory. This bow, which I still use today, will be sacred, at least to me, until the day my heart is limp and unable to breath. The next chapter will come tommorrow...just wanted to give a taste of the story before getting into it -------------------- Writer in Order of Scholars : Thoron the Hunter
Stories Written: The Hunter 'This bow, which I still use today, will be sacred... until the day my heart is limp and unable to breath.' Excerpt from The Hunter |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Dec 6 2006, 12:25 AM
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 Master  Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
A pleasant little introduction so far. I look forward to seeing the next update.
Welcome to the forums! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
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| Taillus |
Dec 6 2006, 03:41 AM
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 Knower  Joined: 30-January 06 |
Wow! Very well written Thoron. I look forward to reading more of this tale.
-------------------- “Worry not, young Breton. This will be over very quickly but I wish I could say that it would be painless. You will suffer greatly before you join the countless other souls that fuel my power.” - Taillus
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| Thoron the Hunter |
Dec 6 2006, 01:29 PM
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Retainer Joined: 3-December 06 From: Seyda Neen |
thanks for the feedback, adn im glad you like it!
This post has been edited by Thoron the Hunter: Dec 6 2006, 01:47 PM -------------------- Writer in Order of Scholars : Thoron the Hunter
Stories Written: The Hunter 'This bow, which I still use today, will be sacred... until the day my heart is limp and unable to breath.' Excerpt from The Hunter |
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| minque |
Dec 6 2006, 11:01 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Welcome th the fanfic section and welcome to the forums. Your writing is really very good, so I´d say we have another promising writer amongst us!
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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