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post Oct 9 2007, 08:39 PM
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The Last Heir

CHAPTER ONE

The goblins were rushing in through the barn door, but they had no clue I was sitting up above on a rickety plank, ready to jump down and slay the evil beasts.

With my trusty spear in hand I dove down from above and struck one of the monstrous creatures to the floor. The others shrieked loudly as they charged me, but it was of no use. My skills in battle were envied by all and matched by no one.

One by one I sliced my way through the goblin horde until only the chieftain stood before me. He held his magical battle axe in hand with a furious expression, but I knew his intimidating stature was unreal. He was truly afraid of me and wanted nothing more than to run back to his smelly cave, but alas I was guarding the only exit out of my barn.

Slowly I walked towards the monster and as I inched closer and closer I began to see the sweat dripping from the chieftain’s face. His hands that were clutched tightly around the axe were shaking wildly. He stood no chance.

“Lukas, have you finished cleaning the barn yet? Supper is almost ready!”

At the sounds of my mothers shrill voice the battle ended and suddenly I was unfortunately sucked back into boring reality.

“Not yet mother, give me another ten minutes or so…”

I quickly took the broom I was holding and started sweeping the floor because I knew it was only a matter of seconds until my mother came to see what the matter was. She told me to clean the place an hour ago but of course like usual I had dazed off into my own fantasy land.

“LUKAS! Will you please clean things up quickly? Supper is just a few minutes from being ready and you’ve barely even started! What have you been doing in here all this time?”

Sure enough she entered the barn with the same stern expression she gave me every time I angered her, which seemed to be often.

“I was fightin’ the goblins mama, I had to protect our barn from the enemy,” I said with a sly smile about me.

My mother hated it when I pretended to be a knight or a warrior, or whatever... For some odd reason she becomes very infuriated whenever I did so.

“Lukas, you’re fifteen years old! When are you going to grow up?” She said with her arms folding firmly across her chest.

“Fine, fine, I’ll clean the barn, it shouldn’t take too long!”

“The next time I catch your mind wandering about when you’re supposed to be doing chores you’ll get a whipping you’ve never imagined before.”

I simply rolled my eyes as she walked away. But of course she wasn’t yet finished with her tirade. “And stop pretending my broom is some kind of weapon!”

“I can’t help it mama, I’m gonna be a knight some day!” I chuckled back.

She grunted loudly and finally ended the argument with a threat I’ve heard millions of times before, “You break my broom and I’ll break your legs!”

I always laughed loudly at that one, for my mother wasn’t abusive as some kids’ mothers were. She would never lay a finger on me, besides my constant spankings of course.

Come to think of it, I’d hate to see what she would do if someone ever did laid their hands on me. It sure wouldn’t be pretty, I know that for sure. My mom is extremely protective of me.

I think that’s why I am home-schooled. She probably doesn’t want to even think about me being whipped by the school’s headmaster, which I am almost positive would be a daily activity. She’d rather do that herself…


Two hours later I finished sweeping the floors and bundling all the hay. It took me longer than I expected and mother wasn’t too thrilled about the delay.

“Sorry mama, it took me a bit long than I thought it would. Mama…?”

I yelled a bit more but was never given a response. My immediate answer to the silence was that she was most likely outside watering our garden and picking any already ripe vegetables.

So I threw off my work clothes and bundled into a pair of comfortable pants and an unbuttoned shirt. I went into the kitchen to see two plates resting on the table. One was full of cold food and the other was almost entirely eaten.

I walked over to the front door and poked my head out to see where mother was. I saw her standing just a few feet away from the porch. That’s when I saw two men in shiny silver armor standing next to her.

I walked outside to greet the men and I noticed she was sobbing.

“Who are these people mama, and why are you crying?”

Without giving me an answer she threw her arms around me and began to cry even more than before.

“Mama, what’s wrong?”

One of the men in armor spoke up with a deep and serious voice.

“Son, follow us into your house. There are some matters that need to be discussed.”

I was speechless. I didn’t know what to say. My mom took me by the hand and led me and the other two men into the house, where we all sat down at the kitchen table after she cleaned it.

“Lukas, do you have any idea who your father was?”

“Umm…no sir, I do not. Mama told me he passed away when I was still a baby.”

The man looked over to mother and she started crying again, this time thankfully a little quieter than before. I hated seeing her cry; it pained me more than anything else.

“You father was Martin Septim, son of Uriel Septim. Do you know who any of those two men are?” The man asked with a sterner tone.

“No sir, I’ve never heard the names before,” I said sheepishly.

Again the man looked over to my mother, this time with sheer anger. I was almost afraid he was going to yell at her but he turned his attention back to me.

“Your father and grandfather were rulers of the Empire Lukas. Surely you’ve of the Empire, haven’t you?”

I nodded. Who didn’t know about the Empire? Even we, on this small island hundreds of miles from anyone else, know about them. But was this man serious about my father, and apparently my grandfather, once being rulers of the Empire?

“Martin and Uriel were both recently slain recently. Your grandfather was assassinated by the culprits and Martin sacrificed himself to save Cyrodiil. You, Lukas, are the heir to the throne.”

I was stunned beyond belief. Surely I was dreaming right? Perhaps I had fainted from the barn’s heat and I was imagining all of this? Surely I had to be, there’s just no way in the world any of this could really be happening.

“I’m sorry sir, but what are you talking about? I think you have the wrong person. I’ve lived here all my life and I highly doubt it’s possible that I would be related to any Imperial Kings.”

“Ah, but it is Lukas, what your mother has apparently forgotten to mention to you is that she was once a caretaker for the Chapel in the city that was once Kvatch. She happened to have a “small” mishap with Martin and that brought you into this world. Your mother fled the country and brought you here. And since you’re Martin’s only heir that makes you’re the rightful king of Cyrodiil.”

I looked over to my mother and she was able to nod her head slowly. I was the King of Cyrodiil? How could this be? I’m only fifteen years old!

“We’ll give you about an hour to get your stuff together and then we set sail for Cyrodiil where you will take your place at the throne, though it won’t be as glamorous as you might think. A war has just been won, but don’t worry, I’ll explain everything on the way.”

Things were happening so fast I didn’t know what to think. I was looking back and forth between the two men and my mother, then the next thing I knew I was toppling face first towards the table, and then everything went dark.





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post Oct 18 2007, 08:34 PM
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CHAPTER FOUR

Before I knew it Jauffre was running from where I was standing, and made his way over to where Baurus was being restrained by the soldiers. I heard him yell a few words at Baurus, who said something in return, resulting in a heated display of words that lasted at least twenty minutes. The two argued about several things, while the main was Baurus criticizing Jauffre for bossing him around. Jauffre shot back that he was the Grandmaster of the Blades, and that opened up a whole new argument in which Baurus claimed Jauffre was abusing his powers.

When everything settled Baurus marched off angrily, while Jauffre came back to me. All of the soldiers had stood the entire time, watching the two argue just incase things got out of hand.

“Come inside with me Lukas and then we’ll come back here where we’ll make formal statement to the city regarding your new role as Emperor. We need to prepare a very small speech”

His face was bright read and drenched with sweat. He seemed even angrier than when he Ocato spoke just a while ago. I was actually almost afraid of Jauffre at the moment. He was showing a side that I had not yet seen.

“What about Baurus? Where is he going?”

“I couldn’t care less about him right now. Obviously he needs a few hours to let himself cool down, and if he doesn’t want to cool down then maybe he should think about his future with the Blades…”

Jauffre said the last part loud, loud enough for Baurus to hear just as he left the area, slamming the doors behind him. Jauffre told a nearby guard to gather up all of the citizens and bring here to the outside part of the palace.

“I know who you are, but you’re not going to boss me around.” The guard was very rude and I couldn’t wait for Jauffre to hand it to him.

“I’ll have you know that standing to my left is the heir to the throne, Lukas Septim.”

The guard looked at me and laughed unsurprisingly.

“Ha, that little boy? He’s younger than my son.”

I looked around and the other soldiers were laughing as well. I was beginning to feel smaller than I actually was. Jauffre ushered me into the palace as the soldiers continued their laughter.






“You’ll have to remain calm throughout this event Lukas; you cannot act as you did with Ocato. I know you’re young but you have to be strong and show the people they can trust you,” said Jauffre.

The thing that kept bugging was how in the world Jauffre knew about me in the first place.

“Jauffre, how did you know my existence and where I lived?”

“Martin told me just before battling Mehrunes Dagon. He told me where you lived and your name as well. It was a sad time; I really do think your father wanted to see you, but alas he never made the journey to where you and your mother lived. He said he wanted to countless times, but could never gather enough strength to go. Despite what your mother told you, Martin was the only person she told of where she was taking you. She thought, and thought correctly, that the father should know where the son was. I have to say that if it were me I would have traveled to see you, but Martin made his decision. But of course that does not make him a bad person Lukas; he really did care about you, even if he never laid eyes upon you.”

That was an answer I suppose I could live off of. I don’t know, all of this is just so weird. My father an Emperor, and my grandfather one as well, and I would’ve never guessed in a million years if it were not for Jauffre and Baurus.

“The first thing you need to do is stay strong out there when you are talking to the people. If you can muster up enough courage to face the crowd they will be a bit less critical I think, but how much I do not know. I am afraid this will not go well with the citizens of the Imperial City, but it’s something that must be done. If you are to Emperor you must talk to the people and get them on your side.”

“But Jauffre, they aren’t going to like being ruled by a fifteen year old teenager. This will be a disaster and you know it.”

“As much as I wanted to deny that accusation, you are more than likely correct. That is why I invited someone to join our little speech; someone who I am sure will help sway the public on our side.”

“And just who might be?”

“Remember when I told if it were not for the brave acts of a certain person, Cyrodiil would have surely fallen?”
“Yes, that sounds familiar. Didn’t he go by ‘The Hero of Kvatch’, or something like that?”

“Yes Lukas, the Champion of Cyrodiil is who I am talking about. Your father played important role in securing Cyrodiil from the enemy, there is no doubt in that; but the Champion of Cyrodiil played the most important role during the struggle. Before departing to find you and your mother I visited with the Hero.”

“Wait, I thought you said he had left the country to live alone?”

“That is what we told the people. In fact, he traveled deep in the Jerall Mountains, to a small cave where I thankfully found him. He was badly injured during the final battle here in the Imperial City.”

“What happened to him?”

“Well, he was burned severely during the struggle, resulting in his skin being mutated and burnt. He now resembles something of what nobody can even begin to describe, but it is beyond the injury that has caused that. It was because of his horrid figure that the Counts and Countesses shunned him away after the war, even after he saved them from sure destruction.”

“The people of Cyrodiil never did this however, and to this day they still talk of his heroic efforts and wish to someday see him walk the streets again. They were heartbroken to see him leave, but their sorrows were nothing compared to the Champion’s heart after what Counts and Countesses said to him. He ultimately decided to depart from the public, never to be seen again. Baurus and I did our best to get him to change his mind, but it was of no use. He had made his decision and that was the end of it.”

“But Jauffre, how did you get him to come here and help us now?”

“Like I said, I traveled to the north and was somehow able to find him. There I told him of what was going on. At first he was not the least bit sympathetic for our cause, but with a little bit of persuasion I got him to help us. He now believes, just as I do, that in order to get the people’s good judgment he must be by your side. I think with his presence the people will be more likely to be in favor of our cause.”

“And what if your plan does not work Jauffre?”

“Then we will have to resort to another plan, but for now we must hope for the best. Now, it is time for you to meet the Champion of Cyrodiil…”




Out from the shadows behind Jauffre came a figure that had been standing there for apparently the entire time. I had never noticed the man, or thing. An extremely bad odor came from him. It was the Champion of Cyrodiil.

He was wearing a golden mask that hid his face from view, even his eyes it seemed. He was also donning silver cloak, accompanied by matching silver boots. Its breathing was wheezy and it appeared that it was having a terribly hard time breathing in the first place.

Then it spoke a raspy tone that chilled me to the bone. The injury must have affected is speech somehow, for I could barely make out his words. Truthfully I wanted to run away from the horrid monster, but as I thought of that I thought how awful the Champion must feel.

“Lukas, I am the Champion of Cyrodiil. I am very pleased to finally meet you.”

He brought out his hand to shake mine. As I extended my own hand I noticed his was shaking uncontrollably.

“What is wrong child, are you afraid of me?” The Champion asked after we greeted.

I was unable to say a word. Heck, I couldn’t even if I wanted to. I didn’t know what to say.

“It is alright to say so child, I will hold nothing against you. In fact, I would be surprised if you weren’t afraid of my presence.”

Again I said nothing, but simply stood firm in front of both he and Jauffre. The Champion was staring into my eyes with his own black pupils that were almost hidden behind his mask.

“You are a mere boy yet you stand here like a man. I respect that young Lukas, son of Martin, a once good friend of mine. Back when the war was going on your father and I spent a lot of time together. He was a great man indeed, and he will be proud to know that his own son will take his place at the throne.”

I smiled at the last sentence because it really wasn’t something I had thought about before. I never knew my father, yet knowing I was doing him a proud favor made me feel good about myself.

Then, I think, the Champion smiled back, though it was almost impossible to tell because of the mask. At that exact moment I realized there was nothing to fear from the man, no matter how disfigured and mutated he was. I knew then that he was one of the few allies I had at the moment and that was certainly something to be glad for.

“I am sure Jauffre told you about my disfiguration, and unfortunately it has gotten worse within the recent months. I have contracted several diseases during my stay in the mountains, though none are contagious, I can assure you that. The people of Cyrodiil must realize that you are the answer for the Empire, and I am here to help you in that quest. With my presence the people will be reminded that there is still hope for the Empire, not matter the Council and their puppet Ocato says. The Council is something that I feel very strongly about, but that is a subject for another day. For now I need rest before your speech. Then we will showcase you, my young Emperor, to the people.”




The Champion limped out of the room and somewhere to the right, where I guessed he would find a room to rest in. Jauffre put his hand on my shoulder and told me how brave I was, which was fine and all, but I still had some questions to be answered…

“Jauffre, do you mind if I ask some questions?”

“And would I be correct in assuming those questions pertain to the Champion?”

I nodded and then Jauffre closed the door.

“Well ask your questions Lukas and I’ll answer them as best as I can; although there are several things which I cannot tell you. The Champion made swear long ago not to divulge that information to anyone.”

“First off, what race was the Champion before his injury?”

Jauffre seemed to ponder over the question for some time, almost as if he had forgotten. It appeared that I was right.

“To be honest with you Lukas, I cannot remember what he looked like before the war, which happened almost two years ago. The only thing I can tell you is that he was not of the beast race.”

“Alright, my next question is what exactly happened to him specifically?”

“During the battle here in the city he was doused with a cloud of fire, which was cast by an unknown assailant, but most likely, by a Dremora. The injury he sustained caused him great pain and agony, and also resulted in his disfiguration. But I’ll also tell you this: his current mutation is far worse than what it was two years ago. His diseases have taken a toll on his body, and I am afraid his condition is getting worse by the day. It is best not to talk about that when he’s around, for I am not sure if he would take offense to it. What else can I answer for you Lukas?”

“Nothing, that’ll be it, thanks Jauffre.”

“You’re quite welcome Lukas. Now…..preparations for your speech.”


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redsrock   The Last Heir   Oct 9 2007, 08:39 PM
jack cloudy   I must say it is an interesting start that caught ...   Oct 9 2007, 08:52 PM
Lucidarius   What an unusual revelation and a very original set...   Oct 9 2007, 09:47 PM
blockhead   Wow, this is neat. First, I began to think that y...   Oct 9 2007, 11:40 PM
redsrock   Thanks everyone, I have some studying to do but ho...   Oct 10 2007, 02:45 AM
The Metal Mallet   I agree with many of the others about the refreshi...   Oct 10 2007, 06:50 AM
mplantinga   An interesting start. I'm curious to see where...   Oct 10 2007, 03:48 PM
redsrock   My little brother has a football game that should ...   Oct 10 2007, 10:29 PM
Lord Revan   This story does live up to its name, the concept i...   Oct 11 2007, 01:41 AM
redsrock   That's no problem Revan. Many times I find it...   Oct 11 2007, 02:06 AM
Agent Griff   Hm, a truly interesting start to your tale. I espe...   Oct 11 2007, 08:27 PM
redsrock   Thanks a lot Griff, that really does mean a lot to...   Oct 11 2007, 09:53 PM
jack cloudy   Nothing. After all, without ideals, where would ma...   Oct 11 2007, 09:56 PM
redsrock   Philosphy is always a good thing Jack Cloudy..... ...   Oct 11 2007, 10:25 PM
mplantinga   This story continues to be interesting. I'll t...   Oct 11 2007, 11:39 PM
redsrock   Great, I would appreciate that. Look for the next...   Oct 12 2007, 12:36 AM
blockhead   Nice installment. It's just too bad his mothe...   Oct 12 2007, 02:19 AM
redsrock   I never really meant for the mother to be a huge p...   Oct 12 2007, 02:30 AM
Agent Griff   Hm, very interesting update. I must say, I'm a...   Oct 12 2007, 05:43 AM
The Metal Mallet   Things are developing nicely. I can't wait to...   Oct 12 2007, 08:00 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER THREE Outside the city stood a magnifice...   Oct 14 2007, 03:09 AM
The Metal Mallet   And now things get a little messy, and crazy, and ...   Oct 14 2007, 03:27 AM
redsrock   Are you saying that you're not eagerly anticip...   Oct 14 2007, 03:34 AM
The Metal Mallet   I have no idea why that "not" is there. ...   Oct 14 2007, 03:58 AM
redsrock   The bad thing about Oblivion is that not many of t...   Oct 14 2007, 04:01 AM
Agent Griff   Hm, this is starting to get interesting. Ocato act...   Oct 14 2007, 12:27 PM
redsrock   Thanks to everyone out there who's following m...   Oct 14 2007, 02:07 PM
Lord Revan   Is the basis for Ocato's change in personality...   Oct 14 2007, 06:54 PM
jack cloudy   You have a good play between the different charact...   Oct 14 2007, 07:39 PM
redsrock   Hopefully I can get the next chapter out by tonigh...   Oct 17 2007, 05:14 PM
jack cloudy   I like the adition of the champion. It is obvious ...   Oct 18 2007, 08:51 PM
Lord Revan   Well, since a Dremora is a servant of Lord Mehrune...   Oct 18 2007, 10:50 PM
redsrock   Thanks, I was real worried on how you all would pe...   Oct 19 2007, 02:50 AM
The Metal Mallet   Yes you handled the Hero of Kvatch situation quite...   Oct 19 2007, 06:09 AM
Steve   I'm new to this forum and well, I've actua...   Oct 19 2007, 11:38 PM
redsrock   Thanks a bunch! I'm not really sure when ...   Oct 20 2007, 03:02 AM
Steve   I hope it's soon!   Oct 21 2007, 04:23 PM
redsrock   I'm very glad to hear that!   Oct 21 2007, 11:34 PM
mplantinga   It seems that Lukas is up against impossible odds,...   Oct 22 2007, 03:47 PM
Agent Griff   I've read this quite a while ago but forgot to...   Oct 22 2007, 07:23 PM
redsrock   I will certainly check that out Griff. Thanks for...   Oct 23 2007, 02:55 AM
redsrock   Sorry for the delay, but unfortunately school has ...   Oct 27 2007, 03:56 AM
The Metal Mallet   Nice to see Lukas recover nicely after the public ...   Oct 27 2007, 06:47 AM
Lord Revan   Not in Fallout? (never played any of the series, b...   Oct 27 2007, 07:04 AM
Agent Griff   Rivetting update! Now that I look more careful...   Oct 27 2007, 10:00 AM
redsrock   This story has actually gotten better reviews that...   Oct 27 2007, 03:08 PM
jack cloudy   That could have gone better. Maybe next speech sho...   Oct 27 2007, 05:09 PM
redsrock   I'm really happy that you are really getting i...   Oct 27 2007, 05:56 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER SIX I walked back to my room and said my...   Oct 27 2007, 08:03 PM
The Metal Mallet   Glad to see that Lukas is starting to get past int...   Oct 27 2007, 11:22 PM
Lord Revan   The count of Leyawiin takes the advice of his wife...   Oct 28 2007, 12:50 AM
redsrock   “Well if you ask me, that didn’t go as bad as I t...   Oct 28 2007, 06:56 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER SEVEN “Well if you ask me, that didn’t go...   Oct 28 2007, 06:57 PM
jack cloudy   Oh yeah, the emperor is taking charge. :D I love...   Oct 28 2007, 08:02 PM
redsrock   Minor nitpick, the last sentence had Baurus unsh...   Oct 28 2007, 08:09 PM
The Metal Mallet   Dun dun dun! Cliffhanger! Such a great w...   Oct 28 2007, 11:25 PM
Steve   Ahh, DANG YOU EVIL COUNTESS!!! This is...   Oct 29 2007, 04:37 AM
redsrock   Though, it's too bad you didn't have any ...   Oct 29 2007, 11:47 AM
Agent Griff   I've read the past 2 updates though I've f...   Oct 29 2007, 11:45 AM
Steve   Oh, I thought it was mentioned somewhere that they...   Oct 29 2007, 04:52 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER EIGHT For what seemed like minutes, thou...   Nov 1 2007, 02:50 AM
mplantinga   An excellent update. Lukas certainly is coming int...   Nov 1 2007, 05:37 PM
jack cloudy   Good thinking, getting some backup first. Baurus m...   Nov 1 2007, 05:49 PM
Olen   This is a good story. Quite refreshing to have so...   Nov 2 2007, 12:54 AM
Steve   That was absolutely enjoyable. I personally hope t...   Nov 4 2007, 12:54 AM
blockhead   When I first started to read this story, I marvele...   Nov 4 2007, 03:55 PM
Lord Revan   Lol, Blockhead. I've never seen this "to...   Nov 4 2007, 05:53 PM
redsrock   Lol, Blockhead. I've never seen this "t...   Nov 4 2007, 06:27 PM
jack cloudy   I don't think he is. He's just saying he n...   Nov 4 2007, 07:47 PM
redsrock   I don't think he is. He's just saying he ...   Nov 4 2007, 08:06 PM
Agent Griff   It'll be nice to see Lukas coming down in forc...   Nov 5 2007, 07:52 AM
redsrock   Short chapter, more of a transition to bigger thin...   Nov 13 2007, 03:46 AM
Lord Revan   I've been thinking, how would this have turned...   Nov 13 2007, 04:07 AM
redsrock   Ceali didn't seem the least bit disturbed dur...   Nov 13 2007, 04:10 AM
Lord Revan   True, or they had some extreme facial expression t...   Nov 13 2007, 04:19 AM
jack cloudy   Dang, I'd kinda hoped that the 'diplomacy...   Nov 13 2007, 07:34 AM
redsrock   I'm also rather amused by how all the counts ...   Nov 13 2007, 01:06 PM
mplantinga   I realize that Alessia had to be dealt with, but i...   Nov 13 2007, 04:28 PM
redsrock   What a marvelous can of worms Lukas has opened. ...   Nov 13 2007, 05:52 PM
Olen   Yes I do like how he's been forced into doing ...   Nov 14 2007, 01:50 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER TEN The officers let out a shout of glee,...   Nov 17 2007, 03:58 AM
jack cloudy   I like how you had the Leyawiin army hold onto the...   Nov 17 2007, 08:40 PM
The Metal Mallet   Another solid update. Lukas is progressing well. ...   Nov 18 2007, 08:49 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER ELEVEN I woke up early the next morning...   Nov 19 2007, 12:32 AM
The Metal Mallet   Damn, Baurus needs to grow up! He gave no rea...   Nov 19 2007, 02:33 AM
redsrock   Damn, Baurus needs to grow up! He gave no re...   Nov 19 2007, 02:35 AM
Olen   Another good instalment. The pace is getting quit...   Nov 19 2007, 05:10 PM
jack cloudy   Ya know, I'm worried about Baurus. Sure, he mi...   Nov 19 2007, 05:19 PM
Agent Griff   I've read the past 3 updates. Quite interestin...   Nov 19 2007, 07:29 PM
redsrock   The next chapter should be up by tonight, dependin...   Nov 28 2007, 01:59 AM
redsrock   I'm going to be honest with all of you, many t...   Dec 4 2007, 12:06 AM
Agent Griff   Hm...the champion is dead, long live the champion....   Dec 4 2007, 09:10 AM
The Metal Mallet   Solid update once again. It's interesting to ...   Dec 4 2007, 05:14 PM
Olen   Good piece. And also a good place to take a break...   Dec 4 2007, 05:58 PM
jack cloudy   Nice bit with the Champion again. I'm honestly...   Dec 4 2007, 07:09 PM
redsrock   Thanks to everyone for your continued interest in ...   Dec 4 2007, 09:44 PM
minque   Good! You will continue this then....Excellent...   Dec 10 2007, 11:51 PM
redsrock   Finally I have continued writing this story. Here...   Jan 28 2008, 04:28 AM
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