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redsrock The Last Heir Oct 9 2007, 08:39 PM jack cloudy I must say it is an interesting start that caught ... Oct 9 2007, 08:52 PM Lucidarius What an unusual revelation and a very original set... Oct 9 2007, 09:47 PM blockhead Wow, this is neat.
First, I began to think that y... Oct 9 2007, 11:40 PM redsrock Thanks everyone, I have some studying to do but ho... Oct 10 2007, 02:45 AM The Metal Mallet I agree with many of the others about the refreshi... Oct 10 2007, 06:50 AM mplantinga An interesting start. I'm curious to see where... Oct 10 2007, 03:48 PM redsrock My little brother has a football game that should ... Oct 10 2007, 10:29 PM Lord Revan This story does live up to its name, the concept i... Oct 11 2007, 01:41 AM redsrock That's no problem Revan. Many times I find it... Oct 11 2007, 02:06 AM Agent Griff Hm, a truly interesting start to your tale. I espe... Oct 11 2007, 08:27 PM redsrock Thanks a lot Griff, that really does mean a lot to... Oct 11 2007, 09:53 PM jack cloudy Nothing. After all, without ideals, where would ma... Oct 11 2007, 09:56 PM redsrock Philosphy is always a good thing Jack Cloudy.....
... Oct 11 2007, 10:25 PM mplantinga This story continues to be interesting. I'll t... Oct 11 2007, 11:39 PM redsrock Great, I would appreciate that. Look for the next... Oct 12 2007, 12:36 AM blockhead Nice installment.
It's just too bad his mothe... Oct 12 2007, 02:19 AM redsrock I never really meant for the mother to be a huge p... Oct 12 2007, 02:30 AM Agent Griff Hm, very interesting update. I must say, I'm a... Oct 12 2007, 05:43 AM The Metal Mallet Things are developing nicely. I can't wait to... Oct 12 2007, 08:00 AM redsrock CHAPTER THREE
Outside the city stood a magnifice... Oct 14 2007, 03:09 AM The Metal Mallet And now things get a little messy, and crazy, and ... Oct 14 2007, 03:27 AM redsrock Are you saying that you're not eagerly anticip... Oct 14 2007, 03:34 AM The Metal Mallet I have no idea why that "not" is there. ... Oct 14 2007, 03:58 AM redsrock The bad thing about Oblivion is that not many of t... Oct 14 2007, 04:01 AM Agent Griff Hm, this is starting to get interesting. Ocato act... Oct 14 2007, 12:27 PM redsrock Thanks to everyone out there who's following m... Oct 14 2007, 02:07 PM Lord Revan Is the basis for Ocato's change in personality... Oct 14 2007, 06:54 PM jack cloudy You have a good play between the different charact... Oct 14 2007, 07:39 PM redsrock Hopefully I can get the next chapter out by tonigh... Oct 17 2007, 05:14 PM redsrock CHAPTER FOUR
Before I knew it Jauffre was runnin... Oct 18 2007, 08:34 PM jack cloudy I like the adition of the champion. It is obvious ... Oct 18 2007, 08:51 PM Lord Revan Well, since a Dremora is a servant of Lord Mehrune... Oct 18 2007, 10:50 PM redsrock Thanks, I was real worried on how you all would pe... Oct 19 2007, 02:50 AM The Metal Mallet Yes you handled the Hero of Kvatch situation quite... Oct 19 2007, 06:09 AM Steve I'm new to this forum and well, I've actua... Oct 19 2007, 11:38 PM redsrock Thanks a bunch! I'm not really sure when ... Oct 20 2007, 03:02 AM Steve I hope it's soon! Oct 21 2007, 04:23 PM redsrock I'm very glad to hear that! Oct 21 2007, 11:34 PM mplantinga It seems that Lukas is up against impossible odds,... Oct 22 2007, 03:47 PM Agent Griff I've read this quite a while ago but forgot to... Oct 22 2007, 07:23 PM redsrock I will certainly check that out Griff. Thanks for... Oct 23 2007, 02:55 AM redsrock Sorry for the delay, but unfortunately school has ... Oct 27 2007, 03:56 AM The Metal Mallet Nice to see Lukas recover nicely after the public ... Oct 27 2007, 06:47 AM Lord Revan Not in Fallout? (never played any of the series, b... Oct 27 2007, 07:04 AM Agent Griff Rivetting update! Now that I look more careful... Oct 27 2007, 10:00 AM jack cloudy That could have gone better. Maybe next speech sho... Oct 27 2007, 05:09 PM redsrock I'm really happy that you are really getting i... Oct 27 2007, 05:56 PM redsrock CHAPTER SIX
I walked back to my room and said my... Oct 27 2007, 08:03 PM The Metal Mallet Glad to see that Lukas is starting to get past int... Oct 27 2007, 11:22 PM Lord Revan The count of Leyawiin takes the advice of his wife... Oct 28 2007, 12:50 AM redsrock
“Well if you ask me, that didn’t go as bad as I t... Oct 28 2007, 06:56 PM redsrock CHAPTER SEVEN
“Well if you ask me, that didn’t go... Oct 28 2007, 06:57 PM jack cloudy Oh yeah, the emperor is taking charge. :D
I love... Oct 28 2007, 08:02 PM![]() redsrock
Minor nitpick, the last sentence had Baurus unsh... Oct 28 2007, 08:09 PM The Metal Mallet Dun dun dun! Cliffhanger! Such a great w... Oct 28 2007, 11:25 PM Steve Ahh, DANG YOU EVIL COUNTESS!!!
This is... Oct 29 2007, 04:37 AM![]() redsrock
Though, it's too bad you didn't have any ... Oct 29 2007, 11:47 AM Agent Griff I've read the past 2 updates though I've f... Oct 29 2007, 11:45 AM Steve Oh, I thought it was mentioned somewhere that they... Oct 29 2007, 04:52 PM redsrock CHAPTER EIGHT
For what seemed like minutes, thou... Nov 1 2007, 02:50 AM mplantinga An excellent update. Lukas certainly is coming int... Nov 1 2007, 05:37 PM jack cloudy Good thinking, getting some backup first. Baurus m... Nov 1 2007, 05:49 PM Olen This is a good story. Quite refreshing to have so... Nov 2 2007, 12:54 AM Steve That was absolutely enjoyable. I personally hope t... Nov 4 2007, 12:54 AM blockhead When I first started to read this story, I marvele... Nov 4 2007, 03:55 PM Lord Revan Lol, Blockhead. I've never seen this "to... Nov 4 2007, 05:53 PM![]() redsrock
Lol, Blockhead. I've never seen this "t... Nov 4 2007, 06:27 PM jack cloudy I don't think he is. He's just saying he n... Nov 4 2007, 07:47 PM![]() redsrock
I don't think he is. He's just saying he ... Nov 4 2007, 08:06 PM Agent Griff It'll be nice to see Lukas coming down in forc... Nov 5 2007, 07:52 AM redsrock Short chapter, more of a transition to bigger thin... Nov 13 2007, 03:46 AM Lord Revan I've been thinking, how would this have turned... Nov 13 2007, 04:07 AM![]() redsrock
Ceali didn't seem the least bit disturbed dur... Nov 13 2007, 04:10 AM Lord Revan True, or they had some extreme facial expression t... Nov 13 2007, 04:19 AM jack cloudy Dang, I'd kinda hoped that the 'diplomacy... Nov 13 2007, 07:34 AM![]() redsrock
I'm also rather amused by how all the counts ... Nov 13 2007, 01:06 PM mplantinga I realize that Alessia had to be dealt with, but i... Nov 13 2007, 04:28 PM![]() redsrock
What a marvelous can of worms Lukas has opened.
... Nov 13 2007, 05:52 PM Olen Yes I do like how he's been forced into doing ... Nov 14 2007, 01:50 PM redsrock CHAPTER TEN
The officers let out a shout of glee,... Nov 17 2007, 03:58 AM jack cloudy I like how you had the Leyawiin army hold onto the... Nov 17 2007, 08:40 PM The Metal Mallet Another solid update. Lukas is progressing well. ... Nov 18 2007, 08:49 PM redsrock CHAPTER ELEVEN
I woke up early the next morning... Nov 19 2007, 12:32 AM The Metal Mallet Damn, Baurus needs to grow up! He gave no rea... Nov 19 2007, 02:33 AM![]() redsrock
Damn, Baurus needs to grow up! He gave no re... Nov 19 2007, 02:35 AM Olen Another good instalment. The pace is getting quit... Nov 19 2007, 05:10 PM jack cloudy Ya know, I'm worried about Baurus. Sure, he mi... Nov 19 2007, 05:19 PM Agent Griff I've read the past 3 updates. Quite interestin... Nov 19 2007, 07:29 PM redsrock The next chapter should be up by tonight, dependin... Nov 28 2007, 01:59 AM redsrock I'm going to be honest with all of you, many t... Dec 4 2007, 12:06 AM Agent Griff Hm...the champion is dead, long live the champion.... Dec 4 2007, 09:10 AM The Metal Mallet Solid update once again. It's interesting to ... Dec 4 2007, 05:14 PM Olen Good piece. And also a good place to take a break... Dec 4 2007, 05:58 PM jack cloudy Nice bit with the Champion again. I'm honestly... Dec 4 2007, 07:09 PM redsrock Thanks to everyone for your continued interest in ... Dec 4 2007, 09:44 PM minque Good! You will continue this then....Excellent... Dec 10 2007, 11:51 PM redsrock Finally I have continued writing this story. Here... Jan 28 2008, 04:28 AM The Metal Mallet And the story continues! Wonderful update. S... Jan 28 2008, 05:11 AM
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