QUOTE(jack cloudy @ Nov 8 2007, 02:39 PM)

Err, who is Samuel Clemens? The guy who wrote as Mark Twain? If so, why shouldn't I add him?
Yes. He is a major character in The Riverworld novels. As they have a similar premise to your story, it would be just
too much similarity if you were to also include him.
QUOTE
And dang, over 15000 words?! Man, I'm seriously running behind. I've just past 8500.

I didn't write at all yesterday. Dealing witha major hard drive problem: data recovery. Grrr. At least the nano story files were not lost: they were safe on their ext3 partition (the fat32 partition is the one that failed). In addition that problem, I'm getting
really tired of this story. I'm just throwing random stuff at our characters to keep the moving and there's no plot or anything emerging. Feh. I'm only pressing on out of a Rashelle-like commitment to finish it.
QUOTE
I also added yet another excerpt. Hmm, this story isn't going to remain pg-13 at this rate. I mean seriously, taking a video+audio phone call while under a shower? A phone call from a pervert? Well, he did bash on Emmy for a bit but you've gotta admit, the girl was asking for it.

Err? Well, since it's the future, maybe the vid-phone automatically edits the outgoing video in real time to mask out the "naughty parts" so it's safe/convenient to take a call in the shower????
