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So far, I like the premise a lot. The battle was good, although perhaps a tad too onesided. Redguards have to have gotten their reputation as badass from somewhere. But then again, the Legions must have gotten their reputation from somewhere as well.
Well, it was supposed to be one-sided - after all, it was a loose bunch of Redguards against a well-disciplined unit of Imperial Cavalry.
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I really like the direction you've took with the Arena. If I'm ever to write a fan fic set in Oblivion I'll surely change a few things to make Cyrodiil seem more roman than medieval. Just so you know though, gladiators weren't really treated like walking pieces of trash. Most of them were professional fighters and gladiators were quite an expensive thing to have, much alike to a modern-day football or rugby team. They were split into teams, which had their own personal medic and a sponsor that paid all the expenses. A gladiator dying in a fight was quite rare, since a new one was pretty expensive to train from scratch. Anyway, Cyrodiil ain't Rome so you can style it your own way.
Yes, I know all that, but what I wanted for this fan fic was a place to stuff criminals and prisoners of war to be stuffed in. As you said, it's Cyrodiil, not Rome.
Chapter II
As he slowly rose up the circular stairs, the grey color surrounding Charon slowly gave in to light. The bricks making up the walls slowly turned light grey. The dried blood on the wall became dark red, instead of light grey. And then, out of sudden, a bright light appeared, blinding the Redguard for a moment. Several tears appeared in his eyes. Rubbing them, he had to lower his gaze until he got used to the light.
Not only light hit Charon upon reaching the end of his path. A great noise struck him as well, consisting of the mixed yells of the spectators, the sound of heavy iron gates slamming down behind him and the trumpets that were sounded as soon as he approached the gates separating him from the arena, in which he was to engage in a fight for the pleasure of people he never knew. For the pleasure of people he hated, for the pleasure of people who enslaved him and his race…
As Charon got used to the light, he could get a better view at the arena, in which he fought for the first time today. The gates he was behind got in his way to a degree, though he could still get a good view to the battleground.
The arena was a round field, with a pit covered with bars in the middle, and four pillars standing out nearby the pit. Chains hung from each pillar - four chains for one pillar to be more exact. The ground was covered with sand, rocks and the occasional puddle of blood. Bones were scattered in the arena as well, and the smell most likely produced by the remaining flesh on them rotting wasn’t exactly helping the atmosphere get cheerful. The only thing that indicated joy was the yells of the people, though the joy was bloodthirsty joy, not simple joy.
While Charon was trying to get himself used to the surroundings, he didn’t even notice the shout ‘Begin!’ . The Redguard only got to his senses when the gates in front of him opened loudly. The same thing happened on the opposite side of the arena.
Slowly, Charon made his way out of the small room. He heard a loud ‘clang’ as the gates closed once again, leaving him trapped in this battlefield of sorts, on the opposite side of which he could easily see his opponent, a sight which quite unnerved the Redguard. His opponent had more than one advantage against his weapons, and Charon had no armor to speak of, except for the arm guard.
The person Charon was pitted against was heavily armed in comparison to him. While his opponent had no chestplate, similarly to the Redguard himself, he wore a helmet that covered his whole face, the only spots open being two eyeholes. The helmet had a rounded top, so it could be easily assumed that the helmet wouldn’t be caught in a net. The other things concerned Charon a bit less – a wide belt and a loincloth, similar to the one he wore himself, a large armguard, again similar to the one Charon used himself, and a greave made out of boiled leather on the opponent’s left leg.
But then there was another thing that made Charon unnerved – a large, rectangular shield that was carried by the gladiator that was here to fight him. The shield was a notably worn Imperial Scutum. Worn as it was, it was still more than fit for usage in combat. While Charon fought Legionnaires that used such shields, back then he had his own large shield, although a round one, and a long, trusty spear. Now, he was suited up in weapons he touched for the first time, and had no shield to speak of.
Still, the Redguard had to get into action, since the opposing gladiator was already heading for him, and the sight of the tip of the shortsword sticking out from behind the massive Scutum was not pleasant in the current situation.
Thus, forced into action, Charon started slowly moving along the right wall of the arena, holding his trident in front of him. The Secutor made note of this movement, and quickly began advancing to the same way that Charon was, also notably heading forward as well. It was sure that soon, he would be close enough to strike a blow that might’ve been the last one for Charon.
I must not give him the upper hand…The Redguard began slowly heading left, which resulted in the Secutor heading left as well, increasing the pace of his advance forward. This slightly unnerved Charon.
The Redguard made a quick run forward, heading towards the center of the arena. The Secutor stepped in his way, though Charon only jumped left, only barely avoiding the thrust of the dangerous shortsword that his enemy was wielding. Using the moment, he attempted to get a strike at the opponent’s chest with his trident, only to have the obvious attack be foiled once the large shield got between the body of the Secutor and Charon’s trident.
However, this did not confuse him at all. The Redguard sidestepped the blow that followed, again only barely missing him, and attempted to unarm his opponent with his net. This failed when the Gladius was retreated to the safety of the shield of the Secutor, with the gladiator himself taking a step back.
Now, Charon was open to attack. The Secutor rushed forward, beating the short distance that separated him and Charon quickly, swinging his Gladius. Charon jumped back, though not fast enough – a nasty scar appeared on his chest, which earned a loud gasp from the crowd. The first blood of this match was spilled.
However, Charon himself wasn’t happy with this at all, given the way the things were going for him. Since the Secutor was dangerously close, the Redguard had to make a quick retreat, though was sure not to turn his back to the enemy. The Secutor quickly gave chase, earning another gasp from the crowd when his blade made another scratch appear on Charon’s body.
But, to his misfortune, the gladiator did not retreat his weapon soon enough to avoid the net thrown by his opponent. In a quick motion, Charon pulled the net back, effectively unarming his opponent. What he didn’t foresee was the hit with the Scutum that followed – the Secutor got dangerously close to him again after being unarmed, and didn’t pass up the opportunity to get his foe to the ground with his shield.
Charon landed on his butt quite painfully, his chest sore from the strong blow it had to receive. Still, he didn’t stay down for long, quickly leaping back on his feet and thrusting the trident forward, again hoping to strike the chest of his opponent.
But once again, metal only met metal and not flesh. Charon had to retreat his trident once more, gaining nothing from the quick attack. Still, he managed to unarm his opponent, and that was something. Now, he needed to make use of that.
Fortunately for Charon, the Secutor was beginning to get weary. This match was lasting long enough to have effect on the heavier of the two, while the Redguard did not feel tired, due to his light armament. The Secutor would need to finish this quickly, else he could collapse from exhaustion and loose. Plus, he had no weapon, shifting the odds towards Charon’s side a slight bit.
Okay. So, I need to get past that large shield, and then he’s as good as dead. The Redguard contemplated, retreating backwards to avoid another shield-bash.
There were two options he could choose now – either stretch out the fight out so that his opponent is exhausted, or attempt to get past the shield and get the opposing gladiator down with his own strength. The first option was safer, though the second one appealed him and his Redguard honor more. He couldn’t let time take all the credit, so…
Slowly, Charon began his attempt at circling his opponent. The tips of the trident were all aimed towards the Secutor’s chest, who at the moment choose to stand in one place and protect himself with the large Scutum. However, this could not make Charon drop his plan. The Redguard would stop when either his opponent was down, or when he himself was dead.
When he was in the middle of forming his second circle around the Secutor, Charon suddenly leaped forward, aiming his trident at the upper chest of his opponent. The opposing gladiator once again moved his shield between his chest and the trident, though this left a slight bit of his right leg open.
This was enough for Charon. Once his trident touched the surface of the massive shield, he suddenly let it slide down, finally digging into the flesh of his opponent. The uncovered right leg was pierced, which resulted in the Secutor yelping in pain, and the crowds roaring in excitement. Was this injury enough to get the Secutor to surrender was yet to be seen…
Apparently, it was not.
Charon cursed loudly as the shield hit him again. The sudden impact sent him down on the ground again, and with him, the Redguard took the trident. The movement which got the weapon out of the Secutor’s leg was painful for the owner of the leg, resulting in him dropping on the knee of his right leg, and shifting his Scutum in a way it covered his whole front, though left him in a lower position.
The Redguard leaped up, furiously performing a quick attack that bounced off of the Scutum of the Secutor, though pushing it back a bit. Without a further thought, Charon, feeling the pain in both his chest and in his butt from two impacts, started raining down hits on the Secutor. Blow after blow landed on the shield, bending it in several spots. The man wielding the shield began breathing heavily, unable to keep his shield in the original spot…
Finally, when Charon raised his trident, which was beginning to get into quite blunt, for another strike, the Secutor lowered his shield, leaving himself defenseless. This action made Charon freeze before he could deliver the next blow – his opponent finally surrendered.
The tribunes were struck by a wave as all the spectators got up one after another, line after line, until all were up and cheering. Charon stood in the battlefield, caught off guard by the sudden noise. He didn’t even lower his trident, which was still held up in a way it looked like he would strike any moment.