Minque
It was hard to rank those stories, at least a couple of them. I'm afraid my comments are not so extensive, it would have been too much of a repetition...
Reunion
Fascinating story, despite its deep darkness. Good language, well written, with good descriptions without being too detailed.
The Mistake
Interesting story, well written with a good build-up of tension. Good descriptions.
Butterfly
This appeals to me as a sort of poem, really not easy to comprehend unless you read it several times. Then it has its sheer beauty, as a poem, not a story that is. Language is very good though…
A knife in the Dark
Good plot and an interesting ending. Fairly good language and writing style.
The heart of Alik'r
A yukodan story, that is a bit special, and makes it interesting. But too much “army-slash-and-bang” which makes it a tad hard to follow.
The fateful Night
A bit chaotic. Plot is good but it’s hard to get a grasp of it.
Lady of the Night
Strange story, yet still interesting, a bit hacked to pieces due to the chapterization. Dialogue a bit weak imo.
This mind
Very strange. It did not really appeal to me, the capital letters inside the words were a bit disturbing and added merely strangeness to it all.
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