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redsrock The Ice Warrior Feb 7 2008, 05:07 AM The Metal Mallet Interesting start to this story. There appears to... Feb 7 2008, 06:53 AM Agent Griff Hm, another Werewolf story? The signs are all ther... Feb 7 2008, 03:54 PM redsrock CHAPTER TWO
I went back to sleep shortly afterw... Feb 8 2008, 04:11 PM Agent Griff Hm, you meant that Winona wanted to live in Chorro... Feb 8 2008, 09:34 PM redsrock I'm not mad at, it onl;y helps me, right? Feb 8 2008, 10:27 PM The Metal Mallet Things are developing nicely. Keep it up my frien... Feb 9 2008, 07:48 AM redsrock I'm just sorry ch.2 was so boring. Feb 9 2008, 03:35 PM Steve This story is turning out pretty well!
Chapter... Feb 9 2008, 05:20 PM redsrock Thanks for the comments, guys!
CHAPTER THREE
... Feb 11 2008, 03:36 AM Agent Griff Great update. You showed the conflict between the ... Feb 11 2008, 09:35 AM redsrock Hah! Thanks, Griff. Feb 11 2008, 03:36 PM redsrock CHAPTER FOUR
“Come on Melvin, just forget it.”
... Feb 16 2008, 03:24 PM Agent Griff Great follow-up to the conflict previously establi... Feb 16 2008, 04:40 PM redsrock Well that's great! Sorry for the long upd... Feb 16 2008, 05:03 PM The Metal Mallet An excellent update. As Griff mentioned, you use ... Feb 16 2008, 10:35 PM redsrock Yeah, you're probably right. If something eve... Feb 16 2008, 10:49 PM jack cloudy I started reading today and just couldn't stop... Feb 16 2008, 11:17 PM redsrock Thanks, Jack. I've been working real hard on ... Feb 17 2008, 12:09 AM redsrock CHAPTER FIVE
Once Bruno was out of earshot Melv... Feb 17 2008, 04:37 AM The Metal Mallet Well now, lots of interesting tidbits about some o... Feb 17 2008, 10:53 PM redsrock Thanks, Metal. Glad you liked it... Feb 18 2008, 03:42 AM jack cloudy Real smart, Melvin. Real smart. And what are you g... Feb 18 2008, 10:16 PM redsrock lol, I've gotten that reaction of Melvin from ... Feb 19 2008, 04:48 AM LadySaira Land of cold is bad, wolfmen worse.
Prehaps miners... Feb 19 2008, 04:27 PM redsrock A new reader? Thanks for your comments, LadySaira... Feb 19 2008, 09:09 PM redsrock CHAPTER SIX
I woke up abruptly, from yet anothe... Mar 4 2008, 01:54 AM Steve AHH!!!
The story continues.
My compli... Mar 4 2008, 02:53 AM redsrock Thanks a lot Steve, it's good to be back. Mar 4 2008, 02:56 AM The Metal Mallet Here we go again with more escalation! Now th... Mar 5 2008, 04:11 AM redsrock Yes it will.....I'm just debating on how messy... Mar 5 2008, 04:21 AM Steve May I suggest spilling tomato sauce everywhere?
Ye... Mar 6 2008, 01:27 AM Agent Griff I hope that Bruno guy gets what's coming to hi... Mar 6 2008, 08:15 AM jack cloudy Well, told ya. Don't come bawling saying I did... Mar 9 2008, 09:52 AM redsrock CHAPTER SEVEN
Bruno’s fist connected with Melvi... Mar 11 2008, 04:13 AM jack cloudy Ya know, if someone gets that much time to beat so... Mar 11 2008, 08:10 AM Agent Griff As I said earlier, if either Erick or Melvin ever ... Mar 11 2008, 11:16 AM redsrock Hey guys, thanks for the comments. I'll try t... Mar 11 2008, 11:34 AM Steve GENIUS!!!
Yes, Bruno is annoying and I... Mar 12 2008, 09:51 PM BSD-IES Well I've been reading your work for quite a w... Mar 13 2008, 07:42 PM Agent Griff To be honest I find The Last Heir to be Red's ... Mar 13 2008, 08:38 PM BSD-IES You're quite right Griff, it is still very ear... Mar 13 2008, 09:07 PM Agent Griff Oh, we shall. If only I could get comments like th... Mar 13 2008, 09:26 PM redsrock Thanks, Griff, and you too BSD.
And about not c... Mar 13 2008, 09:50 PM redsrock CHAPTER EIGHT
Before we could even order our dr... Mar 14 2008, 01:27 PM Agent Griff So the story is finally unraveling...and that Brun... Mar 15 2008, 07:54 PM jack cloudy But if Melvin just slit his throat, then wouldn... Mar 15 2008, 08:34 PM redsrock Thanks guys. I believe I said the voice was a fema... Mar 15 2008, 09:22 PM Agent Griff In Romania it is night right now. And you might ca... Mar 15 2008, 09:33 PM redsrock The next chapter will be up later this afternoon, ... Mar 16 2008, 05:43 PM redsrock This chapter leads up to a more exciting one. I h... Mar 16 2008, 06:42 PM Agent Griff I like Erick's new "built up anger" ... Mar 16 2008, 07:54 PM redsrock Ha, we'll have to see about that last comment.... Mar 16 2008, 08:52 PM jack cloudy Ho boy, Erick pulled a straigth 180 here. From mis... Mar 16 2008, 09:21 PM redsrock I'm trying to change him, but I don't want... Mar 17 2008, 01:53 AM The Metal Mallet There have certainly been some interesting develop... Mar 17 2008, 02:11 AM redsrock Thanks, Mallet. I'm really working hard on th... Mar 17 2008, 02:22 AM Steve Yes, they have been developing well.
And one of th... Mar 18 2008, 02:15 AM redsrock Lol, we'll see..... Mar 18 2008, 02:29 AM redsrock CHAPTER TEN
Outside snow was beginning to calml... Mar 20 2008, 02:40 AM Steve WHOA!!! you had to leave it with such ... Mar 20 2008, 04:19 AM The Metal Mallet Naughty, naughty, naughty ending the chapter at th... Mar 20 2008, 05:59 AM redsrock I thought about adding the content to the end of t... Mar 20 2008, 11:03 AM Steve That's very cruel of you!
I have a mind to... Mar 20 2008, 04:47 PM redsrock Sorry...I just like me cliff hangers! Mar 20 2008, 10:37 PM redsrock CHAPTER ELEVEN
If you are reading then thankful... Mar 23 2008, 01:19 AM![]() BSD-IES
Do not bring anyone with you except for Madila, B... Mar 23 2008, 01:34 AM redsrock Thanks. yeah, about that typo....I commented over... Mar 23 2008, 02:55 AM Agent Griff Brilliant updates! The action is starting to p... Mar 23 2008, 04:13 PM redsrock No...not really. Care to elaborate? I'm acuta... Mar 23 2008, 05:15 PM Agent Griff Well, Barbas is the Hound of Clavicus Vile. You ca... Mar 23 2008, 08:26 PM redsrock No, I won't be doing that, especially since yo... Mar 23 2008, 08:41 PM jack cloudy It's good to have friends. :D
Anyway, I wond... Mar 24 2008, 12:00 PM redsrock CHAPTER TWELVE
I watched solemnly as the others... Mar 25 2008, 02:16 AM jack cloudy Woah, from harmless mute to bloody creepy witch. T... Mar 25 2008, 11:05 PM redsrock So you like it? I sure hope so.... Mar 25 2008, 11:23 PM redsrock There is A LOT of dialogue in this one, but I thin... Mar 26 2008, 01:15 AM redsrock CHAPTER FOURTEEN
No...What have I done? This b... Mar 28 2008, 02:43 AM redsrock CHAPTER FIFTEEN
After searching for a suitable ... Mar 28 2008, 11:14 PM redsrock Any comments at all? Mar 29 2008, 04:39 PM jack cloudy Eh, sorry for the wait.
Ok, lots of stuff happeni... Mar 29 2008, 05:40 PM minque Now of course you think I don't read your stor... Mar 29 2008, 06:17 PM redsrock Hey that's cool, I totally understand.
@Jack:... Mar 29 2008, 06:33 PM The Metal Mallet Things are moving along quite nicely. I did find ... Mar 30 2008, 07:58 AM redsrock Thanks, Metal, though I don't agree with you o... Mar 30 2008, 03:24 PM redsrock CHAPTER SIXTEEN
As my eyes opened and began to r... Mar 31 2008, 03:20 AM BSD-IES :blink: :blink: :blink:
Bloody hell, I didn... Mar 31 2008, 03:25 PM jack cloudy NNNNOOOOOO! TTTTTEEEEEEMMMMMEEEEEEE!!... Mar 31 2008, 05:21 PM redsrock I thought long and hard about Teemee, and ultimate... Mar 31 2008, 05:37 PM redsrock CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
"How long until we arriv... Apr 11 2008, 08:26 PM redsrock Here is a skipped chapter. My bad....This all hap... Apr 13 2008, 03:33 PM redsrock Here is the last chapter. It's not what you... Apr 13 2008, 03:35 PM BSD-IES People are still reading it, I'm sure. The for... Apr 13 2008, 04:16 PM The Metal Mallet Definitely not what I was expecting for an ending,... Apr 27 2008, 10:56 PM redsrock In all honesty, I became tired with the piece. I h... Apr 27 2008, 11:07 PM
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