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redsrock
post Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
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The following will be a remake of the last one. The previous story was rushed and I just hated it. This one will be much better. Expect the first chapter to either come out tonight, or tomorrow.


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post Apr 28 2008, 03:43 AM
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Prologue

“No, anyone but him, Velanda. Surely you have another suggestion.”

“No, I don’t, Lord Helseth. Not if you want the very best.”

King Hlaalu Helseth and his councilors were discussing a matter of utmost importance, directly involving the Great House Hlaalu. Eerie happenings were taking place in the city of Balmora, the district seat of The House. One month ago a member of House Hlaalu went missing. An investigation was of course conducted by hired investigators, but nothing came up. The case was eventually ruled that the member, in this case a low-rank Dunmer, had simply ran away to an unknown location.

However, just two weeks ago two more members went missing, and again the disappearances took place in Balmora. Now the leaders of House Hlaalu are taking the situation very seriously, and they are also extremely angry. For one, they are upset because the previous investigators were obviously wrong. And two, they are now going to be forced into hiring the one man they had exiled long ago.

“You do know Sirius is currently a struggling merchant in Caldera, correct? The last I heard, his little business was on the verge of collapsing, and that was two years ago.”

“Yes, but agents never forget their trade, my lord,” Mistress Velanda Omani claimed.

Helseth stood up from his chair and walked over to a wall and stared at one of his paintings. It was a large picture of him and an Imperial, both grinning from ear to ear. The two were once very good friends. About a month after that same painting was created something happened, something awful and unexplainable. Now the two haven’t spoken in nearly four years. Helseth didn’t want to make contact with him, but he knew it was the only way to ensure success.

“But he’s a traitor, Velanda. You know this,” Helseth said, still looking at the painting.

“That is true, my lord, but I’ll have to agree with Velanda on this one,” Master Crassius Curio announced. “Something is happening in Balmora; something that needs to be dealt with swiftly.”

“That is right, my lord,” Master Yngling Half-Troll said in agreement. “Unfortunately I don’t see any other option.”

The king of Morrowind turned his head and walked back to his chair and sat down. “What are your opinions?” He asked towards Master Dram Bero, and Mistress Nevena Ules, the remaining Councilors who had yet to speak.

“I won’t lie; I do NOT want to hire the scoundrel,” Nevena said. “But, as Yngling has just mentioned, I don’t see any other way around this either. We have to contact him, my lord. He is the only one capable of the job it seems. The others failed, and I doubt you’ll be talking to them ever again.”

“Oh no,” Helseth said, sort of chuckling afterwards. “They’ll be lucky to still be alive next week. Because of those fools I’ve lost three members, all with the potential of becoming wonderful assets to The House,” He said, referring to the previous investigators who had failed.

“I don’t want to have anything to do with the piece of scum. He almost destroyed everything we’ve strived for, and now you want to re-hire him? That is ludicrous!”

It was obvious to everyone that Master Dram Bero didn’t agree with them. His anger was obvious, but Dram doesn’t even like foreigners anyhow. None of the Councilors did very much, but Dram’s hatred was purest.

“Then what do you suggest we do, Dram? It is easy to sit there and complain, you know,” Velanda said harshly.

“I don’t want a traitor working for us! That doesn’t even make any sense! Just think about it!”

“There is no other way, Dram! And again I ask you, what do you suggest?”

Master Bero sat there with his arms crossed, angry because he knew he wasn’t going to get his wish. Deep down inside he knew it was the only way. He just didn’t want admit it.

“Fine, do what you want. But don’t come crying to me when he stabs us in the back once more!” He then stood up from his chair and walked out the door, slamming it forcefully behind him.

“What a damn child!” Velanda exclaimed. “It’s a wonder how grown beings can act so immature and selfish!”

“So…it’s agreed?” Helseth asked the remaining councilors, ignoring the argument involving Velanda and Dram.

One by one they reluctantly nodded their heads. They didn’t want to do it, but they also didn’t want to see anyone else vanish.

“Very well, then. I’ll send a courier immediately.”


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redsrock   The Connivers of Bosmora   Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
paragenic   The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was a...   Apr 28 2008, 11:42 AM
redsrock   The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was ...   Apr 28 2008, 09:28 PM
The Metal Mallet   Eh, I would've suspected the Councilors that w...   Apr 29 2008, 02:11 AM
redsrock   Thanks, Mallet. The next chaper is almost done, bu...   Apr 29 2008, 02:23 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER ONE After the other councilors had left...   Apr 30 2008, 12:16 AM
jack cloudy   I like the intrigue. You really manage to put Hels...   Apr 30 2008, 10:07 PM
redsrock   Exactly. Helseth is in full control for now. CHA...   May 1 2008, 12:54 AM
treydog   I like the way you move the story along, leaving u...   May 2 2008, 12:52 PM
raggidman   ok - what's the hold up? Get your pen moving ...   May 2 2008, 04:55 PM
redsrock   Yes, Trey, tense is what I am really working on be...   May 2 2008, 08:24 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER THREE “Yes, my lord, the target has tak...   May 2 2008, 10:33 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER FOUR When Sirius finally woke up he fou...   May 3 2008, 10:03 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER FIVE Dorvel was in fact waiting in the ...   May 5 2008, 11:45 PM
Lordban   Nice to see you're still writing, and you...   May 6 2008, 09:36 AM
redsrock   Thanks, Lordban. And just so you know, I do rememb...   May 6 2008, 11:46 AM
raggidman   There are two a few details that you might usefull...   May 6 2008, 01:32 PM
redsrock   - know what I mean? No, actually I am totally l...   May 6 2008, 01:49 PM
raggidman   Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to th...   May 6 2008, 01:54 PM
redsrock   Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to t...   May 6 2008, 01:55 PM
raggidman   Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran ...   May 6 2008, 01:57 PM
redsrock   Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran...   May 6 2008, 02:01 PM
raggidman   'pologies - the second bit is actually more co...   May 6 2008, 02:21 PM
redsrock   Yeah, everything is clear. Helseth may be differe...   May 6 2008, 02:42 PM
BSD-IES   I don't disagree with a lot that raggidman sai...   May 6 2008, 03:07 PM
redsrock   Lol, I had no clue about Caldera. Thanks, Raggidma...   May 6 2008, 03:08 PM
raggidman   You're both correct - a story is a story. And...   May 6 2008, 05:06 PM
paragenic   I'm surprised to read in here that Caldera is ...   May 7 2008, 07:43 AM
Alexander   <snip> I've actually always been unde...   May 7 2008, 09:30 AM
BSD-IES   I've always believed Caldera is Hlaalu because...   May 7 2008, 08:37 AM
raggidman   :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns, ...   May 7 2008, 10:22 AM
paragenic   :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns,...   May 7 2008, 11:35 AM
redsrock   and also shows why Connivers of Bosmora is such...   May 7 2008, 03:44 PM
redsrock   I don't really mind you all discussing it here...   May 7 2008, 12:53 PM
raggidman   :rofl:   May 7 2008, 12:55 PM
raggidman   Well look at the Council - they are all conniving ...   May 7 2008, 07:04 PM
redsrock   Oh, lol, ok. I don't why, but I thought you we...   May 7 2008, 07:19 PM
raggidman   nah - just this old man maunderin on and diggin fo...   May 7 2008, 09:11 PM
redsrock   ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed ...   May 7 2008, 11:21 PM
raggidman   ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed...   May 8 2008, 09:59 AM
redsrock   Not my favorite chapter for some reason, but here ...   May 8 2008, 12:08 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER SEVEN He awoke to the sound of heavy kno...   May 9 2008, 09:40 PM
raggidman   Cards to the chest eh? Poor Sirius definitely nee...   May 9 2008, 09:49 PM
redsrock   Did you ever see the film Cat Baloo? No, not re...   May 9 2008, 09:54 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER EIGHT All five councilors, plus Helseth...   May 11 2008, 08:38 PM
raggidman   Oooowh - poor Sirius is in real trouble now - a wo...   May 11 2008, 08:53 PM
redsrock   What did you think of the riddle, Raggidman?   May 11 2008, 09:38 PM
raggidman   :nono: naughty riddle - the place where the sun d...   May 11 2008, 10:24 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER NINE The moment after Sirius shut the d...   May 17 2008, 02:17 AM
raggidman   ouch - this is getting seriously Helsethian   May 17 2008, 09:46 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER TEN Sirius walked away from the restaur...   May 20 2008, 01:45 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER ELEVEN The “Lucky Lockup’s” owner had in...   May 23 2008, 07:05 PM


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