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Mephala's Maiden: Black Rose Clan |
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Black Hand |
Feb 4 2007, 07:28 PM
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Master

Joined: 26-December 05
From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell.

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Hey guys, this isnt a divergence from the main story I have, but rather, I have been trying out a new type of character on my X-Box, a custom class 'Geisha' after seeing the movie 'Memoirs of a Geisha' Recently, and I gotta tell ya, its a lot of fun. Something different to be sure. It inspired this. Enjoy. (I hope.)
“Who was that lady, Sera?” asked Sayuri, looking at Edryno Arethi, her current matron in House Hlaalu.
“No one, get back too your duties, Retainer.” Edrnyo replied, twirling the Black Rose in her hand, a deathly pale in her face, she had been delivered the death message and was in no mood to speak.
Sayuri, the young Bosmer girl had been adopted by House Hlaalu after her parents had been murdered by a Telvanni Mage whilst in Sadrith Mora, and one of the Merchants traveling in his own ship to trade, took pity on the little crying girl, dropping her off in Balmora, and told Nileno Dorvayn of her plight.
She remembered the tsking of Nileno, and the warmth of her palm as she rubbed her cheek affectionately. She was given clothes and a bed, and place to sleep, and she was put to work, alternately being trained in House Hlaalu’s favored skills, for three years she served mostly as a serving girls, performing menial tasks, and occasionally as a thief, or a decoy. She loved it, as it seemed to coincide naturally with her gods-given talents.
Bratheru Oran, Edryno’s lover took the rose from her hand, and threw it on the ground, smashing it underneath his leather boots. His expression showed that of rage and helplessness. Sayuri would not bring it up again for three weeks, but one day, when Edryno gave her a key to her house, and told her that she would be gone for several weeks, she finally explained, as she had never held anything back from her adopted daughter for long.
“Do you remember that Rose, Sayuri? The black one?” she asked, as Sayuri nodded her head, remembering the vivacious Altmer that had delivered it, dressed in exquisite clothing and wearing Telvanni Bug Musk.
“You’ve been chosen, and are being taken from me, under the pain of death, I cannot refuse. The Black Rose Clan is taking you, and you will serve them. I…I am leaving to speak to them, and perhaps negotiate an alternative. But seldom will they refute a selection.”
“Black Rose Clan? Matron, I don’t understand!” Sayuri said nearly on the brink of tears.
“You know of the Morag Tong? They worship the Great Daedra Mephala, the Dark Matron of Murder, Sex, and Secrets. They are a small faction within the Tong, dedicated to the second part of that. Whereas most assassins are dark, aloof, and grim in nature, a Black Rose, or a Dark Petal, also Thorns or Mephala’s Maidens, rely more on Personality and Agility. As every rose have five petals, so does the Clan. When one ‘wilts’ away as they call it, either killed, or grows to old too become pleasing to men, another must be chosen to take their place. You, because you are born under the Sign of ‘The Lover’ which gives you more agility, and the power to freeze people, will become the newest petal in the Black Rose.”
Sayuri’s eyes tried to no avail to hold back the tears of confusion and frustration. For the second time in her life, she was to lose her family. Edyrno ran her hand through the childs raven dark hair, and embraced her, attempting to comfort the shaking Bosmer.
“I know, I promise everything will be all right…”
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minque |
May 2 2008, 01:12 AM
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Wise Woman

Joined: 11-February 05
From: Where I can watch you!!

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I'm stunned, Blackie! And I'm NOT saying this because I like you, this story is awesome, your descriptions are so vivid, I can see her, the little Sayuri, the picture you painted of her is so clear set inside my mind. I've quoted some lines below that caught my attention! QUOTE “No. We are not prostitutes, for we seldom sleep with men for money. We take lives in the name of justice; we are priestesses of a darker shade. Outsiders may look upon us with fear and disdain, and yet, they cannot look away. For we are, what in their souls, they yearn for most. We are free, free of emotion, free of love, free of fear.” Poetry this is....so beautiful! QUOTE “You mean I have to kill someone? Or sleep with someone?” Humour....dark, great humour.....I can just see her saying this! QUOTE She had embraced the skills that had been instilled in her over these many years. Because she hated him, because she wanted him to suffer. Not because Mephala was pleased by it, and not because the Black Rose wanted it. Because she did. Bang! Right in my chest!.....I almost "freeze" reading it.... QUOTE Across her back, her lute lay. Hidden in her sleeves her dagger lay. Sheer beauty! QUOTE There was a small trail of clothes leading to Brithos’ bed, and in the dark torchlight two figures moved around under the sheets passionately like a snake captured in a sack desperate to escape. This is a description I really like.....yep, I can "see" it QUOTE For the next few hours Sayuri surrendered all the details, the set, the dinner, the seduction. Then the moment of truth, how she had paralyzed him with her power. Made him to suffer, taking her time, opening the cavity in the chest… Brrr.....makes me shiver! Hey Blackie....obviously you know a great deal about how women think and react! Sayuri is thrustworthy and feels real.....and believe me....I know what I'm talking about!
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