 The Connivers of Bosmora, (a redo) |
| redsrock |
 Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
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The following will be a remake of the last one. The previous story was rushed and I just hated it. This one will be much better. Expect the first chapter to either come out tonight, or tomorrow.
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| Burnt Sierra |
May 6 2008, 03:07 PM
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 Two Headed cat  Joined: 27-March 05 From: UK |
I don't disagree with a lot that raggidman said, especially in regards to the lore, however....
It's fiction. It's an opportunity for you to show a side of Helseth that has never been publicly shown before, if that's what you choose to do, especially as it deals with a character (Sirius) who knew Helseth as an adult long before we ever met him in the game. Plus we have no way of knowing what you're planning on making Helseth do in the future anyway - for all we know you may be planning on double crosses galore in the future. Or not. Who knows? That's the beauty of it. Lets not get ahead of the author, we don't know what he has in store for us yet. He's 100% right about Caldera though  |
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redsrock The Connivers of Bosmora Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
redsrock Prologue
“No, anyone but him, Velanda. Surely yo... Apr 28 2008, 03:43 AM paragenic The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was a... Apr 28 2008, 11:42 AM
redsrock
The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was ... Apr 28 2008, 09:28 PM The Metal Mallet Eh, I would've suspected the Councilors that w... Apr 29 2008, 02:11 AM redsrock Thanks, Mallet. The next chaper is almost done, bu... Apr 29 2008, 02:23 AM redsrock CHAPTER ONE
After the other councilors had left... Apr 30 2008, 12:16 AM jack cloudy I like the intrigue. You really manage to put Hels... Apr 30 2008, 10:07 PM redsrock Exactly. Helseth is in full control for now.
CHA... May 1 2008, 12:54 AM treydog I like the way you move the story along, leaving u... May 2 2008, 12:52 PM raggidman ok - what's the hold up? Get your pen moving ... May 2 2008, 04:55 PM redsrock Yes, Trey, tense is what I am really working on be... May 2 2008, 08:24 PM redsrock CHAPTER THREE
“Yes, my lord, the target has tak... May 2 2008, 10:33 PM redsrock CHAPTER FOUR
When Sirius finally woke up he fou... May 3 2008, 10:03 PM redsrock CHAPTER FIVE
Dorvel was in fact waiting in the ... May 5 2008, 11:45 PM Lordban Nice to see you're still writing, and you... May 6 2008, 09:36 AM redsrock Thanks, Lordban. And just so you know, I do rememb... May 6 2008, 11:46 AM raggidman There are two a few details that you might usefull... May 6 2008, 01:32 PM redsrock
- know what I mean?
No, actually I am totally l... May 6 2008, 01:49 PM raggidman Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to th... May 6 2008, 01:54 PM redsrock
Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to t... May 6 2008, 01:55 PM raggidman Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran ... May 6 2008, 01:57 PM redsrock
Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran... May 6 2008, 02:01 PM raggidman 'pologies - the second bit is actually more co... May 6 2008, 02:21 PM redsrock Yeah, everything is clear. Helseth may be differe... May 6 2008, 02:42 PM redsrock Lol, I had no clue about Caldera. Thanks, Raggidma... May 6 2008, 03:08 PM raggidman You're both correct - a story is a story. And... May 6 2008, 05:06 PM paragenic I'm surprised to read in here that Caldera is ... May 7 2008, 07:43 AM Alexander
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I've actually always been unde... May 7 2008, 09:30 AM BSD-IES I've always believed Caldera is Hlaalu because... May 7 2008, 08:37 AM raggidman :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns, ... May 7 2008, 10:22 AM paragenic
:O what I have done? everyone discussin towns,... May 7 2008, 11:35 AM redsrock
and also shows why Connivers of Bosmora is such... May 7 2008, 03:44 PM redsrock I don't really mind you all discussing it here... May 7 2008, 12:53 PM raggidman :rofl: May 7 2008, 12:55 PM raggidman Well look at the Council - they are all conniving ... May 7 2008, 07:04 PM redsrock Oh, lol, ok. I don't why, but I thought you we... May 7 2008, 07:19 PM raggidman nah - just this old man maunderin on and diggin fo... May 7 2008, 09:11 PM redsrock
ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed ... May 7 2008, 11:21 PM raggidman
ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed... May 8 2008, 09:59 AM redsrock Not my favorite chapter for some reason, but here ... May 8 2008, 12:08 AM redsrock CHAPTER SEVEN
He awoke to the sound of heavy kno... May 9 2008, 09:40 PM raggidman Cards to the chest eh? Poor Sirius definitely nee... May 9 2008, 09:49 PM redsrock
Did you ever see the film Cat Baloo?
No, not re... May 9 2008, 09:54 PM redsrock CHAPTER EIGHT
All five councilors, plus Helseth... May 11 2008, 08:38 PM raggidman Oooowh - poor Sirius is in real trouble now - a wo... May 11 2008, 08:53 PM redsrock What did you think of the riddle, Raggidman? May 11 2008, 09:38 PM raggidman :nono: naughty riddle - the place where the sun d... May 11 2008, 10:24 PM redsrock CHAPTER NINE
The moment after Sirius shut the d... May 17 2008, 02:17 AM raggidman ouch - this is getting seriously Helsethian May 17 2008, 09:46 AM redsrock CHAPTER TEN
Sirius walked away from the restaur... May 20 2008, 01:45 AM redsrock CHAPTER ELEVEN
The “Lucky Lockup’s” owner had in... May 23 2008, 07:05 PM |
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