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redsrock
post Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
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The following will be a remake of the last one. The previous story was rushed and I just hated it. This one will be much better. Expect the first chapter to either come out tonight, or tomorrow.


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paragenic
post May 7 2008, 07:43 AM
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I'm surprised to read in here that Caldera is a Hlaalu town. Before I read any of this thread I would say

(Note italics which denote I WOULD have said this) It is true that of the three houses, the Hlaalu get along best with the Imperials, and this is evidenced by the fact that in Balmora, the Mages and Fighter's Guilds are smack in the middle of town and the Thieves' guild at a competely different location, whereas in Ald'ruhn all Imperial guilds are rounded up at the extremity of the city, and in Sadrith Mora they're practically banished and huddle outside the city in or around Wolverine Hall. It's also stated in the game that Hlaalu get along best with the Imperials...

But Caldera, like Pelagiad, Seyda Neen, Gnisis, and Ebonheart are Imperial cities. It is true that house Hlaalu have agents in Caldera and in Ebonheart, but that doesn't make them into a Hlaalu city. The giveaway is the town guard. Look at a city or village and you'll see the guards on the streets and in the shops will be Imperial, Ordinator, or aligned with one of the houses. That's your clue! Hlaalu cities are Gnaar Mok, Balmora, Suran, and Hla Oad. Tromping about Ebonheart are Imperial guards, not Hlaalu, so there's no way Caldera is a Hlaalu town!


But you all seem so convinced that Caldera is Hlaalu... where are you getting this from? Don't tell me you think Ebonheart is Hlaalu too because Duke Vedam Dren is there...?

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post May 7 2008, 09:30 AM
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QUOTE(paragenic @ May 7 2008, 08:43 AM) *

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I've actually always been under the impression, even though there's no Redoran noble present, that Gnisis is a Redoran town. Not in the least because of the Architecture displayed throughout the city.

And I'm certain Ebonheart, like Seyda Neen and Pelagiad is an Imperial run town.


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redsrock   The Connivers of Bosmora   Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
redsrock   Prologue “No, anyone but him, Velanda. Surely yo...   Apr 28 2008, 03:43 AM
paragenic   The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was a...   Apr 28 2008, 11:42 AM
redsrock   The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was ...   Apr 28 2008, 09:28 PM
The Metal Mallet   Eh, I would've suspected the Councilors that w...   Apr 29 2008, 02:11 AM
redsrock   Thanks, Mallet. The next chaper is almost done, bu...   Apr 29 2008, 02:23 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER ONE After the other councilors had left...   Apr 30 2008, 12:16 AM
jack cloudy   I like the intrigue. You really manage to put Hels...   Apr 30 2008, 10:07 PM
redsrock   Exactly. Helseth is in full control for now. CHA...   May 1 2008, 12:54 AM
treydog   I like the way you move the story along, leaving u...   May 2 2008, 12:52 PM
raggidman   ok - what's the hold up? Get your pen moving ...   May 2 2008, 04:55 PM
redsrock   Yes, Trey, tense is what I am really working on be...   May 2 2008, 08:24 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER THREE “Yes, my lord, the target has tak...   May 2 2008, 10:33 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER FOUR When Sirius finally woke up he fou...   May 3 2008, 10:03 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER FIVE Dorvel was in fact waiting in the ...   May 5 2008, 11:45 PM
Lordban   Nice to see you're still writing, and you...   May 6 2008, 09:36 AM
redsrock   Thanks, Lordban. And just so you know, I do rememb...   May 6 2008, 11:46 AM
raggidman   There are two a few details that you might usefull...   May 6 2008, 01:32 PM
redsrock   - know what I mean? No, actually I am totally l...   May 6 2008, 01:49 PM
raggidman   Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to th...   May 6 2008, 01:54 PM
redsrock   Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to t...   May 6 2008, 01:55 PM
raggidman   Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran ...   May 6 2008, 01:57 PM
redsrock   Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran...   May 6 2008, 02:01 PM
raggidman   'pologies - the second bit is actually more co...   May 6 2008, 02:21 PM
redsrock   Yeah, everything is clear. Helseth may be differe...   May 6 2008, 02:42 PM
BSD-IES   I don't disagree with a lot that raggidman sai...   May 6 2008, 03:07 PM
redsrock   Lol, I had no clue about Caldera. Thanks, Raggidma...   May 6 2008, 03:08 PM
raggidman   You're both correct - a story is a story. And...   May 6 2008, 05:06 PM
BSD-IES   I've always believed Caldera is Hlaalu because...   May 7 2008, 08:37 AM
raggidman   :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns, ...   May 7 2008, 10:22 AM
paragenic   :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns,...   May 7 2008, 11:35 AM
redsrock   and also shows why Connivers of Bosmora is such...   May 7 2008, 03:44 PM
redsrock   I don't really mind you all discussing it here...   May 7 2008, 12:53 PM
raggidman   :rofl:   May 7 2008, 12:55 PM
raggidman   Well look at the Council - they are all conniving ...   May 7 2008, 07:04 PM
redsrock   Oh, lol, ok. I don't why, but I thought you we...   May 7 2008, 07:19 PM
raggidman   nah - just this old man maunderin on and diggin fo...   May 7 2008, 09:11 PM
redsrock   ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed ...   May 7 2008, 11:21 PM
raggidman   ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed...   May 8 2008, 09:59 AM
redsrock   Not my favorite chapter for some reason, but here ...   May 8 2008, 12:08 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER SEVEN He awoke to the sound of heavy kno...   May 9 2008, 09:40 PM
raggidman   Cards to the chest eh? Poor Sirius definitely nee...   May 9 2008, 09:49 PM
redsrock   Did you ever see the film Cat Baloo? No, not re...   May 9 2008, 09:54 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER EIGHT All five councilors, plus Helseth...   May 11 2008, 08:38 PM
raggidman   Oooowh - poor Sirius is in real trouble now - a wo...   May 11 2008, 08:53 PM
redsrock   What did you think of the riddle, Raggidman?   May 11 2008, 09:38 PM
raggidman   :nono: naughty riddle - the place where the sun d...   May 11 2008, 10:24 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER NINE The moment after Sirius shut the d...   May 17 2008, 02:17 AM
raggidman   ouch - this is getting seriously Helsethian   May 17 2008, 09:46 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER TEN Sirius walked away from the restaur...   May 20 2008, 01:45 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER ELEVEN The “Lucky Lockup’s” owner had in...   May 23 2008, 07:05 PM


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