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redsrock
post Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
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The following will be a remake of the last one. The previous story was rushed and I just hated it. This one will be much better. Expect the first chapter to either come out tonight, or tomorrow.


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post May 9 2008, 09:40 PM
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CHAPTER SEVEN

He awoke to the sound of heavy knocking. Within seconds Sirius realized he was back in Mournhold, no less inside of his house. He got up from the ground, but then almost stumbled back down because he was still dizzy. He did his best to hustle to the door, and it was Hession, standing there with a worried expression.

“Sirius, it’s three o’clock. Are you okay?”

Right then he was about to tell Hession everything that had just happened, but then he thought a little more. Perhaps it wasn’t too good of an idea to tell her, at least not yet. Hell, Sirius wasn’t even one hundred percent sure of what had happened.

“Yeah, I’m fine. Sorry, Hession, I must’ve fallen asleep. I didn’t get a lot of rest last night,” he lied.

Hession gave him a weird expression, looking him up and down. “Well, you sure don’t look good. Your face is extremely pale. Are you sure you’re okay?”

“Of course, of course, just…a, just a little too much wine,” he said, stuttering the entire time. Fortunately for him Hession seemed to have believed the fib.

“That does sound like you, Sirius,” she said with a cheery smile. “I was just so worried when you didn’t show up at The Winged Guar. I thought something awful happened to you.”

Sirius shuffle his feet, wanting to leave the awkward situation. “No, I’m still alive, for now anyways,” he laughed, an awkward one at that. “Listen, Hession, I have a very important appointment with you-know-who soon. How about I meet you for breakfast tomorrow?”

“I’d love to, Sirius. Just remember to show up this time!”

She then waved goodbye and finally Sirius was able to shut the door. He immediately pressed his back against the door and sat on the floor. His adrenaline was running full blast and his hands were shaking like an exotic bar-dancer. And also, he was more scared now than he had ever been in his life.

He was scared that somehow three strangers had broken into his home. He was scared because those strangers somehow teleported him to an unknown location. And he was scared because those strangers, and their master, were apparently involved somehow with the disappearances in Balmora. And if those bodies really were the ones of the people who vanished, then it was now known that they were dead, and not just vanished.

He went straight for his downstairs cupboard and down four bottles of hard beer in less than two minutes. So far ever since arriving in Mournhold he was able to partially control his thirst for alcohol, and he only drank when he wanted to. But now it was controlling his life, forcing him to drink out of pure stress and fear. Though Sirius would never admit he was an alcohol. Of course, alcoholics never do.

After trying to drink his problems away, it didn’t work, as always. He stumbled outside and walked all the way to the palace, taking him ten minutes when should have taken him no more than three. Along the way he received many disproving stares, but thankfully most of Mournhold’s inhabitants didn’t yet know Sirius was back in town. When he entered the palace lobby, it was around three forty-five in the afternoon. One of the guards gave him a strange stare and muttered, “Damn, you don’t look too good.” Before he could even get one word out Sirius vomited all over the carpet.


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“You’re going to have cease with the drinking, Sirius. I can’t have you stumbling through my town like this.”

Sirius was sitting in his office with Helseth, the two of them alone for the moment. But that would change in a matter of a few hours, and soon the room would be filled with the five Hlaalu councilors and their arrogant voices. Sirius couldn’t stand any of them.

“I had good reason to get drunk, Hlaalu. You can’t even begin to understand.”

“The King of Morrowind shook his head and at the sad state that Sirius was in. He sighed inside of his head and then said, “Alright, please explain to me why you vomited all over my expensive carpet.”

“To hell with you damn expensive carpet, Hlaalu! You think I give a rat’s boat about that?”

“No, I don’t,” Helseth said calmly. “But I didn’t bring you here to get drunk, either. You are here to offer the services I know you are capable of. Now, tell me what happened earlier. My men told me that your face was a white as a pearl when you stumbled into my palace.”

Sirius rubbed his temple with his shaking right hand, trying to massage his awful headache. He was still a bit shaken after seeing those bodies. Sirius should have been used to such scenes, seeing as how he used to be a top-notch investigator. But that was five years ago, and he was sure rusty. He quickly gave Helseth an overview of what happened, and the King was completely taken back his claims.

“Are you positive this is all real, and it’s just the effects of alcohol?”

Sirius slammed his hand on the desk and yelled, “Look at my damn hands, Hlaalu! They are shaking! Can you remember a time where I’ve been like this? I am NEVER in the state I am in now! What scares me the most is that they were able to break into my house so easily!”

“Did you lock your door when you left?”

“That doesn’t matter, Hlaalu! If I’m so important I think I need a little protection, don’t you think?”

“No, that would be a distraction, and we don’t want you to draw any attention. Whoever you spoke to, their master must be someone who knows you are here, and why you are here?”

“Do you think it’s one of the councilors?”

Helseth didn’t change his expression, but simply pondered the question. It was possible, but definitely unlikely.

“I wouldn’t bet on it, Sirius. My councilors aren’t the conniving thieves you think they are.”

The two talked back and forth for the next couple of hours or so, but not about much. Helseth wanted to save the most important stuff for when the councilors arrive, and Sirius was still trying to get over his headache. At around seven forty-five the councilors began filing in, and at eight o’clock on the mark the meeting commenced.


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redsrock   The Connivers of Bosmora   Apr 28 2008, 01:32 AM
redsrock   Prologue “No, anyone but him, Velanda. Surely yo...   Apr 28 2008, 03:43 AM
paragenic   The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was a...   Apr 28 2008, 11:42 AM
redsrock   The Conifers of Balmora, I thought the title was ...   Apr 28 2008, 09:28 PM
The Metal Mallet   Eh, I would've suspected the Councilors that w...   Apr 29 2008, 02:11 AM
redsrock   Thanks, Mallet. The next chaper is almost done, bu...   Apr 29 2008, 02:23 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER ONE After the other councilors had left...   Apr 30 2008, 12:16 AM
jack cloudy   I like the intrigue. You really manage to put Hels...   Apr 30 2008, 10:07 PM
redsrock   Exactly. Helseth is in full control for now. CHA...   May 1 2008, 12:54 AM
treydog   I like the way you move the story along, leaving u...   May 2 2008, 12:52 PM
raggidman   ok - what's the hold up? Get your pen moving ...   May 2 2008, 04:55 PM
redsrock   Yes, Trey, tense is what I am really working on be...   May 2 2008, 08:24 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER THREE “Yes, my lord, the target has tak...   May 2 2008, 10:33 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER FOUR When Sirius finally woke up he fou...   May 3 2008, 10:03 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER FIVE Dorvel was in fact waiting in the ...   May 5 2008, 11:45 PM
Lordban   Nice to see you're still writing, and you...   May 6 2008, 09:36 AM
redsrock   Thanks, Lordban. And just so you know, I do rememb...   May 6 2008, 11:46 AM
raggidman   There are two a few details that you might usefull...   May 6 2008, 01:32 PM
redsrock   - know what I mean? No, actually I am totally l...   May 6 2008, 01:49 PM
raggidman   Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to th...   May 6 2008, 01:54 PM
redsrock   Ald'ruhn was totally destroyed according to t...   May 6 2008, 01:55 PM
raggidman   Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran ...   May 6 2008, 01:57 PM
redsrock   Ah well, you were saying that the old geyser ran...   May 6 2008, 02:01 PM
raggidman   'pologies - the second bit is actually more co...   May 6 2008, 02:21 PM
redsrock   Yeah, everything is clear. Helseth may be differe...   May 6 2008, 02:42 PM
BSD-IES   I don't disagree with a lot that raggidman sai...   May 6 2008, 03:07 PM
redsrock   Lol, I had no clue about Caldera. Thanks, Raggidma...   May 6 2008, 03:08 PM
raggidman   You're both correct - a story is a story. And...   May 6 2008, 05:06 PM
paragenic   I'm surprised to read in here that Caldera is ...   May 7 2008, 07:43 AM
Alexander   <snip> I've actually always been unde...   May 7 2008, 09:30 AM
BSD-IES   I've always believed Caldera is Hlaalu because...   May 7 2008, 08:37 AM
raggidman   :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns, ...   May 7 2008, 10:22 AM
paragenic   :O what I have done? everyone discussin towns,...   May 7 2008, 11:35 AM
redsrock   and also shows why Connivers of Bosmora is such...   May 7 2008, 03:44 PM
redsrock   I don't really mind you all discussing it here...   May 7 2008, 12:53 PM
raggidman   :rofl:   May 7 2008, 12:55 PM
raggidman   Well look at the Council - they are all conniving ...   May 7 2008, 07:04 PM
redsrock   Oh, lol, ok. I don't why, but I thought you we...   May 7 2008, 07:19 PM
raggidman   nah - just this old man maunderin on and diggin fo...   May 7 2008, 09:11 PM
redsrock   ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed ...   May 7 2008, 11:21 PM
raggidman   ps the relevance of Ald'ruhn being destroyed...   May 8 2008, 09:59 AM
redsrock   Not my favorite chapter for some reason, but here ...   May 8 2008, 12:08 AM
raggidman   Cards to the chest eh? Poor Sirius definitely nee...   May 9 2008, 09:49 PM
redsrock   Did you ever see the film Cat Baloo? No, not re...   May 9 2008, 09:54 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER EIGHT All five councilors, plus Helseth...   May 11 2008, 08:38 PM
raggidman   Oooowh - poor Sirius is in real trouble now - a wo...   May 11 2008, 08:53 PM
redsrock   What did you think of the riddle, Raggidman?   May 11 2008, 09:38 PM
raggidman   :nono: naughty riddle - the place where the sun d...   May 11 2008, 10:24 PM
redsrock   CHAPTER NINE The moment after Sirius shut the d...   May 17 2008, 02:17 AM
raggidman   ouch - this is getting seriously Helsethian   May 17 2008, 09:46 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER TEN Sirius walked away from the restaur...   May 20 2008, 01:45 AM
redsrock   CHAPTER ELEVEN The “Lucky Lockup’s” owner had in...   May 23 2008, 07:05 PM


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