Excerpt from a larger event, as recalled by Jo'Rakha the Khajiit. Options

[LeTren Thundakk]

“I’ll be expecting you to leave that last detail out, Jo'Rakha.” The man sitting across from the writer said.

Jo'Rakha leaned over the table and whispered some private threat to him.

“How dare you! I am of noble origin. I can’t have that image compromised, especially not for some half-assed article.”

The Khajiit laughed.

“It may be bitter for you to ‘taste’ but nothing I do is ever half-assed! If the Great Lythandas approached me to write a book and feature his art, it would be the single greatest achievement in all of Tamriel creativity.”

The man responded with sarcasm, “Certainly you jest? ‘The Way to Daedric’ is just an example of your mockery that might one day get you killed.”

“That story is based heavily on fact. It really happened. If anyone kills me over any of my works, it’s to silence the truth. That’s why I keep tabs on you. I can’t have you getting out of hand. That’s neither here nor there, back to the main reason for requesting your presence.”

“You aren’t getting any more out of me. Anything I say from this point on is off the record!”

Jo'Rakha laughed once more.

“Too bad, then. I guess we are done here. I hope there are no hard feelings when I ruin you with this article. At least here in Morrowind you can start anew, your life in Cyrodiil is over.”

The man rose from the table and unsheathed his sword.

“I TOLD YOU, I WILL NOT HAVE MY IMAGE COMPROMISED. YOU CAN’T BE LEFT ALIVE!”

Jo'Rakha didn’t even flinch, as well placed arrows found their marks on the man’s vitals.

“You should be more careful.” The Ordinator told him.

“Thanks for the rescue.”

“Why, if he is from Cyrodiil, arrange to meet him here?”

“In Cyrodiil, the guards would arrest the man after the murder. Here, your law calls for immediate punishment.”

“Very well, then.”

He got up and left the canton. He went to the Mage’s Guild in the Foreign Quarter and paid for transport to the Arcane University in the capital of Cyrodiil, the Imperial City.

Now to take my cousins up on their offer to help write for their periodical, if the offer still stands.

This post has been edited by LeTren Thundakk: Jun 3 2008, 07:47 AM

[redsrock]

Very well written, but I have a couple of qualms. One, I find it a bit awkard that Vontus would let slip such a secret so carelessly. And two, why did he not immediatly kill the reporter? Ok, nevermind that last question, but at least why did he not have someone else kill the reporter?

Last thing, are you really tring to make this sound like a news article you would find in a real life newspaper? If so I would like to make suggestions, because I was part of a newspaper at my high school for three years, and I was Sports Editor this last year, so I think I could help out in that aspect.

Of course, that is only if you really ARE trying to make it look like a real news article.

This post has been edited by redsrock: Jun 3 2008, 08:01 PM

[LeTren Thundakk]

Very well written, but I have a couple of qualms. One, I find it a bit awkard that Vontus would let slip such a secret so carelessly. And two, why did he not immediatly kill the reporter? Ok, nevermind that last question, but at least why did he not have someone else kill the reporter?

Last thing, are you really tring to make this sound like a news article you would find in a real life newspaper? If so I would like to make suggestions, because I was part of a newspaper at my high school for three years, and I was Sports Editor this last year, so I think I could help out in that aspect.

Of course, that is only if you really ARE trying to make it look like a real news article.

The slip-up - I figured I should have mentioned the drinking, but forgot it while writing. I doubt he had time to formulate a plan to kill him.

The 'news article' - Sure any suggestions would be great.