 Meera's Dream, One girl's dream... |
| seerauna |
 Jul 2 2008, 12:06 PM
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 Finder  Joined: 18-June 08 From: Nashville  |
Hey all,
I've been reading the stories here for awhile and finally decided to post my own. Please I want feedback and critcism. Even a "hey, good work" is good, but it doesn't help me write better stories. It is a short story, but I am working on my series now. Yes, I am another writer who has been inspired by treydog.  -------------------- The arrow flies to kill
From the string it races It’s only moments until, It strikes. Shadow in Darkness- My first ongoing FanFic! |
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| treydog |
Jul 3 2008, 02:35 PM
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 Master  Joined: 13-February 05 From: The Smoky Mountains |
Nicely done. In a very short space, we learn enough of the character to feel sympathy and empathy for her... I hope you will grace us with more of your work.
-------------------- The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
The best-dressed newt in Mournhold. |
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seerauna Meera's Dream Jul 2 2008, 12:06 PM
seerauna Meera’s Dream
Meera stared at the sky and sighed.... Jul 2 2008, 12:08 PM redsrock Nice use of irony at the end, I like that. Becaus... Jul 2 2008, 08:52 PM
seerauna
Nice use of irony at the end, I like that. Becau... Jul 4 2008, 04:40 AM Lord Revan I can't say anything that Reds hasn't stat... Jul 2 2008, 10:13 PM seerauna Yea reds, please point them out to me. I might be ... Jul 3 2008, 01:42 AM redsrock
Does this mean that in order to fly she would ha... Jul 3 2008, 02:16 AM |
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