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minque
post Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM
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Ok so at last I came round to do it.....posting my story that is! I must thank all of you who have encouraged me to do it (oh yes you know who you are!)

Special thanks to Treydog who has helped me with editing and also for being a sounding-board, and thus kept me writing.

I now start with the prologue of my story just to see if you think you like it and want to read more

Enjoy!

Dedication


This work is dedicated to Treydog, whose enthusiasm encouraged me to really write this story.



Prologue.

Alone at last, I close the door behind me as I enter the small room which serves as my private library. I’m proud to say that I probably have the most complete collection of books in Vvardenfell these days, though it has taken me the last seven years to get it.

As I tucked my daughter into bed a while ago, I decided that now the time had come to write down my story. Mostly for her sake, but also for me; I need to get it off my mind, in order to continue with my life and to be able to fulfill the tasks that lie before me. Then there are the numerous questions asked by the little girl lying in the next room, unaware of the fact that she’s a miracle of the Age. . Questions about why there are so few children around and why they all seem to be nearly the same age, that is, age 5 and lower. Questions about why everyone she meets looks at me, her mother, with admiration and respect. Questions about why there is a non-ending row of visitors who want to see me and so keep me from being with her, like a normal mother would be.

I know the answers to her questions, but providing those answers means I will have to tell her the whole story, the story about me, Serene of Cyrodiil, a legionnaire’s daughter of uncertain heritage, who has become one of the most powerful and famous people in Vvardenfell….

So there it is......feel free to comment, it´s a short one I know but I have to start somehow.....


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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)

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minque
post Mar 8 2005, 11:20 PM
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I was left alone in my cell again, sitting on the bench, just waiting….staring at the little window with iron-bars without really seeing. There was no doubt I was to be sentenced to death, that being the usual punishment for murder, and in my case it was even worse….I had ended the life of an officer in The Imperial Legion. My thoughts were with those Dunmeri women in the settlement who died for trying to help me out. My despair was endless, but I couldn’t cry anymore, there were simply no more tears left.

"The events of the last days had been so stunning, so far outside my experience, that I was simply numb. Although I knew that a death sentence was almost certain, I could not even find the energy to be afraid. In three short days, I had lost my family, my freedom, and my innocence. I had killed a man- felt his warm blood on my hands. And I had been right to kill him, no matter what Imperial law said."

Then all of a sudden I felt the air tighten around me; there was a strange chill, obvious but not unpleasant. I heard a humming sound; it seemed the cell-walls were fading away; I was weightless free-floating in the void, when this soft female voice spoke.
“Serene, fear not, you are chosen. You shall be prepared for higher purposes, I shall watch over you.

The voice was merely a whisper in the air but the words infused strength and confidence in my heart. I closed my eyes and let the eerie atmosphere just sweep through me……

The door opened with a loud bang, and I once again faced my Uncle Varus, but this time I felt no fear. I gazed sternly right into his eyes, and he turned away. A faint feeling of triumph stiffened my spine. He couldn’t look me in the eyes….

Uncle Varus was accompanied by two imperial guards who held on to my arms rather harshly as they escorted me to the court-room. I still was under that Silence-spell and could not protest. I once more closed my eyes as we were heading down the narrow corridor, and then a name came into my mind…..”Azura”, the Dunmeri goddess of dusk and dawn, Azura….

The court room was filled with officers in The Legion, and a jury consisting of twelve honourable citizens sat along the left side of the room. Their faces were stern and merciless, and my heart sank; I could not possibly go free, not even with protection from some obscure Dunmeri goddess.

As I looked around I caught sight of my father, Rufus, sitting in the audience, his face totally emptied of all feelings. I cried inside for him; he had lost his only child twice, first when I ran away from home the day of my sixteenth birthday and then once more when I took the imperial officer’s life in the Dunmer settlement the day before yesterday.

The trial began. I did not hear much, for my mind was occupied trying to recapitulate as much as I could from those sixteen years I’d been on this earth. I noticed that there were two parchment rolls lying on the desk in front of the Judge, one with a white ribbon tied around it and one with a black. A thin trickle of sweat ran down my back as I understood that there could only be two ways, life or death, white and black. The jury went out for some last deliberation. After a short break the court assembled again and the jury’s representative read the verdict;

“GUILTY of murder of Crassius Varro, officer in The Imperial Legion …..

The world went black… I must have passed out for a minute or two, and then I abruptly was awake, because suddenly there was a riot in the court room, a Legionnaire in full Imperial Templar Armour rushed toward the Judge. He had a parchment roll in his hand…..a roll with a red ribbon tied around it. The Legionnaire was speaking rapidly in low tones to the Judge, and I overheard some occasional words…..”jail”…….”The Emperor”……”his orders”.
After delivering the roll, the Legionnaire stepped aside and the Judge untied the red ribbon.

“Serene Vantinius, you have been declared GUILTY of murder of Crassius Varro, officer in the Legion of The Imperial City. You will be deprived of your last name; Vantinius, because you do not belong to that family anymore….”

At that moment I looked right into my father’s eyes, but he turned away and my soul died a little bit………

”Also you are to be put in the City jail, for no less than twenty, and no more than fifty years. Court dismissed”

There was silence in the court room as the sentence was passed. Then I felt my tongue was loosened and I cried in despair;

“Father! Don’t abandon me!”

But Rufus Vantinius turned his back on me and went out of the Imperial court room together with his brother Varus.

I was taken back to my cell to gather my few belongings, because now I was to be put in the Women´s Ward of the Imperial Prison of Cyrodiil.

I did not get a cell of my own- there were three more women sitting on their beds as I arrived. The cell looked much like the former one except somewhat bigger. The beds were stacked two by two, and I got the upper one on the left side of the cell. My three room-mates looked first at each other, then at me;

“Nah, what’s ya here for?” One of them addressed me.

She was of Nordic heritage, tall, broad-shouldered, with long braids of golden hair. Her eyes were dark-blue, peering but nevertheless friendly. I told her briefly what happened to me, just omitted the most disgusting details. She told me her name was Sonya and she was born and raised in Skyrim, in a place named Falcreath. She was sentenced for slaying her father….in self-defence that was, because he had done unmentionable things to her. I shrugged; the conversation reminded me far too much of the events I’d been through.

The two other women did not say much, just told their names, Leila, a thin fragile red-haired Breton-girl of 15 years; and Almina, a stout, lethargic Cyrodiilic woman of 40. Leila, I soon found out, was sentenced to death by incineration, for witchcraft and was just waiting for the sentence to be carried out. Her deed was that she supposedly had put Black-Heart’s Disease on a Temple-servant. I did not believe for one moment that she really had committed that crime. Diseases, at least the common ones, according to my thorough studies in The Lyceum undoubtedly were acquired through contagion from germs originated from animals or dead bodies. I was very sad to hear her story and I hoped that I could find a way of saving her. Almina, on the other hand, was sentenced to do time for theft. She had stolen an exquisite robe from a trade house in The City.

After I’d heard the stories from my room-mates I lay down on my bed, and let my thoughts wander …..

I was floating again...in that strange void, everything was dense, the chill surrounded me, and there it was! The voice which this time was familiar to me; I welcomed it, though I felt a strange sense of anxiety.

“Serene of Cyrodiil, you shall not fear, for I will be watching you. Study, increase your skills. You are the hope of an entire nation. You will be the saviour of many…….”


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Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)

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minque   Serene of Cyrodiil, her true story, chapter 1   Feb 26 2005, 11:52 PM
General Edor Crespin   It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see...   Feb 27 2005, 12:23 AM
minque   It's rather short, but I am looking forward to see...   Feb 27 2005, 12:41 AM
Alexander   well I've said it before minque. excellent work :g...   Feb 27 2005, 01:54 AM
OverrideB1   And you were worried about posting this... why? ...   Feb 27 2005, 10:29 AM
Elongar   It's not that hard after all, is it? I'm not sure ...   Feb 27 2005, 11:26 AM
minque   Thank you all for your kind comments....I´ll soon ...   Feb 27 2005, 11:52 AM
treydog   After much anticipation, we finally get to see the...   Feb 27 2005, 09:45 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great job minque to bad i didn't see this earlyer....   Feb 27 2005, 09:56 PM
minque   Ok so here you are then.....the first part about S...   Feb 27 2005, 10:46 PM
minque   Just want to show some more pictures of Serene... ...   Feb 27 2005, 11:01 PM
Alexander   excellent work minque. really off to a great start...   Feb 27 2005, 11:55 PM
jonajosa   Good job. I liked it. Keep it up.   Feb 28 2005, 01:40 AM
Soulseeker3.0   way to go Minque! one question though, she whent ...   Feb 28 2005, 02:37 AM
minque   yes..she was ..her life was totally upside down an...   Feb 28 2005, 02:40 AM
Soulseeker3.0   oh well like i said, and everyone else that posted...   Feb 28 2005, 04:27 AM
treydog   One of the things I really enjoy about this story ...   Feb 28 2005, 03:11 PM
OverrideB1   Like Treydog, I think it's great that you're givin...   Feb 28 2005, 09:42 PM
Soulseeker3.0   hey minque i wanted to ask this yesterday but forg...   Feb 28 2005, 10:37 PM
minque   Ehh noo I cant say I did..in fact I do not even kn...   Feb 28 2005, 11:24 PM
Soulseeker3.0   oh nothing its just i'm reading the searies and in...   Feb 28 2005, 11:40 PM
jonajosa   Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo...   Feb 28 2005, 11:52 PM
Ze Milanio   I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ...   Feb 28 2005, 11:53 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I haven`t red the story (yet) but since I`ve seen ...   Feb 28 2005, 11:54 PM
minque   Alittle of topic but did you use mods to create yo...   Mar 1 2005, 12:15 AM
jchamber   Ok.. so the prologue showed that Serene in fact ...   Feb 12 2006, 02:50 AM
Elongar   I'm afraid I can't enlighten you but I can tell yo...   Mar 1 2005, 06:45 PM
Ze Milanio   OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ...   Mar 1 2005, 07:01 PM
minque   OK... first, sorry for the late reply - I red the ...   Mar 1 2005, 11:28 PM
minque   As I slowly walked along the Nibenay River I thoug...   Mar 3 2005, 01:44 AM
Soulseeker3.0   wow good job minque i fell sorry for the dunmer, a...   Mar 3 2005, 02:08 AM
Ze Milanio   I feel... sorrow. Sorrow and rage, the two compani...   Mar 3 2005, 12:26 PM
treydog   Moving scenes- I have always said that "art" is so...   Mar 3 2005, 02:29 PM
General Edor Crespin   Nice job, minque. Two thumbs up.   Mar 3 2005, 02:40 PM
Elongar   :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: Make that three th...   Mar 3 2005, 07:02 PM
minque   The next time I opened my eyes I encountered darkn...   Mar 5 2005, 02:29 PM
OverrideB1   This is excellent Minque. I'm really enjoying this...   Mar 5 2005, 03:02 PM
Ze Milanio   GRRRR :evil5: I feel like munching on some sewered...   Mar 5 2005, 05:17 PM
treydog   I like the fact that we have an "enemy" to focus u...   Mar 6 2005, 05:32 AM
jonajosa   Amazing. Your characters personalitys are done rea...   Mar 6 2005, 03:55 PM
Soulseeker3.0   i liuke your characters, well, not her uncle Varus...   Mar 6 2005, 06:04 PM
Elongar   More please. Encore, encore! :goodjob: :goodj...   Mar 6 2005, 06:07 PM
Magefire   This has the potential to be something wonderful -...   Mar 7 2005, 11:56 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow great minque!! i like the parts were Serene is...   Mar 9 2005, 03:37 AM
treydog   Enjoyed the trial scene- also the way we get a sen...   Mar 9 2005, 02:15 PM
minque   I opened my eyes, and sat up in my bed, still shiv...   Mar 11 2005, 09:52 PM
Oozae   A professional writer you are my young padawanhttp...   Mar 12 2005, 05:04 AM
treydog   I like the way you make the cell-mates individuals...   Mar 13 2005, 02:26 AM
minque   We ate our meal in silence. Almina helped herself ...   Mar 14 2005, 12:41 AM
Ze Milanio   The scenes and events are almost alive in my head,...   Mar 14 2005, 11:35 PM
Elongar   Let's hope she gets to wield a DDK sometime then!   Mar 15 2005, 03:06 PM
jchamber   ah thank you lots ____ V V   Feb 12 2006, 04:26 AM
minque   Aye..she will....in due time, but now the last par...   Mar 16 2005, 11:14 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great story Minque! i just read the last three par...   Mar 17 2005, 02:26 AM
minque   great story Minque! i just read the last three par...   Mar 17 2005, 08:46 AM
Elongar   If not, I'll start a petition to get him back! ...   Mar 18 2005, 07:23 PM
Soulseeker3.0   lol just have fun... i feel like an adult talki...   Mar 18 2005, 11:34 PM
jonajosa   I wrote alot at your story at ES so if you wanna k...   Mar 20 2005, 02:23 AM
Elongar   Copy an' paste?   Mar 24 2005, 05:23 PM
jonajosa   um you have to forgive a slow person of his mistak...   Mar 24 2005, 07:08 PM
Tellie   DDK= a Daedric Dai Katana. It's one of the mor...   Feb 12 2006, 11:15 AM
Daedroth   That was great! I'll be reading more from ...   Feb 28 2008, 09:03 PM
SubRosa   I just finished reading Chapter 1. Serene is a ver...   Mar 28 2010, 08:32 AM
minque   @SubRosa! I'm very flattered you took your...   Mar 28 2010, 06:25 PM
SubRosa   In the words of Kid Rock, it's not bragging if...   Mar 28 2010, 10:37 PM
minque   Ah yes...the hair-mod I used hadn't the exact ...   Mar 29 2010, 09:23 PM
mALX   I have been amazed and hooked by this story - and ...   Apr 4 2010, 11:58 PM
minque   mALX, Thank you for your kind words, I really appr...   Apr 5 2010, 12:42 AM
Remko   Just finished reading chapter one. I like it! ...   Apr 7 2010, 04:09 PM
mALX   I have to admit I cried when she was sentenced and...   Apr 7 2010, 11:38 PM
minque   mALX, Remko! i'm so glad you like my story...   Apr 8 2010, 11:08 PM
Grits   Wow, Serene has had a rough start! I’m enjoyin...   May 12 2011, 03:44 PM


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