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Andric
post May 15 2005, 01:44 AM
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I will post the next three chapters here, but so far, I only have three typed. Enjoy it, as I probably wont have the next two chapters typed in a while.

Chapter Three: The Family Seal.
(Cascus)

My name is Cascus. I come from the Cines family, a family that once was a powerful and honorable family. But one day, my family was disgraced by my brother. He left the knightly order of Raven, in Dwynnen, of High Rock, and joined a Daedric cult. And one day, he returned, leading hundreds of Daedra. That night, the entire district of my town was destroyed. Except for the family mansion. This is why the people hate us now. They think its suspicious that only our house stood. And that the army was lead by my brother. That night, I vowed to search him out, and bring him justice.

I walked down the hall to my guild dorm. Along the way, people glared at me. One even called me a swine. I ignored them as I always do. But I put up with this every day. I walked into my room. I looked above the fire place, where my guild seal hung. The seal was an emblem of two Imperial dragons, bounded together by a ribbon. But one of the heads was missing, after my brother broke it in a fight with my dad. That was the day my brother left. The room had been cleaned, so I knew that Ellone had been in here today. She left a note as well. It said on it:

“ Deer Cascus Cines
I cleaned your room for you, but you could thank me later. You shouldn’t live like such a slob. You know that rats are attracted by messy rooms.

Anyways, I met a young woman, who requested your attendance. She wants to meet up with you in the Dragon and Rock inn.

~Ellone”

Why would anybody want to meet with me? Whatever the reason, I changed out of my training cloths, which were drenched with sweat. I put my silver long sword at my side. I didn’t need my shield, as the Inn was only on the other side of the street from the guild.

There was an Imperial guard at the entrance. I walked up to him. He asked

“Are you Cascus Cines?”
“Yes, I am.”
“Please enter.” He said, stepping off to the side.

As I walked into the Inn, I noticed no one was there except a girl with long blonde hair and two guards that stood next to her. She looked over and waved.

“Where is everyone? This Inn is normally full of people at this time of the day.” I said.
“We rented the place until we finish with it. Can’t really talk to you if there’s people listening.”
“Alright, what do you want?”

She walked over and sat on a stool at the table next to me. “Come and sit.” I shut the door and sat down.

“My name is Victoria. You know, your more hansom than I you would be.” She said.
“Why does she have to do this every time?” muttered one of the guards.
“So what do you want?” I asked, getting frustrated.
“Oh, sorry. Anyways, the Emperor requested you to come on a quest. I’ve heard about your family. This could be your one chance to clear your family’s name.”
“I’m sorry, I’m not interested.” I said.
“But where else could you go? You cant stay here forever.”
“I don’t care.”

I got up and walked toward the door. But before I got there, she said something that stopped me right in my tracks.

“We have information about your brother.”

I turned around and waited.

“He is alive. But at the same time, He isn‘t.”
“That doesn’t make since at all.”
“It will if you come with us”
“…Okay. I agree.”
“I knew you wou” “However” I said interrupting.
“If I encounter him along the way, I will do anything necessary to kill him. Even if that means abandoning the mission.”
“Okay, I understand”

I walked back to my room to pack a few things before I left. I ate a quick meal, and wrote a letter to Ellone, thanking her for all her hard work. I put my shield on my back. And as I walked out, I found myself looking the seal again. And without thinking, I put it into my bag. It was now time to forge a new name. Not for my family, but for myself. The one that will track down my brother, and destroy him.


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post May 15 2005, 02:34 AM
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[quote=MerGirl][quote=Andric][quote=MerGirl]Oooh! Wonder what she means by his brother being both alive and but not alive... or whatever. Must find out! smile.gif A few typos here and there, but keep up the good work! biggrin.gif[/quote]
You might as well accept that no matter what I do, my work will always have typos :paperbag2: ...
Thanks though.[/quote]

Meh. Don't mind me. tongue.gif I am a bit of a spelling freak. So, don't take any offense, okay? smile.gif[/quote]
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Andric   The Dragon Lands/chapters 3-6   May 15 2005, 01:44 AM
MerGirl   Oooh! Wonder what she means by his brother being b...   May 15 2005, 01:58 AM
Andric   Oooh! Wonder what she means by his brother being b...   May 15 2005, 02:01 AM
MerGirl   Meh. Don't mind me. :P I am a bit of a spell...   May 15 2005, 02:32 AM
Andric   Sorry about the wait everyone   Jun 1 2005, 03:01 AM
jonajosa   Good job. Keep it up. Sorry its been awhile since ...   Jun 1 2005, 04:31 AM
Andric   Enjoy this breif chapter. :) Chapter four: Lon...   Jun 1 2005, 08:53 PM
MerGirl   Whee! *claps* You updated! :) Me happy. Please c...   Jun 1 2005, 09:11 PM
Konradude   Ack, didn't understand the last one...   Jun 1 2005, 09:17 PM
MerGirl   What didn't you understand? The last recent update...   Jun 1 2005, 09:39 PM
Konradude   Sorry, not the last one...the one before. It says ...   Jun 1 2005, 09:47 PM
Andric   Sorry, not the last one...the one before. It says ...   Jun 1 2005, 10:12 PM
MerGirl   Ah, okay. It's been awhile, so my memory may be fo...   Jun 1 2005, 10:17 PM
Andric   Ah, okay. It's been awhile, so my memory may be fo...   Jun 1 2005, 10:18 PM
MerGirl   Oh, okay. The only problem I see that may cause co...   Jun 1 2005, 10:21 PM
Konradude   Uh.. ith ink I get it now...   Jun 1 2005, 10:54 PM
Dantrag   great story, andric!   Jun 2 2005, 04:19 PM
Andric   Alright. Im finaly done typing chapter six. And Im...   Jun 7 2005, 03:28 AM
Dantrag   good work Andric! Just a question...why are you...   Jun 7 2005, 03:48 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Ah great Andric... very nice, keep it up :goodjob:   Jun 7 2005, 04:31 PM
MerGirl   good work Andric! Just a question...why are you...   Jun 7 2005, 07:15 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Hehe, guess me and Anderic is the only one that ha...   Jun 7 2005, 07:22 PM
MerGirl   Hehe, guess me and Anderic is the only one that ha...   Jun 7 2005, 09:05 PM
Andric   [quote=Fuzzy Knight] “I don’t really know. Lots o...   Jun 7 2005, 10:31 PM
MerGirl   Its Isabel. Ack, no! My memory! It's gone! I ...   Jun 7 2005, 10:40 PM


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