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JJPro612
post Feb 14 2005, 03:04 AM
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Joined: 13-February 05
From: City of Brotherly Love, USA



Chapter 1 of Life Begins
Chapter 1 Focuses on Justin's life between Sedya Neen and Balmora
Chapter 1 Has Five Parts to it.
Thanks to Minque i got to post all of Chapter 1 so far in one fourm....and thanks to the Feedbackers in ELder Scrolls Fourms, this story will cont. there too.

Part 1 Chapter 1


A voice, female narrorated his dream. Visions of vast land, horrible creatures. A land called Morrowind, a land infected with blight. A Wall, he saw, a tall wall, protecting an evil force threatening this land. Before he can see more, a different voice came to him.
"Wake up! Wake up! You’re shaking! What’s wrong! Wake up!
Who was that? A dark voice telling him to wake up.
"Stand up...there you go. You were dreaming...what’s your name?"
The same dark voice opened his eyes, who was it? He stood up like he was told, but he didn’t know if was awake or dreaming. He couldn’t remember a thing, except his name, and race. He knew nothing of his past, and where he came from. .He saw a Dummner man, and replied to his question.
"Justin" he said "Who....Who are....You?
"Juib, don’t be afraid, how could you, not even last nights storm could wake you. I heard them say we reached Morrowind, I’m sure they will let us go."
A short pause, and Juib's eyes widen, he heard footsteps coming near, the boat probably already docked.
"Quiet! Here comes the guard."
The guard came toward Justin and didn’t look like he was very fond of the stink that was present near us.
"This is where they want you. Follow Me." The Guard quickly said.
"Better do what they say. Don't worry I will see you again sometime again, Good Luck, Justin." Juib said to Justin as a farewell.
Justin followed the guard to the second level of the deck. He glanced upon a woman, Breton or Imperial he thought. The woman looked back in disgust. Justin could tell the woman wasn’t very fond of his presence.
The guard came to a stop near a flight of stairs and stated, "Get yourself on deck and let’s keep this as civilized as possible."
Justin got up on deck and met a Redguard wearing an Imperial Chain Cuirass, greaves, and boots. He didn’t have time to look what he was holding and whatever.
"This is where they want you. Head down to the dock and they'll show you to the census office." The Reguard said politely,
Justin knew the Redguard wasn’t that disgusted as that woman was on the second level of the ship.
Justin headed down to the dock, with his papers in his hand. Another Man approached him. In Imperial Chain wear.
"You finally arrived but our records don’t show from where." The Man asked.
Justin handed his identification papers. Justin was a 5 foot 6 inch Boomer. Male. Earring on his left ear, and no facial hair.
"Well, I’m sure you'll fit right in. Follow me up to the Census Office and they will finish your release."
Justin followed him up to the Office entrance door, and walked through.
Justin entered the room and stared directly in front of him. There was a man in a red robe and looked kind-of old. White hair, and about five inches taller than he was. Introduced himself as Socusius Ergalla.
"Ah, yes, we have been expecting you. You'll have to be recorded, before you’re officially released. There’s a few ways we can do this and the choice is yours." Ergalla complied
Ergalla gave the choices of choosing from a list of classes which he though would fit his description, answering questions so he can tell what kind of man he is, or tell him what he already excels him and is different from the choice of classes on the list.
Justin thought of himself as an Assassin. Specializing in Stealth, Speed, and Agility. He wasn't quite fond of his past life before he arrived to Morrowind, but a couple of things he thought he excelled in. He was very good in Marksman. Bows and Arrows and what not. He prospered in Security,
unlocking and disarming skills. He was very strong under the armor protection such as glass or chitin. He was very quick and nimble making sneaking an easy sort. Also he thought he majored in Short Blade, good for close range attacks, or assassination attempts.
He also thought he excelled in the art of Acrobatics, Illusion, Alchemy, Mercantile, and Speechcraft, but not something he majored in. Acrobatics because his skill in speed and agility. Illusion because his love for stealing goods without being detected. Alchemy because he thought of
surviving in the wild of animal meat, other than store bought artificial meat. Mercantile because he wanted to keep save money, and some charge too much. And lastly Speechcraft because he knew if he excelled in speech it would be easier to gather important information.
As Ergalla was recording what he heard what Justin describe him as, he wasn't really caring about why he is choose it... He just wanted some Mead, Justin thought.
minutes later Ergalla was done and Justin was told to review it.
"Show your papers to the captain and you gather your release fee..." Ergalla said as he sat back down and popped open a bottle of mead.
Justin walked to the door and the guard spoke to him,
"Continue to the next door and talk to Selius Gravius...”
Justin did as he was told. He walked through the door the guard opened for him. He stepped two feet from the door and the door shut behind him...He looked around, not a single guard, he saw a dagger on the table, a lockpick, and a small chest. He grabbed them. He took the Blade, examined it, and holstered it. Then he took the lockpick and squatted down to reach the small chest on the bottom shelf of the bookshelf. He put it in and carefully, taking his time, turned it. Slowly he made his way up to opening it...and inside was 30 septims, or 30 drakes, or even 30 gold coins.
He continued into the next door which lead outside, But still walled in, just in case of escaping, although the idea didn’t come to mind. Still no guards nearby, He thought for a second, he was close to being officially free. Before he entered the next door, he saw a barrel, and looked in it. There was a ring, an enchanted ring. Engraved on the side it said “Engraved Ring Of Healing, Cast when used." Cast When Used? The thought puzzled him.
He continued through the next door, a man in Imperial Templar armor spoke. He was the one called "Selius Gravius".
“Your papers please."
Justin gave him the papers and in return he got 81 drakes. A Package and a directions sheet.
"Continue through this door to the outside, you will come to see a large travel machine, which kind-of looks like a wooden Betty Netch, which walks. Pay the gondolier the price for Traveling to Balmora. When you arrive to Balmora, read the direction sheet I gave you. And give that package to the destination. Good Luck."
Justin knew what a Betty Netch was, he had seen them somewhere before, maybe his old home, or as he traveled to Morrowind.
Justin headed through the door....He was free at last!!!


[size=24]End of Part 1 Chapter 1


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JJPro612
post May 15 2005, 04:06 AM
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Joined: 13-February 05
From: City of Brotherly Love, USA



This part was Two Month Daelayed, i finshed it, rather than following the Main Quest i added
a little Spizzazz to it. This was planned to be long, but it wasn't i was going to put
something else, which was basically dumb. Fargoths HIding place is reveled, Justing get 100
gold, and Justin buys a Chitin Bow. He kills a Cliff RAcer, and feels all powerful. He gets Shot
by a Hunter, and Justin flees. Justin goes back in Sedya Neen , and the guards kill the Hunter.
Which is actually the Dark Brotherhood.

Part 5

Justin went off to the Lighthouse. By the sun hidden from view and the moon visialbe, it looked like it was roughly 9 o'clock. Justin will wait atop the tower until Fargoth shows up,
Justin entered the tower and saw a Dummner Lady. The Lady didnt mind Justin's presence, she seemed to know what he was doing. Justin reached the top and sat at the edge away from the Light casted from the Fire, so he will be hidden, and he waited.


Fargoth waited, Just standing there near Arriles Tradehouse. When the Moon was brightly shining and the Two Worlds outside the planet wer visable. Fargoth casted a spell. Suddenly winds started to blow, the torches burned out, and the townsfolk were trying to find, shelter, FAST!.Suddenly Time itself froze, Cliff Racers suspended in air, Fargoth leviating off the ground and red glow off him was stoped. Everything was not moving. A Dummner Came out of a cloud of mist in front of Justin. He was Blad no hair, no facial hair, no shirt, and very little armor.

"Justin, it is I Vivec, sent by Azura to be your guardian. You might no rember this but I was the one who saved you from Gaenors Rage in Valenwood. Come Justin, hold my hand and watch..."

Justin grabbed hold, and there was aflash of light.

"Justin lets view your childhood. Remember your mother, Loyal to the temple, and a follower of the Truth and Justice. Remember your father, Warrior, wealthy, and the one who trained you for hours in the burning Sun. This was all gone after the little picked-on kid down the street, Gaenor, was visited by Dagoth Ur. Dagoth Ur aged him 21yrs, and gave him super-human strength. Dagoth knew some Bosmer in your town was the one. Gaenor killed his enemies and anyone who worked against him. When Dagoth figured that Gaenor was insane, he took away his power, but left his skill in his Ebony Blade and handed it to Gaenor. Gaenor sat in home after and sat there for years. Your dad one day, was reporting to the TEmple to check on your Mother, while you were left home. Gaenor was at the temple, and Killed your mother. Your dad took out the Daedric CLaymore, given to him by his Great Grandfather, and promised to kill Gaenor. Gaenor Won. He figured that there was a son of the family also, also known as you, so he went after you. That when Azura figured you were the one. So I rushed to save you. I put you on a boat, with my loyal servant Jiub. And Transported you to Morrowind."

"But wouldn't I still be young then?"

"Yes, but during the dream you had, Azura aged you 20 years."

"Okay...How were old were you, wouldn't you have been the same age as me then?

"Im over 300 years old, the Temple hides that from the people."

"What do you mean, THE ONE?"

"Dagoth Ur, thats all im saying. Of cource he has many Tribes and Followers protecting him, as of the Blight plaguing this land."

"How am i going to fight this Dagoth Ur?"

"I'm giving you your Father's Blade. As well train you Day and Night for 15 Years, but the time on Morrowind will only change, 15 days."

"What about Fargoth?"

"Fargoth, he was the brother of Gaenor, and Dagoth Ur, visitd him in a dream. Fargoth didn't belive anything Dagoth was saying, so DAgoth Cursed him. Fargoth was insane, he was infected with Blight, and he was hated. Fargoth pulled out some of his scrolls and was about to get rid of Sedya Neen. But don't worry, belive it or not, Mephala promised that she would protect you at all costs years ago. So when you came you were watched by the Morag Tong."

"Morag Tong? Whats that?

"You'll figure out later. You need training now."

"Wheres Gaenor now?"

"Mournhold, Ordinators let him in only if he wasat peace. Crazy I think.

"Am I safe?"

Don't worry. Now stop questioning me, and lets go."

[size=18]End of Part 5
Coming Soon Chapter 2, with 3 parts


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JJPro612   Life Begins Ch. 1   Feb 14 2005, 03:04 AM
JJPro612   Part 2 Chapter 1 Justin headed through the door.....   Feb 14 2005, 03:05 AM
JJPro612   Part 3 Chapter 1 Justin was off to Balmora, and h...   Feb 14 2005, 03:05 AM
treydog   Glad to see you posting your story here- I quite e...   Feb 14 2005, 03:36 AM
minque   thank you JJ for sharing your story with us here.....   Feb 18 2005, 08:16 AM
JJPro612   Part Four And Five on Delay   Feb 20 2005, 02:16 AM
JJPro612   The Next Story   Feb 20 2005, 02:19 AM
minque   well yes! Do so....good idea, the important thing ...   Feb 20 2005, 02:37 AM
JJPro612   Part FOur   Mar 6 2005, 12:22 AM
JJPro612   Part Five Finally   May 15 2005, 04:06 AM
jonajosa   That was a great first chapter. Im glad to see thi...   May 15 2005, 04:53 AM
treydog   Some very nice plot twists here, tying together a ...   May 19 2005, 02:42 AM


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