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Olen
post Oct 31 2008, 12:41 AM
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Its been a while since I wrote anything of length but, after a few false starts, I have churned out the first few thousand words of something which could get fairly large. I'm not totally happy with it (though I doubt I ever would be) but it should improve as I get back into writing, any comments et al would be appriciated.

1. Gold

I shivered as an icy breeze touched me. Was it real? Yes. I brushed aside my doubts. The Wolverine Hall was built by dunmer: of course it was dark, damp and cold. So cold. I pulled my cloak closer about me and looked around the gloomy room of the Mages Guild. A few guttering candles cast a sickly light on heaps of shadowy grimoires. Crazy reflections scattered from the grease-smeared tangles on an alchemy table. The creation of a deranged glassblower with hiccoughs. In spite of it being Evening Star there were still a couple of mages braving the winter on Azura’s Coast. They kept their rheumy eyes fixed on whatever devilry they were working on and ignored me. I waited idly and rubbed at my arms.

A door opened and I got a brief glance of a small room behind before it was shut again by the old Argonian who entered. A frown flickered over his features as he regarded me with sharp red eyes, “You must be the man from the Fighter’s Guild. Not what I expected, but no doubt Hrundi knows what he’s at,” Skink-in-Trees’-Shade smiled, his teeth were green from chewing hackle-lo, his sour breath twisted my stomach, “I have work for you.”

“I know. What I don’t know is why you couldn’t have left it with Hrundi like any normal contract, your demands are already weird enough.” My breath left a plume of steam in the air.

“I think eight thousand drakes is enough to allow me to make demands,” the lizard paused, I shivered but said nothing. I couldn’t afford not to get the contract. “I know well enough what is required and agreed it with Hrundi but the job itself requires discretion. Hrundi lacks discretion when he drinks…

“Three months ago I sent a group to investigate a ruin on the coast north of Firewatch, just south of Ilethi Point. The last report I received was dated late Frostfall, over six weeks ago. I want you to find out what happened.”

“What sort of ruin is this?” I said warily.

“Its… unusual. That’s why we want to investigate it and why this situation requires subtlety. I would send my own mages but it is deep in Telvanni lands.”

“Has it occurred to you that four men might be hard pressed to clear a ruin full of Telvanni?” I never understood why mages just didn’t get fighting. Another icy draught brushed me. I shivered and scratched an itchy patch on my arm.

“If it is then you will know what happened, investigate as far as you can and return. But I suspect that it is not. Most likely messages have just gone missing, as they do.” Argonians are hard to read but it didn’t take any guile to know Skink didn’t believe it. Neither did I, why spend eight thousand septims to get the best and go to such lengths of secrecy for missing reports.

I said nothing. Nothing I was likely to say would be helpful. I needed the job.

For a moment Skink was hesitant then he said, “If that is all you had best prepare. I will have a boatman waiting for you at dusk,” I nodded and turned to go but he continued, “A word of warning: do not use any teleportation near the ruin. We do not understand why but the only attempt to date prove quite… messy. If you do get into a tight spot read this,” he proffered a scroll and a money pouch, “I will know and do what I can. Otherwise do not rely on magic.”

He stopped abruptly and turned back towards his room. I was about to leave again when he called back, “And by the nine get yourself a fix with that gold. You scratch like a nix with mange.” He shut the door behind him.

For a moment I was too shocked to move. Was it that obvious? It was four days since my money had run out. I’d gone longer, but only once. Descending the dank spiral stair made my stomach shrivel and, backed up by the bag of gold, firmly killed any thoughts of going another hour without. I paused outside the fighter’s guild to fight down nausea before I went in.

Hrundi was waiting for me, “What did the old lizard want?” he asked.

“They’ve lost a bunch of folk investigating some ruin.” I wasn’t sure if Skink wanted Hrundi to know and I didn’t care.

“Same old,” Hrundi ran his fingers though his greying beard, “If I had a hundred drake for every mages’ guild expedition I’ve bailed out the mages would have paid me,” he rumbled a laugh, “So where’s the catch? You don’t give four folk a year’s wage for nowt.”

“He wouldn’t say but he wants us at the dock this evening.”

“Then Lysander won’t be joining you, news is his silt strider crashed, driver was probably pissed. I can’t see him arriving before tomorrow night.”

“Damn, that’s a problem,” it was too. Lysander was the only person I had directly asked for. The fighter’s guild in Morrowind was a shadow of what it had been before the oblivion crisis. “Are any of your local boys a quarter competent?”

Hrundi laughed mirthlessly, “You ain’t got a whole lot of choice. I’m too old, Sondryn’s already on a contract. That only leaves young Varnan.”

“There’s only three of you in the guildhall?”

“Yes. Who would want to be here? It shouldn’t matter though, the other two are good.”

“So you keep saying. Where are they?”

“Stocking up in town, I sent them to get the supply list you left.”

“Good,” I turned away from Hrundi. Now Skink had given me means to get it skooma was all I could think of. I hurried though the damp corridors and out into the squalid courtyards of the Wolverine Hall.

I kept close to the wall out of the wind-driven sheets of rain. The guard on the bridge looked as grey as the iron sky. The instant I stepped onto it I was soaked to the skin, to my left, and mercifully downwind, the giant fungus houses groaned in the storm. I turned away from them toward Muriel’s, golden light shone though the windows. I pushed the polished doorknob and stepped into the warm air of conversation and rich smell of roasting meat and beer.

However inviting I had no intention to take a seat in the common room. I hadn’t been in Muriel’s in years and didn’t remember the place. It didn’t matter. All corner clubs are essentially the same. I started upstairs and sure enough found a much smaller room full of distinctly shady characters. A grey-haired altmer looked at me as she would a gaur’s leavings on the street. I barely noticed, I could smell a sickly sweetness in the air. A dunmer opposite caught my eye and nodded. Apparently it was that obvious.

I wandered over to him. “You got skooma?”

“Yes, the finest in all Vvardenfell. You got money?” I hate pushers. There’s something about them which makes my fists itch. And they all claim to have the best.

“Let me see the goods,” I growled.

The dunmer paused to brush an imaginary piece of lint from his opulent, yet slightly too gaudy, clothes before reaching into a bag and withdrawing two vials. “This,” the dunmer gestured to the larger one with a bejewelled hand, “Is good stuff, Hlaalu import. Came in though Lake Hairan along with the standard stuff. This, on the other hand, is Tenmar white – costly but well worth it to the discerning palate.”

“How much?”

“Forty gold a quarter for the standard, sixty for the Tenmar.”

The bag had two hundred and fifty in it, even allowing for the high prices on Vvardenfell I expected more. “Half a bottle of the cheap for two hundred.”

“Not a chance. That should be five hundred.”

“I’m buying bulk. Two hundred.”

“Three hundred.”

“Ok two fifty and you’ll throw in a dash of that Tenmar white or I’ll take my business elsewhere.”

The dunmer scowled then got out his scales. I got out my pipe. His eyes widened momentarily as I measured out my dose.



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post Jan 7 2009, 07:20 PM
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QUOTE(Olen @ Jan 7 2009, 08:06 AM) *


The dawn was bright, but dark clouds conspired in the south.


I love this line. Evocative.

And excellent work, overall, of course. If she's looking for who I think she's looking for, there is more trouble to be had.


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Olen   Yesterday's Shadow   Oct 31 2008, 12:41 AM
seerauna   Nice start to this one. And we've got a skooma...   Oct 31 2008, 02:08 AM
Jac   [edit]: Let me rephrase my original comment. I tho...   Nov 2 2008, 05:02 AM
Olen   I admit it is perhaps a little slow moving (probab...   Nov 2 2008, 08:00 PM
Jac   Sorry for the late reply, but I liked the update. ...   Nov 8 2008, 12:41 AM
Olen   Another one, I'm not sure how quickly to put t...   Nov 8 2008, 12:40 PM
Olen   And another part, just a short one because that wa...   Nov 11 2008, 10:12 PM
Jac   Keep 'em coming. B)   Nov 12 2008, 04:43 PM
seerauna   Varnan looked at me, “You’re in full armour. Do ...   Nov 13 2008, 01:32 AM
bbqplatypus   Wow. This is awesome. I'll be keeping an eye...   Nov 13 2008, 06:19 PM
Olen   Cheers for the comments, there's still pleanty...   Nov 16 2008, 08:27 PM
seerauna   Your writing forces me to beg. What do the notes s...   Nov 17 2008, 12:22 AM
canis216   Very nice work, Olen. Looking forward to the conti...   Nov 17 2008, 12:30 AM
bbqplatypus   Another fascinating chapter. I'm looking forw...   Nov 17 2008, 04:49 AM
Olen   Cheers for the replies, any comments are more than...   Nov 20 2008, 06:38 PM
bbqplatypus   This is really an excellent story - quite well-wri...   Nov 20 2008, 07:03 PM
Olen   Bit of a delay this time as I'm rather busy. ...   Nov 27 2008, 10:49 PM
bbqplatypus   A very thoughtful update - plenty of fleshing out ...   Nov 28 2008, 03:32 AM
Jac   It's not everyday that you come across a prota...   Nov 30 2008, 08:47 PM
Olen   Thanks for the comments. Bit more happening in th...   Dec 4 2008, 03:23 PM
canis216   Intense. Great work.   Dec 4 2008, 03:53 PM
bbqplatypus   I've said it before, and I'll say it again...   Dec 5 2008, 08:34 AM
mplantinga   The lingering mystery and palpable fear give this ...   Dec 8 2008, 08:51 PM
Olen   Thanks for the comments, bit of a delay this time ...   Dec 11 2008, 01:34 PM
mplantinga   Sounds a bit like they've stumbled upon the la...   Dec 11 2008, 11:22 PM
bbqplatypus   I'm running out of things to say about how gre...   Dec 11 2008, 11:42 PM
Olen   10. Failed Divinity “Welcome,” its voice had the...   Dec 18 2008, 05:49 PM
minque   OMG another one I haven't yet commented on.......   Dec 20 2008, 01:21 AM
Jac   Keep up the good work, Olen. I like how you portra...   Dec 20 2008, 06:02 AM
bbqplatypus   Well, we seem to have turned over a new leaf on th...   Dec 20 2008, 07:23 AM
Olen   Ok sorry for the long wait, its all still there, w...   Jan 3 2009, 12:21 AM
bbqplatypus   Another awesome installment. And it's not eve...   Jan 4 2009, 09:51 AM
Olen   Just a short one. Cheers for the comment, there...   Jan 7 2009, 04:06 PM
Olen   13. ...In Glorious Dreams I looked at her. “We...   Jan 14 2009, 02:01 PM
Jac   This is very good, Olen. One minor problem I saw w...   Jan 14 2009, 08:19 PM
Olen   14. Shelter The yurt lay amid a mass of crates a...   Jan 22 2009, 10:46 PM
Olen   15. Wasted Dreams The stew was rich and hot and ...   Jan 29 2009, 02:26 PM
Olen   The final part, thanks to all who read an commente...   Feb 5 2009, 09:47 PM
bbqplatypus   Good story. One of my favorites. I would've ...   Feb 6 2009, 11:44 PM
Jac   I agree with BBQ that the ending seems a bit flat....   Feb 8 2009, 03:45 AM
Olen   Thanks for the comments. I agree the ending is we...   Feb 8 2009, 06:52 PM
Remko   Ye olde thread excavated :D All I can say is th...   Jun 17 2010, 02:39 PM


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