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The Incident at Rockthorn Island |
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redsrock |
Mar 11 2009, 10:17 PM
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Chapter One
Darius and his men drank to the rhythmic sounds of the wooden lutes and fiddles and the guarskin drums, the soothing sounds vibrating off of the crowded walls and their many decorative tapestries, most bearing designs of the Nine. While most of his men were drunk, Darius, along with his best friend, Ian, were not.
The tavern in Skingrad was dimply lit by candles and torches, the kind of close-knit, warm feeling Darius enjoyed almost more than anything. It wasn’t too bright, but at the same time it wasn’t too dark either; a perfect cozy atmosphere for him and his men to celebrate their latest successful mission. Killing the damned goblins hadn’t been easy, but at least they hadn’t lost any of their own in the process. Such a job Darius considered perfect, for he cared for his men’s lives more than anything, and at the same time they received a hefty amount of gold from the old rich lady that requested the goblins eliminated from existence, for the green-skin monsters had ravished her gardens long enough.
“Another round, Darius, or do you think they’ve had enough for one night?”
Darius turned to look at his friend, Ian, and smiled. “Bah, give them at least one more! They deserve it!”
Ian called for the bartender to pour another round for the twelve-man crew, and the entire tavern lit up with applause and cheers, most coming from the men that actually worked for Darius, and also from the pub’s regular drunks that were too intoxicated to know what they were cheering for to begin with.
Darius only sipped at his ale, wanting to savor the success and wealth while sober, because he knew that if he drank he’d regret it in the morning. He never was one to hold much alcohol before he was drunk, and he knew this because his playfully made fun of him for it constantly.
“Ain’t thirsty I see,” Ian said, chugging down what was left of his prior glass of Cyrodiilic ale. “That’s alright. At least it appears you’ve had quite the appetite.”
He motioned towards Darius many plates, the dishes bare of anything except useless crumbs. Ian laughed and patted Darius on the back, and the two sat back and drank it all in.
The success of the mission, not just the ale.
Soon the mercenaries of Redwood were on top of the tables, dancing like fools and singing out of tune to songs they clearly didn’t know, or were too drunk to remember. Darius and Ian howled with laughter as the men made utter fools of themselves, and even the busy bartender took time out of his work to give a laugh. Such a sight of merry men was hard to come by in Skingrad, what with the recent lightening-storms that had rolled through the region over the past several days. The fact that his tavern was finally alive once more likely played a role in the bartender’s laughter as well.
“I’ll tell you what, Ian; they sure like to party!” Darius said to Ian, still chuckling from the hilarious scene that continued to unfold in front of them.
“They sure do. But like you said, they deserve it. Y’know, I’ve been thinking about some stuff since we left the old woman’s home in the forest.”
“Yes?”
“I’ve been thinking about taking a break from the mercenary business, y’know? We have a nice amount of money, and I think I’m gonna just…go on a vacation or something. Some relax time. What would you think about that?”
Darius chuckled and drank the last bit of sweet liquid from his wooden mug. He chuckled not because he was angry, but because he had been thinking the exact same thing, only he wasn’t pondering vacation, but rather retirement.
“What would I think? I would think you’ve stolen my idea. Only I don’t want to vacation. I want to retire.”
Ian’s eyebrows raised, and he too drank the rest of his ale.
“Retirement? You’re serious?”
“Yes. I’m closing in on forty years of age. I figure I probably have enough gold retire and live comfortably. And to be totally honest with you, I felt something while fighting the goblins. It was like a voice in a way. A voice asking me if I was having fun.” Darius shook his head and sighed, watching his men continue to shout incomprehensible lyrics. “And you know what? I couldn’t give myself an answer.”
Ian only looked at his long time friend, unable to say anything. He wanted a break, yes, but the thought of retirement had never crossed his mind.
“Don’t you think that’s a sign that I need to hang it up, Ian? I mean, if I can’t decide if I’m having fun…”
“I don’t know about all that, Darius. It don’t sound like you at all. I think you’re just exhausted from the mission. Retirement? That’s funny! You’ll be fighting to your grave, and you know that!”
The two laughed at that, though Darius found the image somewhat disturbing. He had been a mercenary for as long as he could remember, and damn fine one at that. Did he really want to give it all up? Maybe Ian was right, in that Darius was simply tired from the previous mission. But still, to even ponder retirement scared the living daylights out of him.
Of course, no matter what he tried to tell himself, Darius knew the truth. It was simply hard for him to admit it. But he had thought upon the subject during their ride back from the forests southwest of Skingrad.
“No, Ian, I think I do wish to retire. I’ve never had the thought of quitting, and now that it’s come up, I see it as a sign that I must quit. I’d rather do it now then drag it out, fighting when I don’t want to. It wouldn’t be good for the men, you know. And besides, even though I’m not quite yet forty, my aching body certainly feels like it. My left knee hurts like hell, Ian. I try warm showers but it’s not helping. I hate to admit it, friend, but I believe my time is up.” For a few minutes the two stood there. Both of their glasses were empty, yet they still pretended to drink, only because they didn’t know what else to do. Though the tavern was loud with noise and fun, the silence between Darius and Ian was so much greater.
At last, Ian broke through the cold, icy silence.
“I won’t lie, Darius, I’m not sure you can retire.”
“Huh?”
“Well, for one you don’t have a whole lot of money. You have a nasty habit of spending our gold on parties and drinks for the men. And that’s great, that’s what we’ve always done and everyone enjoys it. After all, we travel all the time, so it’s not like we need to pay for anything else besides food and equipment, but now that you’re talking about retirement, there’s nowhere for you to go. You don’t have a house or manor, nor do you have enough gold to pay for one. To me it looks like you’re stuck. Obviously I don’t mind that a bit, but it’s something you should think about. If you really want to retire, you should start thinking about putting some of our profit aside.”
Ian made valid points, points Darius himself had never thought about. It was true that they were always traveling about where their contracts led them, and they spent most of their gold on food, drink, and celebrations, spending the remaining amount on new equipment.
“But you know, Darius, I still think you’re just exhausted. Perhaps you should sleep on it? Deep down inside I don’t think you really want to quit. You’re just…I don’t, I can’t really explain it, other than to say that you’re tired. Both mentally and physically I mean. So, will you at least sleep on it? For me and the men’s sake?”
“Fine, I’ll do that. For your and men’s sake,” Darius answered, though he already knew in his heart what the answer would ultimately be. Suddenly the door to the tavern swung open and the pounding fierce rain could be heard, and seen, from the dark night outside. A single man stood in the doorway, an old Breton man dressed in a lavish orange robe and clutching an expensive, cream-colored walking cane in his left hand. The music and dancing continued to play in spite of the sudden interruption, and the man squinted through the room as if he were looking for someone in particular. Once his eyes found Darius they also found that person.
The man walked up to Darius, the mercenary captain having watched him as soon as the elder had stepped foot inside the tavern.
“Darius Sintras?” the man asked, gasping for breath as if he had been running for miles, which in a way, he had. “Captain of the Redwood Mercenaries?”
Darius glanced at Ian, who was just as confused as Darius.
“Yes, I am he. Is there something wrong, sir? You looked like you’ve just run a marathon.”
The man actually managed a slight smile, though it left nearly as quickly as it had come.
“A marathon of nightmares, perhaps. A servant of mine made it aware that you and your men were present here in Skingrad. I dashed to this…hostelry…from my mansion as fast as my old legs would allow me. I was afraid you and your mercenaries had left, but fortunately that is not the case.”
“Well, here I am. What is that you want?”
“I have a situation that needs taking care of, and I’d be thrilled to pay you and your men handsomely. My son and daughter are slaves to a Nordic slaver on an island southwest of Cyrodiil. I want them back. Fifty-thousand septims is what I am offering.”
Darius took a quick glance at Ian, who only smiled and once more took a drink of his nonexistent ale.
“I’m sorry, sir, but we’re not accepting contracts right now.” Darius wanted to add that he himself likely wasn’t going to be accepting them ever again, but he didn’t. “We’re going to take a break, I think, and I don’t fifty-thousand septims would be worth it anyway. It’s nothing personal, sir, it’s just there are a total of twelve of us you see. Fifty-thousand simply wouldn’t be enough to divide between twelve people.”
The man laughed loudly, causing the bartender to look up, only to go back to cleaning his dirty dishes and mugs a second later.
“No, no, no! You misunderstand me! I mean to say that I’ll be willing to pay fifty-thousand septims to each of you!”
The mug Ian had been holding dropped to the wooden table, and his mouth hung open. Darius’ mouth was hanging open as well, but only slightly. He wasn’t sure he heard the man had actually said.
“Fifty-thousand for each of us? Sir, you do realize that totals to an amount of six-hundred thousand gold, don’t you?”
“Of course I do. I am not a dimwitted Orc after all. Also, I own a string of seven or so houses to the northeaster of here. It’s a tiny little village I guess you’d say. It’s not much, and I only use it to rent to people wishing to vacation in the beautiful region. I’ll be glad to include the village as well. From what I understand, you and your men don’t have a permanent house of residence. And while I’m sure you like the travel, don’t you think it’d be nice to always have a house when you want it?”
Darius looked to his friend, and Ian was still starting at the men, but at least by then his mouth wasn’t hanging open. Darius looked back to the man.
“Excuse me, sir. My partner and I must talk about this in private for a moment.”
The man bowed his head.
“Of course. I’ll be over there at the other corner until you’re ready. But please do hurry. My situation is of utmost important to me, and I do not wish to waste precious time.”
The man hobbled over to the other side and sat down, staring outside at the pelting rain.
“Ian, you heard how much he said, right?”
“I think so, but I’m not sure that I believe it,” Ian answered, his voice shaking with awe. “It’s…it’s just so much gold, you know? We’ve never had that much gold before. What do you want to do? Do you want to accept the offer right now?”
“I thought you wanted to take a break?”
“Not now I don’t. Not when there’s fifty-thousand septims for me on the table.”
Darius leaned back into his chair and sighed. The thought of so much wealth seemed nice, but minutes earlier he had just been speaking of retirement. Suddenly Darius had an idea.
“I know! The money and village he’ll give us I can use for my retirement! By Talos, we could all use the village for ourselves! You said that I don’t have enough right now, and I’ll admit that you’re right about that, but now I’ve found a solution! Don’t you see? I can retire, you can take over the business, and while I’m retired I can still help out, ordering equipment and keeping the place clean! We could start our own town someday! What do you think?”
“Giving me the reigns of Captain of the Redwood Mercenaries?” Ian asked, shocked beyond belief. “Wow…I don’t really know what to say. I’d accept the position, if I don’t retire of course. And I also like your idea of maybe even starting our own town someday.” “Right. But, there’s a catch to all of this.”
“There is?”
“Yes. I’m not sure I trust the man. Also, we don’t know anything about this slave lord he speaks of.”
Darius rolled his eyes and punched his friend playfully on the arm.
“Well, then let’s have him show us the gold in person, and also we’ll ask him more about the slave lord and his whereabouts. How about it, Darius? Think of the opportunity! Fifty-thousand for every one of us!”
“Fine, we’ll do it. But I’m telling you right now, Ian. This is my final decision. I am definitely going to retire. I’ll go through with what I said about the village, though. I think that will definitely work to our advantage.”
“Indeed. So, should we tell the men yet?”
“No, let them party. We’ll tell them once we see the gold. It’s not like they need to know before we make a decision. I don’t think they’ll turn down fifty-thousand septims!”
Darius walked over to the old man.
“My partner and I have decided that we’ll take on your contract, but first we’d like to see the gold for ourselves. Would that be alright?”
The old man smiled, his white beard shining in the light of the torch to his left.
“Of course. Please, please, follow me and I’ll take you to my manor!”
After Darius told the other men to keep celebrating while he and Ian went on a quick errand, the two followed the old man out into the street. The darkness of the night shrouded them from view, but unfortunately not the downpour of rain. But Darius didn’t care, and neither did Ian. It would be well worth walking through the rain.
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redsrock |
Mar 15 2009, 03:12 AM
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Chapter Two
Luckily for Darius and Ian, the walk (or rather, the fast walk) to the old man’s house was only a few short minutes. Without the rain it would have been shorter, or at least it would have seemed shorter. But again, neither Darius nor Ian cared about the rain.
For a second Darius thought the man lived in one of the city’s hotels, for when they stopped they stood in front of a whopping three-story building, the door bordered with silver, and some sort of gold-plated shield fastened to the top middle of the door. Such a manor reminded Darius of the luxurious manors in the Imperial City, but he also thought perhaps this particular manor beat all of them. It wasn’t just that the manor was three-stories tall. No, it was more than that. A certain vibe that Darius couldn’t quite put his finger on.
A balcony rested at the third level, a place of comfort that the old man used in times of hardship and when he simply needed to be alone. In fact, the man had been sitting up there when his servant had made him aware of Darius’ and his men’s presence, but under the roof of course and out of the rain.
“Here we are!” The old man announced. “Please, please, follow me out of this rain!”
He opened the door to the manor, and the three walked in.
The first thing Darius noticed once they were inside was that the old man had an obvious love for plant life. The room they entered was a large one that seemed to be the foyer of the manor, and strewn about where various types of flowers of all different sizes and colors. Darius wasn’t a botanist by any means, but nevertheless he found the flowers absolutely gorgeous.
Also in the room where two young Imperial men, both of them wearing a black and white suit with their hair gelled back. Darius easily recognized them as servants. They looked rather fancy, and both of them were placing some sort of portrait on the wall. It was a painting of the old man himself, and beside him were two children; a boy on his left and a girl on his right. Both had colorful blonde hair, unlike the old man’s hair that was as white as the fur of the wolves that prowled the snowy Jerall Mountains.
But they didn’t stay in the foyer for long. After the old man whispered in the two servants’ ears, they quickly left the room heading for an open doorway in the far right corner. After they left the old man smiled and motioned for Darius and Ian to follow him through an open doorway in the far left corner. And that is exactly what they did.
Through the doorway they went, and then immediately up a flight of stairs, and then yet another flight until they finally reached the third level. They walked down a hallway decorated with various portraits and paintings, most bearing the children and the old man. Surprisingly there was no woman to be found in neither the portraits nor the paintings. No mother to accompany the father. Darius thought this exceptionally strange, but he said nothing, mostly because it wasn’t any of his business.
At the end of the hallway was a door, a door with a similar silver frame the outside entrance had. Like the front door, this one had a decorative shield as well, but unlike the front door, it was red instead of orange. To Darius it looked like painted stone. Chiseled into the stone was VENCINE, in fancy writing that took Darius a few seconds to make out. But as soon as he actually made the writing out, the old man opened the door and told them to step inside.
Inside was the old man’s room. There was a large bed in the far corner, a couple of desks, a few dressers, several books shelves, plants scattered about throughout the room, and plenty more portraits and painting on the cream-colored walls. Looking at the cane and then the walls, Darius noticed they were the exact same color. “Welcome, welcome!” The old man said. “As I’m sure you’re already aware, this is my bedroom. The entrance to the holding chambers of my wealth is in here somewhere, but before we get to that I would like to introduce myself. I would have already done so, yet I thought we’d wait until we escaped the rain’s pelting arrows.
The old man bowed, his long, stringy wet hair dangling over his head, hair not yet quite as white as his beard.
“My name is Remulas Vencine, owner of this magnificent manor. But please, do refer to me as Remy. That was my nickname during my years at the Arcane University a long, long time ago, and I’ve grown quite partial to it over the years.”
Darius did a short bow of his own.
“You already know who I am. This here is my great friend, Ian Goldsmith.”
The old man’s eyebrows rose with curiosity.
“A Redguard with a last name? How strange. Such a thing is quite…rare, if I may. Or at least, I’ve never encountered many a Redguard with a last name.” Ian chuckled and shrugged his shoulders. “I was raised by a family of Imperials, pretty much from birth if I remember right. The last name isn’t really my true last name. I’ve never met my real parents.”
“Oh, I am sorry for bringing up such a sad remembrance.”
“Don’t be. Like my adopted father liked to always say, “What you do not know cannot hurt you’.”
Remulas smiled. “Ah, and what a true saying that is! Now, enough with the chit-chat. We all know why you two are here, and it certainly isn’t to stand here and listen to me ramble along like the old geezer that I am! Please, follow my lead and I’ll show you to my holding chamber.”
Remy limped over to the bookshelf closest to his bed, the soft pitter-patter of his cane against the carpet the only sound in the entire room. He grabbed the brass handle of an unlit candle stick on the middle part of the three-row shelf and tugged. A rumbling vibration began to fill the room, and as Remy began to walk backwards the shelf swung open, revealing an open entrance into an extremely dimly lit tunnel.
At first Darius and Ian saw nothing much but darkness, but as they stepped forward to where Remy was standing, they saw the few torches that lined the stone walls of the very thin corridor.
“And this,” Remy began, a smile spread across his face, “is the hidden pathway to the hidden entrance of my hidden chambers. Follow me, and do please be careful. There isn’t much room in this tunnel, and if one is not careful they’ll bump their arms and legs.”
Darius and Ian trailed behind Remy as he led them into the hidden entrance, the warmth from the many candles back inside the room fading little by little, until behind them the bookshelf itself closed back to its original space once everyone was inside the dark, stone passageway.
Down the tunnel they went, until finally coming to another door. Except this one had no silver frame, nor did it have any fancy shield. It was as plain as a door could be, and with one mutter of Remy’s breath it swung open with a speed so slow that Darius thought Remy was doing it on purpose for effect.
But as the door opened, the tunnel began glowing with a shimmering light that actually blinded Darius and Ian for a second. They quickly shielded their eyes with their forearms, and once they regained their eyesight the door had fully opened, and what they saw next was something they had only dream of. Through the doorway was a large room, a room at least two times as big as Remy’s room. Covering almost the entire floor of the room were gold coins, gems, silver and gold cups, and other various and expensive items. The room glowed from the beauty of the riches, helped along by the torches that lined the walls as well.
“I…what…by Talos,” Darius whispered, amazed at what he was seeing, wondering for the slightest second if he was dreaming.
Remy laughed a deep laugh that filled the corridor. He stepped inside the room and onto a bare path on the stone floor. He snatched one of the torches from the walls and motioned for Darius and Ian to come. For what seemed like an eternity they simply stood there, gawking at what had to have been millions upon millions worth of gold and other treasures. Finally Darius took a deep breath and stepped forward, Ian following close behind just a second later.
“So, am I still lying?” Remy asked, chuckling.
Darius shook his head. “I never thought you were outright lying. I just…I…”
“You didn’t trust me.”
“Right. Sorry.”
“There’s no need for an apology, Darius. I’m not surprised in the least that you didn’t trust me at first. In fact, I would have been an eency bit tentative if you had trusted me from the get-go. ‘A man must earn trust’, or so said my father.” He looked over at Ian and smiled. “It appears your father isn’t the only one with clever sayings.”
“Indeed,” Ian said, his eyes not having yet left the gold.
Remy picked up a handful of coins and then let them fall by back down into the enormous pile on the ground.
“Now that this has been taken care of, I presume that we are in agreement?”
“Yes,” Darius said. “But we need to know more of this Kjeld the Bold, and also of this Rockthorn Island. I don’t believe I’ve ever heard of either.”
“Unfortunately there isn’t a whole lot I can say, for I’ve never actually been the island myself, and I’ve only met with Kjeld once. I’ll tell you this, though, the Nord is a snake. If I wouldn’t have needed the money I never would have sold my children to him to begin with.”
And the fact that Remy had sold off his kids to a slaver finally hit Darius, and rather hard at that. Before, Darius and Ian were too concerned about the gold. However, now that the novelty was starting to wear out, he realized that he didn’t yet trust this man as much as he thought he did. Darius didn’t have any kids of his own, but at the same time he couldn’t even dream of selling his kids into slavery if he did have any.
“About that…why did you sell your children into slavery?”
“I’m sorry, Darius, but such a question you are not entitled to. It’s a very shameful story, and I do not wish to speak of it ever again.”
“Yes, of course, I’m sorry I asked.”
“Again, Darius, you don’t have to be sorry. Curiosity is as natural as breathing. Let me just say this. I was in dire need of help, and Kjeld was the only man who would give me that help. The way he explained things was that I was only giving my kids up for a few months, until I scrounged up enough gold to buy them back. But apparently that wasn’t the case, and Kjeld won’t even recognize me. I sent a letter to him weeks ago, and he replied saying that he didn’t know who I was. I told you the Nord was a snake!”
“What about all of this gold? All of this…stuff?” Ian asked, his eyes having finally left the treasures and riches strewn across the floor.
Now he was looking into Remy’s eyes, attempting to figure out whether the old man could be trusted or not. In the beginning he didn’t care simply because he wanted the gold, but now he wondered. Where did it all come from? And apparently it had all come suddenly. How?
“Again, these aren’t questions of your concern. Let me tell you this…Ian, since your eyes are telling me that you’re having doubts about all of this as well. I obtained these riches legally. I swear to Talos on that.”
Ian looked to Darius, who simply shrugged his shoulder. Deep down inside, neither of them trusted Remy. But at the same time, they could say that for a vast majority of their past clients, and it hadn’t stopped them then.
“Fine,” Darius said, motioning with his hand for Ian to back down with the questions. “We’ll do it. Still, that doesn’t change the fact that we know literally nothing of this Kjeld, nor do we know anything about Rockthorn Island. I take it I should already know of these people?”
“Well, I would say so,” Remy began, “But on the other hand I’m not surprised. Kjeld likes to keep things hush, if you know what I mean. And don’t even think the Emperor cares, because he doesn’t. I went to him and told him about the slave children, but he sent me away calling me insane. The worst thing about it, though, is that I’m not sure whether he knows about the slaving mines or not. I really don’t. Something tells me Kjeld goes at great lengths to make it seem as if nothing is afoot. I know all of this sounds crazy, but it’s true. And you may not believe that there are slaving mines to begin with, but you’ll simply have to trust me. As for more information, though, I’ll have to give you a name of a person I know in Anvil.”
“Why a person in Anvil rather than yourself?” Ian asked.
“Because I don’t know anything else myself,” Remy replied curtly, his eyes squinting at the Redguard. He was starting to dislike Ian and his pestering questions. “You act as if I am trying to stab you in the back, when in reality all I want is my children back.” Then he looked back to Darius. “Now, do you want to the name of the informant or not?”
“Of course we do. Don’t mistake Ian’s attitude for rudeness. He only wants best for our team. Surely you can understand that.”
“Yes, I do. Excuse my terseness as well. Now, the informant. His name is Shabae Assonirishpal. He’s a Dunmer, obviously. Worry not, though, he’s harmless. Crazy perhaps, but harmless. Now, please do leave as soon as possible. I wish to see my children.” He handed Darius a small blue jewel. “Here is an amulet that will allow us to communicate. Just rub the sides, and if I’m available, you’ll hear my voice.”
“What?” Darius asked, confused at such an item. “How does it work?”
Remy shook his head. “It’s too complicated. And no offence to you, Darius, but you probably wouldn’t understand it anyway.”
“Very well, we’ll get your children. But you’re going to five us half of the gold right now.”
“Excuse me?”
Darius shot a look at Ian, and even he looked surprised. “This is a dangerous mission. While I do trust you, you’re still a stranger to me. There’s no telling whether you’ll end up backstabbing us. I do trust you, but I’ll trust you even more if you’re willing to give us half the gold right now.”
“And what if I don’t trust you?”
“Our organization is known throughout the province. If I were to lie to you then you’d easily be able to get your revenge. Please, sir, give us half now and half when we bring you your children. I swear you can trust me.”
Darius extended a hand and for a moment Remy didn’t even look at it. Instead he glared into Darius’ eyes, not sure whether he was trustworthy or not. In the end, though, he figured he was. And besides, trust was a mutual tool.
“Very well, you’ll get half now.”
The two shook hands and Darius nodded.
“Ian and I will go for our men and we’ll be back for the gold. And don’t worry about transporting the gold, because we have plenty of bags and a few crates.”
The two’s hands parted, and Darius and Ian left the hidden room of riches. Ian still didn’t fully trust the man, but that was okay. Darius didn’t either.
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redsrock The Incident at Rockthorn Island Mar 11 2009, 10:17 PM Illydoor Good flow and an intriguing first chapter. I'l... Mar 12 2009, 06:42 PM redsrock Gracias, amigo. I'm glad you've enjoyed it... Mar 12 2009, 06:54 PM Olen I'm interested to see where this goes, so you... Mar 12 2009, 10:58 PM redsrock Thanks, Olen. Unlike you, though, I thought I did ... Mar 12 2009, 11:06 PM Olen That part was good. I like how this is going plot... Mar 15 2009, 06:49 PM redsrock I might well have missed an earlier suggestion tha... Mar 15 2009, 07:36 PM redsrock Chapter Three
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