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redsrock
post Mar 11 2009, 10:17 PM
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Chapter One

Darius and his men drank to the rhythmic sounds of the wooden lutes and fiddles and the guarskin drums, the soothing sounds vibrating off of the crowded walls and their many decorative tapestries, most bearing designs of the Nine. While most of his men were drunk, Darius, along with his best friend, Ian, were not.

The tavern in Skingrad was dimply lit by candles and torches, the kind of close-knit, warm feeling Darius enjoyed almost more than anything. It wasn’t too bright, but at the same time it wasn’t too dark either; a perfect cozy atmosphere for him and his men to celebrate their latest successful mission. Killing the damned goblins hadn’t been easy, but at least they hadn’t lost any of their own in the process. Such a job Darius considered perfect, for he cared for his men’s lives more than anything, and at the same time they received a hefty amount of gold from the old rich lady that requested the goblins eliminated from existence, for the green-skin monsters had ravished her gardens long enough.

“Another round, Darius, or do you think they’ve had enough for one night?”

Darius turned to look at his friend, Ian, and smiled. “Bah, give them at least one more! They deserve it!”

Ian called for the bartender to pour another round for the twelve-man crew, and the entire tavern lit up with applause and cheers, most coming from the men that actually worked for Darius, and also from the pub’s regular drunks that were too intoxicated to know what they were cheering for to begin with.

Darius only sipped at his ale, wanting to savor the success and wealth while sober, because he knew that if he drank he’d regret it in the morning. He never was one to hold much alcohol before he was drunk, and he knew this because his playfully made fun of him for it constantly.

“Ain’t thirsty I see,” Ian said, chugging down what was left of his prior glass of Cyrodiilic ale. “That’s alright. At least it appears you’ve had quite the appetite.”

He motioned towards Darius many plates, the dishes bare of anything except useless crumbs. Ian laughed and patted Darius on the back, and the two sat back and drank it all in.

The success of the mission, not just the ale.

Soon the mercenaries of Redwood were on top of the tables, dancing like fools and singing out of tune to songs they clearly didn’t know, or were too drunk to remember. Darius and Ian howled with laughter as the men made utter fools of themselves, and even the busy bartender took time out of his work to give a laugh. Such a sight of merry men was hard to come by in Skingrad, what with the recent lightening-storms that had rolled through the region over the past several days. The fact that his tavern was finally alive once more likely played a role in the bartender’s laughter as well.

“I’ll tell you what, Ian; they sure like to party!” Darius said to Ian, still chuckling from the hilarious scene that continued to unfold in front of them.

“They sure do. But like you said, they deserve it. Y’know, I’ve been thinking about some stuff since we left the old woman’s home in the forest.”

“Yes?”

“I’ve been thinking about taking a break from the mercenary business, y’know? We have a nice amount of money, and I think I’m gonna just…go on a vacation or something. Some relax time. What would you think about that?”

Darius chuckled and drank the last bit of sweet liquid from his wooden mug. He chuckled not because he was angry, but because he had been thinking the exact same thing, only he wasn’t pondering vacation, but rather retirement.

“What would I think? I would think you’ve stolen my idea. Only I don’t want to vacation. I want to retire.”

Ian’s eyebrows raised, and he too drank the rest of his ale.

“Retirement? You’re serious?”

“Yes. I’m closing in on forty years of age. I figure I probably have enough gold retire and live comfortably. And to be totally honest with you, I felt something while fighting the goblins. It was like a voice in a way. A voice asking me if I was having fun.” Darius shook his head and sighed, watching his men continue to shout incomprehensible lyrics. “And you know what? I couldn’t give myself an answer.”

Ian only looked at his long time friend, unable to say anything. He wanted a break, yes, but the thought of retirement had never crossed his mind.

“Don’t you think that’s a sign that I need to hang it up, Ian? I mean, if I can’t decide if I’m having fun…”

“I don’t know about all that, Darius. It don’t sound like you at all. I think you’re just exhausted from the mission. Retirement? That’s funny! You’ll be fighting to your grave, and you know that!”

The two laughed at that, though Darius found the image somewhat disturbing. He had been a mercenary for as long as he could remember, and damn fine one at that. Did he really want to give it all up? Maybe Ian was right, in that Darius was simply tired from the previous mission. But still, to even ponder retirement scared the living daylights out of him.

Of course, no matter what he tried to tell himself, Darius knew the truth. It was simply hard for him to admit it. But he had thought upon the subject during their ride back from the forests southwest of Skingrad.

“No, Ian, I think I do wish to retire. I’ve never had the thought of quitting, and now that it’s come up, I see it as a sign that I must quit. I’d rather do it now then drag it out, fighting when I don’t want to. It wouldn’t be good for the men, you know. And besides, even though I’m not quite yet forty, my aching body certainly feels like it. My left knee hurts like hell, Ian. I try warm showers but it’s not helping. I hate to admit it, friend, but I believe my time is up.”

For a few minutes the two stood there. Both of their glasses were empty, yet they still pretended to drink, only because they didn’t know what else to do. Though the tavern was loud with noise and fun, the silence between Darius and Ian was so much greater.

At last, Ian broke through the cold, icy silence.

“I won’t lie, Darius, I’m not sure you can retire.”

“Huh?”

“Well, for one you don’t have a whole lot of money. You have a nasty habit of spending our gold on parties and drinks for the men. And that’s great, that’s what we’ve always done and everyone enjoys it. After all, we travel all the time, so it’s not like we need to pay for anything else besides food and equipment, but now that you’re talking about retirement, there’s nowhere for you to go. You don’t have a house or manor, nor do you have enough gold to pay for one. To me it looks like you’re stuck. Obviously I don’t mind that a bit, but it’s something you should think about. If you really want to retire, you should start thinking about putting some of our profit aside.”

Ian made valid points, points Darius himself had never thought about. It was true that they were always traveling about where their contracts led them, and they spent most of their gold on food, drink, and celebrations, spending the remaining amount on new equipment.

“But you know, Darius, I still think you’re just exhausted. Perhaps you should sleep on it? Deep down inside I don’t think you really want to quit. You’re just…I don’t, I can’t really explain it, other than to say that you’re tired. Both mentally and physically I mean. So, will you at least sleep on it? For me and the men’s sake?”

“Fine, I’ll do that. For your and men’s sake,” Darius answered, though he already knew in his heart what the answer would ultimately be.

Suddenly the door to the tavern swung open and the pounding fierce rain could be heard, and seen, from the dark night outside. A single man stood in the doorway, an old Breton man dressed in a lavish orange robe and clutching an expensive, cream-colored walking cane in his left hand. The music and dancing continued to play in spite of the sudden interruption, and the man squinted through the room as if he were looking for someone in particular. Once his eyes found Darius they also found that person.

The man walked up to Darius, the mercenary captain having watched him as soon as the elder had stepped foot inside the tavern.

“Darius Sintras?” the man asked, gasping for breath as if he had been running for miles, which in a way, he had. “Captain of the Redwood Mercenaries?”

Darius glanced at Ian, who was just as confused as Darius.

“Yes, I am he. Is there something wrong, sir? You looked like you’ve just run a marathon.”

The man actually managed a slight smile, though it left nearly as quickly as it had come.

“A marathon of nightmares, perhaps. A servant of mine made it aware that you and your men were present here in Skingrad. I dashed to this…hostelry…from my mansion as fast as my old legs would allow me. I was afraid you and your mercenaries had left, but fortunately that is not the case.”

“Well, here I am. What is that you want?”

“I have a situation that needs taking care of, and I’d be thrilled to pay you and your men handsomely. My son and daughter are slaves to a Nordic slaver on an island southwest of Cyrodiil. I want them back. Fifty-thousand septims is what I am offering.”

Darius took a quick glance at Ian, who only smiled and once more took a drink of his nonexistent ale.

“I’m sorry, sir, but we’re not accepting contracts right now.” Darius wanted to add that he himself likely wasn’t going to be accepting them ever again, but he didn’t. “We’re going to take a break, I think, and I don’t fifty-thousand septims would be worth it anyway. It’s nothing personal, sir, it’s just there are a total of twelve of us you see. Fifty-thousand simply wouldn’t be enough to divide between twelve people.”

The man laughed loudly, causing the bartender to look up, only to go back to cleaning his dirty dishes and mugs a second later.

“No, no, no! You misunderstand me! I mean to say that I’ll be willing to pay fifty-thousand septims to each of you!”

The mug Ian had been holding dropped to the wooden table, and his mouth hung open. Darius’ mouth was hanging open as well, but only slightly. He wasn’t sure he heard the man had actually said.

“Fifty-thousand for each of us? Sir, you do realize that totals to an amount of six-hundred thousand gold, don’t you?”

“Of course I do. I am not a dimwitted Orc after all. Also, I own a string of seven or so houses to the northeaster of here. It’s a tiny little village I guess you’d say. It’s not much, and I only use it to rent to people wishing to vacation in the beautiful region. I’ll be glad to include the village as well. From what I understand, you and your men don’t have a permanent house of residence. And while I’m sure you like the travel, don’t you think it’d be nice to always have a house when you want it?”

Darius looked to his friend, and Ian was still starting at the men, but at least by then his mouth wasn’t hanging open. Darius looked back to the man.

“Excuse me, sir. My partner and I must talk about this in private for a moment.”

The man bowed his head.

“Of course. I’ll be over there at the other corner until you’re ready. But please do hurry. My situation is of utmost important to me, and I do not wish to waste precious time.”

The man hobbled over to the other side and sat down, staring outside at the pelting rain.

“Ian, you heard how much he said, right?”

“I think so, but I’m not sure that I believe it,” Ian answered, his voice shaking with awe. “It’s…it’s just so much gold, you know? We’ve never had that much gold before. What do you want to do? Do you want to accept the offer right now?”

“I thought you wanted to take a break?”

“Not now I don’t. Not when there’s fifty-thousand septims for me on the table.”

Darius leaned back into his chair and sighed. The thought of so much wealth seemed nice, but minutes earlier he had just been speaking of retirement. Suddenly Darius had an idea.

“I know! The money and village he’ll give us I can use for my retirement! By Talos, we could all use the village for ourselves! You said that I don’t have enough right now, and I’ll admit that you’re right about that, but now I’ve found a solution! Don’t you see? I can retire, you can take over the business, and while I’m retired I can still help out, ordering equipment and keeping the place clean! We could start our own town someday! What do you think?”

“Giving me the reigns of Captain of the Redwood Mercenaries?” Ian asked, shocked beyond belief. “Wow…I don’t really know what to say. I’d accept the position, if I don’t retire of course. And I also like your idea of maybe even starting our own town someday.”

“Right. But, there’s a catch to all of this.”

“There is?”

“Yes. I’m not sure I trust the man. Also, we don’t know anything about this slave lord he speaks of.”

Darius rolled his eyes and punched his friend playfully on the arm.

“Well, then let’s have him show us the gold in person, and also we’ll ask him more about the slave lord and his whereabouts. How about it, Darius? Think of the opportunity! Fifty-thousand for every one of us!”

“Fine, we’ll do it. But I’m telling you right now, Ian. This is my final decision. I am definitely going to retire. I’ll go through with what I said about the village, though. I think that will definitely work to our advantage.”

“Indeed. So, should we tell the men yet?”

“No, let them party. We’ll tell them once we see the gold. It’s not like they need to know before we make a decision. I don’t think they’ll turn down fifty-thousand septims!”

Darius walked over to the old man.

“My partner and I have decided that we’ll take on your contract, but first we’d like to see the gold for ourselves. Would that be alright?”

The old man smiled, his white beard shining in the light of the torch to his left.

“Of course. Please, please, follow me and I’ll take you to my manor!”

After Darius told the other men to keep celebrating while he and Ian went on a quick errand, the two followed the old man out into the street. The darkness of the night shrouded them from view, but unfortunately not the downpour of rain. But Darius didn’t care, and neither did Ian. It would be well worth walking through the rain.

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post Mar 20 2009, 03:57 AM
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Chapter Three

Just as Darius and Ian were about to exit Remy’s mansion, two men were hunched in the alley on the mansion’s left. The alleyway was the divider between Remy’s manor and the one beside it, a thin strip of nothingness, save for the occasional lowlifes who were fortunate enough to sneak past the guards unnoticed.

Both men were of low birth, cast aside from the normalcy of society almost immediately after they witnessed their first sun. They were low men, and these low men were playing a game (a quiet game) of cubes to pass by the time until they were allowed inside Remy’s manor to discuss the business of the day. Or rather, a lack thereof.

The man with his back turned to the street cackled at his friend and slapped the left side of his face his right hand. He was dressed in nothing but a long, brown and tattered coat and a pair of holey boots. As he laughed his head flew back and the long strands of gray hair hit his face. He quickly quieted himself down, though, in fear of attracting unwanted attention.


“Ya lying honoured user, Jaal!” he whispered. “Ya didn’t roll a goddamn three, ya stupid sonofabitch! It’s a two!”

Jaal, now rubbing the redness that had already covered his left cheek, shrugged his shoulders. He said nothing of the slap, for he was used to such abuse. Except to Jaal, it wasn’t abuse, it was punishment. For being ignorant. For being stupid. For hamster cave up once again. But at the same time, it was also attention. And deep down inside, he knew it was for the better. It wasn’t right, but it was for the better.

He slumped his shoulders and dug his hands into the side pockets of his dull-green jacket, it too very holey, holier than the other man’s robe in fact.

“I sawy, Bryn,” Jaal mumbled. “I c-coulda sworn it wah a three. Da moon playin’ tricks with m-muh eyes, I sink. I swear I wahn’t tryin’ to cheat ya, B-Bryn!”

Bryn was just about to comment on his companion’s speech impediment for the umpteenth time, when suddenly he heard a door slam, seemingly coming from Remy’s manor. His head twitched towards the sound of the slam, and he heard footsteps just a second later.

“Shut up, mumble-mouth, someone’s a comin’! Get your back against the wall, quick!”

Bryn’s thin, nimble body was up from the ground in an instant, and he was leaning against the stone wall of Remy’s mansion, motioning frantically for his friend to do the same thing. Jaal’s sluggish, fat body rose from the ground as quickly as his stubby legs would let him, and then he too leaned against the wall, the shadows of the night covering them both from sight.

Darius and Ian passed by whispering at quick pace with one another, neither aware of the two low men that stood no more than ten yards away to their right. Suddenly a gold coin dropped from Ian’s coat pocket and rolled over to where the two low men stood, frozen in place as if they were statues. Ian began to walk towards the coin and the two low men gasped loudly inside. As the Redguard made his way towards the two, Darius quickly put a hand to his clumsy partner’s mouth. Ian picked up the gold coin, and then Darius walked over. Then the two mercenaries began talking right then and there, no longer walking, and the two low men were literally inches away.

“I still don’t know about this,” Ian said, rubbing his hands together to keep warm in the cold, wintry night.

“I don’t either, but gold is gold. This Remy doesn’t seem like the most trustworthy person in the world, I know that. But it’s like you said earlier, Ian. None of our clients have been very trustworthy. Why worry about it now?”

“It’s just bugging me is all. Something just doesn’t feel right, y’know? But it’s alright. I’m probably worrying too much. This Rockthorn Island sounds like a gorgeous place, so I guess I’m looking forward to going. The money most of all, though.”

“Yes, there you go. Come, let’s tell the men so we can hurry back and get the gold.”

The two mercenaries walked away, and Bryn waited until they were totally out of earshot before loosening his grip from Jaal’s mouth.

“Did ya hear that, Jaal? Sounds like men are doing somethin’ for the boss! I wonder what it is…”

The two finally stepped out of the shadows, and Bryn realized they had left their game of cubes on the floor. He sighed in relief, thankful that the mercenaries hadn’t noticed anything.

“I know wuh eht is,” Jaal said, rubbing his cheek from where it was still red from Bryn’s slap. Neither could see that it was red of course, not in the dark of the night.

“I doubt that, Jaal, but go ahead. What is it?”

“The Impral s-s-said somp’n ‘bout Rohthorn Islen. D-Das where dey goin,’ Bryn.”

Bryn looked at his companion, thinking hard. Suddenly an idea came to his head and he had never felt more excited in his life.

“Yeah…yeah, you’re right! The Imperial did say somethin’ about that island, didn’t he? Well…this gives me an idea, Jaal. Ya know how we’ve been barely scrappin’ to keep up a half-decent life?”

“Uh-huh?”

“I say we follow the men to the island and make a new life! Remy’s been nothing but a jerk to us our entire lives. He feeds us and lets us sleep in his house, yeah, but still…I don’t like ‘em. What do you say we go ‘n ask old Remy what the hell’s goin’ on?”

“Y-Yeah, l-l-lehs go!”

Bryn patted Jaal on the shoulder and walked past him towards the back entrance to Remy’s house, with Jaal following close behind. They ran to the end of the alleyway and took a left. There was a door, the door that led into the back part of the kitchen inside Remy’s manor. Bryn knocked three times, paused, and then knocked two more times. No more than three seconds later the door opened, Remy standing in the doorway with an annoyed expression spread about his face.

“What in oblivion do you want this late at night, Bryn?”

Bryn took a step back.

“Sorry, sir, but Jaal and I came to talk about the moon sugar we were supposed to get ya today.”

Remy’s annoyed expression immediately turned into an intense scowl of frustration.

“Not out here, you imbecile! Come inside!”

Bryn and Jaal entered the kitchen and Remy quickly closed the door.

“So, where is it?”

“Well, we don’t have it, sir. That’s…that’s what we came to tell ya.”

Remy cocked his head and looked down at the two lowly Imperial men, cowering over them, easily a foot taller.

“What do you mean you don’t have the moon sugar, Bryn?” Remy asked in a calm tone that made the hairs on Bryn’s neck prickle.

“Well…the blueskin that usually gives us the goods wasn’t there today, at our normal meetin’ spot I mean. And when Jaal and I walked to his house, we couldn’t find ‘em. Then a guard told us to leave, and I asked him where the blueskin was. He just laughed and told us he’d be spendin’ a few years behind iron bars. So…yeah. That’s why we don’t have it, sir.”

Bryn bowed his head in shame, fearful that Remy would reprimand him harshly as he had done the last time Bryn had failed. Jaal tried foolishly to hide behind him, despite that fact that he was slightly taller and much larger than Bryn.

“Well, that’s not very good, is it?” Remy said. “Lucky for you I’m in a particularly good mood, so therefore I’ll talk to you two about this in the morning. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m expecting-”

“A good mood, huh?” Bryn interrupted excitedly. “Does it have anything to do with that Redguard and Imperial that came from your manor a few minutes ago? I heard ‘em walkin’ down the street.”

“What in the world were you doing out there? Spying?”

“No, of course not, sir. Jaal and I were playin’ a game of cubes when they walked by. The Redguard said somethin’ about Rockthorn Island. Ain’t that some kinda rich place or somethin’? Why would ya be sending them there?”

“What makes you think I’m sending them anywhere?” Remy asked impatiently.

“Cause they talked like they were workin’ for ya.”

Remy sighed, and then a smile formed on his face. Bryn didn’t like it either. Not at all. It made him feel…weak. His entire body felt…drained. Like something was pulling on him from the inside.

“Don’t worry your pretty little head over it, Bryn. However, I suggest you stay away from the men. They’ll be leaving in the morning. I…they are taking some gold of mine away to store somewhere else. Somewhere safe. So, think nothing else about it. In fact, sleep in tomorrow morning, because there’s nothing for you and Jaal to do anyhow. Just be here tomorrow at noon and we’ll discuss matters in detail. Alright?”

He winked at Bryn, and a feeling of immense fatigue came over his body, and he nodded his head before he even knew he was doing it.

“Yes, of course. We’ll see you tomorrow, sir,” he said. Then he and Jaal left.

Once they were in the back alleyway the feeling of fatigue was gone, and Bryn felt like his normal self again. He didn’t at all enjoy the strange feeling that had washed over his body. It did feel familiar, though. Bryn couldn’t quite put his finger on it, but it was as familiar as the sun and the moon.

“You ahright, Bryn?” Jaal asked, a tad bit of fear in his voice.

“Yes…yes, I’m fine,” Bryn answered, without looking back at his companion. “Come on, let’s go see if we can find those men.”

“Buh Remy told us noh to, Bryn.”

“I don’t care!” Bryn snapped, spinning fast on his feels and scowling at Jaal. In return Jaal flinched, expecting yet another snap. Except this time the slap didn’t come. “Don’t ask any more questions, Jaal. Just follow me.”

Jaal nodded in agreement, his head bobbing up and down so fast that the fat on his neck wiggled like a worm. Bryn headed off in the direction the two men had taken earlier, and again, Jaal following close behind, both men remaining in the shield of the shadows.


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The party was still going on when Darius and Ian made it back to the tavern, albeit some of the men were beginning to simmer down. It was only a couple, but that was still a sign the party was beginning to slow down. Darius called for the men’s attention, and those still dancing on the table reluctantly fell back into their seats. Before he began speaking, Darius thought for a second whether it was smart to tell the men of the night’s events while they were drunk.

“What are we doing?” He whispered in Ian’s ear. “This is ridiculous. The men are too drunk to understand what’s going on.”

“Nah, they’ll be fine. It’s not like they have a say in any of this anyway. You’re the boss. Let’s just hurry up so we can get the gold. I’m starting to get a little sleepy.”

Darius shrugged and then turned back around to face the men. They all had drunken smiles spread across their face, and most were swaying back and forth as if they were riding a ship in stormy weather. It didn’t matter, though. They wouldn’t turn down ten thousand septims, drunk or sober.

“Alright, men, I hope you’ve had fun partying tonight, because tomorrow morning marks the beginning of another mission. I’ve just accepted a contract from a noble here in Skingrad.”

Murmurs erupted from the group of men.

“What kind of contract, eh? We just got done with one this morning!” yelled one of them, a male Argonian by the name of Julanzo.

“I don’t want to talk about the details right now. We never do that in public. You know that, Julanzo. Let me just say this: the payday will be fantastic. More than you’ve ever seen.”

The men got excited at the word ‘payday’, and none of them argued any further. Darius thought it was mostly because they were drunk and that they didn’t give a damn about anything, but he was happy nonetheless. After the excitement of the money had worn off following their leave from Remy’s manor, Darius realized how tired he was.

He turned to Ian, who looked just as tired, sitting at a table with his head in his hands, his eyes half closed.

“Hey, Ian, go back and tell Remy that we’ll come for the gold tomorrow morning. The men are too drunk and I don’t want them waking the entire city with their foolishness.”

Ian yawned and stretched his long arms in the air. “Sure thing. When I get back we’ll call it a night?”

Darius nodded.

“I’m glad to hear that. I’m so tired right now.”


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Though Bryn treated Jaal like a child, and often abused him both mentally and physically, his love for the overlarge man couldn’t have been greater. Both were in their late thirties, though from their dirty hair and beards they looked slightly older. Both were Imperials, though their body sizes were almost entire opposites, with Jaal being tall and large and Bryn being fairly short and skinny. The two were inseparable, though, and neither wanted it any other way, even thought it wasn’t something they ever talked about.

Such affection for one another was quite obvious. They met at a bar three years ago, Jaal having been told to get out because he had no money. Bryn had nothing but a few coins, but for some odd reason he had felt a great deep sorrow for him, even though they had never met. The two immediately became friends, and the rest was history. Bryn was a sly fellow, doing dirty deeds here and there to get by in life. Jaal wasn’t really good at anything, but that wasn’t the point. Bryn didn’t care about that. The affection that Bryn felt for Jaal was a direct correlation from his relationship with his father.

Bryn had himself been mentally and physically abused as a child, and unfortunately he picked up those tendencies towards Jaal. Abusing Jaal was Bryn’s own way of saying ‘I love you’. It was certainly strange, but more importantly, it was the truth. Because even though he had a tough time admitting it to himself, he saw Jaal somewhat as a son. Jaal definitely wasn’t the smartest person by any means, and it was obvious something wasn’t quite right with him. Bryn had to be Jaal’s father-figure, simply because never had a true one himself.

And Jaal went along with it all because he didn’t know what else to do. But what he did know what that he liked his life. Even though Bryn often hurt him, he at least had somebody that cared for him. Such a thing had been nonexistent in his life before meeting Bryn.

Suddenly Bryn put a finger to his lip and held a hand out in front of Jaal. Both he and Jaal were kneeling behind the short stone wall that bordered the garden of one of the nobles. The tavern was located just outside of the Manor district.

“Shh, here comes the Redguard,” Bryn whispered, nodded towards the oncoming Redguard that was Ian.

“Yeh,” Jaal whispered back. “We g-gonna follow?”

Bryn watched as the Redguard passed them and then looked back to his companion.

“Yep. Let’s go.”


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redsrock   The Incident at Rockthorn Island   Mar 11 2009, 10:17 PM
Illydoor   Good flow and an intriguing first chapter. I'l...   Mar 12 2009, 06:42 PM
redsrock   Gracias, amigo. I'm glad you've enjoyed it...   Mar 12 2009, 06:54 PM
Olen   I'm interested to see where this goes, so you...   Mar 12 2009, 10:58 PM
redsrock   Thanks, Olen. Unlike you, though, I thought I did ...   Mar 12 2009, 11:06 PM
redsrock   Chapter Two Luckily for Darius and Ian, the wa...   Mar 15 2009, 03:12 AM
Olen   That part was good. I like how this is going plot...   Mar 15 2009, 06:49 PM
redsrock   I might well have missed an earlier suggestion tha...   Mar 15 2009, 07:36 PM
Olen   Good update. You introduced the new characters we...   Mar 20 2009, 06:59 PM
redsrock   Darius quickly put a hand to his clumsy partner’s...   Mar 20 2009, 07:26 PM
redsrock   This chapter is drastically short, but I think it...   Mar 22 2009, 04:07 AM
Olen   Yup, this is moving along well. I'd say you...   Mar 22 2009, 07:02 PM
redsrock   The part about Darius getting the men to bed was s...   Mar 22 2009, 07:10 PM
Olen   I got that he wanted them sober/not vomiting in th...   Mar 22 2009, 09:29 PM
redsrock   Chapter Five Ian slept well that night, falling a...   Mar 24 2009, 04:14 AM
Olen   Good update. Its nice to see things moving on. T...   Mar 25 2009, 01:32 PM
redsrock   photos??! - this really didn't fit the se...   Mar 25 2009, 07:52 PM
redsrock   Chapter Six They traveled along the Gold Road at...   Mar 28 2009, 03:21 AM
redsrock   This story is going to put on a break. I've go...   Mar 30 2009, 05:43 PM


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