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post Mar 11 2009, 10:17 PM
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Chapter One

Darius and his men drank to the rhythmic sounds of the wooden lutes and fiddles and the guarskin drums, the soothing sounds vibrating off of the crowded walls and their many decorative tapestries, most bearing designs of the Nine. While most of his men were drunk, Darius, along with his best friend, Ian, were not.

The tavern in Skingrad was dimply lit by candles and torches, the kind of close-knit, warm feeling Darius enjoyed almost more than anything. It wasn’t too bright, but at the same time it wasn’t too dark either; a perfect cozy atmosphere for him and his men to celebrate their latest successful mission. Killing the damned goblins hadn’t been easy, but at least they hadn’t lost any of their own in the process. Such a job Darius considered perfect, for he cared for his men’s lives more than anything, and at the same time they received a hefty amount of gold from the old rich lady that requested the goblins eliminated from existence, for the green-skin monsters had ravished her gardens long enough.

“Another round, Darius, or do you think they’ve had enough for one night?”

Darius turned to look at his friend, Ian, and smiled. “Bah, give them at least one more! They deserve it!”

Ian called for the bartender to pour another round for the twelve-man crew, and the entire tavern lit up with applause and cheers, most coming from the men that actually worked for Darius, and also from the pub’s regular drunks that were too intoxicated to know what they were cheering for to begin with.

Darius only sipped at his ale, wanting to savor the success and wealth while sober, because he knew that if he drank he’d regret it in the morning. He never was one to hold much alcohol before he was drunk, and he knew this because his playfully made fun of him for it constantly.

“Ain’t thirsty I see,” Ian said, chugging down what was left of his prior glass of Cyrodiilic ale. “That’s alright. At least it appears you’ve had quite the appetite.”

He motioned towards Darius many plates, the dishes bare of anything except useless crumbs. Ian laughed and patted Darius on the back, and the two sat back and drank it all in.

The success of the mission, not just the ale.

Soon the mercenaries of Redwood were on top of the tables, dancing like fools and singing out of tune to songs they clearly didn’t know, or were too drunk to remember. Darius and Ian howled with laughter as the men made utter fools of themselves, and even the busy bartender took time out of his work to give a laugh. Such a sight of merry men was hard to come by in Skingrad, what with the recent lightening-storms that had rolled through the region over the past several days. The fact that his tavern was finally alive once more likely played a role in the bartender’s laughter as well.

“I’ll tell you what, Ian; they sure like to party!” Darius said to Ian, still chuckling from the hilarious scene that continued to unfold in front of them.

“They sure do. But like you said, they deserve it. Y’know, I’ve been thinking about some stuff since we left the old woman’s home in the forest.”

“Yes?”

“I’ve been thinking about taking a break from the mercenary business, y’know? We have a nice amount of money, and I think I’m gonna just…go on a vacation or something. Some relax time. What would you think about that?”

Darius chuckled and drank the last bit of sweet liquid from his wooden mug. He chuckled not because he was angry, but because he had been thinking the exact same thing, only he wasn’t pondering vacation, but rather retirement.

“What would I think? I would think you’ve stolen my idea. Only I don’t want to vacation. I want to retire.”

Ian’s eyebrows raised, and he too drank the rest of his ale.

“Retirement? You’re serious?”

“Yes. I’m closing in on forty years of age. I figure I probably have enough gold retire and live comfortably. And to be totally honest with you, I felt something while fighting the goblins. It was like a voice in a way. A voice asking me if I was having fun.” Darius shook his head and sighed, watching his men continue to shout incomprehensible lyrics. “And you know what? I couldn’t give myself an answer.”

Ian only looked at his long time friend, unable to say anything. He wanted a break, yes, but the thought of retirement had never crossed his mind.

“Don’t you think that’s a sign that I need to hang it up, Ian? I mean, if I can’t decide if I’m having fun…”

“I don’t know about all that, Darius. It don’t sound like you at all. I think you’re just exhausted from the mission. Retirement? That’s funny! You’ll be fighting to your grave, and you know that!”

The two laughed at that, though Darius found the image somewhat disturbing. He had been a mercenary for as long as he could remember, and damn fine one at that. Did he really want to give it all up? Maybe Ian was right, in that Darius was simply tired from the previous mission. But still, to even ponder retirement scared the living daylights out of him.

Of course, no matter what he tried to tell himself, Darius knew the truth. It was simply hard for him to admit it. But he had thought upon the subject during their ride back from the forests southwest of Skingrad.

“No, Ian, I think I do wish to retire. I’ve never had the thought of quitting, and now that it’s come up, I see it as a sign that I must quit. I’d rather do it now then drag it out, fighting when I don’t want to. It wouldn’t be good for the men, you know. And besides, even though I’m not quite yet forty, my aching body certainly feels like it. My left knee hurts like hell, Ian. I try warm showers but it’s not helping. I hate to admit it, friend, but I believe my time is up.”

For a few minutes the two stood there. Both of their glasses were empty, yet they still pretended to drink, only because they didn’t know what else to do. Though the tavern was loud with noise and fun, the silence between Darius and Ian was so much greater.

At last, Ian broke through the cold, icy silence.

“I won’t lie, Darius, I’m not sure you can retire.”

“Huh?”

“Well, for one you don’t have a whole lot of money. You have a nasty habit of spending our gold on parties and drinks for the men. And that’s great, that’s what we’ve always done and everyone enjoys it. After all, we travel all the time, so it’s not like we need to pay for anything else besides food and equipment, but now that you’re talking about retirement, there’s nowhere for you to go. You don’t have a house or manor, nor do you have enough gold to pay for one. To me it looks like you’re stuck. Obviously I don’t mind that a bit, but it’s something you should think about. If you really want to retire, you should start thinking about putting some of our profit aside.”

Ian made valid points, points Darius himself had never thought about. It was true that they were always traveling about where their contracts led them, and they spent most of their gold on food, drink, and celebrations, spending the remaining amount on new equipment.

“But you know, Darius, I still think you’re just exhausted. Perhaps you should sleep on it? Deep down inside I don’t think you really want to quit. You’re just…I don’t, I can’t really explain it, other than to say that you’re tired. Both mentally and physically I mean. So, will you at least sleep on it? For me and the men’s sake?”

“Fine, I’ll do that. For your and men’s sake,” Darius answered, though he already knew in his heart what the answer would ultimately be.

Suddenly the door to the tavern swung open and the pounding fierce rain could be heard, and seen, from the dark night outside. A single man stood in the doorway, an old Breton man dressed in a lavish orange robe and clutching an expensive, cream-colored walking cane in his left hand. The music and dancing continued to play in spite of the sudden interruption, and the man squinted through the room as if he were looking for someone in particular. Once his eyes found Darius they also found that person.

The man walked up to Darius, the mercenary captain having watched him as soon as the elder had stepped foot inside the tavern.

“Darius Sintras?” the man asked, gasping for breath as if he had been running for miles, which in a way, he had. “Captain of the Redwood Mercenaries?”

Darius glanced at Ian, who was just as confused as Darius.

“Yes, I am he. Is there something wrong, sir? You looked like you’ve just run a marathon.”

The man actually managed a slight smile, though it left nearly as quickly as it had come.

“A marathon of nightmares, perhaps. A servant of mine made it aware that you and your men were present here in Skingrad. I dashed to this…hostelry…from my mansion as fast as my old legs would allow me. I was afraid you and your mercenaries had left, but fortunately that is not the case.”

“Well, here I am. What is that you want?”

“I have a situation that needs taking care of, and I’d be thrilled to pay you and your men handsomely. My son and daughter are slaves to a Nordic slaver on an island southwest of Cyrodiil. I want them back. Fifty-thousand septims is what I am offering.”

Darius took a quick glance at Ian, who only smiled and once more took a drink of his nonexistent ale.

“I’m sorry, sir, but we’re not accepting contracts right now.” Darius wanted to add that he himself likely wasn’t going to be accepting them ever again, but he didn’t. “We’re going to take a break, I think, and I don’t fifty-thousand septims would be worth it anyway. It’s nothing personal, sir, it’s just there are a total of twelve of us you see. Fifty-thousand simply wouldn’t be enough to divide between twelve people.”

The man laughed loudly, causing the bartender to look up, only to go back to cleaning his dirty dishes and mugs a second later.

“No, no, no! You misunderstand me! I mean to say that I’ll be willing to pay fifty-thousand septims to each of you!”

The mug Ian had been holding dropped to the wooden table, and his mouth hung open. Darius’ mouth was hanging open as well, but only slightly. He wasn’t sure he heard the man had actually said.

“Fifty-thousand for each of us? Sir, you do realize that totals to an amount of six-hundred thousand gold, don’t you?”

“Of course I do. I am not a dimwitted Orc after all. Also, I own a string of seven or so houses to the northeaster of here. It’s a tiny little village I guess you’d say. It’s not much, and I only use it to rent to people wishing to vacation in the beautiful region. I’ll be glad to include the village as well. From what I understand, you and your men don’t have a permanent house of residence. And while I’m sure you like the travel, don’t you think it’d be nice to always have a house when you want it?”

Darius looked to his friend, and Ian was still starting at the men, but at least by then his mouth wasn’t hanging open. Darius looked back to the man.

“Excuse me, sir. My partner and I must talk about this in private for a moment.”

The man bowed his head.

“Of course. I’ll be over there at the other corner until you’re ready. But please do hurry. My situation is of utmost important to me, and I do not wish to waste precious time.”

The man hobbled over to the other side and sat down, staring outside at the pelting rain.

“Ian, you heard how much he said, right?”

“I think so, but I’m not sure that I believe it,” Ian answered, his voice shaking with awe. “It’s…it’s just so much gold, you know? We’ve never had that much gold before. What do you want to do? Do you want to accept the offer right now?”

“I thought you wanted to take a break?”

“Not now I don’t. Not when there’s fifty-thousand septims for me on the table.”

Darius leaned back into his chair and sighed. The thought of so much wealth seemed nice, but minutes earlier he had just been speaking of retirement. Suddenly Darius had an idea.

“I know! The money and village he’ll give us I can use for my retirement! By Talos, we could all use the village for ourselves! You said that I don’t have enough right now, and I’ll admit that you’re right about that, but now I’ve found a solution! Don’t you see? I can retire, you can take over the business, and while I’m retired I can still help out, ordering equipment and keeping the place clean! We could start our own town someday! What do you think?”

“Giving me the reigns of Captain of the Redwood Mercenaries?” Ian asked, shocked beyond belief. “Wow…I don’t really know what to say. I’d accept the position, if I don’t retire of course. And I also like your idea of maybe even starting our own town someday.”

“Right. But, there’s a catch to all of this.”

“There is?”

“Yes. I’m not sure I trust the man. Also, we don’t know anything about this slave lord he speaks of.”

Darius rolled his eyes and punched his friend playfully on the arm.

“Well, then let’s have him show us the gold in person, and also we’ll ask him more about the slave lord and his whereabouts. How about it, Darius? Think of the opportunity! Fifty-thousand for every one of us!”

“Fine, we’ll do it. But I’m telling you right now, Ian. This is my final decision. I am definitely going to retire. I’ll go through with what I said about the village, though. I think that will definitely work to our advantage.”

“Indeed. So, should we tell the men yet?”

“No, let them party. We’ll tell them once we see the gold. It’s not like they need to know before we make a decision. I don’t think they’ll turn down fifty-thousand septims!”

Darius walked over to the old man.

“My partner and I have decided that we’ll take on your contract, but first we’d like to see the gold for ourselves. Would that be alright?”

The old man smiled, his white beard shining in the light of the torch to his left.

“Of course. Please, please, follow me and I’ll take you to my manor!”

After Darius told the other men to keep celebrating while he and Ian went on a quick errand, the two followed the old man out into the street. The darkness of the night shrouded them from view, but unfortunately not the downpour of rain. But Darius didn’t care, and neither did Ian. It would be well worth walking through the rain.

This post has been edited by redsrock: Mar 15 2009, 02:49 PM


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post Mar 22 2009, 04:07 AM
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This chapter is drastically short, but I think it's a nice stopping point, and that's why I didn't go any further.


Chapter Four

When Remy heard the knock at his front door he stood up and sighed, placing his thick book on the dining room table and starting to walk towards the door. He didn’t want to give up half of the gold before his children were returned to him, mostly because he wasn’t a hundred percent sure he could actually trust Darius Sintras and his mercenaries. But he knew the feeling was mutual, and that is why he had not agued further with the Imperial man and his Redguard companion.

I swear by my mother’s grave, if this man double-crosses me…

He opened the door expecting to see Darius and his entire band of mercenaries, but instead he was face to face to Ian, and only Ian.

“Well now…I was expecting more than this,” he said with a slight chuckle. “I know you Redguards are strong, but it’s going to take more than few boxes to carry all of the gold that you’re about to receive.”

Ian smiled in return and then waved a hand in the air.

“No, no. I’ve come to tell you that we’ll be coming in the morning for the gold, before we head out for Anvil I guess, somewhere around eleven or so. The men, well…let’s just say they’re not in the right mind to be handling boxes this late at night. Y’know what I mean?”

“Ah, of course! A tad bit too tipsy I see?”

“Yeah, you could say that,” Ian replied, smiling even more.

“Not a problem. I’ll have my servants pile the gold into boxes myself and that’s alright with you.”

“You don’t have to do that. We can do it for you.”

“No, no, no! I insist…Ian, isn’t it?”

“Yes, sir. Ian.”

“Well, Ian, I promise you that it would be my pleasure to have the gold ready for you in the morning. I am simply thankful that I was able to find you and your fellow mercenaries. I feared my children would be at that forsaken island for the rest of eternity. I don’t think gathering the gold and putting it into boxes will hurt me too bad. I may be old, but I can still get around well enough. And besides, like I said, my servants will be doing most of the work anyway.”

Ian bowed his head.

“Very well. Thank you, sir. We appreciate it.”

“Think nothing of, Ian! Good night!”

“Same to you, sir.”

Ian left the manor, and Remy watched from his window until Ian was totally out of sight before he locked the door.


Crouching behind a thick set of shrubbery beside the house was Bryn and Jaal, having heard the entire conversation that had just taken place between Ian and Remy.

“Remy be payin’ them gold, Jaal. Ya hear?”

“Yeh, Bryn. Dey b-be gehtin gold. F-Foh whah, t-t-though?”

“Gods be damned, I don’t know, and that’s what’s a killin’ me! Remy said somethin’ about his children. But he’s never spoken of children in front of us. This don’t make a bit a’sense, Jaal. I say we keep followin’ the Redguard and see where he takes us next. That sound alright to you?”

“Yeh, Bryn. Thas o-kay wih’ m-me.”

“Good. Cause I can’t ain’t even a bit sleepy anyway. Come on, let’s go before the darkskin gets too far away!”

Both men rose from the shrubbery and continued to trail Ian, still hiding in the shadows of the night.


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Darius and the others were leaning against the bricks walls outside of the tavern when Ian returned. The Captain himself was somewhat agitated, wanting nothing more than to snuggle up in whatever bed he was about to lay down in. And it didn’t matter whether the bed was comfortable or not, that wasn’t the point. He simply wanted to sleep, and he wanted it more than he had ever wanted it before. He didn’t know why, and he thought perhaps it was the excitemen of the gold overloading his body.

“What’d he say, Ian? He’s alright with us coming in the morning?”

“Yeah, he said that’s fine. I told him we’d be there to get the gold sometime in the morning, at around eleven or so. That sound alright?”

Darius looked to the men, men still giggling and stumbling like a bunch of drunken geese. And then he laughed.

“I don’t know about that. I have a hunch that you and I are going to be the only ones tomorrow morning not suffering from hangovers.”

Ian laughed back and patted Darius on the shoulder.

“Right you are, my friend, and I sure am thankful for that. Come on, let’s get out of here before the guards get angry at the men for being so loud.”

Darius and Ian led the men to the city’s largest hotel, which was located only a few miles north of the tavern, near the city gates. Inside the hotel was a single worker who stood behind the front desk, reading a book and not really noticing the group’s arrival until the noisy drunkards of the pack made their presence. Then the man -an Imperial wearing a fancy red and white doublet- scrunched up his nose and was about to tell them to get out before he called for the guards, but then Darius quickly opened up his velvet leather pouch and showed the worker the gold he was carrying, the leftovers of their previous mission’s contract.

The man sighed and set his book down on the desk.

“Good…morning, sir. My name is Demetrius Havlaine, the owner of this inn. How may I serve you and your followers?”

“Yes, I need to pay for twelve, for this night only, please.”

After paying the owner of the hotel, Darius and the others walked up a flight of stairs until they were on the fifth level. Darius had to force the others into their rooms, not to mention it took a while to quiet them all down. But once everything was taken care of -after they had been scolded by both the owner of the hotel, and a few of the inn’s present inhabitants- he and Ian stood just outside Darius’ doorway.

“Finally, some rest. Sounds good, doesn’t it, Darius?”

“Indeed. I can’t quite explain it, but I feel soooo tired right now. It’s amazing, really. I’ve never felt this tired before. I guess the adrenaline of the excitement has worn off. No matter, it’ll come back tomorrow morning when I’m holding that gold in the cups of my hands. I can’t wait to tell the men and see the looks on their faces. It’ll be priceless!”

Ian smiled and then cracked his neck. “That it will, that it will. Well…I’m going to call it a night, Darius. I’m awfully tired as well. See you tomorrow morning.”

“You too, Ian. Good night.”



Outside the hotel stood both Bryn and Jaal. They had followed Ian and the others to the hotel, and were presently hiding in another alleyway, this one in between the hotel and the smithy’s shop beside it.

Bryn was continuously shaking his head, knowing what to say but not yet knowing how to say it, and also not knowing if he really wanted to say it to begin with. He was still drastically confused about everything.

“This is all so confusin’, Jaal. These men, who I’m pretty sure are mercenaries by the look of their gear, are workin’ for Remy. But Remy won’t tell us what they’re doin’, and I sure as hell ain’t gonna ask any of the mercenaries. They’re gonna get some gold from Remy tomorra’, and I guess they’ll leave for Rockthorn Island after that. Thing is, Jaal…I ain’t got a clue where this island is. Do you?”

Jaal simply shook his head as his sat on the cold, stone floor beneath him. The way he sat made him look something like a toddler, and in many ways that is what he was. A grown-up toddler, with his not-so-grown-up father in front of him.

“Dammit, Jaal, you don’t know your boat from your elbow, do ya? Well, I guess we’ll just hafta play it by ear, y’know? But I’ll tell ya one thing. I think our days with Remy are done. I didn’t tell him that we killed that damn blueskin, for obvious reason a’course. The damned elf was an boatmaster, and he got what he deserved. Still…things might get a lil’ slippery around here anyway. When the guards find the blueskin’s body, which they will eventually, they’ll start askin’ questions. And I don’t like answerin’ questions. Do ya, Jaal?”

Again, Jaal shook his head in return, now fumbling with a large stone he had just found on the ground.

“I thought so. Nope, we ain’t stayin’ here no more. We’re gonna follow the men out of the city, but we’ll have to be all sneaky-like so we don’t get caught. But ya’ know what else?”

“Wah?”

“I don’t know what we’ll do even when we get to the goddamn island. I guess hunt for loot and stuff? I’m guessing we’ll hafta call ourselves…adventurers or somethin’. How’s that sound?”

Jaal shrugged and then threw the stone aside.

“It s-sound ahright ta me, B-Bryn. I dohn g-g-guess weh can stay roun’ hehr n-no’mo anyw-wah.”

“Nope, that’s right. We can’t stay around here anymore. Not after killing that blueskin we can’t. Come on, mumble-mouth, let’s go home. We can plan before goin’ to bed.


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redsrock   The Incident at Rockthorn Island   Mar 11 2009, 10:17 PM
Illydoor   Good flow and an intriguing first chapter. I'l...   Mar 12 2009, 06:42 PM
redsrock   Gracias, amigo. I'm glad you've enjoyed it...   Mar 12 2009, 06:54 PM
Olen   I'm interested to see where this goes, so you...   Mar 12 2009, 10:58 PM
redsrock   Thanks, Olen. Unlike you, though, I thought I did ...   Mar 12 2009, 11:06 PM
redsrock   Chapter Two Luckily for Darius and Ian, the wa...   Mar 15 2009, 03:12 AM
Olen   That part was good. I like how this is going plot...   Mar 15 2009, 06:49 PM
redsrock   I might well have missed an earlier suggestion tha...   Mar 15 2009, 07:36 PM
redsrock   Chapter Three Just as Darius and Ian were about t...   Mar 20 2009, 03:57 AM
Olen   Good update. You introduced the new characters we...   Mar 20 2009, 06:59 PM
redsrock   Darius quickly put a hand to his clumsy partner’s...   Mar 20 2009, 07:26 PM
Olen   Yup, this is moving along well. I'd say you...   Mar 22 2009, 07:02 PM
redsrock   The part about Darius getting the men to bed was s...   Mar 22 2009, 07:10 PM
Olen   I got that he wanted them sober/not vomiting in th...   Mar 22 2009, 09:29 PM
redsrock   Chapter Five Ian slept well that night, falling a...   Mar 24 2009, 04:14 AM
Olen   Good update. Its nice to see things moving on. T...   Mar 25 2009, 01:32 PM
redsrock   photos??! - this really didn't fit the se...   Mar 25 2009, 07:52 PM
redsrock   Chapter Six They traveled along the Gold Road at...   Mar 28 2009, 03:21 AM
redsrock   This story is going to put on a break. I've go...   Mar 30 2009, 05:43 PM


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