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Alexander
post Mar 22 2009, 10:26 AM
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Ok, so for the unavoidable introduction babble, as most of you know I was rather pleased with Morrowind. I thought it was far better then the dribble I wrote prior to that, and most people seemed to agree with me. After I finished Morrowind I already had an idea for a sequel, I actually wrote the very first chapter of said sequel while I was posting up parts of Morrowind. Unfortunately though, after that first chapter I kind of lost interest. I didn’t think the ideas I had back then were enough to weave an entire story together, and I was probably right.

But as these things have a habit of developing themselves, over the past months I kept thinking back to the sequel, and kept adding ideas to the pile I already had. Now it’s done. I once again enjoyed writing this, and I hope you’ll have similar fun reading it.

As I’ve explained in the past, I’m not very good at making up things like titles, Akatosh knows it took me about as long to come up with the various titles of the chapters as it did to write the entire thing, so I’ve named the story “Cyrodiil” (catchy wot? wink.gif )

Before I end my babbling and get on with posting the story, I once again would like to thank Treydog for agreeing to help with my story as editor, and for fixing the many, many, many grammatical and spelling errors, and placing every comma, semicolon and whatchamacallit in the correct place. And thanks to everyone who ever read Morrowind, and commented. I really enjoy the comments.


Now, while you don’t have to have read Morrowind, I believe in order to get the most out of Cyrodiil, it would be recommended.


So, enough babbling and on to Cyrodiil.


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Alexander
post Apr 5 2009, 01:35 PM
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The rest of the trip to the Imperial city went without incident, but then no man or Argonian in his right mind would consider attacking the party Ocato was in now. The mounted Redoran elite warriors, alongside a large contingent of soldiers wearing Cheydinhal livery and accompanied by the remaining mages of the Mages Guild made for an impressive sight.

Before long they were riding up to the stables outside the Imperial city. Handing the reigns of his horse over to the stable master, Ocato turned to Balen, “Lord Balen, I have no idea what to expect inside the city, no idea how far Valga’s reach extends, so it might be wise to be ready for trouble, though at the same time, I am hesitant to ask you to bare weapons first.”

“I understand Chancellor; there’s a fine line between being ready for a threat, or being seen as one.”

As they walked trough the city, Ocato could feel the stares of the population; they had to be wondering why so many Dunmer were moving through their streets fully armed. Apparently so did the guards because as they moved into the Green Emperor Way, Ocato saw squads of soldiers and guards alike moving towards them with weapons ready. At the front of one of the groups Ocato saw his bodyguard Evangeline, and he could have sworn a different group was led by Janus Hassildor. What was the Count of Skingrad doing here?

It was Janus, and he was also the first one to spot Ocato in the group of warriors and call a halt to the Imperial Guards.
“Greetings Ocato.”

“Count Hassildor, good to see you; we need to have a talk about Countess Valga.”

“Yes Chancellor, we need to have a talk, but not just about Countess Valga. But let’s do it somewhere a little more quiet, shall we?”


The Elder Council chamber doors closed with a boom. Inside were Grandmaster Jauffre, Captain Steffan, Ocato and his bodyguard, Count Hassildor and Raminus Polus and, of course, the emperor to be.

“Now then,” Ocato began, “there was something you wanted to discuss, Janus?”

“Yes, Chancellor Ocato; several things have happened that you need to be aware of. First , I’m sorry to say the young Bosmer healer, Filben, has died.”

“Filben has died? Sad news indeed. I’ve only had the pleasure of meeting her once but she was a remarkably talented and kind-hearted young lady.”

“That she was, and I intend to kill the person responsible. Just before she died though, she provided us with vital and very important information. We can’t say how it happened, but Mannimarco is alive, and back in Cyrodiil stirring up trouble with a horde of Necromancer followers. And I’m sorry to say my former Seneschal, Mercator Hosidus is one of them.”

“Mercator? But that means….”

“Yes, from what Filben has been able to tell us, he and his Necromancer friends have turned Kvatch into a place of nightmare. Dark magic is being practiced there and reports of travesties are increasing.”

“Is Mannimarco there as well, Janus?”

“No, and that is what complicates the matter more. Filben learned he has holed up at a place called the Echo cave. It’s located far west of Bruma.”

“This is a troubling matter indeed; it makes Valga look like little more then a fly.” Turning to Raminus, Ocato continued “Raminus, please let Archmage Traven know I wish to speak to him.” Ocato was surprised at the sad look on Raminus face.

“Alas chancellor, Archmage Traven gave the ultimate sacrifice. He forced his own soul to be trapped inside a giant black soulgem. Only those people close to the soulgem are immune to Mannimarco’s most deadly spell; the enthrall spell.”

“How many people do you think the soulgem can protect, Raminus?”

“Not many; I estimate ten at most.”

Ocato thought about where to go next. He couldn’t take the entire force to the Echo cave; Mannimarco would have them as thralls in short order and would likely use his people against each other. On the other hand, he knew both the Echo cave and Kvatch needed to be attended to. His only option would be to split his forces.

“Very well, here’s what I propose we do. Raminus, get me the nine most powerful wizards in the Imperial city. Get them here within the hour. I don’t care if they’re renegades or guild members; promise them anything they want; just get them to agree to come with me. I will lead them personally to the Echo cave to face Mannimarco.”

“Janus, I want you to take whatever forces you can scrape together from this city, and go along with Andel to march on Kvatch within the hour. Get a Mages Guild member to send a message to Count Umbranox in Anvil to gather his forces and assist you. Lord Balen, I would like to ask you to go along with them; I fear they may need any help they can get.”

“Of course, Chancellor Ocato, we will aid them to the best of our abilities.”

“Thank you, Lord Balen. Now, that leaves but one issue unattended.” Ocato pointedly turned to look at the emperor to be. “I cannot take you with us, Your Highness; it would be far too dangerous, but leaving you here is also dangerous. Who knows how many agents either Mannimarco or Countess Valga has within the city?”

Someone cleared her throat behind him and Ocato turned to look at Evangeline, his bodyguard, “Ah, my apologies Chancellor, but since you’re likely traveling by way of Bruma to get to the Echo cave, wouldn’t it be a good idea to leave the new emperor at Cloud Ruler Temple? If any place can be protected it’s that place, and the Blades should be more then sufficient to safeguard him from anything.”

“That’s a wonderful idea; thank you Evangeline.”

“Right then gentlemen; you all know what to do; let’s end this.”


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Alexander   Cyrodiil   Mar 22 2009, 10:26 AM
Alexander   Chapter 1. The end? Or the beginning? Cyrodiil,...   Mar 22 2009, 10:28 AM
Olen   Yay! :panic: This was good, I'll have t...   Mar 22 2009, 01:29 PM
redsrock   I like how you start at the end of the game, rathe...   Mar 22 2009, 04:37 PM
Alexander   I'm sorry if you find my critique harsh or n...   Mar 22 2009, 05:38 PM
Alexander   Chapter 2. Aftermath. Walking through the aisles ...   Mar 22 2009, 07:40 PM
The Bean   Hmm, an interesting start, especially with the Ner...   Mar 22 2009, 09:30 PM
Alexander   Hmm, an interesting start, especially with the Ne...   Mar 22 2009, 09:37 PM
The Bean   I see. I still want hellish torment, you understa...   Mar 22 2009, 09:45 PM
Olen   I like the second part, and unlike Beanie (sorry b...   Mar 22 2009, 09:55 PM
The Bean   Fair enough Olen-each to their own and all that. J...   Mar 22 2009, 10:37 PM
redsrock   Second chapter was very nice. I know the theme of ...   Mar 22 2009, 11:02 PM
Alexander   When she entered the lobby, fortunately all she sa...   Mar 23 2009, 07:41 AM
Olen   Good update, the plot is already thinkening well. ...   Mar 23 2009, 06:17 PM
Alexander   Before I post the next part which is the start of ...   Mar 23 2009, 07:53 PM
Badda-Tish   I first thought the man in the black robe was a ne...   Mar 23 2009, 08:19 PM
minque   Oh....just noticed this! But then again I...   Mar 24 2009, 06:22 AM
Alexander   Countess Arriana Valga was seated comfortably in h...   Mar 24 2009, 07:37 AM
Alexander   Chapter 4. Plans are made. Baurus was standing ne...   Mar 24 2009, 06:58 PM
Badda-Tish   Can´t wait for the next chapter, you must write so...   Mar 24 2009, 07:35 PM
Olen   This is excellent, everything morrowind was and mo...   Mar 25 2009, 01:19 AM
redsrock   I'm halfway through chapter three and I'm ...   Mar 25 2009, 02:04 AM
Alexander   Back in her chambers at the All-Saints Inn Countes...   Mar 25 2009, 07:42 AM
Alexander   Chapter 5. opportunity? Ocato couldn’t believe i...   Mar 25 2009, 06:25 PM
Alexander   With cold sweat on his face, Ocato startled awake ...   Mar 26 2009, 07:56 AM
Badda-Tish   I need more... more... This is really great and ve...   Mar 26 2009, 03:57 PM
Alexander   Chapter 6. If at first you don’t succeed. Arriana...   Mar 26 2009, 09:06 PM
Alexander   “You have something to add to the voting, Count Um...   Mar 27 2009, 07:01 AM
Olen   Oooh lots of updates. Awsome as ever. I like the...   Mar 27 2009, 11:20 AM
Alexander   Chapter 7 Dealings with the Brotherhood. The way...   Mar 27 2009, 07:27 PM
minque   Alex....really...Do I need to comment? Because you...   Mar 27 2009, 09:13 PM
Alexander   Baurus found himself looking at the gate. Two guar...   Mar 28 2009, 11:01 AM
Alexander   Chapter 8. Tired and angry, Filben rounded a cor...   Mar 28 2009, 08:02 PM
Alexander   Getting back to the Imperial city the following af...   Mar 29 2009, 11:12 AM
Olen   I think you know what I'm about to say... Gre...   Mar 29 2009, 12:52 PM
Alexander   Chapter 9 Morrowind revis(it)ed. Morrowind in re...   Mar 29 2009, 10:23 PM
Alexander   Galom Daeus turned out to be a great disappointmen...   Mar 30 2009, 06:36 AM
Burnt Sierra   Wha??!! My computer breaks down, I'm ...   Mar 30 2009, 02:29 PM
Alexander   Wha??!! My computer breaks down, I'm...   Mar 30 2009, 04:24 PM
Alexander   Chapter 10 An unlikely meeting. Lady Barenziah wa...   Mar 30 2009, 06:53 PM
Alexander   Traveling to Ebonheart had felt unusual to Ocato. ...   Mar 31 2009, 07:54 AM
Alexander   Chapter 11. More puzzles. Early the next morning...   Mar 31 2009, 06:33 PM
Alexander   Early the next morning, Baurus found Relien as he ...   Apr 1 2009, 06:40 AM
Alexander   Chapter 12. Betrayal. Chancellor Ocato, Grandmast...   Apr 1 2009, 05:06 PM
Olen   This is excellent, but the cliffhanger. I need to...   Apr 1 2009, 07:37 PM
Alexander   At an unseen sign there came a lull in the battle ...   Apr 2 2009, 06:54 AM
Alexander   Chapter 13 The journey to Bruma had been uneventf...   Apr 2 2009, 08:35 PM
Alexander   The only stop Filben made on her journey to Kvatch...   Apr 3 2009, 05:55 AM
Alexander   Chapter 14. Dealing with Daedra Baurus was pacing...   Apr 3 2009, 06:09 PM
Alexander   Baurus had no way to describe the journey he made....   Apr 4 2009, 09:19 AM
Olen   Excellent. I liked it, exciting and fast moving a...   Apr 4 2009, 05:05 PM
Alexander   Chapter 15. Disclosure. Once the captured Argonia...   Apr 4 2009, 06:55 PM
Alexander   Chapter 16. Failure? Arriana was troubled. She wa...   Apr 5 2009, 05:28 PM
Alexander   Endgame. Baurus, Relien and Varvur felt disorient...   Apr 6 2009, 06:35 AM
Alexander   Countess Arriana Valga was excited. She had just w...   Apr 6 2009, 03:57 PM
Alexander   Looking around him, Ocato saw the faces of all his...   Apr 6 2009, 10:58 PM
Alexander   Count Janus Hassildor, Count Corvus Umbranox and L...   Apr 7 2009, 07:39 AM
Olen   This remains most enjoyable. Good stuff. In the ...   Apr 7 2009, 01:01 PM
Alexander   Back at the Imperial Palace, Baurus found himself ...   Apr 7 2009, 05:32 PM
Alexander   Janus Hassildor, Corvus Umbranox and Balen Sarethi...   Apr 8 2009, 07:39 AM
Alexander   After a strange sensation of weightlessness, Bauru...   Apr 8 2009, 06:06 PM
Alexander   Ocato felt the sweat running down his face. At lea...   Apr 9 2009, 07:48 AM
Alexander   Baurus had lost track of the number of spells that...   Apr 9 2009, 04:15 PM
Alexander   It seemed there was no stopping the zombies. Riddl...   Apr 10 2009, 05:52 AM
Alexander   A number of Telvanni had been rounding up the rema...   Apr 10 2009, 10:25 AM
Olen   Good stuff, nothing is as it seems... I like :) ...   Apr 10 2009, 12:11 PM
Alexander   Ocato didn’t understand why he didn’t feel anythin...   Apr 10 2009, 03:25 PM
Alexander   They did not wait long for the coronation. After h...   Apr 10 2009, 03:25 PM
Alexander   Well that's the last one. I hope everyone enjo...   Apr 10 2009, 03:29 PM
Badda-Tish   It was awesome.   Apr 10 2009, 08:36 PM
Olen   I think badda said it. But to elaborate and point...   Apr 12 2009, 03:42 PM
Alexander   Thanks a lot for the comments :) And on matters...   Apr 12 2009, 04:37 PM
mplantinga   Thank you very much for this story. I haven't ...   Apr 12 2009, 07:21 PM
Burnt Sierra   Well, I'm exceedingly late in replying, but be...   Jul 5 2009, 09:04 AM
Alexander   Thanks guys :) And I hope Dawn wasn't too m...   Jul 7 2009, 07:33 PM
Burnt Sierra   And I hope Dawn wasn't too mad Jon ;) She go...   Jul 8 2009, 05:33 PM
Alexander   And I hope Dawn wasn't too mad Jon ;) She g...   Jul 8 2009, 05:41 PM
RavenMind   Wow. That was a fantasic read Alexander. Thanks ve...   Jul 17 2009, 12:35 AM
mALX   It's Here!!! One of my fave stori...   Mar 18 2010, 02:33 AM


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