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post Mar 22 2009, 10:26 AM
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Ok, so for the unavoidable introduction babble, as most of you know I was rather pleased with Morrowind. I thought it was far better then the dribble I wrote prior to that, and most people seemed to agree with me. After I finished Morrowind I already had an idea for a sequel, I actually wrote the very first chapter of said sequel while I was posting up parts of Morrowind. Unfortunately though, after that first chapter I kind of lost interest. I didn’t think the ideas I had back then were enough to weave an entire story together, and I was probably right.

But as these things have a habit of developing themselves, over the past months I kept thinking back to the sequel, and kept adding ideas to the pile I already had. Now it’s done. I once again enjoyed writing this, and I hope you’ll have similar fun reading it.

As I’ve explained in the past, I’m not very good at making up things like titles, Akatosh knows it took me about as long to come up with the various titles of the chapters as it did to write the entire thing, so I’ve named the story “Cyrodiil” (catchy wot? wink.gif )

Before I end my babbling and get on with posting the story, I once again would like to thank Treydog for agreeing to help with my story as editor, and for fixing the many, many, many grammatical and spelling errors, and placing every comma, semicolon and whatchamacallit in the correct place. And thanks to everyone who ever read Morrowind, and commented. I really enjoy the comments.


Now, while you don’t have to have read Morrowind, I believe in order to get the most out of Cyrodiil, it would be recommended.


So, enough babbling and on to Cyrodiil.


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post Apr 7 2009, 07:39 AM
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Count Janus Hassildor, Count Corvus Umbranox and Lord Balen Sarethi were riding at the front of their combined forces heading straight for Kvatch. Balen and Janus had joined with Corvus earlier that day and now they were marching perhaps to their doom.

Kvatch was one of the most defensible cities in the province, built on top of a mountain with but a single steep road leading up to it; it was said a hundred men in Kvatch could hold an army at bay.

Still, all its defenses hadn’t stopped the city from being overrun in the early stages of the Oblivion crisis. Nor had they prevented its near complete ruin. Parts of the walls had crumbled before the Oblivion onslaught, and much of the inside of the city was reportedly damaged and still broken.

At the foot of the road leading up to Kvatch, the Counts and Lord Balen found the camp of former Kvatch residents. From them they were able to learn much of the weaknesses inside and outside the city.

Although the citizens first thought the force had merely come to investigate their complaints, that some of their messengers had been able to get through to either Skingrad of Anvil, they soon found out it was not so. They immediately volunteered to help take back the city from the Necromancers. After having just recently regained it from the Daedra, they weren’t about to let someone take it from them again.

Both counts and the lord Sarethi realized there would be no way to surprise the Necromancers with an attack. With Kvatch built as high as it was, it had a great view of the surrounding area; anyone on the walls would be able to see for many miles. But while they did not have the element of surprise with them, they also knew that attacking right away would both mean that the Necromancers occupying the city had as little time as possible to prepare, and that their leader Mannimarco would be otherwise occupied.

Without hesitating, the combined forces stormed up the hill and took positions behind the improvised walls that had been used during the Oblivion crisis. Little more than wooden planks and stone piled together, it was better than nothing.

No attack came though; it seemed that none of the Necromancers had had the bright idea to restore the city’s catapults. That was an oversight the forces attacking the city weren’t too upset about. Not too upset at all.

They moved in front of the wooden palisades, and after Count Hassildor had given the signal, charged the walls with a thundering roar of battle cries.


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Alexander   Cyrodiil   Mar 22 2009, 10:26 AM
Alexander   Chapter 1. The end? Or the beginning? Cyrodiil,...   Mar 22 2009, 10:28 AM
Olen   Yay! :panic: This was good, I'll have t...   Mar 22 2009, 01:29 PM
redsrock   I like how you start at the end of the game, rathe...   Mar 22 2009, 04:37 PM
Alexander   I'm sorry if you find my critique harsh or n...   Mar 22 2009, 05:38 PM
Alexander   Chapter 2. Aftermath. Walking through the aisles ...   Mar 22 2009, 07:40 PM
The Bean   Hmm, an interesting start, especially with the Ner...   Mar 22 2009, 09:30 PM
Alexander   Hmm, an interesting start, especially with the Ne...   Mar 22 2009, 09:37 PM
The Bean   I see. I still want hellish torment, you understa...   Mar 22 2009, 09:45 PM
Olen   I like the second part, and unlike Beanie (sorry b...   Mar 22 2009, 09:55 PM
The Bean   Fair enough Olen-each to their own and all that. J...   Mar 22 2009, 10:37 PM
redsrock   Second chapter was very nice. I know the theme of ...   Mar 22 2009, 11:02 PM
Alexander   When she entered the lobby, fortunately all she sa...   Mar 23 2009, 07:41 AM
Olen   Good update, the plot is already thinkening well. ...   Mar 23 2009, 06:17 PM
Alexander   Before I post the next part which is the start of ...   Mar 23 2009, 07:53 PM
Badda-Tish   I first thought the man in the black robe was a ne...   Mar 23 2009, 08:19 PM
minque   Oh....just noticed this! But then again I...   Mar 24 2009, 06:22 AM
Alexander   Countess Arriana Valga was seated comfortably in h...   Mar 24 2009, 07:37 AM
Alexander   Chapter 4. Plans are made. Baurus was standing ne...   Mar 24 2009, 06:58 PM
Badda-Tish   Can´t wait for the next chapter, you must write so...   Mar 24 2009, 07:35 PM
Olen   This is excellent, everything morrowind was and mo...   Mar 25 2009, 01:19 AM
redsrock   I'm halfway through chapter three and I'm ...   Mar 25 2009, 02:04 AM
Alexander   Back in her chambers at the All-Saints Inn Countes...   Mar 25 2009, 07:42 AM
Alexander   Chapter 5. opportunity? Ocato couldn’t believe i...   Mar 25 2009, 06:25 PM
Alexander   With cold sweat on his face, Ocato startled awake ...   Mar 26 2009, 07:56 AM
Badda-Tish   I need more... more... This is really great and ve...   Mar 26 2009, 03:57 PM
Alexander   Chapter 6. If at first you don’t succeed. Arriana...   Mar 26 2009, 09:06 PM
Alexander   “You have something to add to the voting, Count Um...   Mar 27 2009, 07:01 AM
Olen   Oooh lots of updates. Awsome as ever. I like the...   Mar 27 2009, 11:20 AM
Alexander   Chapter 7 Dealings with the Brotherhood. The way...   Mar 27 2009, 07:27 PM
minque   Alex....really...Do I need to comment? Because you...   Mar 27 2009, 09:13 PM
Alexander   Baurus found himself looking at the gate. Two guar...   Mar 28 2009, 11:01 AM
Alexander   Chapter 8. Tired and angry, Filben rounded a cor...   Mar 28 2009, 08:02 PM
Alexander   Getting back to the Imperial city the following af...   Mar 29 2009, 11:12 AM
Olen   I think you know what I'm about to say... Gre...   Mar 29 2009, 12:52 PM
Alexander   Chapter 9 Morrowind revis(it)ed. Morrowind in re...   Mar 29 2009, 10:23 PM
Alexander   Galom Daeus turned out to be a great disappointmen...   Mar 30 2009, 06:36 AM
Burnt Sierra   Wha??!! My computer breaks down, I'm ...   Mar 30 2009, 02:29 PM
Alexander   Wha??!! My computer breaks down, I'm...   Mar 30 2009, 04:24 PM
Alexander   Chapter 10 An unlikely meeting. Lady Barenziah wa...   Mar 30 2009, 06:53 PM
Alexander   Traveling to Ebonheart had felt unusual to Ocato. ...   Mar 31 2009, 07:54 AM
Alexander   Chapter 11. More puzzles. Early the next morning...   Mar 31 2009, 06:33 PM
Alexander   Early the next morning, Baurus found Relien as he ...   Apr 1 2009, 06:40 AM
Alexander   Chapter 12. Betrayal. Chancellor Ocato, Grandmast...   Apr 1 2009, 05:06 PM
Olen   This is excellent, but the cliffhanger. I need to...   Apr 1 2009, 07:37 PM
Alexander   At an unseen sign there came a lull in the battle ...   Apr 2 2009, 06:54 AM
Alexander   Chapter 13 The journey to Bruma had been uneventf...   Apr 2 2009, 08:35 PM
Alexander   The only stop Filben made on her journey to Kvatch...   Apr 3 2009, 05:55 AM
Alexander   Chapter 14. Dealing with Daedra Baurus was pacing...   Apr 3 2009, 06:09 PM
Alexander   Baurus had no way to describe the journey he made....   Apr 4 2009, 09:19 AM
Olen   Excellent. I liked it, exciting and fast moving a...   Apr 4 2009, 05:05 PM
Alexander   Chapter 15. Disclosure. Once the captured Argonia...   Apr 4 2009, 06:55 PM
Alexander   The rest of the trip to the Imperial city went wit...   Apr 5 2009, 01:35 PM
Alexander   Chapter 16. Failure? Arriana was troubled. She wa...   Apr 5 2009, 05:28 PM
Alexander   Endgame. Baurus, Relien and Varvur felt disorient...   Apr 6 2009, 06:35 AM
Alexander   Countess Arriana Valga was excited. She had just w...   Apr 6 2009, 03:57 PM
Alexander   Looking around him, Ocato saw the faces of all his...   Apr 6 2009, 10:58 PM
Olen   This remains most enjoyable. Good stuff. In the ...   Apr 7 2009, 01:01 PM
Alexander   Back at the Imperial Palace, Baurus found himself ...   Apr 7 2009, 05:32 PM
Alexander   Janus Hassildor, Corvus Umbranox and Balen Sarethi...   Apr 8 2009, 07:39 AM
Alexander   After a strange sensation of weightlessness, Bauru...   Apr 8 2009, 06:06 PM
Alexander   Ocato felt the sweat running down his face. At lea...   Apr 9 2009, 07:48 AM
Alexander   Baurus had lost track of the number of spells that...   Apr 9 2009, 04:15 PM
Alexander   It seemed there was no stopping the zombies. Riddl...   Apr 10 2009, 05:52 AM
Alexander   A number of Telvanni had been rounding up the rema...   Apr 10 2009, 10:25 AM
Olen   Good stuff, nothing is as it seems... I like :) ...   Apr 10 2009, 12:11 PM
Alexander   Ocato didn’t understand why he didn’t feel anythin...   Apr 10 2009, 03:25 PM
Alexander   They did not wait long for the coronation. After h...   Apr 10 2009, 03:25 PM
Alexander   Well that's the last one. I hope everyone enjo...   Apr 10 2009, 03:29 PM
Badda-Tish   It was awesome.   Apr 10 2009, 08:36 PM
Olen   I think badda said it. But to elaborate and point...   Apr 12 2009, 03:42 PM
Alexander   Thanks a lot for the comments :) And on matters...   Apr 12 2009, 04:37 PM
mplantinga   Thank you very much for this story. I haven't ...   Apr 12 2009, 07:21 PM
Burnt Sierra   Well, I'm exceedingly late in replying, but be...   Jul 5 2009, 09:04 AM
Alexander   Thanks guys :) And I hope Dawn wasn't too m...   Jul 7 2009, 07:33 PM
Burnt Sierra   And I hope Dawn wasn't too mad Jon ;) She go...   Jul 8 2009, 05:33 PM
Alexander   And I hope Dawn wasn't too mad Jon ;) She g...   Jul 8 2009, 05:41 PM
RavenMind   Wow. That was a fantasic read Alexander. Thanks ve...   Jul 17 2009, 12:35 AM
mALX   It's Here!!! One of my fave stori...   Mar 18 2010, 02:33 AM


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