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Dantrag
post Feb 5 2008, 04:08 AM
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Well, after some unfinished stories and a long hiatus, I'm back in this territory of the forums. Not that anyone should care. Anyway, I hope you enjoy my latest creation.

Prologue

It was a dark night, and the rain fell in sheets over the town of Cheydinhal. Unbeknownst to the gate guards, a cloaked, shadowy figure climbed the stone wall on the other side. He sat perched on the wall for several seconds before jumping to the ground below, using the loud pitter-patter of the rain to cover the sound. Swiftly and silently he ran, clutching a package tightly wrapped in a gray cloth. He reached his destination in a matter of seconds, and after lifting the grate up, he descended into the darkness of a well.

He was welcomed at arrow point.

"I need to speak with Vicente," he said in an otherwordly voice from the shadows of his cowl. He turned his side to the woman in front of him, shielding his cargo should she decide to fire.

The archer, who was a Bosmer woman dressed in the typical black leather armor and hood of the Dark Brotherhood, fumbled for a response. Before she could give one, a hand from behind rested on her shoulder. Taleandril looked to see that it was Vicente Valtieri himself, the oldest member of their specific chapter of the Dark Brotherhood, due to his vampiric nature.

"Don't worry, Taleandril, I'm expecting company," Vicente said reassuringly. Taleandril gave the visitor one last glare before going about her business.

"Let us go somewhere more private," the vampire suggested, leading the way through the dark, damp corridors until they reached Vicente's quarters. There was no door or any other typical way of creating privacy, but the other assassins seemed to respect the vampire's space and gave him a wide berth. There was not a soul near enough to overhear anything that might be said.

"Kyzra, old friend! What brings you from Oblivion?"

"Trouble," Kyzra replied, removing his soaking wet cloak, revealing his black and red skin, horns, and armor that marked him as a powerful Dremora. He sat down at the small table across from the vampire assassin.

Vicente gave him a questioning glare. Anything Kyzra believed to be trouble must be dangerous indeed. The two of them had been through much together, though most of it had been a hundred years or more ago, and Vicente could not remember a time when the Kynmarcher had feared anything.

"I have disgraced the clan and insulted Lord Dagon himself. I will not live long, I assure you. Even my own armies have abandoned me, and my most trusted Kynreeve has taken my rank and title."

The vampire stood angrily, "You would bring an entire Dremora fiefdom here? Endanger me and my brothers and sisters?"

"You owe me!" Kyzra shouted, his booming Dremora voice echoing througout the halls. Just then, the bundle he carried made a sound. It cried loudly. Vicente's rage was put to a halt as he wrapped his mind around this new development.

"It is my son," Kyzra explained, "Half Dremora, half dunmer. I want you to take him; I cannot bear for him to die for my mistakes."

"That was your disgrace, then? A dunmer woman?" Vicente asked, sitting back down.

"She was only the half of it," Kyzra replied cryptically, "Will you take him?"

Vicente nodded, taking the infant from the Dremora Lord, "I will warn you, I am no parent."

"As long as he lives, Vampire, I do not care how you raise him. Just promise me one thing."

"If it is within my power."

"Never tell him my name, never speak of me."

Vicente nodded in silent understanding. Kyzra stood and began to exit.

"What is his name?" Vicente called after him.

Kyzra paused for a short moment, as if he had never thought of the answer to that question. "Azyrek," he finally said, "Azyrek."

He left the hideout without another word. Azyrek cried all night long.



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post Jul 6 2009, 09:15 PM
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Chapter 3 - Kragenmoor (continued)

"What's wrong?" Venyn seeing Rinori's pale face on her return, "Did all go well?"

"That kind of work is for the Brotherhood," Rinori spat at him angrily, "Never. Ever. Ever do that to me again. Ever! Do you have any idea, any clue as to what I've done?"

"You completed your writ, as instructed by your Master, I assume," Venyn replied, not understanding, "As you've done for years."

"No," she said, "This was different. This was...perverse,"

She went about washing the paint from her face and the blood from her hands. The latter would never go away, but she kept scrubbing nonetheless.

"I don't see how-"

"Get out!" she screamed at him. Venyn left her then, with nothing but her reflection in the mirror. She pulled the thing off the wall and smashed it on the floor. Struggling to get out of the dress, she found it was too complex to remove by herself. Her dagger began making short work of it.

"Calm, child," she heard Ornos say from behind. She hadn't noticed him coming in before, "You're solving nothing right now,"

She turned to face the seer for a second, only to continue shredding the dress that seemed to trap her.

"Stop," he said, more forcefully this time, "Have you ever thought that maybe this happened for a reason?"

Rinori did stop, and a look of sudden realization crossed her face, "You knew, didn't you? You knew!" She pointed an accusatory finger at Ornos.

The old mer didn't deny it, "I had to let you make this mistake. I can't tell you why, because I don't yet know. But please understand that I had to. Come find me in the morning. We have work to do."

"I won't be able to sleep tonight," she said, "Let's start now so I can get my mind off things." She wanted nothing more than to leave Kragenmoor.

"That's just it," Ornos answered, "I want your mind on things. Think. Meet me in the morning."

So he left Rinori with her shattered mirror, torn dress, and dark thoughts.


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Dantrag   Blood of the Kyn   Feb 5 2008, 04:08 AM
canis216   Fascinating.   Feb 5 2008, 06:15 AM
The Metal Mallet   Wow, this is a prologue that definite sinks the ho...   Feb 5 2008, 07:39 AM
Agent Griff   Great prologue. If the rest of the story is like t...   Feb 5 2008, 08:21 AM
Olen   Nice opener.   Feb 5 2008, 08:38 PM
Black Hand   This sounds interesting. And of special note, if...   Feb 6 2008, 01:52 AM
redsrock   Well, after some unfinished stories and a long hi...   Feb 6 2008, 03:13 AM
Steve   Blast! This is so interesting and I just want ...   Feb 6 2008, 04:09 AM
Agent Griff   Um, nobody said Daedra were demons Black Hand.   Feb 6 2008, 09:08 AM
minque   Danny! Great to see more of your excellent wri...   Feb 6 2008, 10:48 AM
treydog   Yay, Danny's back! And what a promising s...   Feb 7 2008, 12:17 AM
Dantrag   Chapter 1 - A Bloody Message Azyrek appeared as n...   Feb 21 2008, 07:30 PM
Agent Griff   Wonderful update Dantrag. According to my predicti...   Feb 21 2008, 08:18 PM
The Metal Mallet   Interesting indeed. That was definitely a solid e...   Feb 22 2008, 07:18 AM
Olen   Nice stuff, this is pacing along brilliantly. I...   Feb 22 2008, 08:52 PM
jack cloudy   Holy crazy. So the Morag Tong assassin was a marty...   Feb 22 2008, 10:33 PM
minque   Ahhh..great update! This looks promising indee...   Feb 22 2008, 10:58 PM
treydog   Cool installment. The Morag Tong "writ...   Feb 25 2008, 02:14 AM
Dantrag   Chapter 1 - A Bloody Message (continued) "We...   May 15 2008, 06:58 AM
Olen   Nice update, this is moving along solidly and quic...   May 15 2008, 09:12 AM
raggidman   :lol: - and you took the words right out of my mo...   May 15 2008, 09:42 AM
minque   Yes, yes...tension is building up....excellent Dan...   May 17 2008, 12:10 AM
Dantrag   Chapter 2 - Exodus Night fell sooner than expect...   Jun 26 2008, 08:12 AM
minque   Ahhh an update! Sweet Danny.....I kinda like t...   Jun 26 2008, 10:46 PM
Olen   Love it. This story is a really good one.   Jun 27 2008, 10:04 AM
Dantrag   sorry this one's so short but...oh well. Chap...   Aug 24 2008, 05:37 AM
minque   How wonderful to see this story still alive! I...   Aug 24 2008, 09:47 PM
Olen   You have a good way of holding the rader's int...   Aug 24 2008, 10:57 PM
canis216   Ah, so very intriguing. Nice work Dantrag!   Aug 25 2008, 05:19 AM
mplantinga   Nice to see a new installment to this story. I...   Aug 26 2008, 08:57 PM
Dantrag   its been awhile, but here's an update. Chapte...   Mar 16 2009, 01:21 AM
canis216   Ah, fine work Dantrag. Nice to see this story cont...   Mar 16 2009, 02:45 AM
minque   Danny my friend! What a thrilling update, I...   Mar 16 2009, 09:38 PM
Dantrag   Chapter 2 - Exodus (continued) "There it is,...   Mar 17 2009, 08:41 AM
The Bean   Well this is an intesting one, and no mistake. Bel...   Mar 17 2009, 11:47 PM
minque   Yep, I'm keeping a close watch on this...very ...   Mar 19 2009, 10:03 PM
Olen   Awesome this is still going. I like it, its fresh...   Mar 19 2009, 11:49 PM
Dantrag   Chapter 3 - Kragenmoor Finally home, Rinori thoug...   Mar 20 2009, 04:32 AM
The Bean   Aha, I knew she was Morag Tong. I knew it! I ...   Mar 21 2009, 08:57 AM
Illydoor   Wow very nicely brought round to that twist. I lik...   Mar 21 2009, 05:27 PM
Dantrag   Chapter 3 - Kragenmoor (continued) "Ow!...   Jul 4 2009, 01:22 AM
minque   Ha...excellent! I'm glad to see another up...   Jul 4 2009, 08:22 AM
canis216   Very nice work.   Jul 4 2009, 05:32 PM
Dantrag   I did a bunch of writing recently, so the next few...   Jul 4 2009, 06:29 PM
minque   hehe Danny.....you did it again! Excellent wri...   Jul 4 2009, 09:07 PM
Dantrag   Chapter 3 - Kragenmoor (continued) The music star...   Jul 5 2009, 05:36 PM
canis216   Fantastic work!   Jul 5 2009, 05:48 PM
minque   Uhhhh yikes...MT-ladies are not to be trusted. Bu...   Jul 5 2009, 08:21 PM
canis216   Man this is good. I could see this as a scene in a...   Jul 6 2009, 09:20 PM
treydog   Truly outstanding work, Danny. You descriptions a...   Jul 6 2009, 11:00 PM
minque   Oh my dear, I do feel sorry for her! Danny I ...   Jul 7 2009, 02:22 AM
Dantrag   Chapter 4 - Stuck It took him nearly a week to re...   Jul 7 2009, 05:10 PM
seerauna   Just took awhile to read this and I have to say th...   Jul 7 2009, 06:28 PM
minque   Yes yes!! Another update! I must say I...   Jul 7 2009, 09:49 PM
Dantrag   Chapter 4 - Stuck (continued) Azyrek slipped out ...   Jul 11 2009, 09:18 PM
minque   Hilarious! I can fully understand the mage...   Jul 13 2009, 09:31 PM
canis216   :rolleyes: Silly mages. I feel Azyrek's pain....   Jul 15 2009, 02:47 AM
Dantrag   Chapter 4 - Stuck (continued) "What are you...   Nov 30 2009, 08:21 AM
Olen   I'd fallen behind on this one. Most enjoyable...   Nov 30 2009, 05:30 PM


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