 Retcon Sethyas Lore., Butchering the past for a better future! |
| Black Hand |
 Oct 16 2009, 12:53 PM
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| Olen |
Oct 16 2009, 07:33 PM
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Ooooh, more Sethyas. I've ready my way through the other stuff and this was just as good. It's nice to hear about earlier in his life. Is this to be continued or a one off?
I didn't really see anything particulrly noticeable to criticise but I feel compelled so I'll point out the final sentence. I think there might be a verb missing "I returned to Balmora my gold for the writ." 'to collect my gold'?. It's nothing more than a typo though... Or am I just reading it wrong? Anyway good to see you back at writing. -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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Black Hand Retcon Sethyas Lore. Oct 16 2009, 12:53 PM
minque I got this thrill down my spine, seeing this! ... Oct 16 2009, 08:42 PM treydog Most excellent to get more of Sethyas' backgro... Oct 18 2009, 01:42 AM Black Hand Deleted. Nov 19 2009, 12:30 PM Olen Enjoyable as ever, it's nice to see you writin... Nov 19 2009, 08:17 PM minque I know that "heart warming" may not be t... Nov 19 2009, 11:48 PM Black Hand Deleted. Dec 10 2009, 08:41 AM Olen Nice. Quite a different side to Seth shown there.... Dec 10 2009, 12:00 PM minque Beautiful! I knew deep inside that Sethyas is ... Dec 11 2009, 12:57 AM Black Hand Deleted. Dec 23 2009, 09:23 AM minque "Sethyas! why the hell didn't you sen... Dec 26 2009, 02:29 AM Black Hand -- May 30 2010, 06:54 PM Black Hand - Jun 4 2010, 11:25 PM Black Hand Deleted. Jun 5 2010, 12:13 AM Black Hand Deleted. Jun 6 2010, 09:55 AM minque Awesome! At last you revealed the secrets of S... Jun 11 2010, 12:04 AM Black Hand Deleted. Aug 17 2010, 05:17 AM Black Hand Deleted. Dec 15 2012, 02:38 AM Lycanthropic-Legend oo! I am liking the approach of this story... Dec 15 2012, 03:01 PM minque OMG! Seth is returning! Oh-la-la......now ... Dec 16 2012, 02:16 AM McBadgere LMFAO!!... :lol: :lol: :lol: ...
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minque I saw it! great pics....funny thing the site i... Aug 25 2013, 09:01 PM |
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