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minque
post Sep 23 2009, 10:21 PM
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Time for a new one!


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post Nov 30 2009, 10:11 PM
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My initial plan was for Salms to go mad with soul sickness between the camp and the Ghostgate and begin attacking people. You may have noticed that he's been trying to fend it off for quite some time now. Then Dranas Heleran was going to save Apelles' life, if I recall the plan correctly. Basically, here's how I generally envisioned things going down.

QUOTE("Original Plan - with Classic BBQ Flavor")
Owing to the shortage of men (and the frank conversation with Apelles, which they overheard and would claim to be a sign of lost faith), the commander of the midway camp (who doesn't really like Salms to begin with) was going to take over the caravan and drag Salms along to be tried and imprisoned in the dungeons at Ghostgate. Then, somewhere along the trail, there'd be an ash storm and/or ash creature attack, and that would be the last straw for Salms, whose Temple has continually let him down as he has been haunted by dreams. Pow, faster than you can say "Ia! Dagoth fhtagn!" he's madder than an outhouse rat.

The camp commander (Sedas Drethan) would die, as would a few of the officers. Then the caravan would have to get there with the people they have. The death of Salms would increase Apelles' suspicion of how the Temple is running things. He'd barge into the office all furious and demand to know why the Legion hasn't been asked to help, etc. He'd write a letter to his boss (or even the Duke himself) to send for additional reinforcements, but it would be intercepted by the Ghostgate commander (as all mail actually goes through his hand-picked Armigers). This would create a struggle to reach the outside world, as the Ghostgate is now effectively isolated, with the Commander's false reports creating false reassurances.


It's clear that this initial plan of mine is too lengthy by itself - we need to get these guys to Ghostgate ASAP. Feel free to co-opt whatever parts of it you like into it, though. Salms could be the mole (though it doesn't quite fit with the hints I gave earlier), or possibly his breakdown could be shifted to after the arrival at Ghostgate. I'd kinda prefer the latter, personally, but I'm not the only person in this RP.

I like several aspects of jackcloudy's plan, as well as Dantrag. Possibly Salms gives in and becomes a patsy to the Sixth House, working with the main mole without actually being the mole.

I think there might actually be Sixth House infiltration at multiple levels, and not just one. If the commander is a mole, he could actually be posing as the "new blood" sent in to "fix" the mess that the infiltrators created.

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post Dec 4 2009, 09:35 AM
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It's clear that this initial plan of mine is too lengthy by itself - we need to get these guys to Ghostgate ASAP. Feel free to co-opt whatever parts of it you like into it, though. Salms could be the mole (though it doesn't quite fit with the hints I gave earlier), or possibly his breakdown could be shifted to after the arrival at Ghostgate. I'd kinda prefer the latter, personally, but I'm not the only person in this RP.

I like several aspects of jackcloudy's plan, as well as Dantrag. Possibly Salms gives in and becomes a patsy to the Sixth House, working with the main mole without actually being the mole.

I think there might actually be Sixth House infiltration at multiple levels, and not just one. If the commander is a mole, he could actually be posing as the "new blood" sent in to "fix" the mess that the infiltrators created.


I like your idea.

so, the crew gets to ghostgate (ASAP), and after being attacked on the way by ash monsters, Salms goes crazy. So the leader at ghostgate (who is the true sixth house agent) kind of makes Salms the scapegoat for all of these strange dagoth ur-related happenings.

is that the line of thought you had, bbq?

on a more immediate note, what exactly is the scroll, minque? you said that dralas 'should recognize it', and I assume it's some kind of healing scroll, but just wanted to double check before i posted all willy-nilly.


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post Dec 6 2009, 09:55 PM
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QUOTE(Dantrag @ Dec 4 2009, 09:35 AM) *

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It's clear that this initial plan of mine is too lengthy by itself - we need to get these guys to Ghostgate ASAP. Feel free to co-opt whatever parts of it you like into it, though. Salms could be the mole (though it doesn't quite fit with the hints I gave earlier), or possibly his breakdown could be shifted to after the arrival at Ghostgate. I'd kinda prefer the latter, personally, but I'm not the only person in this RP.

I like several aspects of jackcloudy's plan, as well as Dantrag. Possibly Salms gives in and becomes a patsy to the Sixth House, working with the main mole without actually being the mole.

I think there might actually be Sixth House infiltration at multiple levels, and not just one. If the commander is a mole, he could actually be posing as the "new blood" sent in to "fix" the mess that the infiltrators created.


I like your idea.

so, the crew gets to ghostgate (ASAP), and after being attacked on the way by ash monsters, Salms goes crazy. So the leader at ghostgate (who is the true sixth house agent) kind of makes Salms the scapegoat for all of these strange dagoth ur-related happenings.

is that the line of thought you had, bbq?

on a more immediate note, what exactly is the scroll, minque? you said that dralas 'should recognize it', and I assume it's some kind of healing scroll, but just wanted to double check before i posted all willy-nilly.


Yes! it's an old ashlander scroll, something wise women use pretty regularly.I'd say it should be common knowledge among ashies, so I'm so sure Dralas woulkd recognize it...Oh and yes it's a potent healing spell or scroll


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minque   The Ghostfence rp: Discussion and Planning #2   Sep 23 2009, 10:21 PM
jack cloudy   I think that the most important thing right now is...   Sep 25 2009, 08:07 PM
Olen   Another thing is where are we going with Haz and R...   Sep 25 2009, 08:48 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, I think it would be best if we keep building ...   Sep 25 2009, 09:03 PM
minque   Ok..no way Rianne will die! And become a ghost...   Sep 26 2009, 01:45 PM
Colonel Mustard   Erna can slip away whenever, but until BBQ turns u...   Sep 28 2009, 09:53 PM
bbqplatypus   Yeah, I've been pretty damn busy this week. M...   Sep 28 2009, 10:11 PM
Colonel Mustard   As long as it's done at some point then I...   Sep 29 2009, 06:46 PM
bbqplatypus   I should have this finished on Friday - I can...   Oct 6 2009, 08:35 AM
minque   Just wondering..is this rp totally dead now? Where...   Oct 11 2009, 11:14 PM
bbqplatypus   No, not yet. Tuesday. Tuesday (I hope) is when I...   Oct 12 2009, 12:23 AM
Olen   I think it needs something drastic. My suggestion...   Oct 12 2009, 02:57 PM
bbqplatypus   I think it needs something drastic. My suggestio...   Oct 12 2009, 08:24 PM
jack cloudy   I don't know if it is the rp honestly but for ...   Oct 12 2009, 06:40 PM
jack cloudy   Yeah, that might be for the best. I can understand...   Oct 12 2009, 09:05 PM
minque   Yeah, that might be for the best. I can understan...   Oct 13 2009, 10:05 PM
Olen   Haz and Rothan could go in and pull her out to a h...   Oct 13 2009, 12:17 PM
bbqplatypus   It's not so much a surprise as just me waiting...   Oct 13 2009, 06:27 PM
jack cloudy   Ah, sorry about that. I just meant that without me...   Oct 13 2009, 10:19 PM
Olen   He was last active on the 8th, so five days ago. ...   Oct 13 2009, 11:38 PM
Dantrag   sorry i havent been around much; my mind's bee...   Oct 17 2009, 09:06 PM
Olen   Is this one dead again? Shall we fly to the const...   Nov 19 2009, 11:19 PM
minque   Hope not! And yeah maybe that is a good idea.....   Nov 19 2009, 11:40 PM
bbqplatypus   I don't know. I've had plans here, but I ...   Nov 20 2009, 01:21 AM
Colonel Mustard   Not a problem, old chap! *Cracks fight-writin...   Nov 20 2009, 09:35 PM
Dantrag   welcome back Tellie! anyhow, we're trying...   Nov 29 2009, 07:17 AM
canis216   That's my assumption. We need to get on the mo...   Nov 29 2009, 07:54 AM
Olen   Why exactly will that overarching narrative be, I ...   Nov 29 2009, 11:25 AM
Colonel Mustard   I concur with Olen. If we want this to get going p...   Nov 29 2009, 11:57 AM
jack cloudy   How about this for starters? With the sudden attac...   Nov 29 2009, 12:22 PM
Olen   Having sent them to retrieve the 'artifact...   Nov 29 2009, 01:06 PM
Colonel Mustard   I'd personally go for them arriving with the s...   Nov 29 2009, 01:57 PM
Dantrag   How about this for starters? With the sudden atta...   Nov 30 2009, 05:16 AM
Olen   Looks good to me. How soon can we get to ghostgat...   Nov 30 2009, 05:08 PM
Olen   Are there any objections to a teleport to Ghostgat...   Dec 3 2009, 12:42 PM
bbqplatypus   I'll make my own post sometime today, then I s...   Dec 3 2009, 04:03 PM
Colonel Mustard   I wouldn't mind having Erna chat with James at...   Dec 7 2009, 10:40 PM
minque   I'm going away tonight, to Germany and i won...   Dec 11 2009, 04:38 PM
bbqplatypus   Don't count on me being around this week. It...   Dec 14 2009, 07:00 AM
Dantrag   should we just make a 'skip ahead' post an...   Jan 4 2010, 09:52 PM
minque   should we just make a 'skip ahead' post a...   Jan 5 2010, 12:58 AM
Olen   Yes a vote for, barring any votes against I'll...   Jan 5 2010, 03:48 PM
jack cloudy   Here's a vote for. I really should have gotten...   Jan 5 2010, 10:07 PM
Olen   We should probably have a better idea of where thi...   Jan 7 2010, 03:16 PM
Olen   Double post but it's unrelated and a while has...   Jan 20 2010, 12:07 PM
Colonel Mustard   *Emerges from cave groggily, clutching cup of tea*...   Jan 25 2010, 08:55 PM
canis216   Sorry I haven't been responding--should've...   Jan 30 2010, 09:16 PM
Olen   Currently active we have Minque, Danny, canis, Mus...   Feb 2 2010, 06:01 PM
jack cloudy   Well, I don't really mind what we do but I do ...   Feb 4 2010, 07:23 PM
Olen   I think Rothan would be more likely to notice cert...   Feb 4 2010, 07:59 PM
jack cloudy   Yeah, I also thought his specialty lies elsewhere ...   Feb 4 2010, 08:52 PM
Olen   I moved us on a day, if anyone's got objection...   Feb 8 2010, 05:07 PM
Dantrag   i say go for it, olen. sounds like the best way to...   Feb 12 2010, 09:51 PM
minque   seconded! I'll try to post soon...   Feb 12 2010, 10:17 PM
Olen   I'm not sure what anyone plans for the next RP...   Feb 19 2010, 02:17 PM
jack cloudy   Well, I was just thinking. I could make it that so...   Feb 21 2010, 05:43 PM
Olen   Go for it. It gives him a good excuse to go rakin...   Feb 22 2010, 12:26 AM
jack cloudy   Alright, I set up the situation. Just thought I...   Feb 22 2010, 07:40 PM
bbqplatypus   Yeah, as you've probably figured out by now, I...   Mar 1 2010, 09:31 AM
Olen   I plan to get Rothan into the top room and have hi...   Mar 15 2010, 10:23 PM
jack cloudy   Well, let's see. If we were to alter the facts...   Mar 17 2010, 09:50 PM
Olen   The artifact could certainly be some sort of music...   Mar 18 2010, 09:57 PM
Dantrag   I like the musical device idea. Sixth house has th...   Mar 19 2010, 07:54 AM
minque   Yeah! i like that idea...hmmm of course dralas...   Mar 19 2010, 07:20 PM
Arkava   Hello all, Hopefully I'm not bothering anythi...   Mar 30 2010, 03:36 AM
jack cloudy   Well, it looks like we'll be busy with this on...   Mar 30 2010, 01:55 PM
Olen   Yea this RP needs the people, I see no reason why ...   Mar 30 2010, 01:58 PM
jack cloudy   Well, I thought that the plan was that of an ash s...   Apr 2 2010, 08:16 PM
canis216   Hey, sorry I've been on the outs for a bit wit...   Apr 4 2010, 10:09 PM
Olen   If you position him in the officey bit Rothan just...   Apr 5 2010, 11:26 AM
minque   Ok so I think the time has come for Dralas and Ria...   Apr 18 2010, 10:58 PM
Olen   Seeing as I posted last I edited, Rothan has seen ...   Apr 20 2010, 10:30 PM
Dantrag   alright, seeing as we're all about to go bell ...   May 5 2010, 06:52 PM
canis216   Well, I think the original idea was to have very l...   May 6 2010, 12:03 AM
Olen   I wouldn't bother with any actual battles on t...   May 6 2010, 12:57 PM
canis216   Hey Jack, what do you have in mind with Eno's ...   May 21 2010, 05:10 AM
jack cloudy   I guess that we are holding everyone up. So yeah, ...   May 21 2010, 07:20 AM
Olen   Does anyone have much more to do in this RP day or...   May 23 2010, 09:49 PM
canis216   If the Ashlanders are getting anything meaningful ...   May 23 2010, 11:00 PM
Dantrag   unless minque had something in mind, i say move it...   May 26 2010, 04:40 PM
minque   It's ok...start moving, Rianne just might try ...   May 26 2010, 09:39 PM
jack cloudy   Woops, got a bit sidetracked by stuff. Anyway, I...   May 31 2010, 10:00 PM


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