 Retcon Sethyas Lore., Butchering the past for a better future! |
| Black Hand |
 Oct 16 2009, 12:53 PM
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| Olen |
Dec 10 2009, 12:00 PM
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Nice. Quite a different side to Seth shown there. He's a good chatacter and stands up well to the different feel of this peice, is even improved by it.
My only critacism woud be of not always taking a new line for a new speaker which gave me a couple fo double-takes, but thats just formatting and the dialogue was good. The last few lines made me laugh.  -------------------- Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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Black Hand Retcon Sethyas Lore. Oct 16 2009, 12:53 PM
Olen Ooooh, more Sethyas. I've ready my way throug... Oct 16 2009, 07:33 PM minque I got this thrill down my spine, seeing this! ... Oct 16 2009, 08:42 PM treydog Most excellent to get more of Sethyas' backgro... Oct 18 2009, 01:42 AM Black Hand Deleted. Nov 19 2009, 12:30 PM Olen Enjoyable as ever, it's nice to see you writin... Nov 19 2009, 08:17 PM minque I know that "heart warming" may not be t... Nov 19 2009, 11:48 PM Black Hand Deleted. Dec 10 2009, 08:41 AM minque Beautiful! I knew deep inside that Sethyas is ... Dec 11 2009, 12:57 AM Black Hand Deleted. Dec 23 2009, 09:23 AM minque "Sethyas! why the hell didn't you sen... Dec 26 2009, 02:29 AM Black Hand -- May 30 2010, 06:54 PM Black Hand - Jun 4 2010, 11:25 PM Black Hand Deleted. Jun 5 2010, 12:13 AM Black Hand Deleted. Jun 6 2010, 09:55 AM minque Awesome! At last you revealed the secrets of S... Jun 11 2010, 12:04 AM Black Hand Deleted. Aug 17 2010, 05:17 AM Black Hand Deleted. Dec 15 2012, 02:38 AM Lycanthropic-Legend oo! I am liking the approach of this story... Dec 15 2012, 03:01 PM minque OMG! Seth is returning! Oh-la-la......now ... Dec 16 2012, 02:16 AM McBadgere LMFAO!!... :lol: :lol: :lol: ...
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minque I saw it! great pics....funny thing the site i... Aug 25 2013, 09:01 PM |
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