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ureniashtram
post Oct 13 2009, 10:14 PM
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Hi! Im ureniashtram,this is my first time to post a new story around here..so comments and crits are welcome.. A bit of my grammar maybe wrong so tell me if im mistaken so i can clean it up later.. Enjoy! biggrin.gif

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Chapter 1 : The Night Of The Daedra

"They are coming!"said the man in rags. The other refugees hiding in the tavern just cuddled up to each other in fear, panic or just taking advantage on the situation, Lugrub did not want know.

"Calm yourself, them puny Daedra are no match for Lugrub`s axe. Too bad Despair Pleaser got broken." an Orc, clad in Imperial Legion Armor tried to calm them by cursing the demons. That did little to ease the panic and Fear on their hearts. Growling in frustration, he kicked off the door and rushed at the field of battle. A figure also followed him, but like a phantom, Lugrub never noticed.

The field near the Chapel was beaming with activity. Mainly; Killing, Destroying and Maiming. Lugrub smiled insanely, the corner of his green lips reaching his ears. Letting out a battlecry, Lugrub charged at the fray with his Axe raised.

The nearest Dremora charged at Lugrub, mace leading the way. Lugrub narrowed his eyes and sent a demonic glare at the Dremora. That stopped him in his tracks by Fear.

The orc gripped his axe tightly, and waiting for the right time, threw it with strength that could make many Nords cry in jealousy. The hit severed the Dremora's head, and decapitated two more before the Axe found itself on the chest of a Dremora Valkynaz.

"Raarrgghh! Get the mortal's head! Grunfrak demands it!" the Valkynaz roared and cursed Lugrub for his pain, while the Dremoras and Scamps obeyed immediately. A few seconds later, the Valkyn had body torn in half by an Axe thrown by Lugrub.

As they charged at the Orc, they failed to notice eight Kvatch archers and a tall bosmer stand from their hiding spot. Many Daedra were dead before they knew what hit them.

A dread silence passed, and they felt the ground shook violently.

"Mehrunes himself has came to play! How nice!" the Orc cackled wildly while picking up a Daedric shield and Mace. Before they could react, two fireballs flew past the laughing orc and exploded upon impact on the Chapel. Several stories of cement and bricks rained down on the Imperial Guards. They were crushed like bugs.

A great shadow suddenly covered the field, silencing it with awe. A caterpillar like machine, with a large fiery hole on it's front, dwarfed the entire field if not Kvatch itself. It sent two fireballs at Lugrub, who managed to dodge on time. The guards raised their shields, in attempt to protect themselves. A few minutes passed and nothing happened.

"What is happening?"

"The..Machine..its not firing!"

"We have defeated them!"

All of the guards cheered, like they won. But this is just beggining. Raising their swords in air, they whooped and celebrated in what they thought a major victory.

"Renius,go to the chapel and see if there any survivors. " ordered a man with a bandana on his head. He wore the typical garb of the Kvatch Guards, or what's left of it at least.

"I appreciate the help you two, but get back to the chapel help Renius anyway you can."

"Ha! Lugrub do not wish to help, but fight! You Imperials are weak!" roared Lugrub.

A chuckle erupted from behind, and an unnaturally tall bosmer appeared. He wore a typical huntsman attire, with silver arrows and an iron bow slinged on his shoulders.

"All muscle, no brains." commented the Wood-Elf. The orc reached for a stone threw it at the snickering Elf. It hit straight on the face, with his mouth bleeding.

"Can't you come out here and show me that ridiculously powerful Orchish muscle of yours?"

"That's just the beginning, pal come here. I'll have you arrested because of your attitude!"

"This is not the time to be squablling! Go to the chapel and help Renius!"yelled the Captain to the two men arguing.

"..just having a little fun..Ok, then." said Menathil with a mocking tone. Nearly there, the Machine again fired and caught, ironically, the guards off guard.

"Agh!"

"Prepare yourselves!"

"Where are the Gods when we need them?!" all of the guards are now panicking and their morale lost.

Menathil and Lugrub looked and was shocked when the Machine, was shooting fire balls to them. "Run!" the elf yelled, sprinting for the door of the Chapel like a man who lost his wife.

"Orc, lookout!"and when Lugrub looked up he saw the very chapel falling to him. "C'mon, don't you stand there, come here!"ordered a young Imperial. Lugrub looked to the direction of the voice, and saw a guard running to him.

"Wha-"

An explosve sound erupted and Lugrub thought he was dead but when he opened his eyes,he was alive. He looked around him thinking he could thank the imperial but saw no one.

"Imperial where ar-" he was surprised that the bloody head of the Imperial was right beneath the debris.

"This is no time to mourn Orc, let's go!" Menathil shouted, while making a gesture with his hands to 'come here'. Lugrub suddenly felt pain on his head. Reaching up to touch his throbbing head, he fainted.

"Orc, Orc!"then all was black. Menatil tried all of his might to removed the debris that buried Lugrub. And after a few minutes, he finally recovered the bloody and injured body of the arrogant Orc.

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All right folks thats chapter 1 ill add more later-ureniashtram. biggrin.gif

This post has been edited by ureniashtram: Apr 9 2010, 10:55 PM


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Djinn: What wish would you like to have, young master?
Random dude: SUPA POWAZ!
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Djinn: Is there anything I could make true, lord?
Old guy: .. Youth and charisma.
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Djinn: Your heart speaks of wanting. I could make it true, milord.
Me: Hmmm. I wish to know what I want. Then you could hook me up in some insidious deal, spirit.
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post Dec 28 2009, 01:42 PM
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Well, the first one is an example of a noob i am. Heh, anyway, I`ll just continue Lugrub`s story. After I`m finished with this one, I`ll continue to update more. Also, I enabled the thingy so you readers can post your comments and crits.


Chapter 2: An Offer That Could Never Be Refused


"Ruma, are you sure about this? I mean, The Master knows we don`t need anymore recruits" an unknown altmer said while holding a staff. He is dressed in blood red robes, with similary colored hood covering most of his face. Another robed figure approached them, but with a voice of a female Altmer.

"Of course I'm sure about this! Father and the Master ordered this Themselves. Apparently, this one's got a rather... intruiging Power. A Potentialite... We didn't have many of those before Father's Ascension.."

The male altmer suddenly placed his hands on the female's mouth.

"Hush it, will you? We're not exactly sure if this one's gonna co-operate." the female slapped the hand away, and roughly kicked the Male one where 'the sun don't shine'. Gasping in pain, he fell with thud clutching his manhood.

"Relax, brother. Hermaeus Mora Himself told the Master that this one will be his Servant."

"If you...say..Ugh...so." the Altmer stood up, casted a healing spell where it hurts and turned to Lugrub.

After saying unknown words, a fog engulfed both the altmer and Lugrub. And with a blink of an eye, the two appeared in a land of fire, where the sky is crimson: The Deadlands.

At first, Lugrub tried to escape, to only find himself paralyzed.

This amused the altmer and said;

"It`s no use, beast. I used the very incantation that Vivec and his foolish Triune used to poison that Nerevar. If you move your legs, kiss goodbye to it. The same goes to your whole body, one move, dead." the kidnapper said threatfully. A few minutes passed and Lugrub heard a demonic laugh. It was getting louder and nearer when Lugrub saw who it is;

Mehrunes Dagon.

Lugrub was now panicking as Dagon grabbed him and said:

"Grrr, so this puny creature is the one who massacred Grunfrak`s troops. Pity, he was a good general, but now I have to wait before he is revived. I suppose eternal torment would be a satisfying punishment for you, no? If not, you will do my bidding with unending loyalty. Yes... you will be my harbinger of destruction on the mortal world, but not without a little present. Also I want you to kill a certain person like yourself who destroyed a battalion of dremora. If you do it, I`ll make you a vessel of pure hatred and power."

Lugrub could not believe what he just heard, he would be Dagon`s harbinger of destruction. At first Lugrub declined, but after being reminded of the reward, it was an offer he could never refuse. So he accepted Mehrunes 'little present', that sent a very painfull shock in Lugrub`s body.

And with that he awoke. After standing up, he found that his muscle and his reflexes was now higher that he could ever imagine. After a few pushups and jabbing at no one particular, he saw the Captain with 5 soldiers talking to Menatil and an unknown Altmer.

The Altmer was wearing a robe of black and red color, with steel shoulder pad on his shoulder and steel boots and gauntlets. After a few minutes of talking, the Captain waved Lugrub to join the conversation. As Lugrub neared them, Menatil said;

"You`re finally awake, orc. As you can see, we`re planning on how to take back the castle. And well, we got bad news. The emperor`s been assassinated but not without saying 'Never take the offer of the Destroyer' to our royal friend Varinel here. Dont you think it`s a mystery?" Menatil said while laughing, but to Lugrub, he knew he made a very bad mistake. A few minutes later they were joined by eight Legionairres.

No doubt they got a fighting chance now. But the Captain splitted his soldiers into two groups, so while the other group charge the enemy head-on, the other is going to flank them and open the gate if it isnt open. Lugrub will be assisting the group who would charge in, while Menatil and Varinel the altmer will be with the other group. And with a few prayers to the Nine Divines, they went their seperate ways.

Outside the chapel, Lugrub could sense other daedra roaming around. He knew it was because of that demon`s 'little present' but he knew there was no backing down. The group was alerted when they heard a sickening scream coming from a tower, and they saw a scout fall to his death because of an axe thrown by a dremora.

As group prepared themselves, they noticed that they were outnumbered by 5 to 2. Two dremora rushed with their axes and longswords raised. The first dremora tackled a guard by his shield and crushed his abdomen. Then the dremora stumbled on Lugrub and stared at his eyes and did the strangest thing: he smiled to the orc and went for another guard.

The very thought of his worst enemy smiling and leaving him alone sent a shiver to Lugrub. But nonetheless, he grabbed the dremora by the skull and crushed it. A second dremora rushed at him, and swung his sword in a wide arc and said something with an accusing tone. But Lugrub evaded it and buried his axe in the dremora`s skull that split it in two. After that, an unknown element forced Lugrub to say:

"A small price to be payed. Can you feel the regret of killing your own future soldiers? wahahahaa!" this made the others look him suspiciously and move on.

To Lugrub however, he almost felt sick. He only wished this nightmare will end. A few minutes of walking and killing any daedra the stood in their way, the group finally reached the gate, only to see it closed and dremora shooting arrows above the gate.

A few shots and two guards is down with an arrow sticking at their throats. Fortunately, three guards was carrying bows and made short work at the daedric archers.

Lugrub finally decide to open the gates by himself and try to see if Dagon`s 'little present' is going to assist him in it. Lugrub grabbed the gate bars, and to everyones suprise, lifted it like it was a piece of paper. All of them was in awe, especially Lugrub. But the captain warned:

"You might want to wait for the other group, orc. I mean we cant take them by ourselves. S-"

"No need, Captain. Apparently we got stucked by a huge debris, and without Varinel`s telekinesis spell, I dont even want to think of it." Menatil said while helping Varinel and the others. And after they witness another gate opened by Lugrub, they stared in awe except Varinel.

After Lugrub opened the gates, the outside of the castle was empty and they presumed the bulk of the swarm is inside. And when they opened the entrance to the castle, they were suprised to what they found inside.


To be continued... that`s about it. Read and Reply, as always.

This post has been edited by ureniashtram: Apr 10 2010, 12:36 AM


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Random dude: SUPA POWAZ!
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Old guy: .. Youth and charisma.
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Djinn: Your heart speaks of wanting. I could make it true, milord.
Me: Hmmm. I wish to know what I want. Then you could hook me up in some insidious deal, spirit.
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