I'm glad to see this start again. I read it all over a couple of days a few months ago and it's excellent, I like the degree of emotion there is in the story, the hopes and fears of your characters are far more realistic than many fantasy stories which makes them come off the page nicely.
I also like the development of the plot, I shall have to go and re-read the rest of Sethyas Volume II...
More?
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Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.
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