QUOTE(haute ecole rider @ Mar 30 2010, 06:17 PM)

Is it just me, or do others think of the Irish hero Cuchulainn every time we read Cuhlecain?
I have written
Cuchulainn when I meant
Cuhlecain at least five times, but the Hero of Ulster bears very little resemblance to the would-be Emperor of Tamriel.
On a side note: Cuchulainn is what I named my dog in Dragon Age: Origins.
QUOTE(SubRosa @ Mar 30 2010, 06:31 PM)

Ahh, Lattia again. She is probably my favorite character of this play. Her sister Varla is something else as well. Named after her stones no doubt...

nits:
He turned on his heal I am thinking you wanted
heel instead.
Thanks to the book,
Harvest End, we know that the Direnni’s gained their fortune by trafficking with daedra, just as the Ayleids did. Because of that, all of the Direnni elves in this story carry Ayleidic names:
Aran – King
Varla – Star
Lattia – Light
Thank you for exposing another nit, it has been addressed.
QUOTE(mALX @ Mar 30 2010, 09:05 PM)

I have to go with Hauty on this. This chapter has always been a testament to your ability to develop characters in a short setting and weave strong visual images.
High praise, coming from the creator of both Maxical and Shivani!
QUOTE(Winter Wolf @ Mar 30 2010, 10:38 PM)

The powerful images you create in this chapter feel like a movie to me. Epic.
I keep looking over my shoulder in case I get hit by the boom guy.
Thank you, Wolf. And don’t worry, the AD will yell at you to move long before the Boom guy gets too close.
QUOTE(Olen @ Mar 31 2010, 04:20 AM)

More or less as has been said above. That was strong chapter and introduced a lot in a very short space of words, and introduced it well. I'm greatly enjoying this.

One thing I saw:
"When they had eaten their fill they repaired to the solar.." - did you mean repaired?
Good piece, I look forward to the next part.
Thank you Olen!
In this case I am using repaired in its verb form:
Repair - To betake oneself; go, as to a place:
He repaired in haste to Washington.
And stay tuned, things get a bit. . .interesting from here.