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Jacki Dice
post Mar 28 2010, 08:18 PM
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Hi everyone! Time for Wrothken to make his debut here at Chorrol.

For those new to the story, I won't have any screenshots (sorry!) But I am working on drawing the characters out and posting those up instead.

I hope you all enjoy ♥

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A Door In Niben Bay



"Your money or your life!" The Khajiit snarled with one hand on her steel mace. It was well worn, making it obvious that it was no bluff.

Days ago, Wrothken would have simply walked by, hoping the bandit would end it quickly. Today, however, was the day for action. It was time to reclaim his dignity, dammit; and it started now.

"Why don't you take that mace and shove it up your tail?"

The Khajiit growled. "You know what? I'll just take both!" She swung the mace at him. Instantly, Wrothken knew what he would take from her when he was finished.

He dodged her blow and punched her in the face. She reeled back, grabbing her nose with her free hand. Her eyes were on fire and Wrothken knew he had to be quick. She roared, swinging the mace as hard as she could, barely missing his shoulder. Wrothken noticed her overstep, and he grabbed her wielding arm with one hand, pulling her in, and he thrust his knee hard into her stomach. As she cried out, Wrothken was able to wrench the mace from her hand. In one quick move, he slammed it against her side. She moaned in pain, clutching it. Wrothken wasn't sure if it was in his head, but he swore he heard a crack on contact.

"Jekosiit!" She hissed. Quickly, she ran from him.

Wrothken's heart thudded as he watched her take off, cursing at the top of her lungs. He didn't know if she had accomplices, so he hurried away.

As he walked, he looked south to Valenwood. He briefly considered heading in that direction to start his new life, but then he remembered all Kirsty had told him. The government was in ruin. They were distrustful of other races, so a Nord would be unwelcome and likely alone in the society. Oh, and she said something about them eating other people occasionally. That indeed was a dealbreaker. After all, Wrothken was a big, broad shouldered man; he could easily feed a family of four and then some. He also didn't know if Bosmer had a preference toward "white meat." Shaking his head, he continued on the Gold Road.

With a sigh, he realized that he didn't think about the loneliness factor when he allowed Kirsty to talk him into his journey. He was by nature a very chatty person. He looked back, barely able to see the faint outline of Castle Kvatch. He wanted desperately to go back and convince Kirsty to go with him, but he couldn't. For one, the afternoon was slowly giving away to evening and she hated traveling by night. The other thing was that she would never leave her bakery; not after all the blood, sweat, and tears she poured into it. Kvatch would burn, and she would remain, rebuilding with her own tiny hands if she had to. Trying to accept his isolation, he turned to his own mind for conversation.

He looked around as he crossed Skingrad. "I wonder what it would be like here in Wine County..." He envisioned himself in a house with cultured friends over, sampling the latest Surilie Brothers concoction with fine cheeses. He laughed uncontrollably. That was no place for him. He was more the type to drink ale in a loud tavern. "Too bad I can't go back to Bruma quite yet." The very thought sickened him.

Soon he saw a woman standing in the middle of the road. She was a Dunmer, wearing only simple clothing. When he got closer, he noticed dirt stains on her knees and leaves in her hair. Her stubby fingers were caked with soil. He smiled. "Afternoon," he said, longing for a decent conversation.

"A perfect tomato... one taste, and it is gone forever. And then... a lifetime of searching for the next one," she said sadly. "Undena Orethi. I am a pilgrim in search of the perfect tomato. It is my grail, and I shall follow it all my life."

Wrothken didn't know what to say. He wanted someone to talk to, but really? Tomatoes? He gave her a nod and continued on his way.

As the path took a sharp curve, a thought came into his mind suddenly. Kirsty was right! I haven't thought about Awour all day! Then he stopped. "Dammit!" he shouted, stomping his foot. Those thoughts were always counter productive, as his mind always became flooded with memories of the Altmer. Anytime he closed his eyes, he swore he could feel her golden, hip length hair, shades lighter than his own, on his cheeks. He could still see her pale green eyes staring at him, though he was miles away from her. He still smelled her flowery scent--

"Stop it!" he said aloud. He forbade his mind to bring her up again. Obviously Skingrad wasn't far enough.

He glared at the ground as he walked until a round stone caught his eye. It was white and smooth, just laying on the path. Curiously, he nudged it with his foot. It rolled over, greeting him with empty eye sockets and a malicious grin. A skull. He instantly felt a chilling numb throughout his body. He nudged it again, turning its gaze elsewhere. Only a few minutes passed when he came across another. He ignored it, forcing himself to keep his head held high, though it was hard resisting the urge to slink back to Kvatch.

"Stop it," he repeated, this time in a harsh whisper. "She is not worth it. I'm stronger than this. I can beat this on my own." His heart pounded angrily in his chest. "Traitor," he growled.

He stomped up the path until he came across two headless skeletons in front of a cave. On either side of the cave was a stake with three skulls impaled on them. More skulls hung from ropes alongside the rickety door. Contrasting them were heart-shaped leaves with budding violet flowers, wrapping beautifully around the door and even on the poles.

Curiosity was almost overwhelming him. He put his hand on the knob, pressing his ear to the door. He could hear shuffling and throaty grunts and whispers. He couldn't make out any words. As he twisted the knob, a saying popped into his mind: Curiosity killed the Khajiit. He considered skipping it and heading back to the path, but he remembered what Kirsty always added: But satisfaction brought it back.

He took his hand from the knob and took his torch from his back. He concentrated hard, feeling warmth in his heart. The warmth blossomed within him and felt as if it was trailing down his left arm and bloomed in his hand. He used the small flame to ignite the torch. He didn't know what exactly was in there, but with his mace drawn and a pounding heart and quivering legs, he burst in.

A pair of goblins were a few yards ahead of him, apparently arguing over a fresh rat corpse. However, Wrothken's arrival brought them a new source of food, or so they thought. They both ran at him, one holding a rusted dagger, the other a wooden club. Wrothken had heard of people getting extremely sick from rust-infected wounds, so he focused on the bladed one first.

He was thankful for his steel cuirass. Even though it had seen much better days, it reduced the pain of the whacks he got from the club, as he attacked the first goblin. After it went down, he turned quickly, giving the second goblin a well-earned beating. The goblin chose to remain and take it until Wrothken's final blow. As it fell, Wrothken heard a clinking noise. A few gold coins and a lock pick fell from its rags. Seeing as how the goblin no longer had use for either, Wrothken picked them up and continued inside.

The first room was quiet. Most likely the two goblins were in the area before the rat came along. The first thing Wrothken noticed was a large mound in the corner with bright silver veins wrapping around it. Excited, Wrothken searched the area for a pick. Maybe if I harvest enough silver, I can convince Awour to come back! he thought. "No, no, no!" he shouted, hitting himself on the head with each exclaim. He wasn't going to allow himself to crawl back to her. But the silver... oh, yes, he would show her. If he could get enough silver, he could show her exactly what she lost. If only he could find a pick!

In his hunting, he stumbled over a small, wooden chest. He knelt down, setting his mace down in front of him, and tried to open it. He sighed in relief as it opened without the objection of a lock. However, he was disappointed to find no pick axe. He was rewarded with a few more lock picks and a handful of gold. "Least it's something," he muttered. With a forlorn glance at the tempting silver, he continued on.

He was caught by surprise when a goblin smacked him in the stomach with an iron mace. It must have heard him in the next room. The blow caused him to stumble a little, but when he got his bearings back, he retaliated, burying his mace in the goblin's gut. The goblin squawked angrily and tried to bite Wrothken's arm with his noticeably sharp teeth. Wrothken quickly withdrew, since his arm was unprotected and he slammed his mace into the goblin's forehead.

He wasn't sure if it killed it or just knocked it out, so he didn't take his sweet time surveying the room. It was a dead end anyway. The only thing of interest was another silvery vein and a chest. Wrothken looked at the goblin and poked it with his foot. It didn't stir. If it was alive, it wouldn't return to consciousness for awhile. Wrothken went to the chest, dismayed to find out that it was locked. Lock picking was never his strong point. Just as he predicted, his first and second attempt failed. The third attempt, he got lucky and the chest opened up. It contained a little more gold, two lock picks, a head of lettuce, and a filthy fork.

Wrothken headed the other direction and entered what looked like a primitive kitchen. An empty pot sat over an open flame. Nearby, there was a table with disgustingly dirty utensils. Some sort of meat sat on the table along with a few potions. He was wary of anything created by goblins, but he figured there would be no harm in selling them. There had to be a mage somewhere who would want them.

He was in the middle of gathering them up when a pot whizzed by his head. He turned and saw a goblin wielding a ladle with suspicious looking fuzz sprouting from the spoon. The goblin angrily picked up a chair and threw it hard at Wrothken. He fell back, crushing the potions and dropping his mace. The goblin recognized the weapon and dashed, snatching it up before Wrothken could get back up. The goblin hit him while he was still down, creating large dents in the armor.

He couldn't tell where it was going to hit next because he was trying to shield his head with his thick forearms, though he could feel the goblin moving down near his legs, still swinging as hard as it could. Wrothken roughly kicked it and it landed right in the fire pit. It squealed loudly in unimaginable pain. Wrothken looked at it and felt sorry for the poor creature. He picked up his mace and used a well-placed hit to put it out of its misery. The room was already filling with the stench of roasting goblin. Wrothken felt ready to leave when a larger goblin strolled in.

It held a staff with a goblin head attached to it and wore a feathery head dress. It looked at the carnage and then at Wrothken, then back again. It gave Wrothken a look of fury, then turned on its heel and ran. Wrothken was bewildered. Surely that was the chief! Why was it running away? He thought about going after it, but he didn't know how much time he'd spent in the cave. Since he wanted to be in bed at a decent hour, he let the goblin run away and he headed to the door.


Twilight greeted him with such an eerie silence that he wouldn't have been surprised if the headless skeletons rose up and came after him. Paranoia encouraged a quick glance at them, and thankfully they remained on the ground.

White-Gold Tower was glowing like a pearl in the distance. Wrothken knew there was no way he was going to make it to the Imperial City before nightfall. His best bet would be to find an inn and set off in the morning.

As he walked, he passed a legionnaire on his horse. "Evening, citizen." he said, nodding.

Wrothken grunted in response. The sight of a legionnaire sickened him. It didn't matter that it wasn't the same person. It didn't matter that this legionnaire probably didn't even know Bacchus. All that mattered was that armor, and the memory of it scattered on the floor leading to the bedroom...his bedroom...

He felt as if a dark cloud loomed over his head as he continued on his way. He couldn't figure out what he did wrong. She never mentioned any problems. He didn't know if he should take it as a warning and be happy it ended before things were too serious, or if he should try harder to get her back. He was so conflicted. His thoughts were so consuming that he forgot about the path and just headed straight.

He longed to hold her cool, soft figure against his once more. He wanted to bask in the glow of her amber skin. He needed her silken hands-- A fireball zoomed past his head, interrupting his mind.

The imp let out chirping sounds, which Wrothken interpreted to be laughter. Did it understand? Was it mocking him? With a guttural growl, Wrothken tried swatting it with his mace. It dodged each blow, tweeting joyfully. It is laughing at me! he thought with clenched teeth. It fueled his rage and he began swatting harder and faster. Eventually, after what felt like an eternity, he landed a good hit. The imp fell to the ground, though still alive and alert. Before it could do anything, Wrothken picked it up by the legs and threw it. It took him a few minutes to feel the slightest bit guilty about it.

"Great," he said, looking around. He was deep in the forest and it was already dark. White-Gold Tower was no longer easily seen. The night was growing chilly. Wolves howled in the distance. Wrothken was tired and he knew that would be a hindrance if confronted by a hungry pack, be it wolves or bandits. "There has to be an inn somewhere..." he said, looking around. Then again, he wasn't sure if he wanted to spend the rest of the night looking for one. He decided to head back toward Skingrad...which was opposite of where he was actually walking.

"Hmmm..." He stopped. After about a half hour walking, Wrothken stared at the Ayleid ruin ahead of him. He turned to a stone fort, which wasn't too far away, and said, "Now, I vaguely remember that...but this wasn't here before, was it?" How he wished Kirsty was with him. She was much better with directions. Sadly, he was left to his own instructions. "Maybe if I head this way..." he said, walking southeast, instead of west as he believed.

He knew his feet hated him. If they could, they'd probably jump off his ankles and run away. With each throbbing step, Wrothken knew they'd pay him back tenfold in the morning. He trudged along until he caught a buttery scent. He could tell it was something baked. His stomach growled loudly, scolding him for not eating since morning. He no longer cared about the inn. All he wanted was a taste of that food. He followed his nose until he was able to see a point of light.

It didn't flicker, like a campfire. Instead it was steady, telling him it was likely a building. For the first time in ages, his heart rose. Ignoring the burning protests of his feet, he broke into a run. Even when his torch finally blew out, he didn't stop. He followed the light as if he were a moth.

A modest building soon came into view. Two windows were lit. A single horse sat outside the door, under a swinging sign. It read: The Inn of Ill Omen. Suddenly Wrothken was a little put off. Ill Omen? Did the owner want to scare off customers? Still, it was late and the scent was stronger than ever. He opened the door, almost wanting to sleep right there on the entrance floor.

"Well, I'll be a spotted Snowbear," the man at the counter exclaimed. "A customer!"

Wrothken nodded wearily. Awour used to refer to him as her "snowbear," but he pushed the thought away before it could distract him further. He sat at the counter and asked, "What is that smell? Whatever it is, I'd like some."

The man paled. "Oh... you mean S'Jirra's potato bread?"

Wrothken gasped. "Potato bread? Sounds wonderful!" His mouth watered just thinking about it.

"Ahh..." the man rubbed the back of his head sheepishly. "Well, the thing is, I don't sell it here. It's actually the inn up the road..." He trailed off.

Wrothken groaned. It was so tempting, seducing him with not just fresh bread, but potatoes... But he was so worn out. "You know what, I'll just eat here. What do you have?"

The color flushed back in the man's face. "I can fix you up some crab's meat! Just add some ingredients and it'll be the best crab you've ever had!"

"Fine, and I need a drink."

The man nodded, heading to his stove. "Name's Manheim, by the way." He didn't give Wrothken a chance to answer. "And as you probably saw, this here's the Inn of Ill Omen. Funny name, I know." He took out a leek and chopped it up. "But it's too late to change it now." He put the leek in a pan, along with some crab meat and a sprinkling of cheese. "You know, it's pretty late. You wouldn't happen to need a room, would you?"

Forcing his eyes to stay open, Wrothken answered, "Yes, actually I do."

"Great!" Manheim set the food on a plate and gave it to Wrothken, along with a bottle of ale. "I have one upstairs for ten septims. You interested?"

"Yeah, I'll take it." He took a fork and began shoveling the food in his mouth. He was done in seconds.

Manheim laughed. "Now that's what I like to see! A man with an appetite! Now, let's see... with the meal the total will be about... eighteen septims."

Wrothken was glad he explored the cave earlier. He took the amount from his coin purse and set it on the counter.

"Great..." Manheim examined them, seeming to suspect they might be fake. Satisfied, he pointed up the stairs. "Alright, first room on your left. The washroom is down the hall to the right."

Wrothken nodded and walked up the stairs.

The room was no bigger than a closet with a bedroll on the floor. He stripped out of his armor and his shirt, then he sat on the bed. He swished the bottle around for a few moments as he thought. No going back now. Tomorrow, I'll begin anew. He wasn't sure what, but the Imperial City had to have something for him. He raised the bottle up, as if toasting to himself, and chugged it down.

He crawled into the bedroll, clutching the pillow tightly. Almost instantly, he drifted to sleep.

This post has been edited by Jacki Dice: Jan 2 2011, 04:53 AM


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We are rising together
Brazen, exalting, a hiss of triumph rings
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post Apr 7 2010, 08:22 PM
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Decisions, decisions...


When he opened his eyes, he expected to see the beautiful sky and the path that would lead him to Crucible. His eyes widened and he looked around, halfway hoping that he did actually go to sleep beneath the resonator, and was just dreaming. Sadly, his aching body told him otherwise. Instead of being outside, he saw that he was still inside the fort, only there was a Dunmer with him.

He walked up to him with a wide smile and said, "Finally, Lord Sheogorath has sent someone to assist me! But where are my manners?" He cleared his throat, muttering, "Must get into my professional tone..." He cleared his throat once more and spoke in a deeper, more even voice. "Welcome to Xedilian, I'm the dungeon caretaker, Kiliban Nyrandil."

Wrothken sighed deeply. "Why am I still in here?"

"Xedilian would normally have sent you back to the entrance when you stepped on the pad in the Resonator Chamber. Since you're up here, I can only surmise that adventurers are already entering the dungeon as we speak." Kiliban seemed almost pleased.

"That's nice, but that doesn't really explain why I'm still here."

"I'm afraid until the adventurers are dealt with, Xedilian will keep you here. Even I can't will its doors to open. To put it bluntly, you're stuck here for the moment. No disrespect intended."

He sighed. His bath would have to wait. "Alright. How do I deal with them? Should I just go out there and tell them to shoo?"

Kiliban laughed. "Oh, heavens no! The adventurers must go through a cycle. All you need to do is decide what becomes of them. Will you drive them insane or will you pull the life from their bodies?"

"What?"

"Here," Kiliban held his arm and led him to a transportation tile. They arrived in another area overlooking a large room with a small tree-creature. "Now, these adventurers seek a place to live here in the Isles. Since that horrid Gatekeeper isn't around anymore, it's become easy for just anyone to stroll in and set up shop. As you know, Lord Sheogorath only welcomes those He sees fit for residency. Now, it's up to you to decide whether or not they're worthy." He patted him on the shoulder. "I bet you're just tickled pink! Now, about the buttons. When you push the appropriate button, an event will unfold for the adventurers to experience. One is physically harmful... usually lethal traps or creatures... something relished by the residents of Dementia. The other choice is more mental. They are designed to make the adventurers lose their grip on reality, much like the residents of Mania."

"I see..." Wrothken stared at the tiny creature. He wanted to know just how something so small could cause insanity.

"Oh, look! Here they come!" Kiliban said.

A group of three men entered. The first was an Orc in a suit of Orcish armor. He carried a large claymore on his back. The second to enter was an Dunmer wearing aqua robes, and the last was a brown-haired man. Wrothken couldn't tell what race he was.

"...now keep your weapons ready and watch your backs. Do what I say, and we might just get outta here alive." The Orc said to the other two.

They stopped and stared at the small creature. The Orc began to laugh.

"Awwww.... ain't it cute! What in Oblivion is that thing?" He continued laughing.

"This is one of the 'horrid guardians' of which the stories spoke?" The third man asked.

"Be careful," the Dunmer warned. "There may be more to this creature than meets the eye."

Kiliban nudged Wrothken. "Press a button," he whispered.

Wrothken looked at both of them. One was smiling and one was frowning. Self-defense was one thing, but he couldn't bring himself to decide to kill them just for fun. He pressed the smiling button.

"What a joke," the Orc said, walking past it. "Let's be rid of this thing and continue on our way."

Wrothken heard a faint hiss, but he didn't think they could hear it. The other men did double takes at the small creature.

"Are my eyes playing tricks, or is the creature growing?"

It didn't look any bigger to Wrothken. He looked at Kiliban, who was smiling widely. "The button you pressed released hallucinogenic spore gas into the chamber. It's tricking them into believing the creature means to kill them. Don't worry, its bark is far worse than its bite." He chuckled at his little joke.

Wrothken looked back at the chamber where the men were scrambling, desperately trying to get away from the creature. The hissing soon stopped. The adventurers calmed down and the creature crawled into a corner.

The Dunmer panted hard. "All this time it was merely an illusion," he said wiping sweat from his brow. "How clever."

The Orc turned around and walked slowly toward the other man. "Wait... what's wrong with Lewin?"

Lewin was on the ground, huddled in the fetal position. He stared after the creature. "...ma-makes no sense...should be d-dead...what...who..."

The Dunmer frowned. He walked over to the Orc, placing his hand on his shoulder. "I think this place got to him... perhaps we should leave."

The Orc shook his head. "We'll pick him up on the way out. He'll have to fend for himself."

The remaining men entered another room, leaving Lewin behind.

"Watching them run from the Giant Gnarl gets me every time," Kiliban said happily. "Another chamber, another victim to eliminate. Hurry, the anticipation is overwhelming!" He led Wrothken to the next platform.



The first thing Wrothken saw was a pile of gold and jewels the size of Kirsty's bakery. Instantly, he made a mental list of all the things he could buy with such a large amount. The only problem was that it was locked up in a large cage. When the Orc and Dunmer entered the room, Wrothken knew they were thinking the same thing.

"Look!" The Orc pointed. "I told you! Treasure! Let's have at it, Syndelius."

They ran up the flight of stairs leading to it. The Orc grabbed hold of the bars and shook them hard. "Blast! The cage is locked. If only Lewin were here... he could get us through this in no time."

Syndelius reached through the bars, but he quickly pulled back, hissing in pain. "It's hot! Do you think you can pry the door open?"

The Orc descended the stairs. "Forget it! This is obviously a trick! Let's get out of here."

Wrothken looked at Kiliban, who nodded his head. He pushed the smiling button.

"To be so close, and yet so far. If only we had the key! Wait.. do you hear something?"

A vague jingling sound started to grow louder and louder until hundreds, maybe thousands, of keys spilled to the floor.

Syndelius whooped loudly. "Look! Keys! One of them must open the gate! We're rich!"

The Orc flooded his arms. "Let's get out of here, Syndelius. This is obviously a trick to waste our time!"

"I'll know it when I see it! Yes... it must be here!"

The Orc grabbed his arm. "They're all fake! Just come with me now!"

Powered by his lust for gold, he wrenched free and dug through the keys. "...find it... yes... I must find the key... rich beyond all my dreams..." He laughed under his breath.

"Bah! Suit yourself!" The Orc shot him a dirty look and walked off.

"Must find the key! Must find the key!" Syndelius sung.

Kiliban chuckled. "Too bad none of those keys fit the lock... hahahaha! Last chamber... this should be entertaining."



After getting on the pad, Wrothken was transported to a room that looked like it had been taken from nightmares. The floors and parts of the wall was stained with blood. Rotting corpses were hanging from their neck or attached to the walls. Some were scattered across the floor. Wrothken had to fight to keep his breakfast down.

The Orc walked down the stairs, obviously a little disturbed. "Steady, Grommok... steady," he said to himself. "You've been through worse before. What more could this place possibly throw at you?"

Wrothken was afraid of what it would do, but he pressed the smiling button. Purple light flashed and Grommok fell to the ground. His spirit stepped out of his body, looking at it in horror.

"What!? How in Oblivion can I be dead? This is impossible! Nothing killed me!" He cried out a little, looking around the room. "I didn't even get a chance to fight! No chance to defend myself? No chance for battle? Why? Impossible! This is impossible... Grommok has never lost a fight! Never!" He knelt down, clasping his head. "No! This is all wrong! This isn't how it's supposed to be!"

The light flashed again and Gromok was back in his body. He didn't seem to notice at all. He kept mumbling to himself.

Kiliban patted Wrothken on the back. "You've made short work of the intruders. Sheogorath should be proud to have such an efficient apprentice." He led him to the last pad.



They arrived in another room that was near the entrance. Kiliban stood in front of a large chest. "As is the tradition, you are to be awarded a focus crystal as a token of your fine work. I'll have it sent to the palace and placed in the main hall, if you wish to take a look at it."

"Alright... and you mentioned some earnings?"

"Oh, yes... of course. It seems a most unusual weapon was recovered from the Orc warrior, Grommok. Never seen anything like it, but perhaps his journal can give you some useful information. Beyond that, take whatever else you need from the recovery chest... you've earned it!"

Wrothken opened the chest, hoping the unusual weapon would be a battle axe or a hammer. He was disappointed to see a large claymore with a violet gem on the guard. He held it up, admiring its beauty. It was a lovely weapon and since he had no use for it, at least he could sell it for a decent price. Among the other treasures, he found an amulet, fifty gold, some lock picks, and a strange black cube with swirling blue patterns all over it.

"You're free to go at any time of course, just up that hallway," Kiliban said shaking his hand. "Good luck to you!"

Wrothken nodded and was relieved to be able to go home. As he walked down the hall, he heard a harsh, metallic scraping. Before his eyes, a large crystal rose from the ground. He found it strange, but he kept going. Within seconds three strange beings ran at him. It looked as if their armor and weapons were made from the crystal. They didn't utter a sound as they descended on Wrothken, attacking with long lances. Kiliban must have heard the commotion as well. He gasped when he saw them and began flinging spells at the men. Once they were down, Kiliban rushed to check on him.

"That was quite a battle. I hope you are uninjured."

Wrothken looked at his armor. It was dented and cracked badly. "I'm fine, I guess. Who were those people?"

"You've not heard the legends? How could that be?" Kiliban looked at the men in disgust. "Those "people" as you call them aren't people at all. They are the soulless abominations known as the Knights of Order," he spat.

"Knights of Order?" Wrothken tilted his head.

Kiliban didn't answer. Instead, he pushed him toward the door. "You must proceed to Sheogorath at once and tell him the Knights have returned! Quickly now... go!"

He pushed Wrothken out and slammed the door shut. He had a sinking feeling in his stomach. These Knights of Order must mean very bad news.

This post has been edited by Jacki Dice: Jan 2 2011, 05:16 AM


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Madness Helps Me Save Myself
Nemesis

Standing on the cliffs that kiss burning winds
We are rising together
Brazen, exalting, a hiss of triumph rings
I am yours
...Yours immortally
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Jacki Dice   Champion of Madness   Mar 28 2010, 08:18 PM
haute ecole rider   Hey Jacki! Welcome to Chorrol! Now that y...   Mar 28 2010, 08:53 PM
SubRosa   Yay! Wrothken and Jacki have made their debut...   Mar 28 2010, 10:18 PM
Winter Wolf   Yippee!! Jackie is at Chorrol. I remember...   Mar 29 2010, 06:32 AM
Destri Melarg   Hi Jacki, I really think you've got something...   Mar 29 2010, 10:39 AM
Illydoor   Nice story, you write very well and descriptively....   Mar 29 2010, 10:51 AM
D.Foxy   Welcome to Chorrol! We are all good peeps he...   Mar 29 2010, 11:36 AM
mALX   Welcome to Chorrol! We are all good peeps h...   Mar 29 2010, 04:14 PM
Remko   Look forward reading more about the huggable Nord...   Mar 29 2010, 11:40 AM
Illydoor   An innuendo you say? ;)   Mar 29 2010, 11:41 AM
D.Foxy   Hey! My emokeeguns are CLEAN! What do you ...   Mar 29 2010, 04:16 PM
Jacki Dice   haute ecole rider- Thank you, its nice to have ano...   Mar 29 2010, 08:43 PM
haute ecole rider   Good to see this funny chapter again! Still...   Mar 29 2010, 09:07 PM
SubRosa   I liked this phrase, remind me to steal it: Bravil...   Mar 29 2010, 09:33 PM
Olen   Nice piece, I'm enjoying this, particularly so...   Mar 30 2010, 04:43 PM
Jacki Dice   haute ecole rider- Oh goodness... I have a feeling...   Mar 30 2010, 10:48 PM
haute ecole rider   I enjoyed reading this again. This made me chuckl...   Mar 31 2010, 01:48 AM
D.Foxy   Sexy man in uniform = Chippendale dancer. Sexy man...   Mar 31 2010, 02:23 AM
SubRosa   Good description of a Grummite (or Grubbite, as I ...   Mar 31 2010, 02:51 AM
Zalphon   *clap* Excellent work, Mad-One!   Mar 31 2010, 04:00 AM
Destri Melarg   I guess the SI has been working on Wrothken thoug...   Mar 31 2010, 07:29 AM
Jacki Dice   I have a special treat for all my readers. CLICK ...   Mar 31 2010, 10:04 PM
haute ecole rider   I've said it before, and I'll say it aga...   Mar 31 2010, 10:30 PM
SubRosa   Mmmm, Kirsty. :) Wrothken must be insane to leave...   Mar 31 2010, 10:49 PM
Olen   You paint an alarming picture of Jayred, but you c...   Mar 31 2010, 11:19 PM
D.Foxy   Excellent drawing of Kirsty Made me have thoughts ...   Apr 1 2010, 01:59 AM
Jacki Dice   haute ecole rider- Oh yes. Haskill is a lot of fun...   Apr 2 2010, 12:04 AM
SubRosa   Nice piece. I enjoyed the meeting with the Mazken ...   Apr 2 2010, 12:49 AM
mALX   OOOH! You are an artist as well as a writer...   Apr 2 2010, 03:40 AM
Jacki Dice   SubRosa- I like them too, much much more than I li...   Apr 3 2010, 02:57 AM
SubRosa   The palace of New Sheoth was glamorous compared to...   Apr 3 2010, 03:08 AM
Winter Wolf   It is easy to see why the DLC received such a grea...   Apr 3 2010, 06:47 AM
mALX   It is easy to see why the DLC received such a gre...   Apr 3 2010, 06:53 AM
Olen   though there was no harm in looking, right? - Ra...   Apr 4 2010, 03:21 PM
Jacki Dice   Thanks everyone :) ~~~~~♥~~~~~[b] Cures an...   Apr 5 2010, 04:34 PM
SubRosa   Wrothken's internal musings about The Banished...   Apr 5 2010, 05:40 PM
mALX   Knotty Bramble is one of my fave dungeons, especia...   Apr 6 2010, 01:44 PM
mALX   Very bad news but very big treasure! - I hate...   Apr 7 2010, 08:38 PM
SubRosa   This was part I really liked in the SI main quest....   Apr 7 2010, 10:28 PM
Remko   I liked but I didn't like it as much as the fi...   Apr 9 2010, 11:48 AM
Jacki Dice   mAXL1- I felt bad while I did the quests. I always...   Apr 10 2010, 12:39 AM
SubRosa   Yay for a Chick Chapter! she was going to be...   Apr 10 2010, 01:11 AM
mALX   Yay for a Chick Chapter! she was going to b...   Apr 11 2010, 08:23 PM
D.Foxy   I can testify to the filter. When I tried to say A...   Apr 10 2010, 04:08 AM
Olen   Nice description of lockpicking, much more accurit...   Apr 11 2010, 05:40 PM
Acadian   Jackie, I have read your story, and find it quite ...   Apr 11 2010, 08:30 PM
minque   Jackie, I have read your story, and find it quite...   Apr 11 2010, 11:19 PM
D.Foxy   Actually, I have it on good authority that her num...   Apr 12 2010, 01:48 AM
Jacki Dice   Oh my! I think this is the most comments I...   Apr 12 2010, 03:13 AM
Remko   I was just reading the chapter with Kirsty and the...   Apr 12 2010, 11:59 AM
D.Foxy   Y'know, when I first heard of the name of Jygg...   Apr 12 2010, 01:24 PM
mALX   Y'know, when I first heard of the name of Jyg...   Apr 16 2010, 07:39 PM
SubRosa   Ahh Cutter, my favorite denizen of the Shivering I...   Apr 15 2010, 10:43 PM
Jacki Dice   Remko- I thought it would :) D. Foxy- Funny, my m...   Apr 19 2010, 03:03 AM
haute ecole rider   My dilemma, exactly! Well written. I liked t...   Apr 19 2010, 03:47 AM
SubRosa   He watched the arrogant Golden Saints walk around ...   Apr 19 2010, 04:11 AM
Remko   That was brilliant! As a sidenote, I am quite...   Apr 19 2010, 04:20 PM
mALX   Your depiction of Haskill is spot on!   Apr 19 2010, 08:28 PM
Acadian   I'm still with you and quite enjoying your rom...   Apr 22 2010, 03:03 AM
Jacki Dice   haute ecole rider- I prefer the Dark Seducers sooo...   Apr 30 2010, 04:24 AM
mALX   ARGH! You stopped on a cliff hanger! I l...   Apr 30 2010, 06:27 AM
haute ecole rider   ARGH! You stopped on a cliff hanger! I ...   Apr 30 2010, 03:40 PM
Olen   Sontaire certainly seems a strange one. I've ...   Apr 30 2010, 10:18 AM
SubRosa   Good work with the background we learned about Wro...   Apr 30 2010, 04:39 PM
treydog   First, I do not think I ever properly welcomed you...   May 4 2010, 04:01 PM
Acadian   This continues to be great fun to read! I lov...   May 5 2010, 06:54 PM
D.Foxy   Update, m'dear???   May 6 2010, 05:44 PM
Jacki Dice   mAXL1- Thanks. I've noticed that certain thing...   May 10 2010, 10:28 PM
SubRosa   Well done all around. This was both lots of fun an...   May 10 2010, 11:25 PM
Remko   Poor tree :D The part of Wrothken biting into a ...   May 11 2010, 11:25 AM
Olen   Good piece, the bit with him licking the felldew f...   May 11 2010, 11:45 AM
D.Foxy   He looked down at his **** and fury began to bunch...   May 11 2010, 11:53 AM
mALX   Powerful, Powerful, POWERFUL Write!!!...   May 11 2010, 06:13 PM
Acadian   Yes, this was quite brilliantly done, as well as m...   May 12 2010, 11:00 PM
minque   Jackie my dear! Excellent writing! I enjoy...   May 15 2010, 10:33 PM
Jacki Dice   SubRosa- Working with the felldew addiction was pr...   May 16 2010, 12:19 AM
mALX   Great dialogue!!! You have a huge sto...   May 16 2010, 03:31 AM
Olen   I'm loving the two storylines, the Kirsty one ...   May 16 2010, 03:40 PM
SubRosa   I like these scenes with the wimmin's as much ...   May 16 2010, 08:38 PM
D.Foxy   Sometimes the blessing so many girls envied was so...   May 17 2010, 02:17 AM
mALX   Sometimes the blessing so many girls envied was s...   May 17 2010, 02:53 AM
Remko   That Lilitu is some piece of work :D Loved it Jac...   May 17 2010, 11:23 AM
Acadian   This continues to be great fun to read. You bring...   May 19 2010, 07:21 PM
Jacki Dice   mALX- Oh yes, its going to be a pretty large web o...   Jun 2 2010, 03:23 AM
haute ecole rider   I know I've been remiss in commenting lately. ...   Jun 2 2010, 03:55 AM
mALX   I know I've been remiss in commenting lately....   Jun 3 2010, 12:52 AM
SubRosa   Ahh, a chapter from Awour's pov! Excellent...   Jun 2 2010, 04:09 AM
D.Foxy   Actually, I think she meant BED boys were so much ...   Jun 2 2010, 05:07 AM
Olen   Nice update, I can't say I read much (any) of ...   Jun 2 2010, 05:05 PM
Acadian   Nicely done, Jackie and fun to read!   Jun 2 2010, 05:31 PM
Jacki Dice   Hautee Cole Rider- He's somewhat like that.......   Jul 11 2010, 03:20 AM
D.Foxy   And our Jacki Dice is back in the House...or is it...   Jul 11 2010, 03:34 AM
Jacki Dice   And our Jacki Dice is back in the House...or is i...   Jul 11 2010, 03:37 AM
haute ecole rider   Loved the way you segued into Amiable's quest ...   Jul 11 2010, 03:40 AM
SubRosa   I was just wondering where my Champion of Madness ...   Jul 11 2010, 04:59 AM
D.Foxy   From the Champion of Rad-ness to the Champion of E...   Jul 11 2010, 11:12 AM
Olen   I've missed this, it's good to see it cont...   Jul 11 2010, 05:41 PM
Jacki Dice   [b]The Deformity Home again, home again, piggity...   Aug 1 2010, 03:51 AM
SubRosa   Yay! Wrothken is back! I was started to wo...   Aug 1 2010, 04:34 AM
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