I like it
. I'm not sure what else to say... its readible, well done and you really seem to be in the head of Sethyas, he's an very strong character and great to read about.
Your perspective on the whole nerevar thing is interesting and adds a side to the story which is fresh and unlike any other fanfic I've read. And Seth's reaction is bang on of course.
Great stuff.
Look behind you and see an ever decreasing number of ghosts. Currently about 15.