OMG! three updates...heh you are the post machine again! heureka!
I'm sorry I haven't commented for three days, but RL really has taken its tribute out of me...
Now then, I'm truly impressed how you described the interaction between Seth and Pene, just brilliant, going from "oops I'm gonna die..to showing great power towards her". I must admit I'm not so familiar with Daedra's personality in common but this creature really is special. I wonder...will she be tied to Seth for all eternity?
Now of course, what will happen next? What will he do with her? what services can she provide? I really like the way this story is going, thrilling indeed...
(So he thought of Serene in the moment of truth? Very sweet. I assure you she got the message!

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