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Zalphon
post May 25 2010, 10:07 PM
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Prologue

My name is Quick-Strike. I have done things so horrible, they haunt my dreams every night. The worst of which being when the Dark Brotherhood ordered me to kill the entire Matius family. The only survivor was Savilian Matius, but I killed his little girl and his wife. That poor little girl, she still haunts my dreams. It was her fifth birthday...

That day was the day I began my revolution. I had cut all ties I had with the Brotherhood and began my career as an assassin of the Nine. Hunting down daedric worshippers, criminals, and street-thugs. With a prayer in the Temple of Mara, I firmly gripped my steel shortsword and steel dagger and donned my black-leather uniform.

Suddenly behind me appeared a tall, black-haired orc. "You killed Marza Gra-Baliz," he hissed. "That was my daughter, you pig. For this you'll die."

With haste, I put my weapons in their scabbards and kicked him in the chest. "Please, I don't want to fight," I pleaded. "I seek no trouble." In his orcish rage he charged. My fist went flying into his face and he fell to the ground, his nose bloodied and he was unconscious.

I bent down and felt for a pulse. There was none. Suddenly, two imperial legion troopers came over to me. "Hey, what have you done to this man?" they asked. "He's dead!"

The other hissed, "You're under arrest, Swamp-Slime."

I slammed their heads together and bolted past them. "Joy," I thought. "My first day of being a noble person and I already killed a man and assaulted two guards." Blood was on my hands, so I wiped it on my outfit.

The streets of the Imperial City were crowded and I had to wade through the people. I was a wanted man and I needed to get out of town. As I turned to look around, a club hit my skull. The last thing I saw was an Imperial Legion Guard with a smile on his face. The last thing I heard was, "Enjoy your time in prison, Murkscum..."

After that I faded into the realm of unconsciousness.


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ureniashtram
post Jun 3 2010, 10:16 AM
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Aww, it's always sad to see your characters 'die', y'know? Hopefully, the next trio would make up from that, huh?

Oh, and like mALX said, I also got your back, bro.

Sorry to say this, but Pelinal Whitestrake being a ROBOT actually made me laugh. You are right in all accounts, but Tosh Raka being Akatosh... D

Where did you get this bit of info, Verlox? I wanna see it myself and question whoever made this. Curious, is all.


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Djinn: What wish would you like to have, young master?
Random dude: SUPA POWAZ!
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Djinn: Is there anything I could make true, lord?
Old guy: .. Youth and charisma.
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Djinn: Your heart speaks of wanting. I could make it true, milord.
Me: Hmmm. I wish to know what I want. Then you could hook me up in some insidious deal, spirit.
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post Jun 3 2010, 06:15 PM
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QUOTE(ureniashtram @ Jun 3 2010, 04:16 AM) *

Aww, it's always sad to see your characters 'die', y'know? Hopefully, the next trio would make up from that, huh?

Oh, and like mALX said, I also got your back, bro.

Sorry to say this, but Pelinal Whitestrake being a ROBOT actually made me laugh. You are right in all accounts, but Tosh Raka being Akatosh... D

Where did you get this bit of info, Verlox? I wanna see it myself and question whoever made this. Curious, is all.

We have a giant stompy robot that can break reality and time, is it really so odd to have a smaller robot that shoots lasers? Of course, another way to look at is that Pelinal is an avatar of Lorkhan.

Look on the Bethesda lore forum for more information regarding Akavir being a "myth-echo" of Tamriel. There was a discussion on it awhile back, but you could probably start your own topic to ask.

To give some extra information: Tosh Raka. The Tsaeci, once the dominant power on Akavir, were supplanted by the Ka'Po'Tun, which mirriors the Aldmer being supplanted by men as the greatest power on Tamriel.

Tosh Raka being Akatosh: A slightly better view is that Tosh Raka is Akavir's version of Tiber Septim, but instead of mantling Lorkhan/Shezzar, he mantles Akatosh.

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Zalphon   The Rightous Assassin   May 25 2010, 10:07 PM
mALX   WOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!...   May 26 2010, 05:55 PM
Acadian   I'm with mALX! This could be really good...   May 26 2010, 08:12 PM
Illydoor   Do you mean 'Righteous' Assassin? Your st...   May 26 2010, 11:35 PM
Zalphon   Malx, this is before Zalphon and J'skooma. Th...   May 27 2010, 12:27 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: My Mentor Prison. The gray-steel ba...   May 27 2010, 12:46 AM
Remko   I like what you've created here. But there is ...   May 27 2010, 11:33 AM
mALX   I love it!!!!! This might be ...   May 27 2010, 01:46 PM
Zalphon   Remko that was my fault (was a bit under the weath...   May 28 2010, 12:31 AM
Destri Melarg   Zalphon, I have been remiss in commenting on your...   May 28 2010, 01:34 AM
Zalphon   Korvan is a reference to previous stories as the g...   May 28 2010, 04:06 AM
Remko   He is a chaotic good bard who knows what Quick-St...   Jun 1 2010, 05:50 PM
Verlox   First I'll comment on your story before I get ...   Jun 1 2010, 10:59 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: The Legend of the Ebon Assassin I wa...   May 29 2010, 01:03 AM
mALX   Woo Hoo! Lucky you to get a critique by Dest...   May 29 2010, 05:01 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Three: Blood and Tears I slashed at the B...   May 30 2010, 04:27 AM
mALX   Well I hope he walked away! He wasn't goi...   May 30 2010, 04:41 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Four: The Red Dragon Tavern Night was on ...   May 31 2010, 10:39 PM
mALX   Woo Hoo !!! Kissed her on the lips to...   May 31 2010, 11:15 PM
Zalphon   Quick-Strike is a smart fellow. And besides, she ...   Jun 1 2010, 12:22 AM
mALX   Quick-Strike is a smart fellow. And besides, she...   Jun 1 2010, 04:56 PM
Zalphon   *sigh* I never could write a story to please every...   Jun 2 2010, 02:04 AM
mALX   Aw Zalphon! But you just got into Cyrodiil...   Jun 2 2010, 03:45 AM
Zalphon   I'll be back, but the original trio will be re...   Jun 2 2010, 04:47 AM
Acadian   Ok, enjoyed this story to date. Sad to see it dis...   Jun 2 2010, 05:04 PM
Zalphon   Thanks Acadian, you really know me since you know ...   Jun 3 2010, 12:32 AM
mALX   Not....not getting rid of Zalphon? GAAAAAAAAAH ...   Jun 3 2010, 12:48 AM
Zalphon   The days of Zalphon must come to an end. It's...   Jun 3 2010, 02:19 AM
ureniashtram   Ok, since this is getting a little bit OOC and don...   Jun 3 2010, 08:07 PM


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